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阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。AsValentine’sDay,atimeforexpressingaffectionthroughtheexchangeofpresents,drewnear,Kendrafoundherselfseatedatthekitchentable,carefullypenninghernameonValentine’scardsforherclassmates.Sherecognizedherownhesitation;wordsdidn’tcomeeasilytoher.Whilesheenviedtheeasewithwhichherpeerstalkedandlaughed,hershynessoftenkeptherquiet.Kendragrabbedanothercard..Hereyeslitupatthephrase“You’redynamite(引起轰动的人或物)!”—atermthatwouldundoubtedlydelightherGrammy,whofrequentlyusedtheexpressiontopraisetheirfestivedecorations.“Well,thatlooksdynamite!”Grammywouldexclaim,herapprovalfillingKendrawithwarmth.JustasKendrawassigningthecards,hermothercamein,sharingthesadnewsofElise,theirneighbor,andherrecentaccidentthatledtoabrokenleg,restrictinghertohomeschoolingforthecomingweeks.KendrafeltsorryforElise,andquicklypickedthemostsplendidvalentine,hurryingtoElise’shome.Uponarrival,Kendra’slookfelluponthelife-sizeddeerstatuedecoratingthefrontyard.Shestudiedit,sayingtoherself,“Wouldn’tthisdeerlookcoolwithabigheartaroundhisneck?ElisecouldlookoutofthewindowandseeitdecoratedforValentine’sday.”Withthisidea,KendragotthesizableredheartherGrammyhadgivenher,tieditwithstring,andhungitaroundthestatue’snecklikeafestivechain.Thenextday,shedecoratedtheantlers(鹿角)withavarietyofsmallerhearts.ItwasduringthisactofkindnessthatColinandAmy,Elise’sfellowclassmates,happeneduponthescene.“AreyoudecoratingElise’sdeerforValentine’sDay?”theyasked.Kendraconfirmedwithanod,explainingherintentiontocheerupElise.Despiteheruncertaintyaboutwhattoaddnext,Colinproposedaddingsomecolor,whileAmysuggestedputtingdecorationsonthedeer’sbackandforehead.Unitedbyasharedpurpose,theyagreedtomeetlater.注意:1.续写词数应为150左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Thatafternoon,theymettodecoratethedeerwiththematerialstheyhadsourced._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Justthen,Elise’sfrontdooropened,andElisestuckherheadout._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________文章大意情人节临近,害羞的Kendra在为同学们写情人节贺卡时,看到“你真了不起”这样的话语,想到常这样夸赞自己的奶奶。此时妈妈告知邻居Elise因意外摔断腿,需在家学习几周,Kendra心生同情,带着最漂亮的情人节贺卡去看望Elise。看到Elise家院子里的鹿雕像,Kendra想到用奶奶给的大红心装饰它,让Elise能从窗户看到。第二天,她继续装饰鹿角,这时Elise的同学Colin和Amy路过,了解情况后,三人决定一起为鹿雕像做更多装饰。故事山分析开端:情人节将至,害羞的Kendra写贺卡,妈妈带来邻居Elise受伤的消息。发展:Kendra决定装饰Elise家院子里的鹿雕像,Colin和Amy加入。高潮(续写部分):三人完成装饰,Elise看到装饰后的惊喜反应。结局:大家收获快乐,友谊得以增进,善良得到传递。伏笔以及在续写中的回应Kendra的害羞:续写中她勇敢地和Colin、Amy一起完成装饰,逐渐克服害羞,变得更加开朗。奶奶的夸赞:奶奶的夸赞让Kendra感到温暖,这种温暖促使她将善意传递给Elise,续写中她的行为也为Elise带来温暖。Elise的意外:因为Elise受伤在家,才有了Kendra等人装饰鹿雕像为她带来快乐的故事,续写中Elise看到装饰后的惊喜,体现了大家对她的关怀。Kendra看到鹿雕像想到装饰它:这一想法为后续装饰行动做铺垫,续写中大家围绕这个想法进一步完善装饰。Colin和Amy的加入:续写中三人齐心协力完成装饰,他们的加入丰富了故事内容,体现了合作的力量。续写要点(两段)第一段:详细描述三人如何用找来的材料装饰鹿雕像,如Colin可能带来彩色颜料给鹿雕像上色,Amy带来彩带系在鹿的身上,Kendra继续用更多的心形装饰点缀细节,大家一边讨论一边分工合作,使鹿雕像变得越来越漂亮。第二段:描写Elise看到装饰后的鹿雕像的反应,她可能惊讶地捂住嘴巴,眼中闪烁着感动的泪花,然后对大家表示感谢,大家一起交流,分享彼此的想法,Kendra感受到和朋友一起帮助他人带来的快乐,性格也变得更加开朗。情感线起初,Kendra因害羞在社交中有些退缩,得知Elise受伤后,她出于同情主动行动起来。在装饰鹿雕像时,她和Colin、Amy相遇并合作,逐渐克服内心的羞涩,投入到为Elise带来快乐的行动中。当Elise看到装饰后,大家都收获了感动和喜悦,Kendra也从这次经历中获得自信,感受到友谊和善良带来的温暖,性格变得更加积极向上。故事线情人节前夕Kendra写贺卡。妈妈告知Elise受伤的消息。Kendra决定装饰Elise家的鹿雕像。Colin和Amy加入装饰行动。三人完成对鹿雕像的装饰。Elise看到装饰后的反应及大家的交流。主旨升华句5句英文Smallactsofkindness,whencombinedwiththepoweroffriendship,cancreateabigimpactandbringjoytoothers'lives.Intheprocessofhelpingothers,wenotonlyspreadlovebutalsoovercomeourownweaknessesandgrowasindividuals.Truefriendshipisforgedinthesharedpursuitofbringinghappinesstothoseinneed,justlikewhatKendra,Colin,andAmydid.Asimpleidea,drivenbycompassion,canturnintoabeautifulgesturethatwarmstheheartsofboththegiverandthereceiver.Valentine'sDay,adayoflove,servesasareminderthatactsofkindness,nomatterhowsmall,canbrightensomeone'sworldandstrengthenthebondsamongpeople.写作示范一Thatafternoon,theymettodecoratethedeerwiththematerialstheyhadsourced.Colinbroughtcolorfulpaintsandcarefullypaintedthedeer'shoovesbrightred.Amyarrivedwithlong,shinyribbons,whichsheskillfullytiedaroundthedeer'sbody,creatingbeautifulbows.Kendraaddedmoreheartsshehadmade,somewithglitteryedges.Theychattedandlaughedastheyworked,andKendrafoundherselfspeakingmorefreelythaneverbefore.TheircombinedeffortstransformedthedeerintoaspectacularValentine'sdisplay.

