2023年内蒙古自治区巴彦淖尔市大学英语6级大学英语六级真题(含答案)

【2023年】内蒙古自治区巴彦淖尔市大学

英语6级大学英语六级真题（含答案）

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一、l.Writing（10题）

1.Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessayentitled

Students"InterpersonalRelationship.Youshouldwriteatleast150words

followingtheoutlinegivenbelow.

1.目前许多大学生处理不好人际关系

2.出现这种现象的原因

3.我的看法

Students*InterpersonalRelationship

2.Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessayonthetopic

ofChildrenObesity.Youshouldwriteatleast150wordsaccordingtothe

outlinegivenbelow.

1.学生的肥胖问题日益严重

2.这一现象产生的原因

3.你认为应如何改变这一现象

ChildrenObesity

3.Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacomposition

onthetopicSay"Thanks"toParents.Youshouldwriteatleast150words

followingtheoutlinegivenbelowinChinese:

1.很多大学生从未对父母的养育之恩道过谢

2.请详细说明其中的原因

3.你的算法Say"Thanks"toParents

4.Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacomplaint

lettertothecustomerservicedepartmentofthecompany,sheadoffice.You

boughtalaptopafewdaysagofromabigcomputerchainstore,butthelaptop

stoppedworking.Whenyoutookitbacktothestore,theyrefusedtodealwith

theproblem.Youshouldwriteatleast150wordsfollowingtheoutlinegiven

below.

1.计算机出现了什么问题。

2.与店方交涉的经过。

3.你希望公司的客户服务部门能尽快帮助解决问题。

5.Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessay

entitledMyViewonChangesofNationalPublicHoliday.Youshouldwrite

atleast150wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelow:

1.在中国实行已久的五一黄金周在2008年被缩短，但是新添了几个较

短的法定假日

2.这种变化带来的影响

3.你如何看待这种变化

MyViewonChangesofNationalPublicHoliday

6.Directions:Forthispart,youareallowedthirtyminutestowritea

compositiononthetopicALettertoUniversityPresidentaboutSafetyon

Campus.Youshouldwriteatleast150wordsandyoushouldbaseyour

compositionontheoutlinegiveninChinesebelow:

假如你叫王明，你就本校安全状况给校长写信。你的内容涉及宿舍及自

习室偷盗问题、夜晚校园安全问题等，并提出自己关于加强校园安全的

建议.

7.Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessay

entitledTheImportanceofCreatingaHealthyInternet.Youshouldwriteat

least150wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelow.

1.随着社会和经济发展.网络成为了每个人必不可少的获取信息的工具

2.但是，在网络上也出现了一些不健康的因素，如垃圾信息、黄色网

站、虚假新闻、网络炒作等

3.我们应采取措施制止这些，并建立一个健康的网络环境

TheImportanceofCreatingaHealthyInternet

8.Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessay

entitledWhatDoYouThinkofChallenge.Youshouldwriteatleast150

wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelow:

1.挑战的意义。

2.如何迎接挑战。

3.我的看法是……

WhatDoYouThinkofChallenge?

9.Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacomposition

withthetitleofHowISpendMySummerVacation,describinghowyou

spendoneofyoursummervacationsinthecountryside.Youshouldwriteat

least150wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelowinEnglish:Situation:

Studentshavedifferentwaystospendtheirsummervacations,andyoudecide

totakeyoursummervacationwithyourfamilyinthecountryside.Your

feelingisquitedifferentfromthatinthecity,soyouthinkaboutitdeeply.

10.Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessayentitled

ShouldWeAbolishtheOne-ChildPolicy?Youshouldwriteatleast150

wordsaccordingtotheoutlinegivenbelow.

1.有人赞成现在废除独生子女政策

2.有人则表示反对

3.我的看法

ShouldWeAbolishtheOne-ChildPolicy?

二、2.ReadingComprehension(SkimmingandScanning)(10题)

11.

SomeexpertsthinktheFremontwaspushedoutbyotherpeoples,whileother

expertsbelievethattheymovedsouthbecauseofsome.

12.

Corrthinksthatifthereisanyproblemwithadrug,ifsbettertoknowit

13.

Theissueofperformers'ethicshasalwaysbeentoleratedby.

14.

Anyminimaldeviationfromnormalform,andfunctionmaybe.

