读后续写+老人冬天生日派对故事+讲义 高二上学期教学质量检测英语试题

读后续写阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。Tessawoketothesoundofsnowplowsandrushedtothewindow,hereyeswidewithexcitement.Seeingtheworldblanketedinwhite,sheexclaimed(大叫)withdelightatthesightofthesnowylawn,sidewalk,andtheirredcarhiddenbeneaththesnow.Itwasthefirstsnowshecouldrememberinalongtime.Shestuffedherfeetintoherslippersanddashedtothekitchen,wherethesweetnessofbananapancakesfilledtheair.Sheslidtoastopinfrontofthewallcalendar,herfingersdancingacrossthedatesbeforefindingtherightdate:December21.SheannouncedtohermotherthatitwastheFirstDayofWinter.“TodayisOldManWinter’sbirthday,Mom!”Tessascreamed,jumpingupanddown.Curious,TessaaskedwhoOldManWinterwas.Hermothersmiled,pointingatthewinterskythroughthekitchenwindow.“Hebringsuswintereachyear,alongwiththesnow.”Excitedly,Tessaaskediftheywouldhaveabirthdaypartyforhim.Hermother,returningtothepancakes,gentlyrepliedthatwhileitwouldbefun,shewastoobusythatday.Disappointed,Tessafrowned,thinkingitwasunfairthattherewasnobirthdaypartyplanned.Butthen,abrightideastruckher.Afterbreakfast,shephonedherbestfriends,SarahandAndrew,tellingthemtomeetherattheplaygroundinfifteenminutes.Wrappedupinherpurplesnowsuit,Tessamarchedthroughthesnow-coveredsidewalkandenteredtheplayground.Tessagrinnedatthesightofherfriends—thetwinslookedsohappyswinginghighintotheaironthewoodenplayset.Theirgigglesechoedoffthemerry-go-roundandslidesastheyleapedfromtheswings,landinginthesoftsnow.Tessarantogreetthem,herfacelitupwithenthusiasm.Shegreetedthemandaskediftheyknewwhatdayitwas.Theyshooktheirheads,puzzled.Tessagrinned,explainingthattodaywasOldManWinter’sbirthdayandtheyweregoingtothrowhimaparty.Excitedly,Sarahagreedandaskedwhattheyshoulddofirst.Tessasuggestedtheymakeasnowcake.注意：（1）续写词数应为150个左右；（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Thethreefriendseagerlygottowork,readytocelebrate.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________“Candles!”Sarahremembered.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________老人冬天生日派对故事续写一、续写要点（两段）第一段：在孩子们成功举办派对后，着重描写他们之间的互动。比如他们互相分享对OldManWinter的祝福内容，交流在派对筹备过程中最难忘的瞬间。可以添加一些有趣的小细节，如Tessa不小心滑倒在雪地里，大家一起欢笑帮忙扶起她的场景，进一步展现孩子们之间的友谊和派对的欢乐氛围。第二段：讲述派对结束后孩子们回家的情景。描述他们带着满足的心情回到各自家中，向家人讲述派对的精彩过程，家人对他们创意和善良的赞扬。接着展望未来，孩子们期待下一次为OldManWinter庆祝生日，或者计划在其他季节为大自然举办类似的庆祝活动，体现他们对自然的热爱和对生活的积极态度。二、情感线（150字）故事起始于Tessa发现下雪后的兴奋，对为OldManWinter举办生日派对充满期待。在派对筹备过程中，孩子们热情高涨，满怀喜悦地制作雪蛋糕、寻找装饰和“蜡烛”。派对成功举办时，他们兴奋激动，充满成就感。回家分享派对经历时，自豪满满，收获家人赞扬后内心温暖。展望未来庆祝活动时，又充满期待，情感从最初的兴奋期待，历经欢乐满足，最终升华为对生活和自然的持续热爱与积极展望。三、故事线（6条）孩子们分享为OldManWinter许下的生日愿望，各自的愿望体现对冬天不同的美好期待。Tessa滑倒后，朋友们的关心与帮助，展现他们之间深厚的友谊。孩子们回家向家人讲述派对过程，家人的惊讶、赞赏与鼓励。孩子们交流派对筹备中最开心的环节，如找到独特装饰的时刻。孩子们计划下一次为OldManWinter庆祝生日的初步想法，比如准备更特别的礼物。讨论在其他季节为大自然举办类似庆祝活动的创意，如春天为花仙子举办派对。