2024上海高考英语问题解决型写作模板及方法指导（含真题）

山东高考英语指导写作问题解决类专项训练

模块导航

・模块一问题解决型写作

•模块二议论文（解决问题）常用句式

・模块三问题解决型作文模板

・模块四2020-2022年春季高考真题特训

•模块五2024届上海名校模考题特训

模块一问题解决型写作

知识点一：问题解决型写作

【知识械理】

此题型是先指出某一问题或现象，然后提出解决方法。此类型的论说文重心在解决问题匕

但有时题目中也要求对问题产生的原因或引起的严重后果做相应的描述,所以审题时，要注

意弄清作文段落间的合理比例,

1.写作结构指导（

问题陈述U

分析（原因/后果）。

Y

问题解决u

结论（期望/展望）°

2.常用句型

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问题陈述

Recently/Nowadays,...hasbecomeaseriousproblemwehavetoface.

...（hephenomenon...hasarousedthepublic'sconcern.

Thereisnodenying（hat...hasbecomeaseriousconcernamongpeople.

分析（原因/后果）

Thereareseveralreasonsfortheproblem.

Thereareavarietyoffactorscontributingtothephenomenon.

问题解决

Peoplehavefiguredoutmanywaystosolvetheproblem.

Itishightimethatweshouldfigure/figuredoutwaystodealwiththeproblem.

结论（期望/展望）

With（hejointefforts,1amconfidentthat...

Aslongaswewewillresolvetheproblemeventually.

【例题精讲】

2020上海高考英语作文

假如你是明启中学高三学生李华，前几日，你邀请你的好友王磊下周五去郊野公园一起欣赏

露天音乐会。面对天气恶劣、交通不便等原因，王磊一直犹豫不决。假如你是李华，请写一

封信说服王磊和你起参加。

要求包括以下内容：

1.解决王磊的困扰2.音乐会的重要性

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题目综述

今位的高考作文题，基本延续了近年来上海高考英语作文的出题方式。

作文话题以生活情境形式出现，同时需要借助信件写作的模式来表达自己的一些看法和建议。

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审题要点

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今在高考的话题依旧是围绕着同学们身边的生活来展开。同时也需要联想一些细节来展开自

己的描写。

例如，面对一场露天■&乐会，同学们在实际生活中应该不会陌生，但是关于露天音乐会的场

景，有哪些有意思的方面，这需要大家在平时的生活中留意观察。

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考试中时间有限，但是如果能够展开合理的联想，这对大家写作非常有帮助。

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写作套用了近年来常用的信件套路，结合了实际生活的需要。这个和我们高考越发贴近实际

生活场景这个大的方向是保持一致的。

信件写作的基本格式和结构需要所有同学都能够熟练掌握。(见下文)

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本质上来看，这依旧是一篇议论文。高中英语写作中，议论文的写作同学们务必掌握清楚。

细细读来，这篇文章看似是在帮同学解决心中疑虑。如果落入这个陷阱，说明同学们在审题

方面没有看透本质。

其实这篇文章抓住议论文这个核心结构就可以了：我们需要说服同学的点在于，演唱会值得

一看或者不可错过。这其实就是议论文的核心观点，剩下的正文中写出几个核心理由并搭配

补充的例子和解释，那么这篇文章的基本脉络就清晰可见了。

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实用结构

信件写作的基本框架

Greeting:

Useanappropriategreeting(DearMr/Miss/Mrs/Ms...+lastname,orDear+firstname)

Openingparagraph:

Usesetphrasetobeginyourletterandsaywhyyouarewriting(Howareyoudoing?Itwasniceto

hearfromyou...etc)

Mainpart:

Thecontentofyourwriting

Closingparagraph:

Stateanythingyouwanttoemphasize.

Usesetphrasestoendyourletter

Signatureendings:

Yours,allthebest,bestwishes...

议论文的基本框架

Introduction：

Brieflyintroduceihetopicyou'regoingtodiscuss.