Justthen,Elise'sfrontdooropened,andElisestuckherheadout.Hereyeswidenedinastonishmentasshetookinthedecorateddeer."Ohmygoodness!"sheexclaimed."Thisisamazing!Thankyousomuch!"Kendra,Colin,andAmyrushedovertoher,andtheyallstartedtalkingatonce,sharingtheirideasandhowmuchtheywantedtocheerherup.Kendrafeltawarmglowinside.Hershynesswasfadingaway,replacedbythejoyoffriendshipandthesatisfactionofmakingadifference.写作示范二Thatafternoon,theymettodecoratethedeerwiththematerialstheyhadsourced.Amyhadfoundsomeshinytinsel,whichshewrappedaroundthedeer'santlers,makingthemsparkleinthesunlight.Colinbroughtlargecardboardcut-outsofCupids,whichtheyattachedtothedeer'ssides.Kendraaddedmoreheart-shapedballoons,tyingthemtothedeer'slegs.Astheyworked,theirconversationflowedeasily,andKendrarealizedthathershynesswasn'tabarrieranymore.Thedeerwasbecomingamasterpiece.

Justthen,Elise'sfrontdooropened,andElisestuckherheadout.Shewasspeechlessforamoment,hereyesfilledwithtearsofhappiness."Ican'tbelieveyoudidthisforme!"shefinallymanagedtosay.Kendrasmiled,feelingasenseofaccomplishment.Theyallsatontheporch,chattingandlaughing,andKendraknewthatthisValentine'sDaywouldbeoneshewouldneverforget.Itwasn'tjustaboutdecoratingadeer;itwasaboutfriendship,kindness,andsteppingoutofhercomfortzone.【答案】参考范文Thatafternoon,theymettodecoratethedeerwiththematerialstheyhadsourced.Colin,withhisartistictouch,laidtheredblanketoverthedeer’sback,givingitafestivelook.Meanwhile,Kendra,feelingasparkofcreativity,carefullyplacedsparklyheart-shapedstickersuponthedeer’sforehead,addingabitoffun.“Thatlookssocute!”Amyexclaimed.Then,theydec

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