【小升初真题分类汇编】06常见书面表达7篇 近两年（2021-2022）易错题（江苏无锡专版）

常见书面表达7篇近两年（2021-2022）小升初易错题真题汇编（江苏无锡专版）一、观看下面两个同学的信息，尝试介绍他们。NameTenyearsagoNowInthefutureLiLinLiLei提示：1.观看并描述LiLin的外貌变化和LiLei的力量变化。2.观看并描述他们幻想的职业，并给出实现幻想的合理建议。3.要求表述正确，合抱负象，可作适当发挥。4.词数不少于50个，段落开头已给出，不计入总词数。Tenyearsago,LiLin__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________LiLeiisherbrother.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________二、今日是除夕，苏海和家人度过了难忘的一天，她还拍了很多照片记录这些奇特的时刻。你能依据照片内容，帮她把今日的所见所闻用日记的形式记录下来吗？要求：1.内容要点齐全，也可以开放想象写一些活动。2.句子通顺，正确使用一般过去时，不少于6句话。Saturday,5thJanuary_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________三、寒假要到了，你打算怎样过一个快活又有意义的假期呢？请参看Mike去年的寒假活动，联系实际，思考并写下自己今年的寒假方案吧！要求：1.图片中Mike去年的寒假活动要描述完整；2.自己的寒假方案不少于三项（含熬炼身体、交友、家庭活动等）；3.语句通顺，意思连贯，书写规范（留意语法、单词拼写及标点等）；4.内容不少于50词。给出的句子不计入词数。Mikestayedathomelastwinterholiday._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Thiswinterholidayiscomingsoon.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________四、同学们，寒假就要来临了。由于疫情我们可能不能出去旅行，但是假如有机会出去旅行的话，你有什么打算呢？请以“Mywinterholidayplans”为题，并依据思维导图，写一写自己的寒假方案。要求：1.短文内容需包括思维导图要点，也可以适当开放想象；2.语句通顺，意思连贯，书写规范（留意语法、单词拼写和标点等）；3.短文内容不少于5句话（不包括第一句）MywinterholidayplansWinterholidayiscoming.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________五、地球是我们的家，我们要爱护地球。我们应当做什么？不应当做什么？请以“ProtecttheEarth”为题，写一篇小作文。要求：1.用到should,shouldn’t

2.条理清楚，意思连贯，语句通顺，书写规范3.不少于10句____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________六、无锡正在创建全国文明城市，需要大家的共同努力，请你以"Keepourcityclean"为题写一篇倡议书。(不少于5句话)KeepourcitycleanDearfriends,Wuxiisabeautifulcity.ToKeepourcityclean,weshould___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Let'stryourbesttomakeitmorebeautiful.____________(yourname)七、地球是我们的家。爱护地球，我们该做什么？不该做什么？为什么？请写出你的思考。要求：1.语句通顺，意思连贯，书写规范；2.短文内容60字左右，不少于7句话。ProtecttheEarth____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________参考答案：一、范文：Tenyearsago,LiLinwasalittlegirl.Shewasshort.Herhairwasshort.Nowsheistall.Herhairislong.Inthefuture,shewantstobeateacher.LiLeiisherbrother.Tenyearsago,LiLeiwasababyboy.Hecouldn'twalk.Butnowhecanrun.Inthefuture,hewantstobeafootballplayer.【详解】1.题干解读：该题目要求依据表格内的信息，按要求写短文。然后再阐述LiLin十年前与现在的外貌变化及幻想的职业，LiLei十年前与现在的力量变化及幻想的职业。留意文章为一般现在时和一般过去时两种时态，并要符合单词字数要求。2.参考词汇与句型：参考单词：short矮的/短的，tall高的，long长的，teacher老师，walk走，run跑，footballplayer足球运动员参考句型：Tenyearsago,…；Shewas…；Herhair…；Inthefuture,…；Hecouldn't...；Butnowhecan...；二、范文：Saturday,5thJanuaryTodayisNewYear'sEve.MyfamilyandIhaveanunforgettableday.Webuysomebeautifulflowers.Mymotherandmyauntmakedumplingsforus.Ihaveabigdinnerwithmygrandparents,myparents,myauntanduncle.Intheevening,wewatchfireworks.Wealsosetofffirecrackers.Itisveryinteresting!【详解】1.题干解读：该题目要求依据照片内容，以日记形式把除夕这天的所所闻记录下来，留意文章为一般现在时态，内容要点齐全，句子数量要符合要求。2.参考词汇与句型：参考词汇：NewYear'sEve除夕；unforgettable难忘的；makedumplings包饺子；watchfireworks看烟花；setofffirecrackers放鞭炮；参考句型：Todayis...；MyfamilyandI...；Webuy...；Ihaveabigdinnerwith...；Intheevening,we...；Itis...；【点睛】三、范文Mikestayedathomelastwinterholiday.Hefinishedhishomeworkeverydayandthenhelpedhismotherwiththehousework.Sometimesheplayedcomputergamesforawhile.Thiswinterholidayiscomingsoon.Iwillfinishmyhomeworkandreadfortwohourseveryday.Attheweekend,Iwillplayfootballinthepark.IwillgotoShanghaiwithmyparentstovisitmygrandparents.【详解】1.题干解析：参看Mike去年的寒假活动，联系实际，思考并写下自己今年的寒假方案。除了依据四点要求以外，要留意使用一般过去时和一般将来时。2.参考词汇和参考句型。参考词汇：finished完成，playedcomputergames玩电脑玩耍，homework家庭作业，playfootball踢足球。参考句型：Hefinished…；Iwillfinish…；Iwillgoto…四、范文：MywinterholidayplansMywinterholidayiscoming.IamgoingtogotoSichuanwithmyparents.Wewillgotherebyplane.IlikethefoodinSichuan.It’sspicyandtasty.Inthewinterholiday,Iamgoingtoplaybasketball.Iamgoingtopaintpictures,too.Iwillhelpmymotherdosomehousework.Iwillbeveryhappyinmywinterholiday.【详解】1.题干解读：该题目要求用第一人称写出自己的寒假方案。然后再阐述寒假自己要做的具体事情及感受。留意文章为一般将来时态并要符合句子数量要求。2.参考词汇与句型：参考单词：winterholiday寒假；spicy辛辣的；tasty美味的；paint画参考句型：Iamgoingto...；Iwill...；Ilike...；Iwill…五、范文：ProtecttheEarthTheearthisourhometolivesoweshouldtryourbesttoprotectit.Wecandomanythingsinhelpingourearth.Firstwecanplantmoretreestofreshtheairaroundus.Secondweshouldn’tcutdownthetreesforotheruse.Thirdweshouldnotpourthewastewaterintotheriversortheseas.Protectingtheearthisprotectingourselves.Becausetheearthistheonlyplaceforustoliveon.【详解】1.题干解读：该题目要求用第一人称写出如何爱护地球。然后再阐述在如何爱护地球中我们应当和不应当做的具体的事情。留意文章为一般现在时态并要符合句子数量要求。2.参考词汇与句型：参考单词：protect爱护；cutdown砍到；pour倾倒；waste铺张的；ourselves我们自己参考句型：Theearthis…；Firstwecan…；Secondweshouldn’t…；Becausetheearthis…六、参考范文：Dearfriends,Wuxiisabeautifulcity.ToKeepourcityclean,weshouldtakethebusorthemetrotoschool.Weshouldplantmoretrees.Theyhelpkeeptheairclean.Weshouldputrubbishinthebin.Weshouldusepaperbagsandglassbottles.Let'stryourbesttomakeitmorebeautiful.Na