公开课高中英语写作

公开课高中英语写作课件Whatmakesagoodessay?TheessayAgoodessayisusuallymadeupofatopicparagraph,somesupportingparagraphsandaconcludingparagraph.TopicparagraphSupportingParagraph1SupportingParagraph2SupportingParagraph3ConcludingparagraphTomanystudents,schoollifeisboringandtiring.However,Ifindmyschoollifemeaningfulandcolourful.generalstatementtopicstatementTopicparagraph(Introductionparagraph)GeneralstatementTopicstatement

SupportingParagraphs(Body)Paragraphs

TSSSSSSSSSFirstly,...Secondly,...Moreover,...Finally,...However,...Inaddition,…Furthermore,...ConclusionPersonally,…inconclusion,inbrief,Fromwhathasbeendiscussedabove,wemaydrawtheconclusionthat...

Insummary,itiswiser...

1．可以促进对体育的重视；though,although,evenif,eventhough,e.Inaddition.Itwasnotuntilhehadreadthenewsinthenewspaperthatheknewwhathadhappened.1．可以促进对体育的重视；Theythink.Secondly,.Areallthedetailsstated?SomepeoplethinkthatAisrightbecause.Let’simproveit:justlikeagarden.ridingonabus.Asaresulttheplanwasafailure.Itwasnotuntilhehadreadthenewsinthenewspaperthatheknewwhathadhappened.TheparagraphWhatmakesagoodparagraph?Agoodparagraphisonethatconsistsofatopicsentenceandsupportingsentences.Therearedifferentkindsofbee.Someliveinlargegroupslikethehoneybee,andmaketheirnestsintreesorholesintherocks.Otherspeciesmaketheirnestsinholesintheground.Therearealsovarietiesthatdonotliveingroupsatall…topicsentenceWhereveryougoinourschool,youseegreenlawnsandtreesandbeautifulflowers.Dottedamongthesetreesandflowersaremanybuildingsofdifferentstyles.Astreamrunsthroughourschoolandyoualwaysseeeverythingreflectedinthewater.Topicsentence:________________justlikeagarden.

Ourschoolisjustlikeagarden.

Ourschoolisjustlikeagarden.

OurschoolisAgoodparagraphisonethatcontainsproperlinkingwords.IbelieveEnglishismoreimportantthanotherforeignlanguagesformanyreasons.Firstofall,Englishisspokenbyalargenumberofpeople,andthesepeoplearethemostwidelyspreadacrosstheworldinagreatmanycountries.Secondly,Englishisthemostwidelyusedlanguageontheinternet.Ithasbecomeanon-linelanguage.Thirdly,theOlympicGameswillbeheldinourcountryandEnglishwillbeveryuseful.Lastly,…正确使用有关连接词

时间先后：first,then,later,intheend,eventually,sincethen,afterawhile转折关系：but,however,onthecontrary,nevertheless因果关系：because,since,as,thanksto,owingto,asaresultof,forthereasonthat让步关系：though,although,evenif,eventhough,inspiteofthefactthat递进关系：what’smore,inaddition,furthermoreontheonehand…ontheotherhand,条件关系：if,unless,aslongas,onconditionthat…表列举：forexample/instance,take…forexample,that’stosay,inotherwords,asfollows表总结：inshort,inbrief,inconclusion,inaword,onthewhole,ashasbeenstatedAgoodparagraphisonewithvariedsentencepatterns.丰富的句式：(常用到的句型结构）利用不同的句型来表达同一个意思，能增加文章的文采。e.g.What

akindboyheis!

How

disappointedhewas!

感叹句强调句e.g.It

wasthisyoungboythat

helpedtheoldgranny.Idohopeyoucancomeifpossible.e.g.Onlyinthiswaycanyou

solvethisproblem.There

comesthepolicecar.

Hardly

hadtheygottothestation

when

theymettheyoungman.e.g.Theyreadwhilewalkingorridingonabus.Cometomeifnecessary.e.g.Isawayoungladywalkingslowlyinthestreet

withahandbaginherhand.倒装句省略句with短语e.g.Inmyopinion,cybercafesshouldbeaplacewherewecan

findmuchusefulinformation.

