2025届高考英语复习读后续写练习：旋转木马前的善意：梦想成真之旅+课件

高考英语读后续写语篇练习旋转木马前的善意：梦想成真之旅1题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向2Part1题目呈现3续写原文CedarPointwasanamusementparkinOhioIhadbeenexpectingtovisitasachild.Welivedclosetothepark,soIoftenheardthescreamsofpeopleontherollercoaster,sawthetiredkidswiththeirparentswhentheyleft.Sometimes,Ilookedwistfullyatthelightsthroughmywindowatnight.WhenIwasnine,mygrandmothermanagedtosavealittlebitofmoneyhereandthereandtookmethereonedaythatsummer.Iyelled,excitementbubblinginsideme.Aswearrivedattheparkforthefirsttime,kidswereeverywhere,eatingpopcorn（爆米花）andblowingbubbles.Myeyeswidenedindelightatthescene.Iwantedtodoallthosethings,butdeepdown,Iknewwedidn'thaveenoughmoney.Wecouldonlyaffordtobuyaticketonlyforonerideforfifteenminutes.Ipulledmygrandmothertowardtheticketwindowtobuyaticketforthecarousel（旋转木马）.4续写原文ItwasexactlyasIhadimagined,straightoutofamovie.Mygrandmothersmiledfondlyandleaneddown,givingthetickettotherideoperator,MrSalas.Lettinggo,Irushedtotheride,stoppingonlytopickwhichhorsetositon.Theywereallsobeautiful,comingindifferentcolorswith'differentexpressions'ontheirplasticfaces.Tome,itfeltlikethedecisionofalifetime."Comeon,sweetie!Therideisgoingtostart!"mygrandmothercalledout,laughingatmyindecision.Seeingthat,MrSalasalsosmiledwarmly.Finally,Ipickedthehorsewiththepinkhairandbluesaddle.Inthefollowingminutes,Iwasabsorbedinenjoyingtheride,forgettingmyfamilywasstruggling.Mygrandmotherwavedeachtimetheridepassedherby.MrSalaswatchedmefromadistance.Sadly,thecarouselrideendedmuchtooquickly.Mygrandmotherwaswaitingandtookmyhand.Igotdownfromthehorseunwillingly,feelingbittersweet.5段首句Paragraph1：Atthatmoment,MrSalasapproacheduswithawarmsmileonhisface.Paragraph2：Afterawhile,MrSalasreturned,withanall-inclusiveticketforCedarPointfortheentireday.6Part2题目分析7续写原文分析8作者儿时家靠近俄亥俄州的锡达波因特游乐园，一直渴望前往。九岁那年夏天，祖母攒钱带她去。因钱不多，她们仅能买一张15分钟的旋转木马票。旋转木马如作者想象般美好，她沉浸其中，然而时间很快过去。正当她不舍离开时，旋转木马的操作员萨拉斯先生走向了她们。点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句；点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语；点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。情节构建的重点9续写思路分析Para1：Atthatmoment,MrSalasapproacheduswithawarmsmileonhisface.就在这时，萨拉斯先生脸上带着温暖的笑容朝我们走来。他亲切地询问祖母能否和我单独聊一会儿，祖母虽然有些诧异，但还是点头同意了。萨拉斯先生轻轻牵起我的手，把我带到一旁。他蹲下身子，目光温和地看着我，问我今天玩得开心吗。我告诉他旋转木马太棒了，可结束得太快，我还没玩够。萨拉斯先生认真地听着，眼神中满是理解与关切。随后，他神秘地说要给我一个特别的惊喜，让我在这里等他一会儿。我满心好奇，眼睛紧紧盯着他离开的方向，心里猜测着他会带来什么。10续写思路分析Para2：Afterawhile,MrSalasreturned,withanall-inclusiveticketforCedarPointfortheentireday.过了一会儿，萨拉斯先生回来了，手里拿着一张锡达波因特游乐园全天通用的通票。他把票递给我，笑着说希望我能在游乐园里尽情玩耍，度过充满欢乐和回忆的一天。我惊讶得张大了嘴巴，简直不敢相信眼前发生的一切。激动的泪水在眼眶里打转，我不停地向他道谢。祖母也走了过来，她同样又惊又喜，对萨拉斯先生表达着深深的感激。拿着这张承载着善意的通票，我和祖母兴奋地开启了一整天的欢乐之旅。我们玩了各种游乐设施，每一个瞬间都充满了欢声笑语，这一天成为了我童年最美好的回忆。11Part3范文呈现12范文呈现Atthatmoment,MrSalasapproacheduswithawarmsmileonhisface.Hepolitelyaskedmygrandmotherifhecouldhaveashorttalkwithme.Mygrandmother,thoughabitsurprised,agreed.MrSalasthengentlytookmyhandandledmeaside.Hecroucheddown,lookingatmewithgentleeyes,andaskedifIwashavingagoodtimetoday.ItoldhimthatthecarouselwaswonderfulbutendedtoosoonandIreallywishedIcouldplaylonger.MrSalaslistenedattentively,hiseyesfullofunderstandingandconcern.Then,hesaidmysteriouslythathehadaspecialsurpriseformeandaskedmetowaitrightthere.Iwasfilledwithcuriosity,myeyesfixedonthedirectionheleft,wonderingwhathewouldbring.13范文呈现Afterawhile,MrSalasreturned,withanall-inclusiveticketforCedarPointfortheentireday.Hehandedthetickettome,sayingwithasmilethathehopedIcouldenjoymyselffullyintheparkandhaveadayfullofjoyandmemories.Iwassoastonishedthatmymouthdroppedopen.Icouldhardlybelievewhatwashappeninginfrontofme.TearsofexcitementwelledupinmyeyesandIthankedhimrepeatedly.Mygrandmotheralsocameover.Shewasequallysurprisedandgrateful.Holdingthisticketfullofkindness,mygrandmotherandIstartedanexcitingwhole-dayjourney.Wewentonvariousrides,andeverymomentwasfilledwithlaughterandjoy.Thisdaybecamethemostbeautifulmemoryinmychildhood.14升级版范文呈现Atthatverymoment,MrSalas,wearingawarmsmileonhisface,approachedus.Politely,heinquiredofmygrandmotherwhetherhecouldhaveabriefconversationwithme.Mygrandmother,somewhattakenaback,nonethelessconsented.MrSalasthengentlyclaspedmyhandandguidedmeaside.Crouchingdown,hefixedhisgentlegazeuponmeandaskedifIwashavinganenjoyableday.Ipouredoutmyheart,tellinghimthatthecarouselwasnothingshortofwonderful,yetitsbrevityleftmeyearningformore.MrSalaslistenedintently,hiseyesbrimmingwithunderstandingandcompassion.Subsequently,hedeclaredmysteriouslythathehadaspecialtreatinstoreformeandurgedmetoremainwhereIwas.Filledwithcuriosity,myeyeswererivetedonthedirectioninwhichhedeparted,mymindracingwithspeculationaboutwhathemightbringback.15升级版范文呈现Momentslater,MrSalasreappeared,clutchinganall-inclusiveticketforCedarPointthatwasvalidfortheentireday.Handingittome,hesaidwithasmilethathehopedIwouldimmersemyselfinthepark'sofferingsandcreateadayrepletewithjoyandcherishedmemories.SoastonishedwasIthatmymouthfellopenin