15.

TheemergenceoflocalsharemarketsoutsideLondonwaspromoted

by.

16.

Theexactprocedures,bywhichonecantellwhetherenoughpainthasbeen

applied,arerevealedinthistext.

A.YB.NC.NG

17.Ifsadvisedtoextendyourprofessionalintereststofieldsthatcomplement

andleveragethework

18.

Incompatiblecommunicationsisacountry-wideproblemintheU.S.because

ofthewhichshouldbeconvertedorreplaced.

19.

Antibioticshavenoeffectondiseasescausedbyviruses.

A.YB.NC.NG

20.

Youraddress,phonenumber,socialsecuritynumber,fullnameorplaceof

employmentshouldnotbemadeknowntoallbecausetheyare.

三、3.ListeningComprehension(10题)

21.(28)

A.Theyhelpthestudentstobecomemorecooperative.

B.Theyareverygoodentertainmentforstudents.

C.Theymakelotsofmoneybuysellingtickets.

D.Theyhelpthestudentstobuildgoodteams.

22.

[B4]

23.(22)

A.Thefamousbrands.B.Thecereals.C.Books.D.Meat.

24.

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25.听力原文：Thereisapopularbeliefamongparentsthatschoolsareno

longerinterestedinspelling.NoschoolIhavetaughtinhaseverignored

spellingorconsidereditunimportantasabasicskill.(26)Thereare,however,

vastlydifferentideasabouthowtoteachit,orhowmuchpriorityitmustbe

givenovergenerallanguagedevelopmentandwritingability.Theproblemis

howtoencourageachildtoexpresshimselffreelyandconfidentlyinwriting

withoutholdinghimbackwiththecomplexitiesofspelling.

Ifspellingbecomestheonlyfbcalpointofhisteacher'sinterest,clearlya

brightchildwillbelikelyto"playitsafe".Hewilltendtowriteonlywords

withinhisspellingrange,choosingtoavoidadventurouslanguage.(27)That's

whyteacherstimeandagainencouragetheearlyuseofdictionariesandpay

attentiontocontentratherthantechnicalability.

Iwasonceshockedtoreadonthebottomofasensitivepieceofwritingabout

apersonalexperience:"Thisworkisterrible!Therearefartoomanyspelling

errorsandyourwritingisillegible*'.Itmayhavebeena(28)sharpcriticismof

thepupil'stechnicalabilitiesinwriting,butitwasalsoasadreflectiononthe

teacherwhohadomittedmentionofthechild'sdeepfeelings.Theteacherwas

notwrongtodrawattentioniotheerrors,(29)butifhisprioritieshadcentered

onthechild'sideas,anexpressionofhisencouragementinthepupil'sfree

presentationwouldhavegivenhimmoremotivationtoseekimprovement.

(33)

A.Thedifficultiesinteachingspelling.

B.Theroleofspellingingenerallanguagedevelopment.

C.Thecomplexitiesofthebasicwritingskills.

D.Thenecessityofteachingspelling.

26.听力原文：W:Ican'tbelieveit!IletyoustayinmyapartmentwhileIwas

away,andIcomebacktofinditamess.

M:Ishould'vedoneabetterjobkeepingitclean,Iknow;Ifeeljustterrible

aboutit.

Q:Whatdoesthemanmean?

(13)

A.Hedoesn'tthinktheapartmentisamess.

B.He'ssorryabouttheconditionoftheapartment.

C.Hethinkshecleansbetterthanthewoman.

D.Hehadaterribletimestayinginthewoman'sapartment.

27.SectionA

Directions:Inthissection,youwillhear8shortconversationsand2long

conversations.Attheendofeachconversation,oneormorequestionswillbe

askedaboutwhatwassaid.Boththeconversationandthequestionswillbe

spokenonlyonce.Aftereachquestiontherewillbeapause.Duringthepause,

youmustreadthefourchoicesmarkedA,B,CandD,anddecidewhichis

thebestanswer.

听力原文：M:Excuseme;Idon*tunderstandwhyflight213hasbeendelayed.

Theweatherseemsfinenow.

W:I'mafraidNewYorkgotthreetimesasmuchsnowaswedidhere.It

shouldbeclearbymorningthough.

Q:Whatdoesthewomanimply?

