专题15书信邮件类之感谢信-2024年中考英语写作常考文体讲练提分秘籍(原卷版+解析)

2024年中考英语写作常考文体讲练提分秘籍专题14书信邮件类之感谢信考情分析考情分析感谢信是对收信人的某一行为表示感谢的信件，通常用于收到别人的邀请或受到别人的帮助时。感谢信的写作目的非常明确，只要把需要感谢的人和事写清楚就行。写作方法指导写作方法指导感谢信的写作，可以分以下三段进行：第一段，简述写信的目的，诚挚地表达谢意，第二段，表明感谢的原因，回顾对方所做的具体事情，第三段，再次向对方表示感谢并表达希望回报对方的愿望。写作模板写作模板Dear，（称呼）①Howisyourlife/study/workrecently?InthisletterIwouldliketothankyouforyour.（原因）／I'mwritingtoexpressmyheartfeltgratitude.②Iamwritingtoyoubecause.（所做的事）Thankstoyourhelp,IWithoutyourhelp,Icouldn't.It'ssokindofyouto.③Thankyouagainforwhatyouhavedone.Ihopetohavethechancetoexpressmythanks.Ihope|canmeetyousometimeandexpressmythanksinperson.(愿望）④Allthebest!Yourssincerely,（署名）注：①问候并表明写作意图②详细描写感谢的原因③再次表示感谢并抒发愿望④表达祝愿模板内容可根据题目要求和具体情况取舍。常用表达常用表达 必备亮点词汇heartfeltadj.衷心的 gratituden.感激 gratefuladj.感谢的，感激的sincerelyadv.真诚地 kindnessn.善良 hospitalityn.热情好客，款待expressv.表达 dosb.afavor帮忙 inperson亲自fromthebottomofone'sheart从心底 fromthebottomofone'sheart ......经典套用句型闪亮篇首句Howtimeflies!时间过得真快啊！Iamwritingtoexpressmyheartfeltgratitude.我写信是想表达我衷心的感激之情。Howisyourstayin...?您在······待着感觉怎么样？IamwritingtoyoubecauseIwanttotellyouapieceofgoodnewsthat....我给您写信是因为我想告诉您一则······的好消息。IamwritingtoyoubecauseIwanttothankyouforyourhospitality.我给您写信是想表达一下对您热情周到的招待的感激之情。I'mwritingtoexpressmythanksfor...我写这封信是为了表达我对······的谢意。Iamwritingtoyoubecause...因为······,我给您写这封信。I'mwritingtothankyouforyourgreathelp!我写信来谢谢你巨大的帮助！出彩篇中句Manythanksforyourkindandwarmhelp.多谢您善良热情的帮助。Thankyouforyourgeneroushospitality.多谢您的款待。Thankstoyourhelp,Icangettheprize.多亏了您的帮助，我才得到了这个奖。精彩篇尾句IhopeIcanexpressmythankstoyouinperson.我希望能够亲自向您表达谢意。I'msincerelygratefulforallyourhelp.对于您的帮助，我真的非常感激。Thankyouforyourkindnesstohavedonemeafavour.对于您的善意的帮忙，我向您表示感谢。Manythanksforallthegoodthingsyouhavedoneinhelpingusto...非常感谢您为帮助我们······所做的一切。Iamgladtohearthatyouwillvisitourschoolsoon.听说您很快会来我们学校参观，我特别高兴。中中考真题精讲（2021·湖北黄石·中考真题）Asanoldsayinggoes,“Atruefriendreachesforyourhandandtouchesyourheart.”假如你叫李华，在你的初中学习生涯中，一定有许多朋友给了你不少帮助。在毕业之际，请给你的好友李雷写一封感谢信。要点：1.感谢他（她）对你的帮助。2.他（她）是如何帮助你的。要求：1.请结合具体事例，适当发挥；语言通顺，意思连贯。2.文中不能出现与本人相关信息。3.80词左右（开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数）。DearLiLei,Howtimeflies!Wearegoingtograduatefromjuniorhighschool._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Wishyouallthebest!Yours,LiHua（2021·广西柳州·中考真题）假设你是李华，某英语网站正在举办以“感恩父母”为主题的征文活动。请根据表格中的内容用英文写一篇题为“ALettertoMyParents”的短文，用于投稿。你的感谢父母养育你、每天为你做饭、生病时照顾你父母信任你、关心你的个人感受、遇到困难时鼓励你你的决心努力学习你的祝愿祝愿父母健康快乐注意：1.