Sayhowyoufeelabout.

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Mainpart:(twoparagraphs)

Choosetwomainaspectsoftheissueandwriteoneparagraphoneach.

Explainyourideas/points,andgiveexamplesifpossible.

Conclusion:

Sumupbystatingyouroverallopinion.

同学们只要把这两个框架融汇起来合理使用，就是本文的基本大纲。

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参考范文

DearWangLei,

It'sbeenawhilesinceIheardfromyou.Lasttime,Iinvitedyoutoattendtheconcertwhichwillbe

heldnextFridayin(hecenturypark.Thoughyoudidnotreplytome,thehesitationwearingon

yourfaceofferedmeaglimpseofwhatwasgoingoninyourmind.Maybeitistherecentghastly

weatherortheterribletrafficthathinderyoufrommakingupyourmind.However,asfarasI

concerned,it'sstillworthoureftbrts.

Thisconcertisnotapopmusicconcertbutaclassicmusiconewhereseveralprestigioussymphony

orchestraswillperformmanywell-knowncompositions.Itmustbeafeastforalltheaudience.

Moreover,chancesarethatwemayhaveanalbumwithperformers5autographsonit.Youshould

nevermisssuchafabulousconcert!

Intermsofdifficultiesyouareworriedabout,Ihavealreadyfoundsomesolutions.Myfatherwill

beavailableonthatdaysothathecandriveustothescene.Ihavemanagedtopersuadehimto

makehispromise.Inaddition,incaseofarainyday,Ihavepreparedtworaincoats.Iamconfident

thatwewillindulgeourselvesintotheelegantflowofnotes.

Iamlookingforwardtohearingyourreply.

Yours,

LiHua

例1.根据所给信息写一篇关于JunkMessage的短文：目前垃圾短信泛滥，给人们的生活带来

困扰，分析这种现象产生的原因，谈谈加何解决这个问题.

Junkmessagesareintheair.Peoplearecaughtupinaconstantrustlewiththem—you

deletewhiletheyarrive.Howunpleasant!

Reasonsfossuchinconveniencevary.Somemaybecausedbybusinessbatlieswhere

companiestakeadvantageofleakedpersonalinformationandusetextmessagesasawayof

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advertisingwhileothersmayresultfromevilthoughts,includingleasingonesorevenblackmailing

ones.Stillothersareperhapsduetoineffectiveadministrationortechnologicalfailures.Whatever

（hecauses,theymustberemoved.

Themostdirectsolutionistoturntophoneproducerswhomayequippedeachphonewitha

messagefiltersoastoautomaticallyabandonthosejunkmessages.Butitmaynotbethemost

far-reachingsolution.Tohandletheproblemthoroughlywemayfirstsetupasupervisingnetwork

todetectthespreadofjunkmessages.Secondly,lawsforpunishmentshallfollowtofightagainst

thesebehaviors.Meanwhile,ourpersonalinformationmustgetbetterprotectiontoavoidbeing

aimedataspotentialcustomers.Andfinally,thepublicshouldbeeducatedlorespectothersby

stoppingthespreadofjunkmessages.

Anli-junk-messagewarcanbedemanding,butitwillbeworththeeffortst。freepeoplefromihe

constantassaultpresentedbytheseunwelcomedvisitors.

模块二、.论文（解决问题）常用句百。

知识点二：议论文（解决问题）常用句式

【知识梳理】

Introductionoftheissue

1.Whenitcomesto,mostpeopleareinfavorof/maintain/hold/doubtquestion

2.Currently,thereisagrowingtendencythat.

3.Withtherapiddevelopmentof,anincreasingnumberofpeoplebegin

tonotice/realize/areaware.

4.Recently,thereiswidespreadconcern/controversyover.

5.Today,oursocietyiswitnessingmoreandmore.

Standpointorpointofview.

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1.Asforme,Iamconvincedthat.