(12)

A.Flight213ispreparingtodepart.

B.ThemanwillhavetostayinNewYork.

C.TheplanecannotlandinNewYorkbecauseofbadweather.

D.Threeflightswerecancelledbecauseofsnow.

28.听力原文：M:I'malwayslateformymorningclasses.It'sbecauseofall

thetrafficoutnearwhereIlive.

W:Well,youwouldn'thavethatproblemifyoumoveintoourcampus.

Q:Whatdoesthewomansuggestthemando?

(15)

A.Nottohavemorningclasses.

B.Don'thaveanyproblem.

C.Moveintohercampus.

D.Avoidthetrafficjam.

29.(24)

A.Thedirectorcouldn*tgiveheranappointmentrightaway.

B.Theofficewasclosedthefirsttimeshewent.

C.Thecomputerswereoutofservicefilefirsttimeshewasthere.

D.Shedidnothaveacceptableidentificationwithheronherfirstvisit.

30.(31)

A.EveryyearinMarch.

B.Everyotheryear.

C.Fromtwotothreeweeks.

D.Thewinterof1925.

四、4.ReadingComprehension(ReadinginDepth)(3题)

31.Atemporarymemorywon'tbecomeanenduringoneunless.

A.itreachesthehippocampus

B.itiscapturedduringsleeptime

C.itistransferredtotheneocortex

D.iteliminatesthememoryunderit

32.SectionB

Directions:Thereare2passagesinthissection.Eachpassageisfollowedby

somequestionsorunfinishedstatements.Foreachofthemtherearefour

choicesmarkedA,B,CandD.Youshoulddecideonthebestchoice.

Lowself-esteempopsupregularlyinacademicreportsasanexplanationfor

allsortsofviolence,fromhatecrimesandstreetcrimestoterrorism.But

despitethepopularityoftheexplanation,notmuchevidencebacksitup.Ina

recentissueofPsychologicalReview,threeresearchersexaminethisliterature

atlengthandconcludethatamuchstrongerlinkconnectshighself-esteemto

violence.HItisdifficulttomaintainbeliefinthelowself-esteemviewafter

seeingthatthemoreviolentgroupsaregenerallytheoneswithhigherself­

esteem."writeRoyBaumeisterofCaseWesternReserveUniversityand

LauraSmartandJosephBodenoftheUniversityofVirginia.

Theconventionalviewisthatpeoplewithoutself-esteemtrytogainitby

hurtingothers.Theresearchersfindthatviolenceismuchmoreoftenthework

ofpeoplewithunrealisticallyhighself-esteemattackingotherswhochallenge

theirself-image:Underthisumbrellacomebullies,rapists,racists,

psychopathsandmembersofstreetgangsandorganizedcrime.

Thestudyconcludes:certainformsofhighself-esteemseemtoincreaseone's

pronenesstoviolence.Anuncriticalendorsementoftheculturalvalueofself-

esteemmaythereforebecounterproductiveandevendangerous.Thesocietal

pursuitofhighself-esteemforeveryonemayliterallyend.updoing

considerableharm."Asforprisonprogramsintendedtomakeviolentconvicts

feelbetteraboutthemselves,"perhapsitwouldbebettertotryinstilling

modestyandhumility."theresearcherswrote.

InaninterviewwiththeBostonGlobe,Baumeistersaidhebelievesthe"self­

promotingestablishment'*isstartingtocrumble."Whatwouldworkbetterfor

thecountryistoforgetaboutself-esteemandconcentrateonself-control.1'he

said.Intheschools,thiswouldmeanturningawayfrompsychicboosterism

andemphasizingself-esteemasaby-productofrealachievement,notasan

endinitself.Theself-esteemmovement,stillentrenchedinschoolsof

education,isdeeplyimplicatedinthedumbingdownofourschools,andin

thedisguisedequalitybehindtheideathatitisaterriblepsychicblowifone

studentdoesanybetteroranyworsethananother.Let'shopeitisindeed

crumbling.

Theresearchersfindthattherearestrongerconnectionsbetween.

