读后续写+患难唤真情：我与脑瘫哥哥的和解之路+讲义 高三下学期二模考试英语试题

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。1.haveanolderbrotherwhosuffersfromcerebralpalsy(脑瘫).ForaslongasIcanremember,hisstruggleswithbasicmovementsandspeechcausedmeadeepsenseofembarrassment,Iwasafraidofthestaresandthewhisperedquestionsfromothers,soIkeptmydistance,thinkingitwouldprotectmefromtheirjudgment.Thisavoidancebecameahabit,awaytoprotectmyselffromthediscomfortIfeltoversomethingIdidn'tfullyunderstand.Eventually,itbecameabarrierIbuiltnotaroundmyheart,butaroundmylife.EvenwhenIkeptmydistance,mybrotherwouldoftenoffermewarmsmiles,providingcomfortandhelpduringmydifficultmoments.ThereweretimeswhenIdirectedmyfrustrationstowardshim,perhapsbecausehewasaneasytargetorbecauseIhatedhisexistence.Hisreactions,however,oftentooktheformofsilentunderstanding.Hewouldn'tdemandexplanationsformybehavior.Instead,hemightreachoutwithagentlegesture--atouch,asmile,orsimplyhispresence-remindingmethat,despitemyunnecessaryoutbursts,Iwasnotalone.Themorehecaredaboutme,themoreIhatedhim.Ibelievedhebroughtmeshame,disgrace,andembarrassment.HowIwishedtostayawayfromhim!ButIhadtochooseauniversityinourcityinordertoseemyillmotherwhenconvenient.Mybrother,however,wouldpreparemealsandhavethemdeliveredtomyschool,eachtimeattachinganotefilledwithconcern,askingwhyIhadn'tcomehome,ifIwasunwell,orifsomethingwaswrong.Aftermygraduationandthelossofmymother,Idecidedtodistancemyselffrommycityand,moresignificantly,frommybrother,toseekafreshstartinadifferentcity.注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；。2.请按如下格式在相应位置作答。Paragraph1:IwasinmyownworldinthecitywhenIwasbadlyillwithCOVID-19andhadnobodytoturnto.Paragraph2:Ireturnedtomycitywithanewfoundpurpose.文章大意：作者的哥哥患有脑瘫，作者因害怕他人的目光和议论而疏远哥哥，甚至对哥哥态度恶劣，但哥哥一直默默关心作者。作者为了离开哥哥去了别的城市，在那里感染新冠无人照顾。5处伏笔及续写中的回应伏笔：作者哥哥虽患有脑瘫，却总是在作者困难时给予温暖微笑、关心和帮助，如送饭菜并附纸条询问作者情况，这为后文哥哥在作者患新冠时的帮助埋下伏笔。回应：作者生病无人照顾时，哥哥得知后不顾自身困难赶来照顾，体现了哥哥对作者无私且深沉的爱，与前文哥哥的关心行为相呼应，让作者开始重新审视对哥哥的感情和态度。伏笔：作者对哥哥的疏远和恶劣态度，是因为觉得哥哥给自己带来羞耻和尴尬，为后面作者的内心转变做铺垫。回应：生病期间哥哥的悉心照料使作者内心产生愧疚和悔恨，意识到自己以前的错误，从而促使其态度转变，情感从厌恶到愧疚，推动了故事的情感发展和情节转折。伏笔：作者为了离开哥哥选择在本市上大学，毕业后又去外市寻求新开始，突出了作者对哥哥的逃避心理。回应：生病这一经历让作者决定回到本市，打破了之前一直逃避的状态，使故事的发展有了转折，回到本市也为后续与哥哥关系的修复和重新相处提供了可能。伏笔：作者提到母亲生病，这暗示了家庭的不幸和哥哥承担的责任，也从侧面反映出哥哥的善良和坚韧。回应：母亲去世后，哥哥依然坚守对作者的关爱，进一步凸显了哥哥的美好品质，也让作者在经历种种后更深刻地认识到哥哥的可贵，有助于作者情感的转变和故事主旨的升华。伏笔：作者在回忆中多次提到哥哥的无声理解和包容，这为后文作者认识到自己的错误以及两人关系的改善奠定了基础。回应：生病时作者回想起这些，更加感到愧疚，也更容易接受哥哥的照顾和情感上的靠近，使得两人关系的转变更加自然流畅，同时也体现了情感的力量和人性的温暖在故事中的作用。续写要点情感线：第一段：作者起初感到孤独、无助和绝望，在患病的痛苦中思念家乡和亲人，对自己曾经疏远哥哥的行为开始有了一丝悔意，在哥哥赶来照顾后，内心充满了愧疚和感动，同时也有对哥哥的感激和重新认识。第二段：作者怀着愧疚、感恩和弥补的心情回到城市，决心改变过去的态度，用爱和关怀去对待哥哥，弥补曾经的过错，内心坚定且充满温情，对未来与哥哥的相处充满期待和希望，完成了从逃避到面对、从厌恶到关爱的情感转变。故事线：第一段：作者在异地独自与新冠病毒抗争，病情严重时孤立无援，身心俱疲。在绝望中，作者联系了家乡的一位熟人，熟人告知了哥哥。哥哥心急如焚，不顾路途遥远和自身不便，历经波折赶到作者身边，悉心照料作者的饮食起居，陪伴作者度过了艰难的隔离期，在哥哥的照顾下，作者逐渐康复。第二段：康复后的作者深刻反思了自己过去的行为，决定回到家乡。回到城市后，作者第一时间找到哥哥，紧紧地抱住他，泪流满面地向他道歉，表达了自己的悔恨和想要弥补的决心。此后，作者每天都陪伴在哥哥身边，陪他聊天、散步，帮助他进行康复训练，两人的关系变得亲密无间，共同度过了许多温暖的时光，作者也真正懂得了亲情的珍贵和无价，完成了自我救赎和成长。主旨升华句Loveisnotalwaysaboutgrandgestures;sometimes,it'sthesilentandpersistentcarethattrulytouchestheheartandhasthepowertohealthedeepestwoundsofoursouls.（爱并不总是宏大的姿态；有时，默默且持久的关怀才能真正触动心灵，拥有治愈我们灵魂深处创伤的力量。）Inthefaceoflife'strials,weoftenrealizethattheoneswepushedawaymightbetheveryoneswhoholdthekeytoourredemptionandthesourceofthepurestlovewe'veeverknown.（在生活的考验面前，我们常常意识到，那些被我们推开的人可能正是我们救赎的关键，以及我们所知道的最纯粹的爱的源泉。）