2.AsfarasIcansee,itismoresensibleandreasonableto.

3.Inmypointofview,nothingismorethanto.

4.Manyofushavebeenundertheillusionthat.Acloseexamination

wouldrevealhowridiculousitisto.

5.Contrarytowhatiswidelyaccepted,Imaintainthat.

6.AsfarasIamconcerned,itmakesnosensetoarguefor.

7.Facing(Facedwith.Confrontedwith),oneshouldinsteadof

Reasoningoranalysis

1.Thereisadefinitelinkbetweenand.

2.willexert/produceaprofound(far-reaching)/undesirable/

unimaginable/disastrouseffecton.

3.Toomuchstress(emphasis)placedoninevitablywillleadto(giverisetoresult

in).

4.Manyfactorscontributetothephenomenon,ofwhichplaysaleadingrole.

5.Comparedwith,tendto.Itisnotdifficultto

understandwhythereissuchabigdifferenceif.

6.Considering,itisnowonder.

7.Speakingof,thedisadvantages(far)outweighitsadvantages.

Unfortunately,hasbecomethevictimof.

Suggestionsandmeasures

1.Giventheseriousnessoftheissue,itismosturgentto.

2.Effectivemeasuressuchasmustbetakenbeforethingsgetworse.

__________isworthatry.

3.Tochange,wccaneasily.

4.Tochangethecurrentsituation,isrequired/calledfor.

5.Noeffectivesolutionisathandnow,butthegeneralawarenessofthevalueof

mustbeenhancedatfirst.

Transitionstructure

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1.Tobegin/startwith,.Inaddition,.What'smore,.

2.Therearcmanyreasonsbehindmydecision.Firstandforemost,.

3.Ononehand,.lastbutnottheleast.

4.Anotherequallyimportantreasonisthat.

5.isacaseinpoint.Anotherexampleisthestoryof.

6.Whydopeople?Therootcauseis.Otherreasons

includeand.

Ending

1.Itishightimethatweputanendto.

2.Fromwhathasbeendiscussedabove,wemaysafelycometotheconclusionthat

3.inaword/Inconclusion/Inshort/Tosumup/Toconclude.isthemosturgent

thingatthemoment,whichrequiresusto.

4.Basedonthereasonslistedabove,noonecandenythefollowingideathat.

5.Withtheapproachof,isboundtocome/happen/occurinthe

nearfuture.

议论文（解决问题）注意事项

问题解决型议论文的基本环节为：

1.引出要解决的问题

2.说明其严重性或必要性

3.提出解决方案并分述理由

4.提出可采纳的建议以及

5.展望前景

其中1、3、5为核心部分；2、4根据题目要求和文章篇幅灵活变动。

文章务必做到中心论点明白扼要；分论点调理清晰并且有相应的扩展支持或实例

说明。在积累万能句型、亮点词汇的时候尽量避免陈词滥调性的表述，能有选择

性的对好词好句，进行加工组合，形成自己独一无二的“独门秘籍”并在写作训练

中不断磨练。

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【例题精讲】

作文要求：你是王海，是学校学生会主席，最近你做J'一次调查，发现你校学生都不愿在

学校食堂(canteen)就餐，有的则把食物丢进垃圾桶。请你以学生会主席的身份向校长反映你调

查的结果，并谈谈你的看法。

命题解读：本文属于多种文体综合写作，书信体的格式加上夹叙夹议，

要求：1.书信体的格式；2.对学生就餐情况作陈述或描述；3.就此现象作议论。

DearPrincipal,

I'mWangHai,presidentoftheStudcnts,Union.Iamwritingtoyoutoreportanunpleasant

phenomenonthatisgoingonintheschoolcanteen.Recently,I'veconductedaresearchandfound

thatmostofthestudentsinourschooldonotfeellikediningintheschoolcanteen.Someofthem

eventhrowthefoodintotherubbishbin.