A.lowself-esteemandviolence

B.lowself-controlandviolence

C.highself-imageandviolence

D.highself-controlandviolence

33.(60)

五、5.ErrorCorrection。题)

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六、6.ErrorCorrection^题）

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参考答案

l.OnStudents1InterpersonalRelationshipPositiveinterpersonalrelationships

arevitalforoptimalhumangrowthanddevelopment.Howeverinrecentyears

concernhasbeenexpressedbyeducatorsaboutthequalityofinterpersonal

relationshipamongstudentsininstitutionsofhighereducation.Accordingto

asurveyconductedbyHebeiUniversitymanycollege-agestudentsfind

interpersonalrelationshipthebiggestheadache.Increasingdiversityandrapid

changesinoursocietyaremakinginteractingwithotherscontinuallymore

complexanddifficult.Withlimitedlifeexperiencesandsocialskillscollege

studentsarefacingmorechallengesindealingwithinterpersonalrelationship.

Thisisespeciallytrueforstudentscomingfromruralareas.Becauseof

extremelylimitedsocialskillstheyareoftenrejectedbyothers—and

rejectiongivesthemevenfewerchancestolearnhowtobehavewithothers.

Inmyopinionnowthatinterpersonalrelationshipisimportanttostudents*

developmentcollegesshouldkeepupdatedandoffercomprehensive

interpersonalrelationshipscourse.Thecourseshouldaddresstheknowledge

skillsattitudesandbehaviorsallstudentsneedtoparticipateinpositive

relationshipsinthefamilyandwithindividualsatschoolinthecommunity

andintheworkplace.OnStudents'InterpersonalRelationshipPositive

interpersonalrelationshipsarevitalforoptimalhumangrowthand

development.However,inrecentyears,concernhasbeenexpressedby

educatorsaboutthequalityofinterpersonalrelationshipamongstudentsin

institutionsofhighereducation.AccordingtoasurveyconductedbyHebei

University,manycollege-agestudentsfindinterpersonalrelationshipthe

biggestheadache.Increasingdiversityandrapidchangesinoursocietyare

makinginteractingwithotherscontinuallymorecomplexanddifficult.With

limitedlifeexperiencesandsocialskills,collegestudentsarefacingmore

challengesindealingwithinterpersonalrelationship.Thisisespeciallytrue

forstudentscomingfromruralareas.Becauseofextremelylimitedsocial

skills,theyareoftenrejectedbyothers-andrejectiongivesthemevenfewer

chancestolearnhowtobehavewithothers.Inmyopinion,nowthat

interpersonalrelationshipisimportanttostudents*development,colleges

shouldkeepupdatedandoffercomprehensiveinterpersonalrelationships

course.Thecourseshouldaddresstheknowledge,skills,attitudesand

behaviorsallstudentsneedtoparticipateinpositiverelationshipsinthe

familyandwithindividualsatschool,inthecommunity,andintheworkplace.

2.ChildrenObesityChinaissuper-sizingitschildrenasfastasitseconomy

promptingfearsofobesitycrisis.Today8%of10-to12-year-oldsinChina's

citiesareconsideredobeseandanadditional15%areoverweightaccording

toEducationMinistrydata.Chinahasenteredtheeraofobesityandthespeed

ofgrowthisshocking.Agenerationofeconomicexpansionhasproduced

higherlivingstandardsandallowedChinesefamiliestoputmorefoodonthe

table;once-scarcemeatanddairyproductsnowarewidelyavailable.

Growingprosperityalsohasledtomoresedentarylifestyles:lessphysical

laborfewertripsonfootandbybicyclemoretravelbycarandmoreInternet

usage-allareresponsibleforalargeweightgain.Theintroductionoffast

foodoverseasalsocontributestotheincreaseinobesity.Ithinkifshightime

wefoughtjuvenileflab.Kidsneedtofollowahealthierdiet.Parentsshould

helpkidsbalancedietanddon'ttakethemtoeatfastfoodlikeMcDonald's

andKFCsofrequently.Thegovernmentshouldbuildmoreplaygroundsand

requirestudentstoexerciseorplaysportsforanhouradayatschool.Children

ObesityChinaissuper-sizingitschildrenasfastasitseconomy,prompting

fearsofobesitycrisis.Today,8%of10-to12-year-oldsinChina'scitiesare

consideredobeseandanadditional15%areoverweight,accordingto

EducationMinistrydata.Chinahasenteredtheeraofobesity,andthespeed

ofgrowthisshocking.Agenerationofeconomicexpansionhasproduced

higherlivingstandardsandallowedChinesefamiliestoputmorefoodonthe

table;once-scarcemeatanddairyproductsnowarewidelyavailable.

