高一上学期英语读后续写例题详解导学案

2024年秋高一第十一周读后续写【2023年南通高一上期末】Engagement(订婚)isanexcitingandmemorableeventthatmanypeoplelookforwardto.BaileyDavis,whohadbeeninlovewithherboyfriendformorethantwoyears,likemanyothers,recentlyexperiencedthisjoyousoccasionwhenshegotengaged.Asforthefuture,Baileyknewthatnomatterwhatchallengesorobstaclescameherway,shewouldalwaysholdontothememoriesandexperiencesshesharedwithherpartner.Shehasbeenproudlywearingherbeautifulengagementringeversince,valuingitasasymbolofherloveandcommitment.However,herhappinesswasshort-lived.Asasalesgirlofalargechainstore,Baileywasasbusyasabee,goingonbusinessalonefromtimetotime.Onthisparticularday,Columbus,Ohiowasherdestination.Shegotupveryearly,packedallherbaggage,anddrovetherehappily.Whileatareststop,sheusedtherestroom.Here,shetookoffherring.Butlittledidsheknowthatshe’dalsoleaveitthere.Itwasn’tuntilshearrivedinColumbusthatsherealizedherringwasmissing.“IhaddrivenalreadytwohoursawaytoColumbusbeforeIrealizeditwasn’tonmyhand,”Baileyrecalled.“Iwasshakyandsweating—IfeltlikeIwasgoingtopuke(呕吐).”Bythetimeshereturnedtothereststopbathroom,theringwasgone.Atthatmoment,Baileyfeltcertainshewouldneverseeherpreciousringagain.Bailey’sheartbegantosinkatthethoughtofthespecialvalueofthering.Forher,itwasnotjustapieceofjewelrybutasymboloftheloveandcommitmentshesharedwithherpartner.Shecouldn’thelpbutfeeladeepsenseoflossanddisappointment.注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。However,Baileyrefusedtogiveuphope._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Justwhenshe’sabouttoloseheart,somethingamazinghappened._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

【解析】【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了BaileyDavis的订婚戒指失而复得的故事。【详解】1.段落续写：①由第一段首句内容“然而，贝利拒绝放弃希望。”可知，第一段可描写贝利没有放弃想方设法去找戒指。②由第二段首句内容“就在她快要灰心丧气的时候，惊人的事情发生了。”可知，第二段可描写一位好心人找到了戒指并还给了她。2.续写线索：拒绝放弃希望——开始联系休息站——继续寻找——开始感到无望——惊人的事发生了——好心人找到了她的戒指——感激和宽慰——感悟第一段：但是，她拒绝放弃希望。她开始联系休息站，希望有人捡到她的戒指并上交。她还发布在社交媒体上，很多人转发并鼓励安慰。她联系了当地的珠宝商店，甚至报警了。尽管她的种种努力，戒指依然没有找到，她开始绝望。第二段惊人的事情发生了。她接到休息站的电话。有个善良的员工发现了戒指却不知道交给谁直到看到休息站发布的寻物启事。Bailey不能相信她的运气赶忙冲到休息站。当她再一次拿到\看到戒指时，她感到高兴\感激\宽慰（松了一口气）。=1\*GB3①从那一天起，这个戒指不仅象征着她和伴侣之间的爱和承诺，还有陌生人的，作为一个提醒，是爱和善良让这个世界运转。=2\*GB3②她意识到她和伴侣之间的爱和承诺是不可替代的。这个经历也教会了她珍惜生活中真正重要的东西。