Amongthefactorsthesurveypresented,themajorconcernslieintheslowpaceofthestaffs

serviceandtheplaindishesoftheschoolcanteen①.Asstudentsintheseniorhighschool,we're

allbusywiththeschoolwork.Unfortunately,theinefficiencyofthecanteencostsustoomuchtime,

whichmakesusturntofastfood.What'smore,wehavequitefewchoicesofdishes,andinfact,

they'renotsatisfactoryinqualityandflavor,whichmayresultintheunpleasantwasteaswell.

Inmyopinion,itishightimeforourcanteentemakesomeimprovements.First,there

shouldbemorewindowssellingfoodandamoreefficientmanagingsystem.Second,various

dishesshouldbeaddedtothemenuandthefoodqualityneedsimproving.Ontheotherhand,

studentsshouldbeeducatedtorespectothcrs,laborandavoidwastingfoodinthefuture.

Withthejointefforts,Pinsurethatnexttime,thecanteenwillcomeasthebestchoiceto

satisfythestudents'need②.

Yourssincerely,

WangHai

结构点评

书信体的格式：口期、称呼、正文、结束敬语和签名五个部分完整

正文部分先描写现象后论述：

1.开门见山点明写信目的：反映学生就餐情况，反映调查结果；

2.分析论述引起不良现象的几个原因；

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3.提出解决的措施；

4.对未来学生就餐情*兄进行展望。

语言点评

第一段：一短一长句（thal引导的定语从句）交代了自己的身份和写信的目的；接着用一长（ihal

引导的宾语从句）一短句描述了学生就餐情况；

第二段：①句总启论述；用liein分析原因所在：食堂服务的慢节奏和食堂乏味的菜；用一

短一长句（which引导的非限制性定语从句）分析第一个原因；Whafsmore连接两个

并列的原因;用and连接的并列句和which引导的非限制性定语从句分析了第二个

原因；

第三段：用“itishightimeIbr...todo...”提出解决的措施；用“First”“Second”论述食堂应采取

的措施;“Ontheotherhand”表述从学生的角度应采取的措施；三个并列的“should”表

达作者肯定的态度；

第四段：“Withthejointefibrts”承上启下：概括第三段的三个措施;②句展望未来。

【课堂练习】

例文：1.目前盗版的现象比较严重

2.造成这种现象的原因及危害

3.我们应该怎么做

Nowadaysitisgenerallyacceptedthatpiracyisbecomingmoreandmoreofaproblem

inChina.Manyproducts,suchastape,CDandhi-techdevicescanbecopied.Shortlyaftera

newly-developedproductisputonthemarket,peoplewillunsurprisinglyfinditspirated

counterpartsinthestores

Specialattentionshouldbepaidtothefactthatpiracyisbringinggreatdamage.Onone

hand,piratedproductsoftencostfarlessthantheoriginalones,sotheyenjoyunbeatableadvantage

inpriceinspiteoftheirrelativelypoorquality,andtheoriginalones,on（hecontrary,sellpoorly.

Ontheotherhand,inthelongrun,piratedproductsmayalsohavenegativeimpactsoncustomers

sincethoseproducers'enthusiasmmaybegreatlyhurtasaresultofmoneyloss.Therefore,itis

hightimethatwesolvedtheproblemassoonaspossible.

Manyawaycanbeadoptedtoreduce（hepiracyphenomenon.Firstofall,itisthedutyofthe

governmentlocalloneveryonetofightthebattleagainstpiracy.Inaddition,ascustomers,we

shoulddevelopourconsciousnesstoresistpiratedproducts.Moreover,strictlawsanddecreesare

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ofgreatimportance.Onlyinthiswaycanthisproblembesolvedradically.

