Unit 4 《Reading for Writing 写作实践 》课件2023-2024学年高一上学期英语人教版（2019）必修第一册

ReadingforWritingUnit4

NaturaldisastersTeachingObjectives1.Masterthestructureandthelanguagesofasummary.2.Masterthemethodofwritingasummary.3.Practisewritingasummary.Activity1

细节把握1.Wherecanthispassagemostprobablybeseen?A.Amonthlymagazine.B.Adailynewspaper.C.Atravelbrochure.D.Agovernmentwebsite.√2.Whendidthetsunamihappen?A.At7∶00am,27December2004.B.At7∶00pm,27December2004.C.At7∶00am,26December2004.D.At7∶00pm,26December2004.√3.Whatcausedthetsunami?A.Adrought.B.Aflood.C.Avolcaniceruption.D.Anearthquake.√4.In

，thenumberofpeoplewhowerekilledinthetsunamiwasthelargest.A.Indonesia B.SriLankaC.India D.Thailand√5.Whywoulditbedifficulttodeliverfoodandsuppliestothetsunami-hitcountries?A.Therewerenoenoughtrucks.B.Itwasstillrainingheavily.C.Thepeopleintheseareaswerenotwillingtoacceptthesefoodandsupplies.D.Theroadstotheseareaswereblocked.√Activity2

文章架构1.Readthenewsreportandfindoutthekeypointsofit.(①time②place③events④cause⑤effect⑥followingevents)答案

①At7∶00am,26December2004②Asia—Indonesia，Malaysia，SriLanka，IndiaandThailand③AtsunamihitAsia.④Anunderseaearthquake⑤Morethan6,500deaths—1,870；2,498；1,900；254；54

⑥Thousandsofpeoplearemissing；thenumberofdeathsisgrowing./Rescueworkishard.2.Readthereportagainandwritedownthemainideaofeachparagraph.答案

Para.1ThetsunamicausedbyanearthquakeanditsdamagetoAsia.Para.2Detailedinformationofthedamageindifferentcountries.Para.3Followingeventsandtherescuework.3.ReadthesummaryofthenewsreportonP55andfindoutwhatiscutoutinthesummary.答案

(1)detailedinformation(2)examples4.Accordingtothenewsreportanditssummary，wecanwriteasummaryofanewsreportlikethis.(写作模板)On(时间)...，(事件)...happenedin(地点)...Itcaused(后果)...And...isexpectedtohappen(后续)...Activity3

增分靓句Readthenewsreportandfindoutthestructuresthattheauthorusestodescribethetime.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________inthepast40years，around7∶am，Sunday，overthenextfewdays概要本单元的写作任务是为新闻报道(记叙文)写概要。概要写作是一种要求阅读和写作并重的英语高考题型，有准确性、完整性、概括性、客观性和个体性等特点。概要写作提供一篇350词以内的短文，要求考生在对原文阅读后，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。概要既要用词准确、结构合理、语意连贯、不得抄袭原文，又要能完全概括出文章的中心大意。注意事项1.词数要限制在60词左右，上下限不得超出10个单词。2.要根据文章的体裁特点进行概要写作。3.人称和时态要与所给文章中的人称和时态保持一致，但必要时也可以转变成为第三人称。4.写作时尽可能地使用复合句，必要时可转换词性，不得完全照抄照搬原文。5.进行概要写作时，一定不要加入自己的观点并对原文加以评论；一定不要引入与原文内容无关的信息。写作步骤1.确定体裁，明确主题及结构体裁结构记叙文记叙文：人物、时间、地点、事件(起因—发展—结果)夹叙夹议文：六要素＋寓意/启示说明文事物的性质功能类：对象＋性质功能问题/现象＋解决方法类：

现象＋原因＋结果议论文论点＋论据＋结论2.确定主题句，找关键信息画出每一段的主题句，抓住关键信息，忽略次要信息。3.改写关键信息，得出要点使用意义相同或相近的单词、短语或句式，或使用不同的句子结构表达同样的意思，如改变语态，肯定变否定等。4.添加连接词，使行文连贯要牢记各段落要点之间的逻辑关系和自然衔接，用恰当的关联词连贯全文。

常用的关联词有：however，besides，inaddition，therefore，instead等。常用表达1.Thisarticle/passagemainlytellsastoryabout...这篇文章主要讲述关于……的故事。2.Thispassagemainlydealswith/discusses/explores...这篇文章主要处理/讨论/探索……3.Thisarticlefocusesonthetopicof...这篇文章关注……的话题。4.Thisessaypresentsknowledgethat...这篇短文呈现……的知识。5.Inthispassage(about...)，theauthor...在这篇(关于……)的文章里，作者……6.Theauthorbegantheessay/passagebytelling/presenting...作者通过讲述/呈现……开始这篇短文/文章。7.First/Firstly/Inthebeginning/Inthefirstpart，theauthorargues/explains/mentions/states/pointsout(that)...首先，作者论证/解释/提及/陈述/指出……8.Secondly/Next/Then/Inthenextpart/Inthemainpart，theauthorgoesonwith...第二/接下来/然后/在下一部分/在主要部分，作者继续……9.Finally，theauthorstressesthat...最后，作者强调……典例展示阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。Plant-basedDietWhatisaplant-baseddiet？Isitjustafashionablenewtermfora“vegan(严格素食主义者)”？Whilethereisnosetdefinition，aplant-basedwayofeatingfocusesonconsumingplant-sourcedwholefoods(全天然食物)thatareleastprocessedintheiroriginalform，forexample,wholegrains，fruits，vegetables，nutsandseeds.Thesearefullofvitamins，minerals，andprovideanabundanceofnutrientsforyourbody.Followingaplant-basedlifestyledoesn’tnecessarilymeanfullyavoidinganimalproductslikeavegan.Forplant-basedeaters，animalproteinscanhappilyfitinwiththelifestyle，yettheyplaymoreofasupportingrole.Overall，“plant-based”ismoreofabroadandflexiblewayofthinkingaboutnutritionratherthanarigiddiet.Withaplant-baseddiet，thefocusisonsimple，nutritiouswholefoods.Whypeoplestartfollowingaplant-baseddiet？Oneofthemainreasonsisthehealthbenefits.Now，moresothanever，researchisshowinghoweatingmoreplantsandlessmeatcanpositivelyaffecthealth.Particularlyaplant-basedlifestylehasbeenlinkedtohearthealth.Inastudyofmorethan10,000adultspublishedintheJournal