四、主旨升华句5句英文ThisbirthdaypartyforOldManWinternotonlybroughtjoytothechildrenbutalsokindledtheirdeep-seatedlovefornatureandthespiritofcelebration.Throughtheirsimpleyetheartfeltcelebration,thekidslearnedthebeautyofsharingjoyandcreatingmemories,enrichingtheirchildhoodexperiences.Thechildren'sactofthrowingapartyforOldManWintershowsthateventhesmallestgesturesofkindnessandcreativitycanaddmagictoourlivesandtheworldaroundus.ThisadventureofcelebratingOldManWinter'sbirthdayservesasareminderthatnatureisasourceofendlessinspirationandwonder,andweshouldcherishandcelebrateit.Thestoryofthesekids'celebrationforOldManWinterrevealsthatthepureheartsofchildrencantransformordinarydaysintoextraordinaryones,filledwithloveandwarmth.五、写作示范详细叙事风格Afterthecandleswereblownout,thethreefriendssatinthesnow,beamingwithhappiness.“IwishedthatOldManWinterwouldbringevenmoresnownextyearsowecanbuildbiggersnowmen,”Tessasaid,hereyesshining.Andrewchimedin,“Ihopedhewouldmaketheiceonthelakethickenoughforustoskate.”Sarahsharedherwishformorebeautifulsnowflakes.Astheychatted,Tessaaccidentallyslippedonthesnow,andherfriendsrushedtohelpherup,theirlaughterfillingtheair.Whentheyfinallyreturnedhome,theycouldn'twaittotelltheirfamiliesabouttheparty.Theirparentslistenedintently,theirfacesfilledwithpride.“Youkidsaresocreativeandkind-hearted,”Tessa'smompraised.Thechildrenalreadystarteddiscussingtheirplansfornextyear'scelebration.“MaybewecanmakeasnowcastleforOldManWinter,”Andrewsuggested.Theywerelookingforwardtoanotherwonderfulcelebration,readytoembracemoreofnature'smagic.活泼明快风格Oncethecandleswereout,thekidswereallhypedup.“Guys,IwishedOldManWinterwouldgiveusasnow-dayeveryweek!”Tessaexclaimed,jumpingupanddown.Andrewlaughed,“Iaskedforasnow-slideinthepark!”Sarahaddedherwishtoo.Suddenly,Tessatookatumbleinthesnow.Herfriendsburstoutlaughingbutquicklyhelpedherup.Backhome,theywerelikeexcitedlittlebirds,tellingtheirfamiliesallabouttheparty.Theirparentsweresuperimpressed.“Youguysareawesome!”Sarah'sdadsaid.Thekidswerealreadythinkingahead.“Nextyear,let'smakeahugesnow-cakewithrealicing,”Tessasaid.Theycouldn'twaitforthenextchancetocelebrateOldManWinterandhavemorefuninnature.参考答案Thethreefriendseagerlygottowork,readytocelebrate.Tessa,withagleaminhereye,tookthelead,herarmsscoopingandpackingsnow.Sarahpressedhermitten-cladhandsagainstthesnow,pressingitfirmlyintoasmoothsurface.Andrew,withaplayfulgrin,rolledamassivesnowballwithglovedhands,hislegspushingandguidingitacrosstheplayground.Theirbreathsfoggedtheair,andtheircheeksglowedrosyfromthecold.Theyworkedtogether,Tessashapingthecake’slayers,Sarahpattingthesidessmooth,andAndrewfoundpinecones,twigs,andevenafewbrightredberriesscatteredontheplayground.Withgigglesandlaughter,theyadornedthebigsnowycakethatwouldmakeOldManWinterproud.“Candles!”Sarahremembered.Andrewquicklym