模块三1问题解决型作文模板o

知识点三：问题解决型作文模板：

【知识梳理】

第一段：引出现象，并指出这种现象的后果

引出现象的句型：

[1].Recentlytheriseinproblemof7(phcnomcnonof)...hascause/arouscd/capturcd

public/popular/wide/worldwideconcern.最近现象的日益增多已经引起了全世界/公

众/广泛的注意。

⑵.Recentlytheissueoftheproblemof7thephenomenonof.....hasbeenbroughtintofocus.（has

beenbroughtintopublicattention）最近...的问题已经成为人们关注的焦点。

[3].Nowadays,thereisgrowingconcernabouttheproblem/phenomenonthat....如今，越来越

多的人开始关注……

[4]Nowadays,anincreasingnumberofpeoplecometorealize/beawareoftheirnportar.ee

of...现在越来越多的人开始意出到……的重要性。

[5]Nowadays,moreandmorepeoplearcconcernedabouttheproblemof...

现在越来越多的人开始关注……的问题。

[6]Itisundeniable/Thereisnodenyingthefactthat...hasbecometheutmostconcernamong

peoplenowadays.不可否认，...己经成为人们最关注的问题。

第二段：提出解决的办法

引出解决办法的常用句型：

[1]Confrontedwith--A--，weshouldtakeaseriesofeffectivemeasurestocopewiththe

situation.Foronething,---------------（解决方法一）.Foranother-------------（解决方法二）.

Finally,--------------（解决方法三）.面对……，我们应该采取一系列的措施来应对目前的形

势。

|2|Itisessential/indispensablethatproperactions/effectivemeasuresshouldbetakento

reversethissituation/trend.

为了扭转局势，我们有必要采取有效的措施。

|3]Itishoped/suggestedthatconsiderable/greateffortsshouldbedirectedto/focused

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on...希望（据建议）我们全力以赴……

14]Thereisnoeasy/immediatesolution/approachtotheissueof...but...mightbe

beneficial/helpful,并没有很容易的方法来解决这个问题，……有可能会有帮助的。

第三段：总结这样做的好处

常用句型：

Onlyinthiswaycanwe...

只有这样，我们才能…

【例题精讲】

HowShouldParentsHelpChildrentobeIndependent?

目前，不少父母为孩子包办一切

为了孩子的独立，父母应该。。。。。。

HowShouldParentsHelpChildrentobeIndependent?

Nowadays,thereisagrowingconcernoverthephenomenonthatsomeparentstake

careofalmosteverythingconcernedwiththeirchildren,includingstudy,workandmarriage.Some

parentsbelievethatthisislove,however,itisonlytodestroychildren'sindependencethoroughly.

Forthefutureofthenextgeneration,moreeffortsshouldbemadebyparentstohelptheir

childrentobeindependent.Mos:importantly,parentsshouldhelptocultivatechildren's

awarenessoftheimportanceandnecessityofbeingindependent,whichissupposedtobegin

fromchildhood.Inaddition,Childrenshouldbetaught（hatnoonecanbestrongerandmore

helpfulthanthemselvesinthisworld.

Theimportanceofindependenceissoindispensableforusthatparentshadbetteractasa

tutor,notadictator.Andonlywithparents'trust,canthenextgenerationaccumulateconfidence

stepbystep.

【巩固练习】

TrafficintheCity

1.交通是现代城市的一大问题

2.噪音污染和堵车是两大主要交通问题

3.解决交通问题的手段有很多种

Nowadaysitisgenerallyacceptedthattrafficisoneofthegreatestproblemsofamoderncity.

Asmoreandmorepeoplebuytheirowncars,airpollutionaswellasnoisepollutionsbecomes

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moreandmoreserious.Additionally,roadsarepackedwithcars,busesandbicyclessothattraffic

jamisverycommon.Therefore,howtodealwithtrafficproblemisworthpayingmoreattentionto.

Thefollowingwayscanbeadopted.Firstly,morestreetsandroadsshouldbeconstructed.

Secondly,theprivatecarownershipshouldbelimited.Thirdly,undergroundtrainandcitytrain

shouldbedevelopedquickly.

