北师大版高三英语一轮复习类型二第2讲续写话题亲情友情课件

第三部分写作专题突破类型二读后续写第2讲续写热门话题亲情友情阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。(2021·新高考Ⅰ卷)AMOTHER'SDAYSURPRISEThetwinswerefilledwithexcitementastheythoughtofthesurprisetheywereplanningforMother'sDay．HowpleasedandproudMotherwouldbewhentheybroughtherbreakfastinbed．TheyplannedtomakeFrenchtoastandchickenporridge．Theyhadwatchedtheirmotherinthekitchen．Therewasnothingtoit．JennaandJeffknewexactlywhattodo．Thebigdaycameatlast．Thealarmrangat6a．m．Thepairwentdownthestairsquietlytothekitchen．Theydecidedtoboiltheporridgefirst．TheyputsomericeintoapotofwaterandleftittoboilwhiletheymadetheFrenchtoast．Jeffbroketwoeggsintoaplateandaddedinsomemilk．Jennafoundthebreadandputtwoslicesintotheeggmixture．Next，Jeffturnedonthesecondstoveburnertoheatupthefryingpan．EverythingwasgoingsmoothlyuntilJeffstartedfryingthebread．Thepanwastoohotandthebreadturnedblackwithinseconds．Jennathrewtheburntpieceintothesinkandputintheothersliceofbread．Thistime，sheturneddownthefiresoitcookednicely．ThenJeffnoticedsteamshootingoutofthepotandthelidstartingtoshake．Thenextminute，theporridgeboiledoverandputoutthefire．Jennapanicked．Thankfully，Jeffstayedcalmandturnedoffthegasquickly．Butthestovewasamessnow．JennatoldJefftocleanitupsotheycouldcontinuetocooktherestoftheporridge．ButJeff'shandtouchedthehotburnerandhegaveacryofpain．Jennamadehimputhishandincoldwater．Thenshecaughtthesmellofburning．Ohdear!Thepieceofbreadinthepanhadturnedblackaswell．注意：1．续写词数应为150左右；2．请按如下格式作答。Asthetwinslookedaroundthemindisappointment，theirfatherappeared．___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Thetwinscarriedthebreakfastupstairsandwoketheirmotherup．______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________写作指导：Ⅰ．梳理原文细节，理清篇章结构。Ⅱ．依据首句提示，构思后续情节。第一段：由续写第一段及续写第二段的提示语可知，该段主要描述在爸爸的帮助下，早餐做成了。第二段：由续写第二段的提示语可知，该段应该描述双胞胎的母亲节祝福以及妈妈看到早餐时的反应。范文佳作：As

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appeared．Seeingthemessinthekitchen，heimmediatelyunderstoodwhathadhappened，buthewasn'tupset．Instead，heappliedsomemedicinetoJeff'shand，andthensetouttohelpthemcleanupthemess，throwingawaytheburnttoast．Next，theybegantomakebreakfast，andbynowthetwinslookedcheerful．Beforelong，theporridgewasready．Theirfatherinstructedthemtofrytherestofthebread．Soon，thebreakfastwasready，too．The

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up．Openinghereyes，shecouldn'tbelievewhatshehadseen．Beforeshecouldaskanyquestion，theirfatherturnedupandtoldhiswifeabouthowthetwinshadmadepreparationstogiveherthesurprisebreakfast，andwhattroublestheyhadgonethroughwhenmakingtheporridgeandtoast．Disbeliefgavewaytoexcitementandpride．Huggingtheminherarms，shesaid，“Thankyou，children．It'ssuchanunforgettableMother'sDayforme．”话题佳句：1．Thegreatestgiftoflifeisfriendship，andIhavereceivedit．生命中最棒的礼物是友谊，并且我已收获了。2．Hisfacelighteningup，Arthursprangupintohismother'swarmhug．亚瑟喜笑颜开，跳进了妈妈温暖的怀抱。3．Atthatmoment，sherealizedthatitwasthewarmthandcompanyofherfamilythatenabledhertogothroughthisdifficulttime．在那一刻，她意识到，是家人的温暖和陪伴让她度过了这段艰难的时光。4．Deeplymovedbyallhissondid，thefathercouldsaynothingbuttohughimtightly，tearswellingup．被儿子所做的一切深深地感动了，父亲说不出话来，只是紧紧地搂着儿子，泪水夺眶而出。5．Someday，whenIamolderandhavechildrenofmyown，IhopeIcanbejustasgreatamotherasMom．有一天，当我长大了，有了自己的孩子，我希望我能成为像妈妈一样伟大的母亲。6．Myfather'sloveislikethesunshine，whichbringsmefirmnessandenthusiasmsothatmywillisstrengthened．父亲的爱就像阳光，带给我坚定和热情，使我的意志更加坚定。7．Iwassurethattherewassomethinggloriousshininginhereyes．Igottoknowitwasthegraceoflove．我确信她眼中有光芒在闪耀，我深知那是爱的光辉。8．ExhaustedasHenrywas，hewasdelightedtohelphisfriend．Itwasintheinstantthatherealizedwhatistruefriendship．尽管亨利疲惫不堪，但他还是很乐意帮助他的朋友。就在那一刻，他意识到了什么是真正的友谊。

9．Idoknowthatnolifeispermanent．Nomatterwheresheis，Iwillcherishourfriendshipandmissherforever．我的确知道没有生命是永恒的。无论她在哪里，我都会珍惜我们的友谊，永远想念她。10．Afterthat，ourfriendshipbecamecloserandIwasmorelikeafriendthanateach