高考英语复习读后续写练习：蒙冤与真相：300+美元引发的波折+课件

高考英语读后续写语篇练习蒙冤与真相：300美元引发的波折1题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向2Part1题目呈现3续写原文Itwasabeautifulsunnymorninginearlysummer,whentheworldseemedfullofsunlightandnewgreenleaves.Iwasinagoodmoodasmyparentshadjustgivenme$300formydailyexpensesduringtheweekthattheywouldbeawayinMexicotovisitmymother’ssickgrandfather.Iwasextremelyoverjoyed,thinkinghardaboutthethingsIcoulddowiththemoney.IfIsurvivedonbreadandbutterthewholeweek,Iwouldhaveanunexpectedwindfallof$200tobuythelatestKobeBryantbasketballshoes!Whataterrificidea!Asusualthephysicaleducationclasswasthrilling.Ifeltmostatcaseonthebasketballcourt.Afterplayingseveralfiercegames,IcouldhardlycatchmybreathasIheadedbacktowardstheclassroom,sweatyandexhausted.WhenIentered,IfoundmyclassmatesgatheredaroundSteven’sdeskashesearchedthroughhisbooksandsomeotherpersonalitemsanxiously.Stevenhadalwaysbeenpopular.Notonlywasheintelligentandwell-mannered,buthealsocamefromawell-offfamily.Andhesharedeverythinghehadwithus.4续写原文Rightaway,IlearnedStevenhadlostthemoneyhewoulddonatetoachildren’swelfareinstitutethatafternoon.ThenIinformedMissJones,theclassteacher.Sherushedoverimmediatelyandorganizedasearcharoundtheclassroom.Westoodbyourdesksandemptiedthecontentsofourschoolbagsontothedeskforinspection.Itwasmyturn.AsMissJonestookoutthe$300frommywallet,theclassfellintoashock.Ididn’tknowtheamountlostwasexactly$300untilthen.Ikeptprovingmyinnocence,butinvain.MissJonesconfiscated(没收)the$300anddecidedIwasgettingkickedoutoftheschool.Istayedhomealonethewholeweek,livingonlyonbread.Ifeltwronged,angry,andlossofself-esteem.5段首句Paragraph1:Finally,myparentsreturnedhomeandtalkedwithme.Paragraph2:Oneday,IwassittinginLoveDadagain.6Part2题目分析7续写原文分析8初夏一个阳光明媚的美好清晨，世界充满了阳光和嫩绿的新叶。“我”心情很好，因为父母要去墨西哥看望生病的外祖父，给了“我”300美元作为一周的日常开销。“我”欣喜若狂，盘算着用这笔钱买最新款的科比・布莱恩特篮球鞋，想着要是一周只靠面包黄油度日，就能省下200美元来实现心愿。体育课上，篮球比赛很激烈，“我”在球场上尽情挥洒汗水。打完几场激烈的比赛后，“我”大汗淋漓、疲惫不堪地回到教室，发现同学们都围在史蒂文的课桌旁，他正焦急地翻找着自己的书本和其他私人物品。史蒂文人缘很好，聪明又有礼貌，还来自富裕家庭，总是和大家分享他的东西。“我”很快得知史蒂文丢了当天下午要捐给儿童福利机构的钱。“我”告知了班主任琼斯老师，她立刻赶来组织大家在教室里搜查。我们站在自己的课桌旁，把书包里的东西都倒在课桌上接受检查。轮到“我”时，琼斯老师从“我”的钱包里拿出300美元，全班都震惊了。“我”此前并不知道丢失的钱正好是300美元，“我”不断证明自己的清白，但毫无用处。琼斯老师没收了这300美元，还决定让“我”退学。接下来的一周，“我”独自待在家里，只靠面包度日，感到委屈、愤怒又失去自尊。点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句；点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语；点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。情节构建的重点9续写思路分析Paragraph1:Finally,myparentsreturnedhomeandtalkedwithme.终于，父母回到了家，和“我”交谈。“我”满含泪水，将事情的经过一五一十地告诉了他们。父母听后，眉头紧锁，十分心疼“我”的遭遇。他们坚信“我”是清白的，决定要为“我”讨回公道。第二天，父母带着“我”来到学校，找到了琼斯老师。他们态度诚恳地向琼斯老师说明情况，指出在没有确凿证据的情况下，仅凭“我”钱包里的300美元就认定“我”是小偷并让“我”退学，这种做法是不合理的。父母建议琼斯老师重新调查这件事，不能轻易冤枉一个学生。琼斯老师听后，虽然心里有些犹豫，但也意识到自己的决定可能过于草率，便答应重新考虑这件事。10续写思路分析Paragraph2:MissJoneshadjustacceptedmyparents’advicewhenStevencame.琼斯老师刚接受父母的建议，史蒂文就来了。他满脸愧疚，手里拿着一个信封，急匆匆地走到“我”面前。原来，史蒂文在整理自己的衣物时，发现那300美元夹在了一件外套的口袋里。他这才想起，自己之前把钱放在了外套里，后来换衣服时忘记拿出来了。史蒂文真诚地向“我”道歉，说自己的粗心大意让“我”受了这么大的委屈。他还当着大家的面，将事情的真相告诉了琼斯老师。琼斯老师听后，脸上露出了懊悔的神情，她立刻向“我”和父母道歉，承认自己的错误，并归还了没收的300美元。同学们也纷纷向“我”表示歉意，“我”心中的委屈和愤怒一下子烟消云散。经过这件事，“我”不仅洗清了冤屈，还明白了在面对误解时要保持冷静，相信真相总会大白。同时，也让大家懂得了不能轻易地怀疑和指责他人，要以事实为依据。