Asforme,thenumberofprivatecarsshouldbeputundercontrol.Morecarsmeanmore

pollution.Inaddition,morecarsareagreatchallengetoroads,asthebuildingofroadsisnotas

speedyadtheincreasingofcars.Inaword,itisadvisablethatlessmotorvehiclebeused.

模块四12020-2022年春季高考真题特训O

2022年1月春考

Directions:WriteanEnglishcompositionin120-150wordsaccordingtotheinstructionsgivenbelowinChinese

假如你是明启中学的高三学生李明。入冬以来，你们学校组织全校师生进行晨跑，时间在7:30到7:50,休

息5分钟之后准备上第•节课。但是有同学反映，晨跑后身体不适，因此校方委托学生会向同学们征集对

晨跑的意见，请你向学生会写封邮件。要求:

1.你认为晨跑安排中存在的问题：

2.提出改进的建议和理由。

学籍作文（仅供参考）

DearStudentUnion,

Iamwritingthislettertoreflectontheschool'sorganizationofmorningrunningforallteachersand

students.Gladthattheschoolorganizesmorningrunningforthehealthofstudents.However,somestudents

reflectedthattheywereuncomfortableaftermorningrunningwhichisanurgentproblemtobesolved.To

solveit,myreasonsandsuggestionsareasfollows.

Firstofall,itisinappropriatetosetthetimeformorningrunningfrom7:30to7:50inthemorning,

becauseitisonly5minutesfromthefirstclass.Studentswillbeverytired,whichwillimpactthelearning

efficiencyofthefirstclass.Meanwhile,justafterbreakfastinthemorningvigorousexerciseisnotsuitable

forhumanbeings,otherwiseitwillcausestomachdiscomfort.Whynottrytoputthemorningrunningtimein

thebigbreakafterthesecondclass?What*smore.Ihold,beforeorganizingmorningrunning,weshouldgive

studentsacomprehensivephysicalexaminationtoensurethateveryone'sphysicalconditionissuitablefor

running.Wecanarrangesomeotherwarm-upexercisesforthesestudentsandteacherswhoarenotsuitable

forrunningpreventingsomeunexpectedaccidents.Lastbutnotleast,theschoolshouldconsiderstudents

withphysicaldiscomfortioaskforleaveinadvanceandinformthereason.

Inshort,whatmattersmostisthatphysicaleducationisacrucialpartofeducation.Onlyby

Strengthening<)nrhotlyc,;inwebelterprotectnnrcountryandbuildnurmntherlandIhopesincerelystudents

canexperiencehappinessinreasonablesports.

Yours,

LiMing

2021年1月春考

Directions:WriteanEnglishcompositionin120-150wordsaccordingtotheinstructionsgivenbelowinChinefe.

假如你是明启中学的高三学生王佳，你学校的教师Lucy准备在高中开设关于••信息素养“(information

literacy)的课程。课程包含以下四个板块：“网站设计”、“大数据处理”、嘛别真伪信息”和“精确搜索信息”。

现在向全体同学征求建议。请你给她写•份电子邮件，要求：

1.选择两个你感兴趣的板块；

2.说明为什么选择这个板块的理由。

审题：

背景：学校将要开设“信息素养”课程（informationliteracycourse）

任务：

1.，（关联性较强;自己有所了解的容易写）

“网站设计”(web-design)a

“大数据处理”(bigdataprocessing)

“精确搜索信息”(smart-internetsearching)

“辨别真伪信息”(informationcredibilityevaluation)

