Unit1TeenageLifeReadingforWriting建议信课件高中英语人教版

ReadingforWriting建议信课程目标：1、帮助学生掌握建议信的常见结构和语言特征；2、通过读写结合，学习写一封语意连贯、结构清晰的建议信学习目标：1、通过task1，通过阅读和回答相关问题，了解建议信写作主体结构2、通过task2，掌握具体写作重点词汇、短语和句式3、通过task3，小组讨论为相关问题提出建议4、通过task4，形成初稿并润色文章Lead-In

Whatisthepurposeofanadviceletter?WhatkindofaspectsshouldbeincludedinsuchkindofletterSusanLuo,anadviserforteenagers,hasreceivedaletteraskingforsomeadvice.Readherreplyandanswerthefollowingquestions:Task11.WhatisWorriedFriend’sproblem?2.DoyouthinkMs.Luo’sadviceisuseful?Whyorwhynot?3.Whatotherkindsofadvicewouldyougive?Theproblemishis/herfriendChenLeiplayscomputergamestoooftenandspendstoomuchtimeonline.IthinkMs.Luo’sadviceisusefulbecauseit’salwaysgoodtotalktoafriendabouthisorherproblemsandofferadvice.Also,totryanewhobbymayhelphis/herfriendtospendlesstimeonline.Ithinkhecanspendsometimeplayingsportsoutdoorswithfriends.Hecanalsolearnsomethingaboutprogramminginsteadofjustplayinggames.OrIwillencouragehimtotrynewhobbies.A.Iknowwhattheproblemis.B.Iunderstandhowyoufeel.C.Thisismyadviceandreason(s).D.Ithinkmyadvicewillhelp.Youwrotethatyouareveryworiedaboutyourfiend,ChenLei.Iunderstandquitewellthatyouareanxiousandfeelterrild.Youthinkthatyoufriendplayscomputergamestoooftenandspendstoomuchtimeonline.Irecommendthatyoutalktoyoufriendabouthisbehaviour.Itisnotunusualforteenagersofyourgenerationtobeattractedtocomputergamesandtheonlineworld.Butspendingtoomuchtimeonlineisunhealthyandmakesitverydifficulttofocusonothertingsinlife.SomestudentsevenbecomeaddictedtotheInternetandcannotconcentrateonschoolandfamilylife.Ithinkyoushouldencourageyoufiendtotynewhobies.Whynotdiscusstheproblemtogether?Iamsurehewilllistentoyou,sinceyouarehisgoodfriend.10September2018DearWorriedFriend,TheoutlineofthepassageParagraph1：the____________oftheletterParagraph2：the____________thatyougiveParagraph3：thewriter’s____________purposesuggestionshope建议信基本结构Preparationforwriting:

Listthewords,phrasesandsentencesTask2①____________vt.建议

②____________adj.不健康的③____________vt.鼓励

④____________adj.有用的⑤____________vt.忠告，建议

⑥________________闲暇⑦____________盼望，期望

⑧________________对……

担心⑨____________喜爱

⑩____________对……上瘾⑪____________集中精力于

⑫___________________对……有益处

⑬____________交朋友

⑭____________收到……的来信⑮___________________玩得愉快

recommendencourageadvicelookforwardtobeattractedtoconcentrateonmakefriendsenjoyoneself/havefununhealthyusefulinone’ssparetimebeworriedaboutbeaddictedtobegoodfor/dogoodtohearfromWordsandphrasesWordsandphrases①_____________________________n.建议②_____________________________n.情况③_____________________________交朋友④_____________________________做……有困难⑤_____________________________接受某人的建议⑥_____________________________和……同甘共苦⑦_____________________________需要⑧_____________________________全心全意

tip/advice/suggestionsituationmakefriendshavetrouble/difficultyindoing...takeone’sadvicesharehappinessandsorrowwith...callforputone’sheartintoSentences①知道你在交友方面有麻烦，我很抱歉。(havetroublein...)________________________________________________________________________②如果你采纳我的建议，改变这种情况是很容易的。(be＋adj.＋todo)________________________________________________________________________③要交朋友为什么不先做一个朋友呢？(whynot)________________________________________________________________________④你和朋友同甘共苦难道不是一个好主意吗？(Wouldn’titbeagoodidea...？)________________________________________________________________________⑤正如一句谚语说的，患难之中的朋友才是真正的朋友。(asasayinggoes)________________________________________________________________________Iamsorrytoknowthatyouarehavingtroubleinmakingfriends.Thesituationiseasytochangeifyoutakemyadvice.Whynotbeafriendfirst，ifyouwanttomakefriends?Wouldn’titbeagoodideaifyousharehappinessandsorrowwithyourfriend?Justasasayinggoes,afriendinneedisafriendindeed.Workingroups:Chooseoneofyourclassmatesanddiscusshis/herproblem.Listpossiblesuggestionsandreasons.Task3SituationSuggestionReasonExpressionusedMyparentswon'tlistenwhenItellthemthings.Ialwaysfeellonelyafterschoolbecausemparentsworkinanothercity.ThereisagirlIlikeinmyclass,butI'mtooshytotalktoher.添加过渡词和衔接词，突出文章的层次感和逻辑性一、表逻辑上的先后顺序①

首先first，firstly，inthefirstplace，tobeginwith②其次secondly，inthesecondplace③最后，最重要的是atlast，finally，last，lastly，mostimportantly二、表递进关系①

也;而且;还also，too，besides②

而且and③

此外inadditionto，apartfrom④此外furthermore，what’smore⑤

不仅……而且……notonly…butalso…Task4DraftyourletteraccordingtotheoutlinebelowandexchangedrafswithyourpartnerandpolishitDear_______,I’mgladtoreceiveyourletteraskingformyadviceonhowto_________________(引出对方需要建议的主题).Hereareafewsuggestion(引出作者的建议).First,Itisimportantto______________.Then,italsohelpsto___________.Besides,itshouldbeagoodideato__________.Youcanalso___________.(可以根据要求用不同的句式提出建议，如下)Ihopeyouwillfindtheseproposalsuseful,andIwouldbereadytodiscussthismatterwithyoutofurtherdetails.Allthebest,(表达愿望).Yours,/Sincerely,LiHuaPost-writing—polishingthepassageExchangeyourletterwithyourpartner，andpayattentiontothefollowingpoints.□1.Areallthepartsofaletterincludedandorganisedingoodorder?□2.Doesthewritergivereasonsfortheadvice?□3.Doesthewriteruseproperexpressionstogivesuggestions?□4.Doesthewriterusecommasandstopscorrectly?□5.Isthehandwritingeasytoread?亮点表达补充1.建议信开头常用句式①Iknowyouarenowhavingtroublecommunicatingwithothers，andyoumayoftenfeellonely.我知道你现在在与人交流方面有些麻烦，你也可能经常感到孤独。②I’mgladtoreceiveyourletteraskingformyadviceon...很高兴收到你就……征求建议的来信。③Herearesometips/afewsuggestionstohelpyou.这里有帮助你的一些建议。

2.表达建议常用句式①First(ly)，whynotjoinaclub?Ifyoudothis，youcanmakefriends.首先，为什么不参加一个俱乐部？如果你这样做的话，就会交到朋友。②Second(ly)，youshould/cantrytotalk