Growingprosperityalsohasledtomoresedentarylifestyles:lessphysical

labor,fewertripsonfootandbybicycle,moretravelbycar,andmoreInternet

usage-allareresponsibleforalargeweightgain.Theintroductionoffast

foodoverseasalsocontributestotheincreaseinobesity.Ithinkifshightime

wefoughtjuvenileflab.Kidsneedtofollowahealthierdiet.Parentsshould

helpkidsbalancedietanddon'ttakethemtoeatfastfoodlikeMcDonald's

andKFCsofrequently.Thegovernmentshouldbuildmoreplaygroundsand

requirestudentstoexerciseorplaysportsforanhouradayatschool.

3.Say"Thanks”toParents(1)Accordingtoarecentsurveyinvolvingover

4000collegestudents37%ofundergraduateshaveneversaid"Thanks"to

theirparentsbefore.Theirparentshavedonealltheycouldto(2)bringthem

upinthepastscoreofyears(3)buthaveneverbeenrewardedwithgratitude.

(4)Thesubjectsclaimsuchreasonsasfollows.(5)Firstofallaquarterofthe

students(6)interviewedregarditasparents'responsibilitytosupportthem

spirituallyandfinanciallysotheythinkitisunnecessarytoexpress

appreciationtotheirparents.(5)Neverthelessthemajorityofyoungstersare

awareoftheirparents*tenderlovebutstillnotusedtosaying"Thanks".(5)

Someevenfinda(7)generationgapbetweenthemselvesandtheirparents

and(8)thereforeTeelreluctanttoexpresstheiraffectionfortheirparents.(9)

Inmyeyes(10)expressinggratitudetoourparentsisawayofrespecting

themandtheirlove.Weshouldsay“Thanks”toourparentsdirectlyand

bravelyandwhafsmoreimportantisweshoulddoallthatwecantorewand

them.Say"Thanks”toParents(1)Accordingtoarecentsurveyinvolvingover

4000collegestudents,37%ofundergraduateshaveneversaid''Thanks"to

theirparentsbefore.Theirparentshavedonealltheycouldto(2)bringthem

upinthepastscoreofyears,(3)buthaveneverbeenrewardedwithgratitude.

(4)Thesubjectsclaimsuchreasonsasfollows.(5)Firstofall,aquarterofthe

students(6)interviewedregarditasparents'responsibilitytosupportthem

spirituallyandfinanciallysotheythinkitisunnecessarytoexpress

appreciationtotheirparents.(5)Nevertheless,themajorityofyoungstersare

awareoftheirparents*tenderlovebutstillnotusedtosaying"Thanks”.(5)

Someevenfinda(7)generationgapbetweenthemselvesandtheirparents,

and(8)thereforeTeelreluctanttoexpresstheiraffectionfortheirparents.(9)

Inmyeyes,(10)expressinggratitudetoourparentsisawayofrespecting

themandtheirlove.Weshouldsay'Thanks"toourparentsdirectlyand

bravely,andwhat'smoreimportantisweshoulddoallthatwecantorewand

them.解析：［审题］本题要求一篇议论文。所给的提纲清楚明了，按此

行文即可。注意句式的多样性和用词的准确性。

［思路］

第一段说明很多大学生从未给父母道过谢这种现象；

第二段论述其中的原因；

第三段给出自己的观点：应该给父母道谢：

4.DearSirorMadamIrecentlyboughtaSony452laptopcomputeratHenley

branch.HoweverwithinafewdaysIbegantoexperienceproblemswithit.

Themainproblemswerethatafewoftheprogramsinstalledonitceasedto

functionandthatthelaptoprefusedtoreadanydiscseventhoughthesediscs

arcacceptedbybothmydesktopcomputerandmyfriencfsToshiba2000.

WhenIreturnedtotheshoptoclaimarefundunderthetermsofthewarranty

providedbyyourcompanyIwasinformedthatIwasnotentitledasthe

warrantycardwasinvalid.Thereasonwhythewarrantycardisinvalidwas

notexplainedtome.WhenIaskedforanexplanationthestaffrefusedtogive

meone.Whilstthestaffwerenotrudeassuchtheywereratherabrupt.Asa

resultIamwritingtoyouinordertosortthesituationout.Ibelievethe

warrantycardtobecompleteandvalid.Iencloseaphotocopyforyoutocheck.

