读后续写-窗前乌鸦映照出亲情的+“温差”+讲义 高三第一次模拟考试英语试题+

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。An80-year-oldmanwassittingonthesofainhishousealongwithhis45-year-oldhighlyeducatedson.Suddenlyacrow（乌鸦）landedontheirwindow.Thefatheraskedhisson,“Whatisthis?”Thesonreplied,“Itisacrow.”Afterafewminutes,thefatheraskedhissonforthesecondtime,"Whatisthis?"Thesonsaid,"Dad,Ihavejusttoldyou.It'sacrow!"Afteralittlewhile,theoldfatheragainaskedhissonforthethirdtime,“Whatisthis?”Atthistimesomeexpressionofimpatiencewasfeltintheson'stonewhenhesaidtohisfathercoldly.“It’sacrow,acrow.”Alittlewhilelater,thefatheragainaskedhissonforthefourthtime,“Whatisthis?”Thistime,thesonshoutedathisfather,“Whydoyoukeepaskingmethesamequestionagainandagain,althoughIhavetoldyousomanytimes'ITISACROW'?Areyounotabletounderstandthis?”Alittlewhilelater，thefatherwenttohisroomandcamebackwithanoldtattered（破旧的）diary，whichhehadmaintainedsincehissonwasborn.Onopeningapage，heaskedhissontoreadthatpage.Thefollowingwordswerewritteninthediary:“Todaymylittleson,agedthree,wassittingwithmeonthesofa,whenacrowwassittingonthewindow.Mysonaskedme23timeswhatitwas,andIrepliedtohimall23timesthatitwasacrow.Ihuggedhimlovinglyeachtimeheaskedmethesamequestion.IdidnotfeelangryatallbutIfeltloveformycuriousson."注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Afterreadingthediary,thesonwasfilledwithtears.Afterreadingthediary,thesonwasfilledwithtears.Feelingashamed,thesongotdownonhiskneesbeforehisfather.文章大意文章讲述了一位80岁的父亲和45岁高学历儿子之间的故事。当一只乌鸦落在窗户上时，父亲多次询问儿子这是什么，从最初的正常询问，到后来儿子渐渐不耐烦，甚至对父亲大声吼叫。之后父亲回房间拿出一本从儿子三岁起就开始记录的破旧日记，日记里记载着儿子三岁时看到乌鸦，问了23次“这是什么”，父亲每次都耐心回答，还满心爱意地拥抱儿子，丝毫没有生气。通过今昔对比，展现出父子之间情感态度的巨大反差，引发读者对亲情、孝道以及耐心陪伴的思考。故事山分析开端：80岁父亲和45岁儿子在家中，乌鸦落在窗户上，父亲开始询问儿子“这是什么”。发展：父亲多次重复询问，儿子从正常回答到不耐烦，最后对父亲大声吼叫。高潮：父亲拿出记载儿子小时候问同样问题的日记，形成强烈对比。结局（待续写）：儿子看到日记后的反应，以及父子之间关系的转变或后续发展。伏笔以及在续写中的回应父亲多次询问：为后面揭示日记内容做铺垫，续写中儿子看到日记后会对自己之前的不耐烦感到愧疚，从而回应父亲的询问这一情节。儿子的不耐烦：与小时候父亲的耐心形成对比，续写中儿子会反思自己的行为，体现亲情的变化。父亲去房间拿日记：暗示日记内容与乌鸦问题有关，续写中日记内容成为儿子情感转变的关键。日记破旧：表明日记记录时间长，里面的内容是多年前的真实写照，增强故事的可信度，在续写中可强调日记的年代感对儿子的触动。父亲从儿子出生就开始记录日记：体现父亲对儿子的爱，续写中儿子会意识到父亲多年来的付出和爱。续写要点（两段）第一段：儿子看到日记后的内心活动，如震惊、愧疚、懊悔等，可描述他回忆起小时候父亲对自己的种种关爱，以及对自己刚才对父亲态度的自责。第二段：儿子向父亲表达歉意，父子之间进行情感交流，或者描述此后父子关系的变化，也可以升华主题，表达对亲情的珍惜。情感线儿子最初对父亲反复询问感到不耐烦，甚至大声吼叫，此时他的情感是烦躁和不满的。当看到日记后，他的情感发生了巨大转变，内心充满了震惊、愧疚和懊悔。他意识到自己对父亲的态度是多么恶劣，回忆起父亲曾经的耐心和关爱，心中满是自责。最后他向父亲表达歉意，情感转为对父亲的敬爱和对亲情的珍惜。故事线父亲询问儿子乌鸦相关问题。儿子从耐心回答到不耐烦吼叫。父亲拿出日记。儿子阅读日记。儿子内心反思与情感转变。儿子向父亲道歉，父子关系变化。主旨升华句Thisstoryteachesusthatloveshouldbereciprocal,andweshouldalwayscherishandrespectourparentswhohavegivenussomuchloveandpatience.Itremindsusthatnomatterhowoldweare,ourparents'loveremainsconstant,andweshouldreturnthatlovewiththesamepatienceandkindness.Inthejourneyoflife,weshouldneverforgettheloveandcareourparentshaveshownus,andalwaystreatthemwithgratitudeandrespect.Thistaleservesasapoignantreminderthatpatienceandlovearethecornerstonesofaharmoniousfamily,andweshouldstrivetomaintaintheminourrelationships.Throughthisstory,welearnthatthemostpreciousthinginlifeistheloveofourfamily,andweshouldnevertakeitforgranted.写作示范一Afterreadingthepage,thesonwascompletelystunned.Hiseyeswidenedindisbeliefasherealizedhowmuchhehadchanged.Memoriesofhisfather'sselflessloveandcarefloodedbacktohim.Hefeltadeepsenseofshameforhisimpatientbehaviorjustnow.Hisheartwasfilledwithremorse.Slowly,hewalkeduptohisfather,hisheadbowedinguilt."Dad,I'msosorry,"hesaidwithachokedvoice."Ishouldn'thavebeensoimpatientwithyou.Thankyouforalwayslovingme."Thefathersmiledgently,pattinghissonontheshoulder.Fromthatdayon,thesonmadeapromisetohimselftobemorepatientandlovingtowardshisfather,cherishingeverymomenttheyspenttogether.写作示范二Asthesonfinishedreadingthediary,hisfaceflushedwithembarrassment.Tearswelledupinhiseyesasheunderstoodhowmuchhehadhurthisfather.Hecouldn'tbelievehowcalloushehadbeen.Hesatthere,frozeninhisseat,lostinthoughtaboutallthetimeshisfatherhadbeenthereforhim.Finally,hesummonedupthecouragetofacehisfather.Kneelingdowninfrontofhim,hesaid,"Dad,I'mtrulysorry.Iwaswrong.Yourloveformehasalwaysbeensodeep,andIwasblindtoit."Thefatherembracedhisson,andtheybothwept.Fromthenon,theirrelationshipgrewevenstronger,andthesonbecameamorefilialandcaringchild.参考答案Theson'seyesfixedonthewordsinthediary,andawaveofshamewashedoverhim.Histhroattightened,andhewasunabletoutteraword.Imagesofhisfather'sgentlefaceandpatientresponsesfromhischildhoodflashedbeforehiseyes.Comparinghisfather'sboundlesspatienceinthepastwithhisownrudenessjustnow,hefeltanoverwhelmingsenseofguilt.Slowly,heliftedhishead,hiseyesbrimmingwithtears."Dad,"hesaidinahoarsevoice,"I'msosorry.Ishouldn'thavebeensoimpatient.You'vealwaysbeensolovingandpatientwithme,andI...Ilet