读后续写-从赌气出走到感恩回归：爱的领悟之旅+讲义 高二下学期第一次月考英语试题

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。Thatnight,Iquarreledwithmymother,thenstormedoutofthehouse.Whileontheroad,IrememberedthatIdidnothaveanymoneyinmypocket,Ididnoteventakemycellphonewithmetomakeacallhome.Atthesametime,Iwentthroughanoodleshop,andIsuddenlyfeltveryhungry.Iwishedforabowlofnoodles,butIhadnomoney!Thesellersawmestandingbeforethecounterandasked,“Heylittlegirl,youwanttoeatabowl?”“But…butIdonotcarrymoney…”Ishylyreplied.“Okay,I’lltreatyou.”thesellersaid,“comein,Iwillcookyouabowl.”Afewminuteslatertheownerbroughtmeasteamingbowlofnoodles.Aftereatingsomepieces,Icried.“Whatisit?”Heasked.“Nothing.Iamjusttouchedbyyourkindness!”IsaidasIwipedmytears.“Evenastrangeronthestreetgivesmeabowlofnoodles,andmymother,afteraquarrel,chasedmeoutofthehouse.Sheiscruel(残忍)!!”Thesellersighed,“Girl,whydidyouthinkso?Thinkagain.Ionlygaveyouabowlofnoodlesandyoufeltthatway.Yourmotherhasbeentakingcareofyousinceyouwerelittle,whywereyounotgratefulandwhydidyouhurtyourmom?”Iwasreallysurprisedafterhearingthat.WhydidInotthinkofthat?Abowlofnoodlesfromastrangermademefeelgrateful,andmymotherhasraisedmesinceIwaslittleandIhaveneverfeltso,notevenalittle.注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；2.请按如下格式在相应位置作答。Justatthatmoment,manymemoriescamebackintomymind.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Whenarrivinghome,Isawmymothersittingatthedinnertable,worriedandtired._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________续写需要回答的问题​Whatmemoriesdidthegirlrecall?​Thegirlrecalledhermompreparingherfavoritemealswhenshewasdown,stayingupallnighttotakecareofherwhenshewassick,andwakingupearlytomakeheranutritiousbreakfast.​Howdidthemotherlookwhenthegirlgothome?​Themotherlookedworriedandtired.Hereyeswereredasifshehadbeencrying.​Whatdidthegirldowhenshesawhermother?​Thegirlapologizedtohermother,sayingshewaswrong.​Whatdidthemothersaytothegirl?​Themothersaiditwasokayandthatshewasjustgladthegirlwasback.​Whatlessondidthegirllearn?​Thegirllearnedtheimportanceofgratitudeandcherishingfamily.​故事主旨​Thestoryshowsthesignificanceofbeinggratefulfortheconstantloveandcarefromfamily.Itemphasizesthatweoftentakeourfamily'sloveforgrantedandhowasimpleactfromastrangercanmakeusrealizeourungratefulnesstowardsourfamily.​故事山​Beginning：Thegirlquarrelswithhermotherandstormsoutofthehouse.Shehasnomoneyandishungry.Anoodleshopselleroffersherabowlofnoodles.​RisingAction：Thegirlistouchedbytheseller'skindnessandcomplainsabouthermother.Thesellermakesherrealizeherungratefulnesstowardshermother.​Climax：Thegirlrecallsallthegoodthingshermotherhasdoneforheranddecidestogobackhome.​FallingAction：Thegirlarriveshomeandseesherworriedmother.​End：Thegirlapologizes,andhermotherforgivesher.Thegirllearnsavaluablelessonaboutfamilyloveandgratitude.​故事发展线索​Thegirlhasaquarrelwithhermotherandleaveshome.Shemeetsakindnoodleshopsellerwhomakesherreflectonherrelationshipwithhermother.Shethengoesbackhomeandreconcileswithhermother.