Truestrengthliesnotinrunningawayfromourproblemsbutinfacingthemwithcourageandhumility,andlearningtocherishthelovethathasalwaysbeenthere,waitingforustoopenoureyesandourhearts.（真正的力量不在于逃避问题，而在于勇敢而谦逊地面对它们，并学会珍惜一直存在、等待我们睁开双眼和敞开心扉的爱。）Thejourneyofself-discoveryoftenbeginswiththerecognitionofourmistakesandthewillingnesstomakeamends.Itisthroughtheseactsofrepentancethatwefindthepathtoforgivenessandtherestorationofthemostpreciousrelationshipsinourlives.（自我发现的旅程往往始于认识到自己的错误并愿意弥补。正是通过这些忏悔行为，我们找到了通往宽恕的道路，以及恢复我们生活中最珍贵的关系的方法。）Wemaytrytooutrunourpastandthepeoplewethinkholdusback,butintheend,itisthetiesofbloodandthepowerofunconditionallovethatwilldrawusback,teachingusthetruemeaningoffamilyandthevalueofeverylife,nomatterhowdifferentordifficultitmayseem.（我们可能试图逃离过去和那些我们认为阻碍我们的人，但最终，血缘的纽带和无条件的爱的力量会把我们拉回来，教导我们家庭的真正意义以及每一个生命的价值，无论它看起来多么不同或艰难。）写作示范第一篇Paragraph1:IwasinmyownworldinthecitywhenIwasbadlyillwithCOVID-19andhadnobodytoturnto.Lyingaloneinmysmallapartment,thefevermademyheadspinandmybodyache.Ifeltsohelplessandscared.Inmydelirium,Ithoughtofmybrotherandthewarmmealsheusedtosendme.Forthefirsttime,Iregrettedpushinghimaway.Imanagedtocallanoldneighborbackhome,whoinformedmybrother.Withouthesitation,mybrothertraveledallthewaytothecitytotakecareofme.Hecookednutritioussoups,madesureItookmymedicineontime,andsatbymybedside,offeringmecomfortwithhissilentpresence.Seeinghisworriedfaceandfeelinghisgentletouch,myheartwasfilledwithguiltandshame.Paragraph2:Ireturnedtomycitywithanewfoundpurpose.IrealizedhowwrongIhadbeentojudgeandavoidmybrother.Iwasdeterminedtomakeupforallthelosttimeandlove.AssoonasIgotback,Iwentstraighttomybrother'splace.Ihuggedhimtightlyandapologizedwithtearsinmyeyes.Fromthatdayon,Ibecamehisconstantcompanion.Wewentforwalksinthepark,watchedmoviestogether,andIhelpedhimwithhisdailyexercises.Ourrelationshipgrewstrongerthanever,andIlearnedthatloveandacceptancearethemostpreciousgiftswecangivetoourfamily.Inolongercaredaboutwhatothersmightthink;allthatmatteredwasthebondIhadwithmybrotherandthelovethathadbeenthereallalong,waitingformetoembraceit.第二篇Paragraph1:IwasinmyownworldinthecitywhenIwasbadlyillwithCOVID-19andhadnobodytoturnto.Iwasbarelyabletogetoutofbedtofetchwaterorfood.FearandlonelinessengulfedmeasIstruggledtobreathe.Inthatmomentofdespair,Irememberedallthetimesmybrotherhadbeenthereforme,despitemycoldnesstowardshim.Iwonderedifhewouldstillcare.Miraculously,hedid.Hesomehowmanagedtofindoutaboutmysituationandrushedtomyside.Hetookcareofmelikeamotherhen,nevercomplainingabouttheinconvenienceortherisk.HiskindnessandselflessnessbrokethroughthewallsIhadbuiltaroundmyheart,andIstartedtoseehiminanewlight.Paragraph2:Ireturnedtomycitywithanewfoundpurpose.Icamebacktorebuildtherelationshipwithmybrotherandtoshowhimtheloveandrespecthedeserved.Imovedinwithhimanddedicatedmyselftohiswell-being.Iaccompaniedhimtohistherapysessionsandcheeredhimoneverystepoftheway.Iintroducedhimtomyfriendsandwasproudtohavehimbymyside.ThestaresandwhispersfromothersnolongerbotheredmebecauseIknewthetruevalueofmybrother'slove.Ihadlearnedthatfamilyisnotdefinedbyperfectionbutbytheunwaveringsupportandloveweoffereachother,andIwasdeterminedtocherishandprotectthisbondfortherestofmylife.【答案】IwasinmyownworldinthecitywhenIwasbadlyillwithCOVID-19andhadnobodytoturnto.Aloneinmyapartment，myhealthdeterioratedrapidly.Itwasthen，inthemidstofmydesperation，thatmybrother'sfamiliarfaceappearedinmymind.