Iwouldliketoarrangeformyfaultylaptoptobeexchangedorformymoney

toberefunded.Pleasecontactmewhenyouhavelookedintothematter.

YoursfaithfullyJackyShaoDearSirorMadam,IrecentlyboughtaSony452

laptopcomputeratHenleybranch.However,withinafewdays,Ibeganto

experienceproblemswithit.Themainproblemswerethatafewofthe

programsinstalledonitceasedtofunctionandthatthelaptoprefusedtoread

anydiscs,eventhoughthesediscsarcacceptedbybothmydesktopcomputer

andmyfriend'sToshiba2000.WhenIreturnedtotheshoptoclaimarefund

underthetermsofthewarrantyprovidedbyyourcompany,Iwasinformed

thatIwasnotentitledasthewarrantycardwasinvalid.Thereasonwhythe

warrantycardisinvalidwasnotexplainedtome.WhenIaskedfbran

explanation,thestaffrefusedtogivemeone.Whilstthestaffwerenotrude

assuch,theywereratherabrupt.Asaresult,Iamwritingtoyouinorderto

sortthesituationout.Ibelievethewarrantycardtobecompleteandvalid.I

encloseaphotocopyforyoutocheck.Iwouldliketoarrangeformyfaulty

laptoptobeexchangedorfbrmymoneytoberefunded.Pleasecontactme

whenyouhavelookedintothematter.Yoursfaithfully,JackyShao

5.MyViewonChangesofNationalPublicHolidayFrom2008thepast

nationalholidaypatternhaschanged:thepreviousseven-dayLabofsDayhas

beenshortenedintoathree-dayholidaywithsomenewone-dayholidMy

ViewonChangesofNationalPublicHolidayFrom2008,thepastnational

holidaypatternhaschanged:thepreviousseven-dayLabor'sDayhasbeen

shortenedintoathree-dayholiday,withsomenewone-dayholid

6.ALettertoUniversityPresidentaboutSafetyonCampusDearMr.President

I'masophomoremajoringinenvironmentalengineering.I'mwritingtoyou

tosaysomethingabutthecampussafety.OuruniversityissolargethatIcan't

imaginehowharditistokeepitwiththousandsofstudentsingoodorder.On

thewholestudentsaresomewhatcontentwiththecampussafety.But

meanwhilesomeproblemsdoexist.Inthefirstplacethetheftoncampusisa

hugeheadacheofus.Myclassmatesinstudentdormitorybuilding202have

comeacrossthetheftquitealot.Theirbagsbankcardsradiosetsandother

propertiesarestolen.Thesamethingsalsohappenedintheself-study

classrooms.It'sunbearablethattextbookswithveryimportantnotesare

missingattimes.BesidesIheardthatwalkingaroundthecampusatnightis

notguaranteedbecauseafewgirlswerefrightenedby2strangerslastmonth.

It'surgentthatsomemeasuresbetaken.Educationonmoralityshouldbe

taughtamongallstudentsremindingthemofwhat'sthesensiblethingtodo.

Ouruniversityshouldalsomakesomepolicytoensurethatsafetyregulations

befollowed.Weareexpectingabigchange.AtlastIwanttoappreciateyour

sparingprecioustimetoreadthisletter.Thankyou.YoursrespectfullyWang

MingALettertoUniversityPresidentaboutSafetyonCampusDearMr.

President,I'masophomoremajoringinenvironmentalengineering.I'm

writingtoyoutosaysomethingabutthecampussafety.Ouruniversityisso

largethatIcan'timaginehowharditistokeepitwiththousandsofstudents

ingoodorder.Onthewhole,studentsaresomewhatcontentwiththecampus

safety.Butmeanwhile,someproblemsdoexist.Inthefirstplace,thethefton

campusisahugeheadacheofus.Myclassmatesinstudentdormitorybuilding

202havecomeacrossthetheftquitealot.Theirbags,bankcards,radiosets,

andotherpropertiesarestolen.Thesamethingsalsohappenedintheself­

studyclassrooms.Ifsunbearablethattextbookswithveryimportantnotesare

missingattimes.Besides,Iheardthatwalkingaroundthecampusatnightis

notguaranteedbecauseafewgirlswerefrightenedby2strangerslastmonth.