​情感线索​Atfirst,thegirlisangryandhurtafterthequarrel.Shethenfeelsgratefultothestranger.Afterreflection,shefeelsguiltytowardshermother.Finally,sheexperiencesasenseofreliefandadeeperunderstandingoffamilylovewhenshereconcileswithhermother.​续写布局与框架​Thefirstparagraphfocusesonthegirl'sreflectionandthememoriesthatcometohermind,leadingtoherdecisiontogobackhome.Thesecondparagraphdescribesthereunionwithhermother,themother'sreaction,andthegirl'sapology,aswellasthelessonshelearns.​续写注意事项​承接原文：The续写startswiththegirl'smemoryrecall,whichisadirectresultoftheseller'swordsintheoriginaltext.Thethemeoffamilyloveandthegirl'srealizationarecarriedforward.​整体设计：Theoverallstoryisdesignedtoshowthegirl'sgrowthfrombeingungratefultounderstandingandappreciatinghermother'slove.Thereunionsceneissetuptoemphasizetheimportanceoffamily.​巧妙设计：Theuseofthemother'swaitingwithcoldfavoritedishesshowsherloveandworry,addingmoreemotiontothestory.Thegirl'sapologyandthemother'sforgivenesscompletethearcoftheirrelationship.​高分语句​呼应原文：“Evenastrangeronthestreetgivesmeabowlofnoodles,andmymother,afteraquarrel,chasedmeoutofthehouse.Sheiscruel!!”Thislinefromtheoriginaltextiscontrastedwiththegirl'slaterrealizationandapology,showingherchange.​高级句型：“TherewerecountlessmorningswhenshewokeupearlytomakesureIhadanutritiousbreakfastbeforeschool.”Theuseofthe“when”clausetodescribethepasteventsmakesthedescriptionmorevivid.“Assoonasshesawme,sherushedtowardsmeandhuggedmetightly.”The“assoonas”structureshowsthemother'simmediatereaction.​主题表达&意义延伸​直接引语点明主旨：“Mom,I'msosorry.Iwaswrong,”thegirl'sapologydirectlyshowsherchangeofheartandtherecognitionofhermistake,highlightingtheimportanceofcherishingfamily.​促成转变，引发感悟：Thegirl'srealizationofhermother'sloveandhersubsequentapologyleadtoadeeperunderstandingoffamilylove.Itmakesthereaderalsoreflectontheirownrelationshipswithfamily.​借象征物点明主旨：Thecolddishesonthetablesymbolizethemother'swaitingandlove.Despitethequarrel,themotherstillpreparedthegirl'sfavoritefood,emphasizingtheselflessnatureofamother'slove.​学生写作示范​第一段​Justatthatmoment,manymemoriescamebackintomymind.IthoughtaboutthetimeIlostmyfavoritetoyandhowmymomspenthourssearchingforiteverywhere.ShecomfortedmewhenIfailedmyexamsandencouragedmetokeepgoing.Shehadalwaysbeenthereformethroughthickandthin.Ifeltashamedofmybehavior.HowcouldIhavebeensothoughtless?Ishouldhavecherishedherloveinsteadoftakingitforgranted.Withaheavyheart,Iturnedaroundandstartedwalkingbackhome,determinedtomakethingsright.​第二段​Whenarrivinghome,Isawmymothersittingatthedinnertable,worriedandtired.Herfacelitupwhenshesawme.BeforeIcouldsayaword,sheranoverandhuggedme.“I'msosorry,mom,”Iblurtedout.“Iwaswrong.”Sheheldmetightlyandsaid,“It'sokay,sweetie.I'mjusthappyyou'reback.”Ilookedatthetablefilledwithmyfavoritefoodandrealizedhowmuchshelovedme.Thisexperiencetaughtmeavaluablelesson:familyloveisalwaysthere,andweshouldneverforgettobegratefulforit.【答案】Justatthatmoment,manymemoriescamebackintomymind.WhenIwasillshewasalwaystheonetakingcareofme.WhenIhadtroublewithmystudy,sheneverlostfaithinmeandencou