可以从兴趣爱好、日常经历或社会现象写起广网站设计”:通过建立自己的网站来宣传自己喜欢的事

物

a.或者推广一些公益性的活动，并且能够在移动设备上浏览。

b.“大数据处理”:课题研究要做调查、或者对于一些社会现象想要了解更多，甚至作为大学专业方向提前学起

来°

c.，•精确搜索信息”:平时接触到太多无效、误导或营销信息希望能够省时省力、快速定位到自己需要的内容。

d.“辨别真伪信息”:读新闻报道或科普文章不能确定真实性，仅靠权威信息源和常识未必够用（可以提疫情期间

和社交媒体）。

参考范文：

DearLucy,

MynameisWangJia,asenior3studentattheschool.I'mdeeplyinterestedinthecoursein

informationliteracythatyou'replanningtolaunch.SoI'mwritingthisemailtoinformyouofmychoiceofthe

twosectionsI'dliketolearnabout,whicharc“smartinternetsearching,'and"informationcredibility

evaluation*5.

Tobeginwith,I'vebasedmydecisionontheexpectationthatthecombinationofthetwosectionscanlead

metomydesiredresults.Its,inmyview,self-evidentthatsearchingfortheinformationIneedandensuringthe

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authenticityofitscontentarcinterconnected.

Inaddition,intoday'sdigitalizedworldandwiththeexpansionofsocialmedia,informationiseverywhere

andmisinformationisprevalent.Thechallengethenistoseparatefactfromfalsehood*efficientlyandeffectively.

TakepracticalpreventivemeasuresinthecaseofCOVID-19asanexample------thegeneralpubliccanbeeasily

overwhelmedbyahostofseeminglyidenticalandpotentiallyfalsenewsreports.

Consequently,ifproperlyinstructedinthebasicskillsofusinginformationtechnology,includinghowto

pinpointwhatI,mlookingforandtoverilythatwhatI'vefoundisvalid,Imaybebetterpreparednexttime

wheninurgentneedofaccurateinformation.

Inanutshell,inthehopeofimprovingmyinformationliteracylevel,Iexpecttolearnmorefromyour

courseabouttheinformationworldandthewaysinwhichtosafelynavigatethroughitwithease.

Thankyouforyourtimeandhaveagreatday.Lookingforwardtohearingfromyou.

Bestregards.

WareJia

2020年1月春考

Directions:WriteanEnglishcompositionin120-150wordsaccordingtotheinstructionsgivenbelowinChinese

你是明启中学李华，看到电视台行报道说很多超市有大量临近保质期的食物，针对这些食物如何处理

想征集观众意见，你很有感触遂写信给电台，表达想法，信件内容包含：

1）对如何处理这些临近保质期的食品提出建议；

2）提出这些建议的理由。

【参考范文】

Towhomitmayconcern.

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Havingwatchedyourrecentreportaboutahugestockoffoodapproachingexpirydate,Vdliketooffersome

suggestionstohelp.

TheChineseNewYearisaroundthecorner.Meanwhile,therearehousingandrailwayconstructionsites

runningroundtheclock,wherehundredsofmigrantworkerssacrificetheirpreciousfamilyreuniontomeetthe

deadline.IsuggestlaunchingaNewYearPurchasingProgramforthesebuildersofShanghai.Allowingthema

specialdiscountonthefoodinthesesupermarkets.

Shanghaicouldn'thavebeensuchacommercialhubandfinancialcenterbulforthesweatthesemigrant

workersshed.Thustheydeservesomefavorabletreatmenlforiheirprimeyearsdevotedtothecity.Meanwhile,

milk,bread,coffeeandsnacksareconsumedbymany,butareconsideredd?arbythosewhosaveeverypennyfor

theirfarawayfamilies.Thisprogramservesasatokenofourlocals*gratitude,respectstheirneedsandmainkiins

thedignityofthem,fortheycandecidetheamountandsortoffoodtobuybythemselves.Lastbutnotleast,it

servestheneedofsupennarketmanagersaswell.Bynomeanscaniheyfindamoremeaningfulandaffordable

wayloaddressthisproblem.

Isincerelyhopemyntivirecanhelpboththe《upermarketsandthepeopleinneedThnnkyoufortakingit

intoaccount.