11Part3范文呈现12范文呈现Finally,myparentsreturnedhomeandtalkedwithme.Withtearsstreamingdownmyface,Itoldthemthewholestoryindetail.Afterhearingmywords,myparentsfrowned,lookingverydistressedaboutmyexperience.TheyfirmlybelievedthatIwasinnocentanddecidedtoseekjusticeforme.Thenextday,myparentstookmetoschoolandfoundMissJones.TheysincerelyexplainedthesituationtoMissJones,pointingoutthatitwasunreasonabletoidentifymeasathiefandexpelmefromschooljustbecauseIhad$300inmywalletwithoutconclusiveevidence.MyparentssuggestedthatMissJonesshouldreinvestigatethismatterandnoteasilywrongastudent.Afterlistening,althoughMissJoneswasabithesitant,shealsorealizedthatherdecisionmighthavebeentoohastyandagreedtoreconsiderthematter.13范文呈现MissJoneshadjustacceptedmyparents’advicewhenStevencame.Helookedextremelyguilty,holdinganenvelopeinhishandandrushedtome.ItturnedoutthatwhenStevenwassortingouthisclothes,hefoundthe$300inthepocketofacoat.Hethenrememberedthathehadputthemoneyinthecoatbeforeandforgottotakeitoutwhenhechangedclothes.Stevensincerelyapologizedtome,sayingthathiscarelessnesshadmademesuffersuchagreatgrievance.HealsotoldMissJonesthetruthofthematterinfrontofeveryone.Afterhearingthis,MissJonesshowedalookofregretonherface.Sheimmediatelyapologizedtomeandmyparents,admittedhermistake,andreturnedtheconfiscated$300.Theclassmatesalsoapologizedtomeoneafteranother.Thegrievanceandangerinmyheartdissipatedinstantly.Throughthisincident,notonlydidIclearmyname,butIalsounderstoodthatIshouldstaycalmwhenfacingmisunderstandingsandbelievethatthetruthwillalwayscometolight.Atthesametime,italsomadeeveryoneunderstandthatweshouldnoteasilysuspectandaccuseothersandshouldrelyonfacts.14升级版范文呈现Finally,myparentsreturnedhomeandsatdownwithmeforaheart-to-hearttalk.TearswelledupinmyeyesasIrecountedtheentireincidentinpainstakingdetail.Uponhearingmystory,myparents'browsfurroweddeeply,theirfacesetchedwithconcernandsympathyformyordeal.TheywereunwaveringintheirbeliefthatIwasinnocentandweredeterminedtofightforjusticeonmybehalf.Theverynextday,theyaccompaniedmetoschoolandsoughtoutMissJones.Withgreatsincerity,theyexplainedthesituationtoher,emphasizinghowunjustitwastolabelmeasathiefandexpelmefromschoolsolelybasedonthe$300inmywallet,withoutanyconcreteevidence.TheyurgedMissJonestoconductathoroughreinvestigation,stressingthatnostudentshouldbewronglyaccused.Afterlisteningattentively,thoughMissJoneswasinitiallyhesitant,shegraduallycametorealizetherashnessofherdecision.Eventually,sheagreedtoreconsiderthematterandgiveitamorecarefulthought.15升级版范文呈现JustasMissJoneshadacquiescedtomyparents'suggestion,Stevenburstintotheroom.Hisfacewasfilledwithguilt,andheheldanenvelopetightlyinhishandashemadeabeelinetowardsme.Itturnedoutthatwhilesortingthroughhisclothes,Stevenhadstumbleduponthemissing$300tuckedawayinthepocketofacoat.Asuddenrealizationdawnedonhimthathehadstashedthemoneythereearlierandhadcompletelyforgottenaboutitwhenhechangedhisoutfit.Stevenofferedmeaheartfeltapology,hisvoicelacedwithremorseasheadmittedthathiscarelessnesshadcausedmesomuchdistress.HethenproceededtosharethewholetruthwithMissJones,rightinfrontofallofus.Uponhearingtherevelation,MissJones'faceflushedwithembarrassmentandregret.Sheimme