学术论文英文写作和国际会议课件

《学术论文英文写作和国际会议》

ProfessionalEnglishWritingandInternationalConference华南理工大学化工与能源学院CollegeofChemicalandEnergyengineering主将教师：钱宇教授袁文辉副教授学术论文英文写作和国际会议一、课程基本信息1、课程英文名称：ProfessionalEnglishWritingandInternationalConference2、课程类别：学位课程3、课程学时：总学时40，4、学分：25、适用专业：化学类6、大纲执笔：化学工程与工艺钱宇，袁文辉等学术论文英文写作和国际会议二、课程的目的与任务：让学生练习写作英文专业论文和宣读国际会议学术论文，提高专业英语论文实际写作能力和讲专业英语的口语能力。用英文写作一篇科技论文，并向本专业国外英文刊物投稿。写作英文长摘要（ExtendedAbstract），用英文向国际学术会议投稿。3、制作英文演讲文件（PPT）及Poster,用英语在会议上演讲、回答和讨论问题。学术论文英文写作和国际会议三、课程的基本要求：本课程要求学生对一般难度的科技专业书刊或英语原版文章的阅读速度达50-60WPm。笔译一般难度的本专业英语文献的速度达25-30WPm。掌握本专业基本词汇数达1400。学术论文英文写作和国际会议四、教学内容、要求及学时分配

第一讲（2个学时）安排：根据自己或同学的大学毕业论文或研究进展，写作或准备一篇中文科技论文。10天内完成。安排3个同学提前交中文论文以便下周点评。第二讲（2个学时）介绍英文期刊论文写作基本规范、投稿须知，范文介绍、点评给编辑的信：栏目、类型、主题内容和创新点简介第三讲（2个学时）Seminar1Writingresearcharticlesforpublication:Theartofcreatingamodeltohelpyouwrite第四讲（2个学时）介绍国际会议英文论文的投稿顺序，写作基本规范、投稿须知。介绍1－2份internationalconferenceCallforpapers.extendedabstractforinternationalconference范文介绍、点评安排各位同学写作中文摘要(150字，800字长摘要)、英文短摘要，英文长摘要。10天完成。学术论文英文写作和国际会议第五讲（2个学时）收齐全体同学的中文论文稿、给编辑的信：栏目、类型、主题内容和创新点简介。审稿人建议名单。抽查和点评讲解2篇同学的英文论文稿。英文会议论文extendedabstract两篇点评要求学生写作英文会议论文全文。(10天完成)第六讲（2个学时）收齐全体同学的英文论文稿、给编辑的信：栏目、类型、主题内容和创新点简介。会议论文的审稿人建议名单。抽查和点评讲解2篇同学的英文论文稿。第七讲（2个学时）Seminar2Theartofeditingwhatyouwriteanddancingwithchange第八讲（2个学时）英文会议extendedabstract两篇点评全体同学的英文论文稿收齐。点评1篇同学的英文论文全文稿。要求学生将会议论文做成Powerpoint，一周完成第九讲（2个学时）根据同学英文写作出现问题，选取CES、JACS等上的论文进行讲解，点评。学术论文英文写作和国际会议第十讲（2个学时）全体同学的英文会议论文稿收齐、点评1篇同学的英文论文全文稿。5位同学Powerpoint收稿。2－4位同学上台作英文论文报告。提问、讨论、点评安排作英文Poster.范本展示。第十一讲（2个学时）Seminar3Theartofwritingabstracts,preparingslides第十二讲（2个学时）全体同学Powerpoint收稿。5－6位同学上台作英文论文报告。提问讨论、点评安排2位同学的Poster(电脑内版本显示)展示、点评第十三讲（2个学时）Seminar4化工专业英语趣谈。第十四讲（2个学时）Seminar5Presentingatinternationalconference:Theartofpreparingslidesandusingyourvoice第十五讲（2个学时）Seminar6Theartofbodylanguageandpresentingsmoothlyandnappingatconference学术论文英文写作和国际会议第十六讲（2个学时）3－4位同学的Poster(电脑内版本显示)展示、点评确定模拟国际学术会议的组织：主席、组织委员会、学术委员会、分会场主席、承办单位。由学生组织、教师指导第十七讲（2个学时）学生练习演示文稿，口语讲述研究工作，针对普遍性问题点评。第十八讲（6个学时）开一次模拟国际学术会议：Oral大会由主席主持大会报告和Poster，分会场主席主持分组讨论。最后汇编成论文集，与研究生论文集相同，能否算研究生学习期间发表一篇论文。学术论文英文写作和国际会议五、参考书：