Yoursfaithfully,

LiHua

模块五2024届上海名校模考题特训。|

1.（2022秋•上海金山•高三上海市金山中学校考）Directions:WriteanEnglishcompositionin120—150words

acccrdingtotheinstructionsgivenbelowinChinese.

你是明启中学高三学生.李华，最近在某杂志上看到一篇文章，文章里说到，现在的年轻人，包括高中生，

只想过安逸的生活，他们习惯了索取而不是给与，也不会考虑到别人的需求和感受，请你给杂志社写一封

邮件，说说你是否彼成文章作者的观点。你的文章需包括：

I.你是否赞成作者的观点；

2.叁例说明你的理由。

【答案】Deareditor.

I'mwritingtotellyouthatIquiteagreewiththewriterofthearticle.Firstly,Ithinkitisacommon

phenomenoninoursocietynowadays.Withtheimprovementofpeople'slivingconditions,youngpeopleare

gettingmoreandmorefromtheirparents,whichmakesthemjustwanttohaveacomfortablelife.Asaresult,

mostyoungpeopleareusedtotakingra.herthangiving.Inaddition,mostoftheyounggenerationaretheonly

childintheirfamilies,sotheygetmuchmorecareandlovefromtheirparentsthanfamilieswithseveralchildren.

Sotheyareoftenthepersonswhoarecaredforbyothers,notthepersonswhocareaboutothers.Takemyselfas

anexample,Iamtheonlychildinmyfamily.Myparentstakegoodcareofmeandletmeliveacarefreelife.I

don'tusuallyhavetocareaboutothermembersofmyfamilyiniliatively.Forthisreason,mostofIheyoung

generationseldomconsidertheneedsandfeelingsofothers.

ThesearethereasonswhyIagreewiththeauthorofthearticle.

Yours,

Li

hiia

【导语】本篇书而表达属于应用文。要求考生给杂志社写一封邮件，就该杂志上的一篇文章发表一下自己

的观点，并陈述理由。

【详解】1.词汇积累

首先：Firstly—>Firstofall

习惯：beusedto—>bcaccustomedto

舒适的：comfortable—*easy

此外：Inaddition—Whal'smore

2.句式拓展

普通句变强调句

原句：Forthisreason,mostoftheyounggenerationseldomconsidertheneedsandfeelingsofothers.

拓展句：Itisfor（hisreasonthatmostoftheyounggenerationseldomconsider（heneedsandfeelingsofothers.

【点睛】[高分句型1]I'mwritingtotellyouthatIquiteagreewiththewriterofthearticle,（isfflfthat引导

的宾语从句）

[高分句型2]Withtheimprovementofpeople'slivingconditions,youngpeoplearcgettingmoreandmorefrom

（heirparents,whichmakes（hemjustwanttohaveacomfortablelife.（运用了which弓|导的非限定性定语从句）

2.（2022秋•上海•高三上海市敬业中学校考）Directions:WriteanEnglishcompositionin120-150words

acccrdingtotheinstructionsgivenbelowinChinese.

假设你是明启中学高三学生李明，最近收到好友王磊的邮件。在邮件中，王磊表示自己因为拖延症

(procrastination)而耽误了重要事情，想请你提一些建议，如何克服拖延症。回复一封邮件，内容须包括:

I)你的建议

2)你的理由

【答案】DearWangLei,

Iamglad(ohearfromyou.Iknowyouarenotsatisfiedwithyourprocrastination.Procrastinationhas

negativeeffectsonourlife,whichbothersmanypeople.NowIamwritingtogiveyousomesuggestionstogetrid

ofit

Firstly,wecanwritedownourtasksinavisibleplacewilhiheirduedates.Additionally,wecantellour

familyorfriendsabout(nirgoalbecausetheywillmotivateusalongtheway.12sthutnotleast,rewardourselves

forajobwelldone.

Hopefully,mysuggestionswillbeofhelptoyou.

Yours,

LiMing

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