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高一上学期11月期中英语试题阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。TherearemanythingsinseniormiddleschoolthatIstillrememberclearly.Istudiedthreeyearsinacountryschool,whichisfaraway.However,ithasagoodenvironmentandstrictbutkindteachers,soIlovedtheschoolandallmyteachersverymuch.OneFriday,justaswebegantoreadbooksinreadingclassatourdesks,ourteacher,Mrs.Hill,saidthatsheneededtobeoutoftheclassroomforafewminutes.Sheaskedtheclasstoreadinsilencewhileshewasgone.Andshesaidthatthosewhodidn’treadbooksinsilencewouldhavetoanswertoherwhenshereturned.Itwaswell-knownthatMrs.Hillwasstrict.Sowehadtobeonourbestbehavior.ButthatFriday,Mrs.Hillhadn’tbeengonefortensecondsbeforesomestudentsintheclassroomstartedtotalk.FromonecorneroftheclassroomIheardJoshaskNick,“CanItrademycandiesforyourtoy?”AttheotherendoftheroomIheardSamanthatellKayla,“Let’ssittogetheronthebusforthemuseumfieldtriptomorrow.”Andsoitwentallaroundme,untilabouthalfofthestudentstalkedwitheachother.Afterawhile,I,too,forgotaboutMrs.Hill’sinstructions.IturnedbackandaskedmyfriendLiza,“CanIborrowyourstorybookandkeepitforaday?”Assoonasthewordswereoutofmymouth,Mrs.Hillwalkedintotheclassroom.Thewholeclassreturnedtosilenceimmediately.Andwewerefulloffear.Mrs.Hillslowlylookedaroundtheclassroomandsaid,“IfyouweretalkingwhileIwasgone,thenpleasestandup.”Theguilt(内疚)suddenlyweighedheavilyonme.“Ishouldn’thavetalkedwhileshewasnotintheclassroom.AndnowIshouldbehonestandadmitmymistakebravely.Thisiswhatmyparentshavealwaystoldme,“Ithought.Then,Isummonedup(鼓起)mycouragetostandup,worryingaboutthepunishmentthatwaitedforme.ThenIlookedaround.注意:1.续写词数应为150左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Tomysurprise,noonefollowedme._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________WithMrs.Hill’sencouragement,anotherstudentstoodup._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________文章大意:在高中的阅读课上,老师Mrs.Hill有事离开并要求同学们安静阅读,否则回来后要接受惩罚。老师刚走不久同学们就开始交谈,“我”也参与其中。老师回来后要求说话的同学站起来,“我”鼓起勇气站了起来,故事续写围绕此展开,主要讲述同学们的反应以及老师的处理方式对大家的影响。伏笔与回应:伏笔:Mrs.Hill很严格,同学们都知道要表现好。回应:“我”因违反规定而内心极度害怕,其他同学不敢站起来也是因为畏惧她的严格。伏笔:同学们在老师离开后纷纷交谈。回应:老师回来要求站出来时,只有“我”先站起,体现出“我”的诚实与勇敢,也与其他同学形成对比。伏笔:“我”想起父母教导要诚实,所以决定勇敢承认错误。回应:这促使“我”成为第一个站出来的人,为后续老师的引导和同学们的转变埋下伏笔。伏笔:老师让说话的同学站起来,却未立刻发怒或惩罚。回应:老师以平和且鼓励的方式处理,让更多同学有勇气承认错误,教育大家要诚实面对自己的行为。伏笔:“我”站起后满心担忧惩罚。回应:老师的鼓励而非惩罚让“我”和其他同学认识到错误并改正,改变了大家对犯错的认知。续写要点:情感线:第一段从“我”独自站起时的惊讶与紧张,到看到无人跟随的尴尬与不安;第二段从老师鼓励后另一位同学站起时的欣慰,到更多同学站起后的释然与感悟。故事线:第一段讲述“我”站起后发现无人跟随,内心忐忑,老师开始与“我”交流;第二段描述在老师鼓励下其他同学陆续站起,老师借此教导大家诚实的重要性并给予温和的惩罚。主旨升华句:Honestyisthebestpolicy,evenwhenitseemsscary.(诚实是上策,即使它看起来令人害怕。)Ateacher'swisdomliesinguidingstudentstofacetheirmistakesratherthanpunishingthem.(老师的智慧在于引导学生面对错误而非惩罚他们。)Couragetoadmitmistakesisthefirststeptowardspersonalgrowth.(承认错误的勇气是个人成长的第一步。)Trueeducationisaboutnurturingmoralintegrityaswellasacademicknowledge.(真正的教育是培养道德正直以及学术知识。)Inthefaceofmistakes,alittleencouragementcanopenthedoortoredemption.(面对错误,一点鼓励能打开救赎之门。)写作示范一:Tomysurprise,noonefollowedme.Istoodtherealone,feelinglikeaspotlightwasshiningonme.Myfaceflushedwithembarrassment.Mrs.Hillwalkedovertomeandsaidsoftly,“Youareverybravetoadmityourmistake.Ittakesalotofcourage.”Ilookeddown,notknowingwhattosay.Then,sheturnedtotheclassandsaid,“Weallmakemistakes.It'showwehandlethemthatmatters.”

WithMrs.Hill’sencouragement,anotherstudentstoodup.Then,onebyone,morestudentsgottotheirfeet.Mrs.Hillsmiledandsaid,“Good.Now,sinceyoualltalked,youwilleachwriteanessayabouttheimportanceoffollowinginstructionsandbeinghonest.ButI'mproudofyouallforfinallyowningup.”Wenodded,relievedthatthepunishmentwasnotharsh.Fromthatdayon,welearnedtobemorehonestandresponsibleinclass.写作示范二:Tomysurprise,noonefollowedme.IwassoastonishedthatIalmostwantedtositdownagain.ButIheldmyground.Mrs.Hilllookedatmewithakindexpressionandsaid,“Youhaveshowngreatintegrity.Now,let'sseeifotherscanbeasbrave.”Thesilenceintheclassroomwasdeafening.Icouldfeelmyheartpounding.

WithMrs.Hill’sencouragement,anotherstudentstoodup.Itwasahesitantmovementatfirst,butthenthestudentstoodstraight.Mrs.Hillclappedgently.“Welldone.Thisiswhatweshoulddowhenwemakemistakes.Let'snotbeafraidtoadmitthem.”Morestudentsthenstood,andtheclassroomwasfilledwithasenseofrelief.Mrs.Hilltoldusthatourhonestywasmoreimportantthananypunishment,andweshouldalwaysstrivetodotherightthing.【答案】Onepossibleversion:Tomysurprise,noonefollowedme.Iloweredmyheadaloneandwasfilledwithfear.Afterlookingaroundforawhile,Mrs.Hillwalkedtowardsme.Strangely,sheaskedinasoftvoice,“Whydidyoudaretostandup?”IsaidIwanted

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