词数70左右；2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.短文的开头和结尾部分已给出，不计入总词数；4.文中不得出现真实的人名与校名。参考词汇：感谢某人.....thanksb.for...养育raise做饭cookfood生病besick信任trust关心careabout个人感受personalfeeling处于困难中beintrouble健康的healthyALettertoMyParentsDearMumandDad,I’mwritingtoexpressmythanksforallyourcareandlove.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Thanksagainforeverythingyouhavedoneforme.Love,LiHua（2017·黑龙江·中考真题）假如你是Mary，初中学习生活即将结束，请向你的老师（Mr.White）致谢，感谢他对你一直以来的教育、关心和帮助，并祝福老师健康快乐。DearMr.White,__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Mary名校模拟题提升练10篇名校模拟题提升练10篇1.（2023·湖北武汉·统考模拟预测）假如你是李平，三年的初中生活就要结束了。老师们都很好，你最想感谢Mr.Jin。他在学习上、生活上甚至在你犯错误的时候给予你帮助，请你根据以下内容提示写信给他用英语写封信，表达自己的感激和依依惜别之情。内容提示：Whydoyouwritethisletter?WhatdidMr.Jindotohelpyou?Howdoyoufeelaboutyourmistake?Somethingmoreaboutyourexperience.…注意：字数60-80字；内容要连贯得体，不要逐条翻译；表达流畅、书写整洁，信的首尾已给出，不计入总字数；文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称。DearMr.Jin,Iwillgraduatesoon.Lookingbackatthepastthreeyears,Ihavealottosay._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yourssincerely,LiPing2．（2023·福建厦门·统考二模）感恩是中华民族的传统美德，懂得感恩是生命中的大智慧。初中阶段，一定有人帮助你、陪伴你、感动你。值此毕业之际，以信传情。请你根据要点提示，给你最想感谢的人写一封信，心怀感恩。内容要点：1.表达对他/她的感谢；2.回顾过去暖心的经历；3.传达对他/她的美好祝愿。注意事项：1.必须包含提示内容，可适当发挥；2.意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯；3.请勿在文中使用真实的姓名和校名。Dear,_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua3.（2023·吉林长春·吉林省第二实验学校校考一模）假如你是刘薇，在美国学习期间，你的寄宿家庭布朗夫妇对你帮助很大。下周一，你就要回国了。请给布朗夫妇写一封感谢信，表达你对他们的感激之情。内容：1.感到宾至如归；2.英语进步很大；3.邀请布朗夫妇来长春共度春节。要求：要点齐全；表述通顺；语言简洁；不少于40词。DearMrandMrsBrown,___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Bestwishes.LiuWei4．（2023·吉林长春·统考二模）假如你是学校初三年级的学生会主席(Presidentofthestudentunion)，现在请你代表全校师生，为每天辛勤打扫卫生的环卫工人写一封感谢信。要点包括：①感谢您每日辛勤劳动；②为了保护生态环境，我们坚持不乱扔垃圾，为呵护环境尽一份力；③如果您工作累了可以随时来到我们学校休息，我们为您提供热水和食物。要求：以上要点全部包括，可以适当补充，语言清晰流畅，书写工整，不少于40词。_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________（2023·辽宁丹东·统考一模）假如你叫李华，是一名交换生。为期一年的法国交换生活即将结束，回国前，你的法国同学为你举办了盛大的欢送派对。请写封感谢信，感谢精彩的派对以及在法国期间同学们的帮助，你期待着再次去法国，同时表达你对同学们的祝福。要求：字迹工整，表达清晰有条理。词数30左右。Dearclassmates,_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Bestwishes,LiHua（2023·全国·一模）假如你是Jim。前段时间你的朋友李华一直在帮助你学习中文歌和了解中华文化。现在你已经回国，请你根据以下要点给他写一封感谢信。要点包括：1.表达感激之情；2.回忆各种收获；3.发出邀请。注意：1.必须包含所有要点，词数80-100（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.文中不能出现自己的姓名和学校的名称。DearLiHua,Howareyoudoingthesedays?