1PeteyYoung,WritingandPresentinginEnglish:TheRosettaStoneofScience,Amsterdam,Netherlands,Elsevier2《化学工程与工艺专业英语》，胡鸣等编，北京：化学工业出版社，19983《英语化学化工词汇分析》，齐奉中编，北京：化学工业出版社，学术论文英文写作和国际会议COMPARISONANDCONTRAST

比较与对比教学重点：1）比较与对比的段落的写作手法；2）常用表达法和基本句型；3）连接词的运用。教学难点：段落的两种结构方式。教学内容：1Conceptsofcomparisonandcontrast2Strategies3Usefulexpressionsandsentencepatterns4Connectives

学术论文英文写作和国际会议1.Pictures

Brainstorming–GeneratingIdeas

学术论文英文写作和国际会议2.WritingStrategies

Inmakingcontrast,wehavetocompare.Thereisnootherwaytopointoutthedifference,i.e.thecontrast.Whatisofgreatimportanceistoknowthatprofessionalwritersfrequentlyusethesetwostrategiestodevelopparagraphs.Therearetwomajorwaysoforganizingparagraphsofcomparisonandcontrast.Onewayistoexamineonethingthoroughlyandthenstarttheother–Allaboutpattern;Theotherwayistoexaminetwothingsatthesametime,discussingthempointbypoint–Seesawpattern.

学术论文英文写作和国际会议2.1Toexamineonethingthoroughlyandthenstarttheother.

Focus:Theaspectsexaminedinthetwothingsshouldbeidenticalandinthesameorder.Pattern:A1,A2,A3;B1,B2,B3.（AllaboutPattern）Example:

Contrast1]Myhometownisquitedifferentfromwhatitusedtobe.Subtopic:

2]Justalittlemorethattenyearsagomyhometownwasasmallquietplace.A（1）

3]Thehousesweresmallandmean.A（2）3]Thestreetswereforthemostpartnarrowandwinding.A（3）3]Therewerefewpeopleinthestreetsandshops.学术论文英文写作和国际会议Subtopic:

2]Now,everythinghaschanged.B（1）:3]Lookingineverydirectionfromthecenterofthetown,oneseesalongsuccessionofgiant,imposingbuildings.

B（2）:3]Thestreets,whetherlongorshort,arestraight,spacious,andwell-shaded.B（3）:3]Crowdsofpeoplecanbefoundhereandthere,hurrying,noisy,andwell-dressed.C

Fromadulllittlevillagewithclustersofshabbyhousesinthepast,myhometownhasnowtransformedintoabigcity,cheerful,colorful,andprosperous.学术论文英文写作和国际会议2.2Toexaminetwothingsatthesametime,discussingthempointbypoint.

Focus:Aspectsexaminedintwothingsshouldbeidenticalandinthesameorder.Pattern:A1,B1;A2,B2;A3,B3(SeesawPattern)Example:comparison.1]Despitetheirobviousdifferencesinlength,theparagraphandtheessayarequitesimilarstructurally.A（1）:

2]Forexample,theparagraphisintroducedbyeitheratopicsentenceoratopicintroducerfollowedbyatopicsentence.B（1）:

2]Intheessay,thefirstparagraphprovidesintroductorymaterialandestablishesthetopicfocus.A（2）:

2]Next,thesentencesinthebodyofaparagraphdevelopthetopicsentence.B（2）:

2]Similarly,thebodyofanessayconsistsofanumberofparagraphsthatexpandandsupporttheideaspresentedintheintroductoryparagraph.学术论文英文写作和国际会议A（3）:

2]Finally,aterminator---whetherarestatement,conclusion,orobservation---endstheparagraph.B（3）:

2]Theessay,too,hasadevicewhichbringsitsideastoalogicallyandpsychologicallysatisfyingcompletion:theconcludingparagraph.C]

Althoughexceptionstothesegeneralizationsmaybeobservedinmoderncreativewriting,mostwellwrittenexpositoryparagraphsandessaysarecomparableinstructure.Notes:1)1],2],3]indicatesthelevelofgeneralityatwhichasentenceisintheparagraph.

