六年级英语下册Unit 8单元话题写作“梦想”译林版三起

Unit8单元话题写作“幻想”第一篇【话题分析】教室里，同学们正在谈论他们的不同幻想。请你以“Ourdreams'”为题，写一篇英语短文。作文结构呈现可能用到的词汇和句子开头：引出主题“dreams”。句子：Thestudentsaretalkingabouttheirdreams...中间：分别介绍每个人的幻想。可以补充拥有该幻想的缘由、为了实现幻想应当做什么。句子：wanttobe.../begoodat...policeman/writer/doctor/dentist/nursefarmer/driver/teacher/scientist/astronaut/dancer/player/pianist/artist...结尾：总结并赐予奇特的期望。句子：Wewanttoseeourdreamscometrue!Weshouldworkhardtomakeourdreamscometrue.【句型热身】1.我的幻想是将来当一名老师。2.为了实现我的幻想，我应当努力学习。3.我将去上音乐学校，由于我想成为一名钢琴家。4.我宠爱绘画，所以我将上一些绘画课。【参考范文】OurdreamsThestudentsaretalkingabouttheirdreamsinclass.Joeisgoodatwriting.Hewantstobeawriter.Hewantstowritestoriesforchildren.Amywantstobeadentist.Becausemanychildrendon'tcareabouttheirteeth.Shewantstohelpthem.Lucywantstobeadancer.Becausedancingmakespeoplehealthyandbeautiful.Janelikesplayingthepiano.Shewantstobeapianist.Shethinksmusicmakespeoplehappy.Benlikessport.HewantstobeafootballplayerandplayintheWorldCuponeday.Wewanttoseeourdreamscometrue!【写作练习】博比想成为一名科学家。为了实现他的愿望，他将要做些什么呢？请你写一篇短文说一说你的观点和建议。【参考答案】句型热身Mydreamistobeateacherinthefuture.Tomakemydreamcometrue,Ishouldstudyhard.I’llgotomusicschool,becauseIwanttobeapianist.Ilikepainting,soI’llhavesomepaintinglessons.写作练习Bobbyisinterestedinscience.Hewantstobeascientistinthefuture.Thisishisdream.Heshouldstudyhard.Heshouldreadmorebooks.Heshouldkeephealthytoo.Thenhecanmakehisdreamcometrue.其次篇假如你是王兵，请以“Mydream”为题，告知同学们你宠爱旅游，幻想长大后能成为一名旅行家，词数50左右。【思路点拨】【思路点拨】写法：这一写作训练要求同学们依据本单元所学的内容介绍自己的喜好、幻想等状况，可以先总说，然后分说，把自己的喜好、幻想及为之努力的行动等一一表达出来，最终再用一句话进行概括，起到，点题的作用。时态：这篇习作可以使用一般现在时及一般将来时。词汇：liketravelling,travelaroundtheworld,healthyandhappy,cometrue句型：Ilike..Iwantto.Iwill...留意：叙事要有条理性，运用“总一分一总”结构，并留意一般现在时与一般将来时的交替运用。【参考范文】MydreamHello,I'mWangBing.Iliketravelling.Somydreamistobeatravellerinthefuture.Iwanttotravelaroundtheworld.Travellingmakespeoplehealthyandhappy.Atravellershouldbebraveandstrong.SoIwilldomoresport.Ihopemydreamwillcometruesomeday.【写作练习】每个人都有一个幻想，你的幻想是什么呢？你将为实现幻想做哪些努力呢？跟大家一起共享一下吧！要求：语句通顺，语法规范，书写认真，词数40左右。【范文观赏】MydreamistobeanartistinthefuturebecauseIlikepaintingverymuch.Ithinkartistsaregreat.Tomakemydr