_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Lookingforwardtoseeingyousoon.Yours,Jim（2023·天津·模拟预测）初中阶段的学习生活即将结束，回想自己在妈妈的关爱和帮助下的成长过程，心中充满感恩之情。请你根据以下要点提示以李华的名义给妈妈写一封感谢信。(1)自从我出生，您就一直照顾我；(2)每天早上早起准备早点、水果，每天晚上做可口的饭菜；(3)每天陪我写作业，复习功课；(4)当我遇上麻烦，您总是鼓励我并帮我解决问题；(5)妈妈，谢谢您……参考词汇：解决solve陪伴accompany要求：(1)词数：80—100个。(2)信的开头已给出，不计入总词数。(3)要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。DearMum,Howtimeflies!Iwillgraduatefrommiddleschool.Withthecareandhelpofyou,Ihavemadegreatprogress.You__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua（2023·新疆乌鲁木齐·统考一模）若说青春是一段旅程，初中三年一定是其重要的一程。回顾过往三年，你一定感慨万千：谁在你成功时为你呐喊？谁在你失败时给你安慰和力量？谁又在你彷徨时指引你前进？也许是父母，也许是老师，也许是同伴……毕业在即，你一定有话想对他们说。假如你是李悦，请围绕以下要点写一篇英文感谢信：（1）Whodoyouwanttowriteto?（2）Whydoyouwanttowritetotheperson?（3）Whathappenedbetweenyouandtheperson?（4）Whathaveyoulearnedfromtheexperience?注意：1.内容必须包含以上要点，并适当发挥；2.文中不得出现真实的人名和校名；3.不少于100词Dear______________,Iamwritingtoexpressmysincerethankstoyoubecause__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Bestwishes,LiYue9．（2023·重庆合川·统考一模）书面表达。拿大中学生Peter在你校学习期满，回国后写一一封感谢信，同时指出了同学们的一些不良行为。假如你是学生会主席李华，请根据要点提示给Peter回一封电子邮件。要点提示：1.表示感谢；2.表达意愿（告别高声喧哗、乱丢乱扔等不良行为）；3.……要求：1.80词左右。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。2.文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。DearPeter,I’mgladtoreceiveyouremail._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Bestwishes!YoursLiHua10．（2022·黑龙江鸡西·校考模拟预测）假如你是刘华，Lucy送你一张英语学习卡作为生日礼物。它对你的学习非常有帮助，你也特别喜欢它。请你给Lucy写一封感谢信，表达你的感激之情。DearLucy,__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiuHua2024年中考英语写作常考文体讲练提分秘籍专题14书信邮件类之感谢信考情分析考情分析感谢信是对收信人的某一行为表示感谢的信件，通常用于收到别人的邀请或受到别人的帮助时。感谢信的写作目的非常明确，只要把需要感谢的人和事写清楚就行。写作方法指导写作方法指导感谢信的写作，可以分以下三段进行：第一段，简述写信的目的，诚挚地表达谢意，第二段，表明感谢的原因，回顾对方所做的具体事情，第三段，再次向对方表示感谢并表达希望回报对方的愿望。写作模板写作模板Dear，（称呼）①Howisyourlife/study/workrecently?InthisletterIwouldliketothankyouforyour.（原因）／I'mwritingtoexpressmyheartfeltgratitude.②Iamwritingtoyoubecause.（所做的事）Thankstoyourhelp,IWithoutyourhelp,Icouldn't.It'ssokindofyouto.③Thankyouagainforwhatyouhavedone.Ihopetohavethechancetoexpressmythanks.Ihope|canmeetyousometimeandexpressmythanksinperson.(愿望）④Allthebest!Yourssincerely,（署名）注：①问候并表明写作意图②详细描写感谢的原因③再次表示感谢并抒发愿望④表达祝愿模板内容可根据题目要求和具体情况取舍。常用表达常用表达 必备亮点词汇heartfeltadj.衷心的 gratituden.感激 gratefuladj.感谢的，感激的sincerelyadv.真诚地 kindnessn.善良 hospitalityn.热情好客，款待expressv.表达 dosb.afavor帮忙 inperson亲自fromthebottomofone'sheart从心底 fromthebottomofone'sheart ......