高考英语复习读后续写练习+相信的力量+课件

高考英语读后续写语篇练习相信的力量1题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向2Part1题目呈现3续写原文Thepowerofbelief“Youwillneverwalkagain.Youwillhavetouseawheelchair.”Unpreparedforthedoctor’sjudgment,Iheardhiswordsfallheavilyonmyears,numbingmysoul.Myseriouscaraccidenthadleftmeunconsciousandincriticalcondition.Iawakenedtofindbothleg:wrappedincasts(石膏).Lyinginmybedmotionlessandrelyingonprayer,IwonderedhowIcouldgivemyten-year-oldsonhopethatMomwouldheal.He’dbeencheerfuloneveryvisit,butIsawthefearinhiseyes.Thethoughtofhavingatotallyhandicapped(残疾的)motherwasweighingheavilyonhislittleshoulder.HeneededtherayofhopethatIwouldnotbeinawheelchairforever.4续写原文Justmaybe,Ithought,Icouldusethisexperiencetoteachwhattodowhendisastersstrike.IneededsomethingbesidesmyphysicalhealingtosinkmyIrishstubbornnessinto—it’sthatpersonalitythatkeptmegoingthroughthetoughestchallengeofmylifeItdidn’ttakemelongtobecomeimpatientwiththepacethedoctorswerewillingtogowithme.Ideterminedtolearneverythingtheyshowedme.Ineededtomakethingshappenmyway.Andbeingconfined(限制)toawheelchairtherestofmylifedidn’tfitintomyplans.5续写原文Atfirst,Itaughtmyselftomovefromthebedtothewheelchair.Imadetinymovementsforweeks,afraidoffalling,butmoreafraidtojustlieinbed.Ireachedapointwheremyarmswerestrongenoughtocarrymeintothechair.Gettingoutofthechairandbackintobedprovedmoredifficult,butIsoondevelopedamethodofgrabbingthesheets.Ioftenwonderedwhatthenursesanddoctorswouldhavedoneifthey’dseenmestrugglingonmyown.OncesureIcouldreturnmyselftothebedfromthewheelchair,Ibegantouseawalkerthathadbeenleftinmyroombyaformerhospitalroommate.6段首句Paragraph1：Everynight,whenIknewIwouldn’tbeinterrupted(打扰),Iwouldstarttotrain.Paragraph2：Itcametimetosharemyachievementswiththepersonmostimportanttome.7Part2题目分析8续写原文分析9文章讲述了作者遭遇严重车祸后，被医生判定可能再也无法行走，只能依靠轮椅生活，这一消息让作者深受打击。儿子的探视，其眼中的恐惧让作者意识到必须振作，于是决定利用这次经历教导儿子如何面对灾难。作者很快对医生的治疗进度失去耐心，凭借自身顽强的爱尔兰式倔强，开始自学从床上移动到轮椅，经过数周的微小移动练习，手臂力量增强后能够坐到轮椅上，又摸索出从轮椅回到床上的方法，还开始使用前室友留下的助行器，展现出不向命运低头、努力康复的坚强精神。点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句；点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语；点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。情节构建的重点10续写思路分析Para1：Everynight,whenIknewIwouldn’tbeinterrupted(打扰),Iwouldstarttotrain.每当夜幕降临，万籁俱寂，确定不会被任何人打扰后，我便开启艰难的训练之旅。我咬紧牙关，双手紧紧抓住床边的栏杆，拼尽全力想要撑起自己虚弱无力的身体，豆大的汗珠从额头滚落，浸湿了枕头。每一次尝试移动，腿部传来的疼痛都如针般刺扎，但心中那团渴望重新行走的火焰从未熄灭。我在黑暗中独自摸索，从最初简单的肢体伸展，到逐渐增加难度的坐立练习，一点点地挑战着身体的极限，心中默默为自己加油打气，期待着能够早日恢复行走能力，哪怕只是一小步。11续写思路分析Para2：Itcametimetosharemyachievementswiththepersonmostimportanttome.经过一段时间艰苦卓绝的努力，我终于迎来了这个重要的时刻——与我生命中最重要的人，也就是我的儿子，分享我的训练成果。那天，阳光透过窗户洒在病房的地上，像是为这个特殊的时刻铺上了金色的地毯。我特意让儿子来到病房，在他充满期待与好奇的目光中，我深吸一口气，双手紧紧握住助行器，缓缓地、稳稳地从床边站起身来。儿子的眼中先是闪过一丝惊讶，继而被满满的惊喜与自豪所取代。我一步一步，缓慢却坚定地走向他，每一步都承载着无数个日夜的汗水与坚持，当我终于走到他面前，紧紧地抱住他时，我看到他眼中闪烁着激动的泪花，而我也深知，这一切的付出都是值得的。12Part3范文呈现13范文呈现Everynight,whenIknewIwouldn'tbeinterrupted,Iwouldstarttotrain.Astheworldoutsidefellsilentandthehospitalcorridorsdimmed,Isummonedallmystrengthanddetermination.Lyinginbed,I'dfirstfocusonmybreathing,tryingtocalmthenervesthatalwaysseemedtosurfaceatthishour.Then,withgreateffort,I'dslowlymovemylegsunderthesheets,wincingatthepainthatshotthroughthem.Inchbyinch,I'dedgemyselfclosertothesideofthebed,myhandsgrippingthemattresstightly.Onceinposition,I'dtakeadeepbreathand,usingthemomentum,pushmyselfupintoasittingposition.Itwasastrugglethatleftmeexhausted,butIrefusedtogiveup.I'drepeatthisprocessoverandover,sometimesfallingbackontothebedindefeat,butalwaysgettingupagain,fueledbythehopeofonedaywalkingoutofthathospitalonmyowntwofeet.14范文呈现Itcametimetosharemyachievementswiththepersonmostimportanttome.Ihadcarefullyplannedthismoment,wantingittobeperfect.Iaskedthenursetobringmysontomyroom.AsIwaited,Iadjustedmypositioninthewheelchair,makingsureIlookedasstrongandconfidentaspossible.Whenhewalkedthroughthedoor,hiseyeswidenedwithanticipation.Ismiledathim,asmilethatmaskedthepainandexhaustionIfelt.Withadeepbreath,Iplacedmyhandsonthearmrestsofthewheelchairand,slowly,withallthegraceIcouldmuster,Ipushedmyselfup.Mylegstrembledbeneathme,butIheldmyground.Itookatentativestepforward,thenanother.Hiseyesfilledwithtearsashewatchedme,andIcouldseetheprideandjoyinhisexpression.ItwasamomentIwouldcherishforever,knowingthatallmyhardworkhadbeenworthitjusttoseethatlookonhisface.15升级版范文呈现Everynight,whenconvincedthatnointerruptionwouldcomemyway,Iembarkedonmyarduoustrainingjourney.Withthestillnessofthenightenvelopingthehospital,I,lyinginbed,wouldfirststeadymybreath,tryinghardtoovercomethenervesthatalwayslurked.Then,painshootingthroughmylegs,I'dinchmyselftowardstheedgeofthebed,handsgrippingthemattresstightly.Itwasmyunwaveringdetermination