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Association，itwasshownthatthosewhofollowedamoreplant-baseddiethada16percentlowerriskofhavingcardiovascular(心血管的)diseaseanda32percentlowerriskofdyingofcardiovasculardisease.Aplant-basedlifestylecanalsohelptopromoteweightlossandhelptomaintainyourgoalweight.Weightlosscommonlyoccursbecausethedietconsistsoffoodsthatarefulloffiberandhaveahigh-watercontent，whicheasilymakeyoufeelfullup.Anothermajorreasontojumpattheplant-basedeatingtrainistheexternalbenefits.Plant-basedfoodsareloadedwithvitamins，whichhelpbrightenyourskin.Oneoftheplant-basedall-starvitaminsisvitaminC，whichisapowerfulantioxidant.AlargenumberoffruitsandvegetablescontainvitaminC.Theyassistinsmoothinglines，andreducingwrinkles.范文赏读Aplant-baseddietcentersonnutritiouswholefoodscomingfromplantsources，withanimalproteinsservingascomplements.(要点1)Researchhasshownaplant-basedlifestyleisconducivetokeepinghealthy，especiallyreducingtheriskofcardiovasculardisease.(要点2)Besides，abundantfiberandwaterintheplant-baseddietgeneratethefeelingofbeingfull，consequentlycontributingtolosingweight.(要点3)Moreover，plant-basedeatersmayhavebrightandsmoothskinthankstotherichvitaminsfromthediet.(要点4)阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。Mostofthesurvivorshadtostayintheopenareaovernightaftera7.1-magnitudeearthquaketoppled(使倒塌)houses，cutoffpowerandfirst-aidmaterialssupplyinnorthwestChina’sQinghaiProvinceonWednesdaywhilerescuersfaceddifficultiesinsearchingfortheburied.Rescuershavesetupmorethan40tentsforsurvivorsintheGyeguTown，neartheepicenter(震中)intheTibetanAutonomousPrefectureofYushuinsouthernQinghai.Buttheeffortseemsfarlessthanenoughfortheareainhabitedbysome100,000people.Manypeoplesoughttemporarysheltersinbuildingsthatremainedunaffectedbythetremor(轻微地震).IntheyardofYushu’sSportsCommittee，nearly1,000peopleweresittingorlyingonthegroundinsheer(完全的，十足的)darkness.Somewrappedthemselvesupwithquiltstakenoutfromthedebris(碎片，残骸).Somebroughttheirowntentsandothersturnedonthelightsofmotorcycles.“I’mhungryandthirsty.We’vebeenwaitingforhelpsincethemorning，”saidZhaxiToinzhub.Thewomansaidherthreechildrenwerestillburiedintherubble(碎石，瓦砾).TheNationalMeteorologicalStationforecastWednesdaythattemperaturesmayhitminus3degreesCelsiusatnightand15degreesCelsiusinthedaytimeinthecomingdays.Thetownwouldseestrongwindsandsunnyweatherinthecomingdays，providingfavorableconditionsforrescueoperations.ThetownislocatedinaremoteareainQinghaiandthequakeandensuing(随后的)landslideshavedamagedroads，causinggreatdifficultiesforrescuersand，especially，machinesfromoutsidetoentertheregion.“Rescuershadtodigwithbarehandsorironsticks，lookingforwardtothearrivalofdiggingmachines，”saidarescuersurnamedWang，whowasworkingatacollapsedhostel.“Thesearchingoperationbecameevenharderatnightwithoutlightingfacilities，”hesaid.Inaddition，rescuersmayeasilygetexhaustedworkingataplacewithanaltitude(海拔)ofabove4,000metres.ThousandsofrescuersandmedicalstaffarerushingtoYushufrommanyregionsofChina，bringingmachines，disaster-reliefmaterialsandmedicinestothequake-hittown.Governments，organizations，enterprisesandindividualsareofferingdonationsofmoneyandmaterialstotheregion.第一步审题谋篇第二步遣词造句核心词汇(含本单元词汇)信息归纳快速阅读短文，找出每一部分的核心词汇，并连词成句Part11.核心词汇a7.1-magnitudeearthquake；toppled；cutoff；QinghaiProvince；Yushu；Wednesday2.连词成句①A7.1-magnitudeearthquakehitYushu，QinghaionWednesday.Ittoppledhousesandcutoffsupplies.Part23.核心词汇

100,000people，shelters，hungryandthirsty，darkness，wind，damagedroads，digwithbarehands，thesearchingoperationbecameevenharder，getexhausted4.连词成句

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.About100,000peoplearesufferinghungerandcoldfromit，andthedamagedroads，lackofmachinesandthehighaltitudemakeithardertorescuethesurvivorsPart35.核心词汇governments，organizations，enterprisesandindividuals，donations，money，materials6.连词成句③_________________________________________

.Governments，organizations，enterprisesandindividualsaredonatingmoneyandmaterialstothearea第三步句式升级把第①句变成含有定语从句的句子。____________________________________________________________________________