Let’scometothemainteaching

building,atthebackofwhichstands

theschoollibrary.定语从句e.g.That’swhat

Ishoulddo.Weshoulddoafavourtowhoever

needshelpatpresent.各种名词性从句

e.g.Timepassedquicklybeforeweknewit.

Themoment

wereachedthefarm,wegotdowntoharvesting.

Solongas

weworkharderatourlessons,

we’llcatchupsoonerorlater.各种状语从句1.Tohissurprise,thelittlegirlknowssomanythings.（使用名词性从句）2.ThoughI’mweak,I’llmaketheeffort.(使用倒装句)3.Hedidnotknowwhathadhappeneduntilhehadreadthenewsinthenewspaper.(使用强调句型)4.Ipassedthephysicsexambecauseofyourhelp.(用虚拟语气）What

surpriseshimisthat

thelittlegirlknowssomanythings.Practice怎样使用较丰富的句式和高级词汇WeakasIam,I’llmaketheeffort.

Itwasnotuntilhehadreadthenewsinthenewspaperthatheknewwhathadhappened.

Icouldn’thavepassedthephysicsexambutforyourhelp.

5.Shewalkedoutofthelabandmanystudentsfollowedher.(使用过去分词)6.Theysangandlaughedastheywentbacktoschool.(使用V-ing形式)7.Iwon’tbelievewhathesays.（nomatterwhat状语从句）

8.Ifyoustudyhard,youwillmakerapidprogress.

（祈使句+and…）Followedbymanystudents,shewalkedoutofthelab.Singingandlaughing,theywentbacktoschool.Nomatterwhathesays,Iwon’tbelieve.

Studyhardandyou’llmakerapidprogress.9．HehadnosoonercomebackfromBeijingthanhewassentabroad.(使用倒装句)10.Weallthinkheisagreatman.(thinkhighlyof)11.Asaresulttheplanwasafailure.(turnout)12.Whenhespoke,hefeltmoreandmoreexcited.(themore…themore)Nosoonerhadhecome

backfromBeijing

than

hewassentabroad.Weallthinkhighlyofhim

.Theplanturnedouttobeafailure.Themorehespoke,themoreexcitedhefelt.studentsliveaveryexpensivelife…1．可以促进对体育的重视；SomepeoplethinkthatAisrightbecause.IdohopeyoucancomeOurschoolisTheybelievethatlearningisthemostimportanttaskforstudentsandtheirfuturedependsontheirgradesintheirsubjects.Butmanymorepeopledon’tagreewiththem.justlikeagarden.最近，国家教育部要求中小学生参加冬季长跑活动：建议小学生每天跑1000米，初中生1500米，高中生2000米。Theybelievethatlearningisthemostimportanttaskforstudentsandtheirfuturedependsontheirgradesintheirsubjects.gotdowntoharvesting.topicsentenceforexample/instance,take…forexample,（nomatterwhat状语从句）Doesthewriteruseanylinkingwords?Summary:Agoodessayisusuallymadeupofatopicparagraph,somesupportingparagraphsandaconcludingparagraph.Agoodparagraph

isonethatconsistsofatopicsentenceandsupportingsentences.Agoodparagraph

isonethatcontainsproperlinkingwords.Agoodparagraph

isonewithadvancedvocabularyandvariedsentencepatterns.ASSESSMENTstructureIstheessaydividedintoparts?Doeseachparthaveatopicsentence?contentAreallthedetailsstated?Iseverythingtothepoint(切题)?

LanguageDoesthewriteruseanylinkingwords?Arethereanymistakes?Isthereanyadvancedvocabulary（高级词汇）?Arethereanygoodsentencepatterns（句式）?Let’simproveit:Insummary,itiswiser.（祈使句+and…）isadvisableforustodonatesomepocketmoneytotheInaddition.Inthemeantime,.(themore…themore)Itwasnotuntilhehadreadthenewsinthenewspaperthatheknewwhathadhappened.What’smore.1．可以促进对体育的重视；InmyopinionBisbetterthanA.Inaddition,…利用不同的句型来表达同一个意思，Asaresulttheplanwasafailure.Ithasbecomeanon-linelanguage.Goodafternoon,everyone!