经典套用句型闪亮篇首句Howtimeflies!时间过得真快啊！Iamwritingtoexpressmyheartfeltgratitude.我写信是想表达我衷心的感激之情。Howisyourstayin...?您在······待着感觉怎么样？IamwritingtoyoubecauseIwanttotellyouapieceofgoodnewsthat....我给您写信是因为我想告诉您一则······的好消息。IamwritingtoyoubecauseIwanttothankyouforyourhospitality.我给您写信是想表达一下对您热情周到的招待的感激之情。I'mwritingtoexpressmythanksfor...我写这封信是为了表达我对······的谢意。Iamwritingtoyoubecause...因为······,我给您写这封信。I'mwritingtothankyouforyourgreathelp!我写信来谢谢你巨大的帮助！出彩篇中句Manythanksforyourkindandwarmhelp.多谢您善良热情的帮助。Thankyouforyourgeneroushospitality.多谢您的款待。Thankstoyourhelp,Icangettheprize.多亏了您的帮助，我才得到了这个奖。精彩篇尾句IhopeIcanexpressmythankstoyouinperson.我希望能够亲自向您表达谢意。I'msincerelygratefulforallyourhelp.对于您的帮助，我真的非常感激。Thankyouforyourkindnesstohavedonemeafavour.对于您的善意的帮忙，我向您表示感谢。Manythanksforallthegoodthingsyouhavedoneinhelpingusto...非常感谢您为帮助我们······所做的一切。Iamgladtohearthatyouwillvisitourschoolsoon.听说您很快会来我们学校参观，我特别高兴。中中考真题精讲（2021·湖北黄石·中考真题）Asanoldsayinggoes,“Atruefriendreachesforyourhandandtouchesyourheart.”假如你叫李华，在你的初中学习生涯中，一定有许多朋友给了你不少帮助。在毕业之际，请给你的好友李雷写一封感谢信。要点：1.感谢他（她）对你的帮助。2.他（她）是如何帮助你的。要求：1.请结合具体事例，适当发挥；语言通顺，意思连贯。2.文中不能出现与本人相关信息。3.80词左右（开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数）。DearLiLei,Howtimeflies!Wearegoingtograduatefromjuniorhighschool._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Wishyouallthebest!Yours,LiHua【参考范文】DearLiLei,Howtimeflies!Wearegoingtograduatefromjuniorhighschool.Howisyourstudyrecently?InthisletterIwouldliketothankyouforyourhelpinthepastthreeyears.I'mwritingtoexpressmyheartfeltgratitude.IamwritingtoyoubecauseyoualwayshelpedmewhenIhaddifficultylearningduringthethreeyearsofstudy.Mystudyprogresscan’tbegoingsmoothlywithoutyou.EspeciallyinEnglish,Imakeasorapidprogress,yourhelpandsuggestionisofgreatvaluetome.It'ssokindofyoutoaccompanymethroughthejuniormiddleschoolthreeyears.Thankyouagainforwhatyouhavedone.Ihopetohavethechancetoexpressmythanks.IhopeIcanmeetyousometimeandexpressmythanksinperson.Wishyouallthebest!Yours,LiHua【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇书信作文。要求针对初中生活好友的帮助，给李雷写一封感谢信，注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。2.写作指导：写作时要以第一和第二人称来行文，时态以一般过去时为主。作文可分为三段，第一段引出话题，感谢对方的帮助；第二段介绍他是如何帮助你的；第三段收尾。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。（2021·广西柳州·中考真题）假设你是李华，某英语网站正在举办以“感恩父母”为主题的征文活动。请根据表格中的内容用英文写一篇题为“ALettertoMyParents”的短文，用于投稿。你的感谢父母养育你、每天为你做饭、生病时照顾你父母信任你、关心你的个人感受、遇到困难时鼓励你你的决心努力学习你的祝愿祝愿父母健康快乐注意：1.