浙江省台州市2022-2023学年高一下学期期末英语读后续写-露营夜惊魂小贝拉的恐惧与释然之旅讲义

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写，使之构成一篇完整的短文。BellawasonlyfiveanditwasherfirstcampingtripwithMumandDad.Shewasexcitedbutwasalittlenervoustoo."Whatifthetentfallsoverandsquashesus?Whatifthewindblowsitaway?Whatifawolfesintothetentandeatsus?..,"shekeptaskingMum.ThismadeMumlaugh.Bellahadreadtoomanyfairystorieswithbigbadwolvesinthem.MumfortedBellathattherearen'tanywolvesinthecityoreveninthewholecountry,exceptinzoos.“Well,whatifoneescapedfromazoo?”askedBella.Mumlaughed,“Zooswerecarefulenoughnottolettheiranimalsescape.”ThenBellasoonforgotaboutwolvesastheystartedplanningforthecampingtrip.BellahelpedDadloadupthecar.Theyputinthetent,abigoneforthewholefamily.Thenthesleepingbags,blanketsandmore."It'scoldatnightwhenyou'resleepinginatent,"addedDad.Wheneverythingwaspacked,thecarwasfulltobursting.Dadstartedthecar,andsoontheywereleavingthecitybehindthem."Lookatthehills!"shoutedMumexcitedly,"Lookatthecowsonthegrass!"Theydroveup

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untiltheyreachedthecampsite,whichbelongedtoafarmandwasinabigfield.Oncethetentwasup,Bellawenttoexplore.Thereweretreestoclimbandastreamforpaddling.Bellasattherewatchingthecowseatingthegrass.Thedayflewbyanditwasgettingdark.Astheywerereadyforsleep,strangerustling(沙沙声)noisescamefromthefencenext

totheirtentinthedarkness."What'sthatnoise?Isitawolfapproaching?"BellaworriedandmovedclosertoMum."Maybeit'sjustthewind,"MumgentlypattedBella.Belladidn'tsayanythingmore.Theywerealltiredafteradayoutdoors,and

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intotheirsleepingbags.SoonMumandDadwereasleep.注意：1.续写词数应为80个左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Bellawastoonervoustofallasleepwhensheheardthatnoiseagain.文章大意：五岁的Bella首次和父母露营，因读了太多童话故事而担心帐篷被吹倒、狼来袭等问题。父母安慰后她开始期待露营，帮忙准备并一同前往营地。到达后她尽情玩耍，夜晚准备入睡时听到奇怪沙沙声，怀疑是狼，在父母安抚下虽未再言语，但因紧张难以入眠。故事山分析：开端：Bella首次露营，因童话中的狼而充满恐惧与担忧，不断向妈妈提问，妈妈则耐心安慰，为露营之旅奠定了既有期待又有隐忧的基调，也为后续可能出现的与“狼”相关的情节埋下伏笔。发展：Bella参与露营准备，一家人驾车前往营地，途中欣赏风景，到达后搭建帐篷并在营地探索，享受白天的欢乐时光，暂时忘却担忧，情节逐渐推进到露营的核心场景。高潮：夜晚入睡时听到奇怪的沙沙声，Bella心中对狼的恐惧再次被唤起，向妈妈询问后虽得到安抚但仍无法平静，紧张氛围达到顶点，故事的悬念和戏剧性增强。结局：续写部分将围绕Bella再次听到声音后的反应及最终如何化解恐惧展开，使故事完整并呈现出情感的变化与升华。五处伏笔及续写回应：伏笔：Bella读太多有狼的童话故事而担心狼。续写回应：再次听到声音后，她更加坚信是狼，内心极度恐惧，但最终发现是农场的小狗，与之前对狼的恐惧形成对比，消除了误解。伏笔：妈妈安慰说没有狼且动物园管理严格不会有狼逃脱。续写回应：Bella尽管听到安慰，但夜晚的声音仍让她害怕，这凸显出孩子内心恐惧的难以消除，直到真相大白才彻底安心，体现出心理变化的过程。伏笔：营地在农场的大田野里。续写回应：沙沙声原来是农场小狗发出的，合理利用了营地的环境背景，使情节的转折不突兀，解释了声音的来源。伏笔：Bella白天看到农场里的奶牛等动物。续写回应：夜晚的“不速之客”也是农场动物之一，与白天的场景相呼应，丰富了农场这一故事背景的元素运用。伏笔：Bella听到声音靠近妈妈且未再言语但没睡着。续写回应：她因紧张而难以入睡，为后续进一步探究声音来源和解决恐惧心理做了铺垫，推动情节继续发展。续写要点：描述Bella再次听到声音后的具体行动，如小心翼翼地查看或紧张地等待。揭示声音的来源，如原来是农场的小狗，以及Bella得知真相后的反应，如松一口气、感到好笑等。情感线：

