读后续写公开课buildacoffeehouse课件高三英语一轮复习

Continuationwriting

Bytheendofthesession,we’llbeableto

1.

understandthemeaningofthetext;2.

designareasonableandlogicendingofthestory;3.

polishthestorywithsomeadvancedexpressions;4.

applywhatyouhavelearnedtopractice.HowtoreadHowtodesignHowtowriteHowtopolishHowtoread1.Readforelementsofthestory2.ReadforPlot3.ReadforthemeReadforelementsofthestoryI,Gary,othersupportersofmineDuringmyfirsttermaspresidentofStudents’UnionOncampusRaisemoneytobuildacoffeehouseasmyfirstmissionReadforPlotImanagedtogetGary,whowasactive,energetic,cleverandeloquent,tojoinme.Garyprovedtobethemostcapableandefficientinthegroupofhelpers.Iwantedtotakecreditforeverything.Myegotookoverandmyarroganceandpridewereoutofcontrol.Iwasmoreconfidentofthemission.Garywasreallyhelpful.Ibecameincreasinglyarrogant.ReadforthemeParagraph1:Itwasn’tlongbeforeallmysupporters,evenGary,begantoturnagainstme.IwasannoyedbutIdon’tcareaboutthat.Paragraph2:IfinallyrealizedwhatastupidmistakeIhadmade.Iwasregretfulandwantedtomakeupforit.ReadforthemeWhatshouldbethethemeofthestory?Teamwork,Cooperation,Modesty*Pridecomesfromshallownesswhilearrogancecomesfromignorance.*Weshouldbemodestandworkwithpartnerstoachievesomething.Howtodesign

Tips:1.Lockthesubjectofthegivensentence;2.Designfromtwoaspects:eventsandemotions;3.Theendingshouldbepositiveandeducational.Paragraphl:Itwasn'tlongbeforeallmysupporters,evenGary,begantoturnagainstme.

l.Howdidthesupportersturntheirbacksonme?2.WhatdidGarydotoshowhisdisappointmentanddiscontentment?3.HowdidIfeelandreactthen?4.Whatwastheinfluenceofourconflictsonthemission?Paragraph2:Ifinallyrealizedwhatastupidmistakelhadmade.

l.WhatmistakedidIrealizelhadmade?2.WhatdidIdotomakeupforthemistake?3.HowdidGaryandtheothersupportersreact?4.WhathappenedfinallyandwhatdidIthinkoftheexperience?HowtowriteAnswerthequestionsaboveandwe’llgetadraftquickly.Howtopolish1.Appreciatethesentencesfromthetext.1)WhenIwaselectedthepresidentofStudent’sUnion,everybodycongratulatedmeonmycampaignsayingitwasoneofthebesttheschoolhadseen.2)Havingdeterminedmygoal,Isetupasmallgroupofhelperstodofundraising.3)Gradually,allofuswhoparticipatedfeltlikewewerepartofsomethingmuchbiggerthanwewere.4)Ibeganspeakingdowntomygroupmembers,demandingtheylistentomebecauseIthoughtIknewwhatwasbest.2.Moreskills

1)心理描写---愤怒explodewithanger勃然大怒shake/boilwithanger/rage怒火中烧Filledwithfury,Jimwasunabletoutterasingleword.Jim满腔愤怒，一句话也说不出来。Kate’sreplyfueledhisangerandheeruptedlikeavolcano.凯特的回答如火上浇油，于是他的愤怒就像火山一样爆发了。Iexclaimedwithfury,stormingintomyroomandslammingthedoorbeforeshecouldrespond.我愤怒地叫了起来，冲进房间，在她没来得及回答前就砰地关上了门。2)心理描写---愧疚,后悔befullofguilt

满心愧疚shedtearsofregret

流下后悔的泪水beashamedofdoingsth....后悔做某事“IfIhadn’tquarreledwithTom,Iwouldn’thavetobehere.”Janethought

regretfully,withtearswellingupinhereyes.“如果我没有和汤姆吵架，我就不会在这里了。”简后悔地想，眼里涌出了泪水。Iwasovercomebyawaveofguiltand

wordsfailedtoexpressmyregret.

我被一阵内疚所压倒，言语无法表达我的遗憾。With/Holdingthelittledogstatueinhishand,theoldmanfelt

afloodofregretwelledupinhim.

手里拿着小狗雕塑，老人觉着心中涌起一阵懊悔。3)Only+whenIrealizetheimportanceof...+willIdosth.倒装句4)Itwas+one’sjointefforts/support/forgiveness/generositythatmademefeelrelieved.强调句型5)主语+动作A+动作Band动作C（三个并列谓语，动作依次发生）动作链6)Havingdone…+主句.（表示先做了某事，再发生核心动作）非谓语动词结构7)Withsth....doing／done...+主句+doing...with结构+主句+现在分词结构3.Thelanguageshouldbevivid,

thecontentshouldbeinterrelated,

theplotshouldbeevident,

thevalueshouldbewarm.Possibleversion:Itwasn’tlongbeforeallmysupporters,evenGary,begantoturnagainstme.

ButIwasstillobsessedwithmy

power

andIevenpicturedwhatpraisetheprincipalwouldgivemewhenIaccomplishedthis

mission.However,thingsstartedtogobad.WhenIorderedthemto

continuethefund-raisingmission,theyignoredmyrequests,doingthingsattheirownwill.EvenGaryhadaquarrelwithmeinpublic,whichmademefilledwithanger.NotuntilIfeltsoembarrassedanddepresseddidIwakeuptothefactthatIhadlostallmyfriendsincludingGary.Meanwhile,buildingthe

coffeehouse

seemstobehopeless.IfinallyrealizedwhatastupidmistakeIhadmade.

Ilearnedthatonlythosewhoarehumbleandrespectotherswouldmakeitintheend.

Iwasovercomebyawaveofguiltand

raninto

Gary,workingupthecouragetomakemyapology.Firstastonishedandthenrelievedwithawarmsmile,Garygavemeahugfinally,whichmeanthehadforgivenme.WithGary'shelp,ourteam

members

areallback.Througheveryone's

jointefforts,