It'surgentthatsomemeasuresbetaken.Educationonmoralityshouldbe

taughtamongallstudentsremindingthemofwhat'sthesensiblethingtodo.

Ouruniversityshouldalsomakesomepolicytoensurethatsafetyregulations

befollowed.Weareexpectingabigchange.Atlast,Iwanttoappreciateyour

sparingprecioustimetoreadthisletter.Thankyou.Yoursrespectfully,Wang

Ming

7.TheImportanceofCreatingaHealthyInternet[1]Withthedevelopmentof

oursocietyandeconomytheInternetbecomesanecessarytoolforeveryone

toobtaininformation.[2]Howevertherearealsosomeunhealthycontentsin

tTheImportanceofCreatingaHealthyInternetfl]Withthedevelopmentof

oursocietyandeconomy,theInternetbecomesanecessarytoolforeveryone

toobtaininformation.[2]However,therearealsosomeunhealthycontentsin

t解析：作文标题是“创建健康网络环境的重要性这已经表明，写作

的重点是说明“为什么要创建健康的网络环境”。但所给出的outline没有

体现这一点。仅仅根据。Mine动笔，恐怕写不出好作文来。

提纲的第1点和第2点都址说背景，是为我们要论述的论点服务的；第

3点指向“措施”，也与论点有关。但是，以这三点中的任何一条为中心，

都有可能偏题。

那么该如何做这篇文章呢。不仅要把提纲中的内容纳入，而且还要特别

沦述“创建健康网络环境的重要性要思考那么儿条“重要性”出来，才

能有话可说，切合中心主旨。洲练从不同的角度考虑健康网络的重要忤，

培养良好的思维能力，是写好此类作文的关键。

Analysis

[1]对应outline的第1条

[2]对应outline的第2条。如果不知道怎么用英洁表达“炒

作”(drumbeating),不说就是。反正仅仅是不良现象中的一个例子而已。

[3]主题句，对应作文标题。

[4][5][6]三条理由。健康的网络可以：预防网络犯罪：保护儿童不受

不良信息的影响；方便我们更好地利用网络资源。(这部分可以八仙过海,

各显神通)

[7]总结全文.照应outline的第3条。

8.WhatDoYouThinkofChallenge?Withthefastdevelopmentoftheworld

moreandmorechallengeisinstoreforus.Challengemeansnotonlyhardship

butalsoopportunity.Sinceweareyoungpeopleandhavebrightfuturebefore

usweshouldhavetherightattitudetowardschallenge.Bynaturechallenge

isaninspirationtoourcreativepowerandanopportunitytoachievesuccess

Themostimportantthingistodealwithchallengeproperly.Firstyoumust

bewellpreparedforchallengeatanytimebecauseyoucanneverinmost

casesexpectwhenitcomesprecisely.Secondwhenitreallycomesyoushould

becourageousenoughtotakeit.Nopainsnogains.Onlythroughhardwork

canyouachievesuccess.Finallyadequateknowledgeiscalledfortomeet

challenge.Scienceandtechnologyaredevelopingatatremendousrateand

thosewhocannetfollowitspacewillbeeliminatedbythesociety.Livingin

themodernsocietytodaynoonecanavoidchallenges.Weareobligedto

prepareourselvesadequatelyforchallengesbyaccumulatingenough

knowledgeandbybuildingastrongbody.Onlybymeansofthiscanweadapt

ourselvestothelifestyleofcapitalcities.WhatDoYouThinkofChallenge?

Withthefastdevelopmentoftheworld,moreandmorechallengeisinstore

forus.Challengemeansnotonlyhardship,butalsoopportunity.Sinceweare

youngpeopleandhavebrightfuturebeforeus,weshouldhavetheright

attitudetowardschallenge.Bynature,challengeisaninspirationtoour

creativepowerandanopportunitytoachievesuccess,Themostimportant

thingistodealwithchallengeproperly.First,youmustbewellpreparedfor

challengeatanytime,becauseyoucannever,inmostcases,expectwhenit

comesprecisely.Second,whenitreallycomes,you