Bella最初是兴奋与紧张交织，对露营既期待又因狼的恐惧而不安。在准备和白天游玩时兴奋占据主导，暂时忘却恐惧。夜晚听到声音后，恐惧瞬间回归且加剧，靠近妈妈寻求安慰却难以平静。当发现声音来源是小狗后，转为释然和轻松，从极度恐惧到放松的情绪变化贯穿故事始终，体现了孩子在面对未知时的心理成长历程。故事线：

Bellawastoonervoustofallasleepwhensheheardthatnoiseagain.Sheheldherbreathandlistenedcarefully.Thenoiseseemedtobegettingcloser.Tremblingwithfear,sheslowlypeekedoutofthetent.Tohersurprise,shesawalittledogfromthefarmwaggingitstailnearthefence.Realizingitwasthesourceofthenoise,Bellaletoutasighofrelief.Shegiggledandfinallyfeltatease,snugglingintohersleepingbagandfallingasleeppeacefully.主旨升华句：“Fearoftenmagnifiestheunknown,butcourageliesinseekingthetruthandfindingit'snotasdreadfulasimagined.”（恐惧常常放大未知，但勇气在于探寻真相并发现并非如想象中可怕。）“Themonstersinourmindsaresometimesjustfriendlycreaturesindisguise,waitingtobediscovered.”（我们心中的怪物有时只是伪装的友好生物，等待被发现。）“Inthefaceofthedarkandtheunknown,alittleexplorationcanturnterrorintolaughter.”（面对黑暗与未知，一点探索能将恐惧化为欢笑。）“Ourfearsarelikeshadowsthatvanishwhenthelightofrealityshinesuponthem.”（我们的恐惧如同阴影，当现实之光照射时便会消散。）“Whatseemsscaryinthenightcanbeasourceoffortandamusementoncerevealed.”（夜晚看似可怕的东西一旦被揭示，可能成为安慰和乐趣的来源。）写作示范一：Bellawastoonervoustofallasleepwhensheheardthatnoiseagain.Shemusteredupthecouragetounzipthetentslightlyandpeekout.There,inthemoonlight,wasasmall,furrycreature.Itwasapuppy!Ithadprobablybeencuriousaboutthenewarrivals.Bella'sheartratesloweddown.Shewhisperedtothepuppy,anditbarkedsoftlyinresponse.Withasmileonherface,Bellaclosedhereyesanddriftedofftosleep,herfearsreplacedbyasenseofwonder.写作示范二：Bellawastoonervoustofallasleepwhensheheardthatnoiseagain.Shelaystill,hereyeswideopen.Afterawhile,shedecidedtowakeDad.Dadquietlygotupandtheybothwentoutsidetoinvestigate.Astheyroundedthetent,theysawalittledogsniffingaround.Dadlaughedandexplaineditwasjustafriendlypupfromthefarm.Bellalaughedtoo,feelingabitsillyforbeingsoscared.Shewentbacktothetentandsleptsoundly,knowingtherewerenowolvestofear.参考范文：Bellawastoonervoustofallasleepwhensheheardthatnoiseagain.Shewonderedwhatwashappeningwhensuddenly,sheheardmorerustling.Itsoundedlikesomethingwalkingaroundoutside.“Thiscampsiteisjustthekindofplaceawolfmightlike.What..whatifawolfdidescapefromazoo?”

Bellalayawake,shivering,astherustlingcontinued.1minute,2minutes.…….afterwhatseemedages,Bellacouldn’tbearitanylonger.Shecreptoutofthesleeping