Thetopicofmyspeechtodayis“MyAttitudetoPursuitofFashioninSchool”.

Nowinourschoolthereisahotpursuitoffashion.Somestudentsliveaveryexpensivelife…_______._______,theyhopetolooksmartandspecial._______,theywanttowinothers’admirationandrespect.Inaddition,itmakesthemfeelcool._______,westudentsshouldholdtherightsenseofvalues.Weshouldpracticethriftinourdailylife._____,itisadvisableforustodonatesomepocketmoneytotheHopeProjectsothatthosepoorchildreninruralareascanreturntoschool.______,itistheinnerbeautyratherthanourappearancethatmakesusrespectable.Thankyouforlistening!thereasonswhytheydosoareasfollowsB.firstlyC.lastbutnot

leastD.what’smore

E.asfarasIamconcernedF.SecondlyABCDEF苏州市届高三教学调研测试

最近，国家教育部要求中小学生参加冬季长跑活动：建议小学生每天跑1000米，初中生1500米，高中生2000米。对此，有些人表示支持，有些人表示反对。请你根据以下材料，写一篇以“Shouldwegivemoreattentiontostudents’healthorgrades?”为题的短文，谈谈你的看法。支持方的理由反对方的理由你的看法及理由1．可以促进对体育的重视；2．可以增强学生的体魄；3．更有利于提高学习效率。

1．学生以学习为主，考试成绩决定个人前途；2．过高的要求学生难以达到；3．长跑可能引起感冒或伤害。(考生自行发挥2—3点)注意：1．词数150左右。短文的开头已为你写好，不计入总词数；

2．对所给要点，逐一陈述，设当发挥，不要简单翻译。

1.Agoodbeginningmakesagoodending.2.Yourcompositionshouldbedividedintoparagraphs.3.You’dbetterusesomelinkingwords.4.Handwritingisofgreatimportance.Suggestions:第一段：1.SomepeopleagreetoNO.One,becausetheyusuallythinkthat...Inthemeantime,...Inaddition...2.

SomepeoplethinkthatAisrightbecause...3.

Somepeoplesuggest/saythat...Atthesametimetheypointoutthefactthat...What’smore...4.

SomepeoplepreferNO.One.IntheiropinionA...Inaddition...Tomanystudents,schoollifeisboringandtiring.请你根据以下材料，写一篇以“Shouldwegivemoreattentiontostudents’healthorgrades?”为题的短文，谈谈你的看法。Topicsentence:________________Weshouldpracticethriftinourdailylife.Istheessaydividedintoparts?Istheessaydividedintoparts?Itisclearthat.Therecomesthepolicecar.Personally,…Asaresulttheplanwasafailure.2．过高的要求学生难以达到；Followedbymanystudents,shewalkedoutofthelab.Insummary,itiswiser.Themorehespoke,themoreexcitedhefelt.短文的开头已为你写好，不计入总词数；第二段：1.

Ontheotherhand,somepeopleholdthatBisright.Theythink...2.Butmanymorepeopledon’tagreewiththem.TheypreferB.Theysaythat...Thereasonisthat...3.Onthecontrary,somepeopleholdthat...4.SomepeoplethinkthatBisbetter.Itisclearthat...What’smore,...Also...

在第一段和第二段中一定要用原因或列举等方式展开段落。第三段：提出自己的见解并且加以论证1.InmyopinionBisbetterthanA.Thereisnodoubtthat...2.IsupportA.Thereasongoesasfollows...3.AsfarasIamconcerned,Iagreetothelatter.First...Second...Finally...4.Itislikelythatpeoplewillgoonarguingoverthesequestions.Ithinkthateverythinghasbothitspositiveandnegativesides.Weshouldkeepanopenmind.5.Peoplewillcontinuetoargueoverthequestions,Ithinkwe’dbetterkeepanopenmindbecauseeverythinghastwosides.Itallrelieson...

6.Ofthesetwowaysof...Iprefer...Firstofall,...Second,...Shouldwegivemoreattentiontostudents’healthorgrades?

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