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专四-写作辅导1商英教研室1/34主要内容评分标准&写作问题自我剖析&互评题型分析&应对模板2/34一、评分标准&写作问题剖析3/34What’swrongwithyourcomposition?知己knowaboutyourself4/34FinishthecompositionintheTEM4.Andreflectontheproblemsaboutyourcomposition.5/346/34内容结构语言得体词汇句子切题；论证充分。有条理；层次清楚。无拼写问题；恰当、准确、地道。无语法错误；无标点问题；句式多样。语气恰当7/341.内容&结构：面对新题型————材料作文，无所适从，轻易跑题，不知道怎么展开？是否条理、层次清楚？2.词汇：拼写错误？用词简单，不地道，显得low?Thispolicycanmakethefarmer’sfinancialburdenlessandless.Thispolicycanrelieve

thefarmer’sfinancialburden.Tobecontinued…8/343.句子：语法错误：主谓一致，虚拟语气…句式单一不高级无新意（是否是模板锅？）9/34模板能够借鉴，但要用有新意！10/34Switchyourcompositionwithyourpartner,andexchangeconstructiveremarksoneachother’scomposition.What’swrongwithyourcomposition?11/34二、题型分析&应对12/34分值：20大于200词45分钟题型：材料作文、命题作文、图表图画作文13/34材料作文&：材料作文Readcarefullythefollowingexcerpt(about…)andthenwriteyourresponseinNOLESSTHAN200words,inwhichyoushould:Summarizethemainmessageoftheexcerpt,andthenCommentonwhether…Youshould(can)supportyourselfwithinformationfromtheexcerpt.14/34材料作文三段式开头：缩写/总结材料→提出个人观点主体：论证自己观点结尾：总结&重申自己观点15/34命题作文三段式开头：引出主题→提出个人观点主体：论证自己观点结尾：总结&重申自己观点图表图画作文三段式开头：描述图表图画内容→提出个人观点主体：论证自己观点结尾：总结&重申自己观点16/34三种题型实质不一样材料作文开头：缩写/总结材料→提出个人观点命题作文：引出主题→提出个人观点图表图画作文：描述图表图画内容→提出个人观点17/34材料作文开头怎样缩写/总结材料1.抓取关键信息&关键句2.怎样缩写提取出来关键句：同义单词/短语替换;去掉修饰成份；用几个抽象概括词取代一堆详细词（比如头衔etc）；假如是引言，用概括后间接引语代替直接引语18/34缩写/总结材料注意事项：1.不要篇幅太长，2.切不可一字不差地照抄原文。19/34Exercise:ThebeginningpartoftheTEM4Writing20/34参考Withthewideuseofintelligentmachines,peoplebegantoworryabouttheirthreattohumanintelligence.Theyholdtheideathateveniftheartificialintelligenceisofgreathelptohumanjobsandfacilitateshumanlife,thedevelopmentoftheartificialintelligencewillunavoidablydeprivehumanofmentaleffortandcausetheregressofbrain.Frommyperspective,…21/34命题作文开头引出话题方法1.背景介绍——改写题干中背景/摆出两种对立观点/简单分析现象原因或结果Nowadays,therefollowsacrazefor…Withthedevelopmentof…,…isbecomingamoreandmoreseriousproblem.Theearly1990ssawanunprecedentedtideof…Inthepastthreedecades,Chinahaswitnesseddramaticimprovementin…Recently,thephenomenonthat…hascausedwideattention/becomeasubjectofwidespreadcontroversy.22/34Otherpeopleareinclinedtothinkthat…Opposedtothisopinion,thereisanotherviewthat…23/342.提问题3.引用24/34图表图画作文开头描述图表图画方法Asisindictedinthechartabove,….Ascanbeseeninthepicture,…Thispictureintendsto…25/34三、模板26/34（一）通用模板题型材料作文命题作文图画图表作文共性：除了开头略有不一样，开头：…+提出自己观点主体：论证自己观点结尾：总结、重申自己观点27/341.开头：提出自己观点模板Weighingupthesetwoarguments,Iprefertheformer/latterone.Inmyview/opinion,…Asforme,I’minfavorof…AsfarasIamconcerned,Ithink..Frommypointofview,…Personally,..28/342.主体：论证自己观点模板1）引出理由Therearemanyreasonsexplaining/accountingfor/contributingtomyview.Therearemanyreasonswhichmayaccountfor..Therearemanyfactorsdeciding/influencing..Thefollowingreasonscanaccountfor/support/prove….Thereasonsfor..mainlylieinthefollowing..aspects.Thisargumentcanbeprovedbythefollowingfacts.29/342)举例论证Therearenumerousexamplessupportingthisargument.Therearemanyexampleswhichcansupportthisargument.Let’stake…asan/anotherexample.Acaseinpointis…Agoodexampletoillustrateis…Forinstance，…30/343.结尾：总结、重申自己观点1)总结：Consideringtheabove-mentioned,Ithink..Alltheabove-mentionedtellsusthat..Therefore,…Judgingfromtheevidenceoffered,wemightsafelydrawtheconclusionthat..Toconclude/Inaword/Insum/Ingeneral..Therefore,itissafetodrawtheconclusionthat…2)强调重申(强调句/倒装句/虚拟语气)Onlyinthiswaycanpeople…Itishightimethatwe…Itis…that…31/34常见作文内容类型立场选择型既定观点型提议方法型利弊分析型题型（3）材料作文命题作文图画图表作文∽32/34提议方法型模板Itishightimeforustotakesomeeffective