2)C]istheshortformofconclusion,thatis,theconcludingsentence.学术论文英文写作和国际会议

2.3AnAnalysisofAnEssay

Thesetwopatternscanalsobeusedtocomposeanessay.Nowreadthefollowingshortessayandanalyzeitaccordingtowhatyouhavelearnedsofar

ParisandWashingtondifferinageandpopulation;however,anyonewhohasseenthetwocitiescantellthattheyareverysimilar.Ofcourse,ParisismucholderthanWashington.TheFrenchcityisover2000yearsold.Washington,incontrast,isveryyoung.Itislessthan250yearsold.ThepopulationofParisisalsomuchlargerthanWashington’sParishasmorethan2,500,000people.Washingtonhasjustover700,000.学术论文英文写作和国际会议

Inspiteofthesedifferences,thesimilaritiesarestriding.First,bothcitiesarethepoliticalcentersoftheircountries.ThepresidentofFrancelivesintheheartofParis,intheElyseesPalace.Likewise,thepresidentoftheUnitedStateshasitsmeetingplaceinWashington,intheCapitol.Second,thetwocitieslooksimilar.L’Enfant,theFrenchengineerwhodesignedWashington,wasgreatlyinfluencedbythelayoutofthecapitalofFrance.Forthisreason,manyofthebuildingsandmonumentsinWashingtonaresymmetricallylocatedinviewsofoneanother,justastheyareinParis.Bothcitiesarealsothesitesofmagnificentmonuments,importanthistoricallandmarks,finemuseums,beautifulparks,andboard,treelinedavenues.Finally,tourismisasimportantforWashingtonasitisforParisEveryyearmillionsoftouristsfromallpartsoftheworldvisitthesecitiestoviewtheirattractions学术论文英文写作和国际会议Questions1.Whichisthethesisstatementoftheessay?2.Findthetopicsentenceandcontrollingideaofthe2ndand3rdparagraph.3.Findtheconnectivesinthe3rdparagraph.4.Whichpatterndoesthisessayfollow?学术论文英文写作和国际会议2.4PlanesofGeneralityoftheEssay1]ParisandWashingtondifferinageandpopulation;however,anyonewhohasseenthetwocitiescantellthattheyareverysimilar.(Thesisstatement:tellthereaderswhattheycanexpecttoreadintheessay.)2]Thetwocitiesdifferinageandpopulation.3]Ofcourse,ParisismucholderthanWashington.4]TheFrenchcityisover2000yearsold.Washington,incontrast,isveryyoung.Itislessthan250yearsold.3]ThepopulationofofParisisalsomuchlargerthanWashington’s.4]Parishasmorethan2,500,000people.Washingtonhasjustover700,000.

学术论文英文写作和国际会议

2]Inspiteofthesedifferences,thesimilaritiesarestriding.3]First,bothcitiesarethepoliticalcentersoftheircountries.4]ThepresidentofFrancelivesintheheartofParis,intheElyseesPalace.Likewise,thepresidentoftheUnitedStateshasitsmeetingplaceinWashington,intheCapitol.3]Second,thetwocitieslooksimilar.4]L’Enfant,theFrenchengineerwhodesignedWashington,wasgreatlyinfluencedbythelayoutofthecapitalofFrance.

学术论文英文写作和国际会议

5]Forthisreason,manyofthebuildingsandmonumentsinWashingtonaresymmetricallylocatedinviewsofoneanother,justastheyareinParis.Bothcitiesarealsothesitesofmagnificentmonuments,importanthistoricallandmarks,finemuseums,beautifulparks,andboard,treelinedavenues.3]Finally,tourismisasimportantforWashingtonasitisforParis.4]Everyyearmillionsoftouristsfromallpartsoftheworldvisitthesecitiestoviewtheirattractions学术论文英文写作和国际会议3.ExpressionsandSentencePatterns学术论文英文写作和国际会议3.1Similaritya.

ModelAis

thesameas

ModelBstructurally.

identicalwith

indesign.similarto

likeb.

ThetwoModelsare

alikestructurally

identicalindesignthesamesimilarc.

Sweden,

like

Finland,hasverylargeresourcesoftimber.学术论文英文写作和国际会议

3.2Difference

ModelXisdifferentfromModelYstructurallyisnotthesameasindesign.differsfrom

学术论文英文写作和国际会议3.3Comparison

ModelAischeap.Similarly,ModelBisinexpensive.学术论文英文写作和国际会议3.4contrastwhilewhereas,whilst…..而（含有相对之意）

whilea.

ModelAisstylish,

whereas

ModelBisold-fashioned.

whilst

While

Whereas

ModelAisstylish,ModelBisold-fashioned.

Whilstb.

but,however,nevertheless……但是，然而

butModelAisstylish,however

ModelBisold-fashioned.

nevertheless

c.

unlike与…有别,comparedwith,与…相比

incontrastto与…成对比UnlikeComparedwithModelA,ModelBisold-fashioned.Incontrasttod.ontheotherhand然而……Mode