Unit5MusicReadingforWriting课件高中英语人教版22

Unit5MusicReadingforWritingWriteaspeechPre-readingAspeechsendsamessagetoaudience.Thegoalofaspeechistoconnectwiththeaudience,toattractthemandfinallytoinfluencethem.AgoodspeechhasaclearstructureattractstheaudiencefocusesononetopicReadingformainideasIntroductionSarah’sadviceandhopeGivingthankstoaudienceSarah’spersonalexperienceTheimpactsofmusiconSarahpara2para1para5para3para4focusononetopicReadingforstructureIntroductionSarah’sadviceandhopeGivingthankstoaudienceSarah’spersonalexperienceTheimpactsofmusiconSarahhasaclearstructureBeginningBodyEndingTip1:Appropriatestructuremakesthespeechsmooth,logicalandcoherent条理的ReadingfordetailsinthebeginningGoodmorning!MynameisSarah

Williams.It'sanhonourtobehereand

tosharewithyouthestoryofhowmusic

hashadanimpactonmylife.Beginning(para1)GreettheaudienceIntroduceyourselfProposethetopicGoodmorning，ladiesandgentlemen.Mynameis×××,andI’mheretotalkabout×××.×××yearsago,×××Hello.Mynameis×××,andIfeelreallyhonoredtoshare×××withyou.×××yearsago,×××WritingabeginningPara1Greeting+Introduction+TopicPara2Haveyoueverfacedatimewhenthingslookeddarkandyouhadnohopeatall?Twoyearsago,IwastoldIhadaseriousdiseasewhichwasdifficulttocure.MybodyachedallthetimeandthusIthoughtIdidn’thavemuchlongertolive.IwasveryafraidandIfeltsoaloneanddiscouraged.Thenoneday,Ihadtogothroughatwo-hourmedicaltreatment.Thedoctorwantedmetorelax,sohehadmelistentosomemusic,andoneofthesongswas“Happy”.ThesongmademefeelsomuchbetterthatfromthenonIbegantolistentomusicallthetime.JohnA.Logansaid,“Musicisthemedicineofthemind.”Andit’strue.Musichelpedmerecover.Doyouknowhowtowriteaspeech?Myexperiencewithmusic—Musichelpedmerecover.Haveyoueverfacedatimewhenthingslookeddarkandyouhadnohopeatall?Twoyearsago,IwastoldIhadaseriousdisease

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wasdifficulttocure.MybodyachedallthetimeandthusIthoughtIdidn’thavemuchlongertolive.IwasveryafraidandIfeltsoaloneanddiscouraged.Thenoneday,Ihadtogothroughatwo-hourmedicaltreatment.Thedoctorwantedmetorelax,sohehadmelistentosomemusic,andoneofthesongswas“Happy”.ThesongmademefeelsomuchbetterthatfromthenonIbegantolistentomusicallthetime.JohnA.Logansaid,“Musicisthemedicineofthemind.”Andit’strue.Musichelpedmerecover.ReadingfordetailsinthebodyThreeyearsagoThenonedayFromthenonWhatHowhadaseriousdiseaselistentomusicbeforeamedicaltreatmentmusichelpedherrecoverhappysomuchbetterafraid,alone,discouragedtimelineeventfeelingpersonalstoryattractstheaudienceReadingforlanguagefeaturesMusicgavemehappiness.WhenIlistenedtomusic,itmademyspiritsflylikeakiteinthewind.Musicgavemestrengthandbroughtmerelief.ItwastherockIleantontobecomestrongandtogetthroughthosehardtimes.Moreover,musicgavemehopeandasenseofsatisfaction.Itbecamemybestfriend.Itspokewordsofencouragementtothedeepestpartofmybeing.repetitionmetaphor暗喻attractstheaudiencesimile明喻personificationTip2:ProperrhetoricaldevicesmakethespeechvividandimpressiveOfcourse,Ihopenoneofyouhavetogothroughthesamekindofsufferingthatldid.Atthesametime,weallgothroughvariousperiodswhenwefeelsadoralone.Duringthosetimes,musiccanhelpyouinthesamewaythatithelpedme.Ihopeallofyouwillsomehowbegintotreasuremusicandmakeitapartofyourlife.Thankyou!ReadingfordetailsintheendingexpresshopeandadvicethanktheaudienceEnding(para4-5)1

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relate...to...依赖满足感同样的；以同样的方式把……与……联系起来ImitateandWriteMetaphor:音乐是治愈我悲伤最好的药物。Personification:音乐是最好的医生。Quote:正如朗费罗Longfellow)所说：音乐是人类通用的语言。Musicisthebestmedicinetohealmysadness.Musicismybestdoctor.asLongfellowsays,“Musicistheuniversallanguageofmankind.”ImitateandWriteRepetition:

音乐帮我忆起我多么思念她！音乐帮我回想起我们所拥有的美好时光!音乐帮我学会感激我们一起度过的时光！Rhetoricalquestion:你曾经有没有听过一首对你很有影响的歌曲？Simile(verb+like):音乐像一束温暖的阳光。ThismusichelpsmerememberhowmuchImissher！Ithelpsmerememberallthegreattimeswehad！Andmusichelpsmebegratefulforthattimetogether！

Haveyoueverheardapieceofmusicthathasagreateffectonyou?Musicisawarmrayofsunshine.Doyouknowhowtowriteaspeech?假如你是李华，打算参加学校组织的一场以“音乐”为主题的演讲比赛。请根据下面提示写一篇演讲稿。1.曾经考前紧张，无法入眠；2.音乐改变状况。1.Wordsandphrases①紧张的

②到达；来临

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感到气馁

⑥焦虑⑦别无选择只有做……

Writingnervousapproch/aroundthecornerusedtobefallasleepfeeldepressedanxietyhavenochoicebuttodoSentences①很荣幸能在这里与大家分享音乐对我生活的影响。(it’sanhonourtodosth)②老师建议我听音乐。(suggest)③音乐给我力量，给我安慰。(relief)④有机会的时候为什么不试试呢？(whynot)It’sanhonourtobehereandtosharewithyouthestoryofhowmusichashadanimpactonmylife.Myteachersuggestedmelisteningtomusic.Musicgivesmestrengthandbringsmerelief.Whynothaveatrywheneveryouhaveanopportunity?Draftthearticlebyusingthe