词数70左右；2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.短文的开头和结尾部分已给出，不计入总词数；4.文中不得出现真实的人名与校名。参考词汇：感谢某人.....thanksb.for...养育raise做饭cookfood生病besick信任trust关心careabout个人感受personalfeeling处于困难中beintrouble健康的healthyALettertoMyParentsDearMumandDad,I’mwritingtoexpressmythanksforallyourcareandlove.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Thanksagainforeverythingyouhavedoneforme.Love,LiHua【参考范文】ALettertoMyParentsDearMumandDad,I’mwritingtoexpressmythanksforallyourcareandlove.Firstofall,Iwanttothankyouforraisingme.YoucookformeeverydayandtakingcareofmewhenI’msick.,Ican’tgrowhealthyWithoutyourhelpandattendance.Youalwaystrustandcareaboutmypersonalfeelings.Ican'tgetoutofthetroubleswithoutyourencourage.It'ssokindofyoutogivemethoughtfulkindness.SoIhavetostudyhardtorepayyou.Atthesametime,Iwishyoukeephealthyandhappy.Thanksagainforeverythingyouhavedoneforme.Love,LiHua【详解】1.题干解读：这是一篇给材料的书信作文，题目要求围绕提示内容写一篇题为“ALettertoMyParents”的短文，来感恩父母。注意要点齐全。2.写作指导：短文主要以第一人称来行文，时态以一般现在时为主。文章开头和结尾已给出，也给出了相关要点的词汇，在写作中要综合运用所学知识，适当运用连词、副词等进行过渡。注意保证语法正确，无单词的拼写错误。（2017·黑龙江·中考真题）假如你是Mary，初中学习生活即将结束，请向你的老师（Mr.White）致谢，感谢他对你一直以来的教育、关心和帮助，并祝福老师健康快乐。DearMr.White,__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Mary【参考范文】DearMr.White,Howisyourworkrecently?Leavingyouandlovelyjuniorschoollife,Ihavesomanywordsfrommyhearttosay.Iamwritingtoyoubecauseyouareahardworking,kindandstrictteacher.Yourlessonsarealwaysinteresting.Andyouarefriendlytous.You’restrictwithusinstudyandalsotakecareofuskindly.Allmyclassmatesagreethatwegetonwellwitheachotherfortheseyears.IstillrememberwhenIfailedinanexam,youencouragedmetokeeptrying.WhenIhadtroubleinlife,youtoldmetobebrave.Thankstoyourhelp,Icanmakearapidprogressinthepastthreeyears.Withoutyourhelp,Icouldn'tbemoreandmoreinterestedinEnglishandgetasuchgoodgrades.It'ssokindofyoutogivenmesomuch..Thankyouagainforwhatyouhavedone.Ihopetohavethechancetoexpressmythanks.IhopeIcanmeetyousometimeandexpressmythanksinperson.Allthebest!Yours,Mary【详解】1.题干解读：该题目是书信类书面表达，要求向自己的老师写一封感谢信，并祝老师健康快乐。2.写作指导：该题目人称主要使用第一人称和第二人称，时态主要使用一般过去时；内容包括：感谢老师对自己的教育、关心和帮助，并祝福老师健康快乐，同时注意结构要清晰条理，无单词拼写错误和语法使用错误。名校模拟题提升练10篇名校模拟题提升练10篇（2023·湖北武汉·统考模拟预测）假如你是李平，三年的初中生活就要结束了。老师们都很好，你最想感谢Mr.Jin。他在学习上、生活上甚至在你犯错误的时候给予你帮助，请你根据以下内容提示写信给他用英语写封信，表达自己的感激和依依惜别之情。内容提示：Whydoyouwritethisletter?WhatdidMr.Jindotohelpyou?Howdoyoufeelaboutyourmistake?Somethingmoreaboutyourexperience.