高兴、感激Whensheheldtheringonceagain,afeelingofhappinesswelledupinsideher.Themomentshecaughtsightofthering,herfacelitupwithdelight,tearsofgratitudestreamingherface.Atthesightofthering,shewasoverwhelmedwithjoy,hereyesshiningandherfacebeaming(herhandstrembling).Sheexpressedheartfeltgratitudetoeveryonefortheirhelpandcare.Hewasovercomebyfear,handstremblingandeyeswideopen.他被恐惧冲昏了头脑，双手颤抖，眼睛睁得大大的。Iwasovercomebyshame,myheartthumpingandmyfaceblushing.我被羞愧冲昏了头脑，心砰砰直跳，脸色泛红。Theywereovercomewithsadness,tearsstreamingdowntheirfaces.他们伤心欲绝，泪流满面。Iwasovercomewithexcitement,myheartracingrapidlyandmyeyesshining/twinklingwildly.我被激动的心情冲昏了头脑，心跳加速，双眼狂闪。Hewasseizedbyagreatsenseofanger,hiseyesglaringatthem.感悟，升华句型句型一：It’s...that...(强调句）ItislovethatmakestheworldgoroundandBernardfeltitdeepinhislittleheart.（2020.7高考山东卷）正是爱让世界转动，Bernard在心里深深地感受到了这一点。It’sMrJohnson’sencouragementthatgavemecourageandconfidence.是Johnson老师的鼓励给予了我勇气和自信。It’sherselflessloveandpowerfulsupportthatchangedourlife.是她无私的爱和坚实的支持改变了我的人生。2.句型二：fromthenon+行动1）Fromthenon,Imadeupmymindtopasson“love”toothers.Justasasayinggoes,“Rosesgiven,fragranceinhand.”从那以后,我下定决心向别人传递“爱”。俗话说:“玫瑰予人，手留余香。”2)Fromthatdayon,everytimeImeetsomeonewhoneedshelp,Ialwaysreachouttothem,hopingtopassonthekindnessthatMexicanfamilyofferedme.（2021年1月八省联考）从那天起，每当我遇到需要帮助的人，我总是伸出手去帮助他们，希望把墨西哥家庭给予我的善良传递下去。3.句型三：Itdawnedonsb.that...1）Itdawnedonmethatamomentofkindnesscouldmeansomuchtoanother,andthatasimpleactcouldmaketheworldsomuchbetter.我恍然大悟，那一刻的善良对另一个人来说意义重大，而一个简单的行为可以使世界变得如此美好。2）ItdawnedonMiathatsometimesasmallactofkindnessmaybepowerfulenoughtomakeahugedifference.米娅突然意识到，有时候一个小小的善举可能会产生巨大的影响。4.句型四：Only...（倒装句）1）Onlywhenweopenupthedoorofourheartcanwebebathedinthebrilliantsunshineandenjoythewarmthoflove.只有当我们打开心扉，我们才能沐浴在阳光中享受爱的温暖。OnlythendidIrealizethatitwaskindnessandlovethatmadeourworldsowarmandbeautiful.直到那时候，我才意识到，正是爱和善意让我们的世界如此温暖美丽。

翻译练习正是这次特别的经历使我明白了帮助别人是多么宝贵的品质。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________是妈妈伟大无私的爱让我们健康快乐成长。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________从那天起，Lily清楚意识到奉献的重要性，她下定决心，以后遇到有需要帮助的人，她会主动伸出援手。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________她恍然大悟，善良是打开心扉的钥匙。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________直到那时候，他才清楚明白到帮助别人是多么有意义的事情。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

第一段However,Baileyrefusedtogiveuphope.Shestartedbycontactingthereststopmanagement,hopingthatsomeonemighthavefoundherringandturneditin.Shealsopostedaboutherlostringonsocialmedia.Theresponsewassurprisingwithpeoplesharingherpostandofferingwordsofencouragement.Daysturnedintoweeks,andBaileycontinuedhersearch.Shecontactedlocaljewelrystoresandevencalledthepolice.Despiteherefforts,theringremainedhardtofind,andBaileybegantofeelhopeless.第二段Justwhenshe’sabouttoloseheart,somethingamazinghappened.Shereceivedacallfromthereststopmanagement.Akind-heartedemployeehadfoundherringbutdidn’tknowwheretoturnitin.Baileycouldn’tbelieveherluckandrushedbacktothereststop.Assheheldtheringinherhandonceagain,Baileywasoverwhelmedwithgratitudeandrelief.Fromthedayon,thepreciousringdidn’tonlysymbolizetheloveandcommitmentshesharedwithherepartner,butalsothekindnessfromacompletestranger,servingasareminderthatitisloveandkindnessthatmakestheworldgoround.Sherealizedthatmaterialpossessionscancomeandgo,buttheloveandmemoriessheshareswithherpartnerareirreplaceable.Theexperiencehastaughthertheimportanceofcherishingandvaluingwhattrulymattersinlife.翻译练习Itwasthespecialexperiencethatmademerealizethathelpingothersisanimportantvirtue.Itwasmother’sgreatandselflesslovethatmadeusgrowhealthilyandhappily.Fromthatdayon,Lilyclearlyrealizedtheimportanceofdevotion,andshemadeuphermindthatshewouldofferahelpinghandtothoseinneedinthefuture.Itdawnedonherthatkindnessisthekeytoopenone’sheart.Onlythendidheclearlyrealizehowmeaningfulitwastohelpothers.

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