…注意：字数60-80字；内容要连贯得体，不要逐条翻译；表达流畅、书写整洁，信的首尾已给出，不计入总字数；文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称。DearMr.Jin,Iwillgraduatesoon.Lookingbackatthepastthreeyears,Ihavealottosay._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yourssincerely,LiPing【答案】例文DearMr.Jin,Iwillgraduatesoon.Lookingbackatthepastthreeyears,Ihavemuchtosaytoyou.YouhelpedmewithmylessonswhenIdidn’tdowellinmystudy.Youaskedmetowearmoreclothestokeepwarm.Youhavegivenmesomuchhelpandencouragement.ButIhavedonemanythingsthatmadeyouangry.Lastterm,whenwehadclassesonline,Ispenttoomuchtimeplayingcomputergames.Igotbadgradeswithoutdoubt.Youtriedyourbesttohelpmeandformedmystudyhabits.YoualwaystoldmeIcoulddobetter.I’vechangedalot.IthinkIshouldsaysorryandthankstoyou.Bestwishestoyouandyourfamily.Yourssincerely,LiPing【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇书信作文；②时态：时态为“一般过去时”，“现在完成时”和“一般现在时”；③提示：写作要点已给出，学生应注意不要遗漏“要点提示”中我（李平）最想感谢Mr.Jin在学习上、生活上甚至在我犯错误的时候给予我帮助的介绍。表达自己的感激和依依惜别之情。适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。[写作步骤]第一步，介绍三年的初中生活就要结束了，为感激老师而写这封信；第二步，介绍在学习上、生活上甚至在自己犯错误的时候老师给予自己的帮助；第三步，表达自己因做错事抱歉的感受以及感激和依依惜别之情。[亮点词汇]①dowellin擅长，在……干得好②keepwarm保温③hadclassesonline在线上课④withoutdoubt毫无疑问[高分句型]①ButIhavedonemanythingsthatmadeyouangry.（定语从句）②Lastterm,whenwehadclassesonline,Ispenttoomuchtimeplayingcomputergames.（when引导时间状语从句）③IthinkIshouldsaysorryandthankstoyou.（宾语从句）2．（2023·福建厦门·统考二模）感恩是中华民族的传统美德，懂得感恩是生命中的大智慧。初中阶段，一定有人帮助你、陪伴你、感动你。值此毕业之际，以信传情。请你根据要点提示，给你最想感谢的人写一封信，心怀感恩。内容要点：1.表达对他/她的感谢；2.回顾过去暖心的经历；3.传达对他/她的美好祝愿。注意事项：1.必须包含提示内容，可适当发挥；2.意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯；3.请勿在文中使用真实的姓名和校名。Dear,_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【答案】例文DearMs.Lee,Iwanttosay“thankyou”toyou.Inmyjuniorhighschoollife,youhelpsmealot.YoutakegoodcareofmeandoftenhelpmewithmyEnglish.WhenIamintrouble,youalwaysencouragemetofacemydifficultiesandgivemegoodadvice.IstillrememberthatonceIfailedinanimportantEnglishexamandwasupset.YoucheeredmeupandtoldmesomegoodwaystoimprovemyEnglish.Thankstoyou,IhavemadegreatprogressinEnglishandambecomingmoreandmoreinterestedinit.I’mverythankfulforallthatyouhavedoneforme.Ihopethatyouarehealthyandhappyeveryday.Yours,LiHua【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇书信作文；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示的内容，适当增加细节，并且突出写作的要点。[写作步骤]第一步，表明写作意图。直接说明要感谢谁，表达感谢；第二步，具体阐述写作内容。重点介绍过去经历；第三步，书写结语。表达美好祝愿。[亮点词汇]①takegoodcareof好好照顾②encourage鼓励③upset烦恼的④m