科技论文翻译个人常见错误总结

201004论文翻译个人常见错误总结分析:太中文化原文示例:Aimingattheproblemthatthewirelesssensornetwork(WSN)nodeiswithlimitedenergyandcomputingcapabilities修改后:Aimingattheproblemthattheenergyandcomputingcapabilitiesofthewirelesssensornetwork(WSN)nodeislimited分析:状语?使用方式错误。分词做状语原文示例:ARealtimesuccess-Non-free-auction(RTS-NF-A)schemeisproposedwithnewpoliciesareaddedintotraditionauctionscheme.修改后:ARealtimesuccess-Non-free-auction(RTS-NF-A)schemeisproposedwithnewpoliciesbeingaddedintotraditionauctionscheme.分析:词性混淆。句式错误。And连接两个句子，只省略主语不能省略谓语。原文示例:theproposedschemeisin-timeupdating,flexibility,and?highconsultationrateofsuccess修改后:theproposedschemeisin-timeupdating,flexibleandhashighconsultationrateofsuccess分析:状语从句的使用，句式不熟悉。原文示例:WSNisaselforganizingwirelessnetworkcomposedofasetofrandomgeographicallydistributedsensor修改后:WSNisaselforganizingwirelessnetworkwhichiscomposedofasetofrandomgeographicallydistributedsensor分析:1，词性不对；2，句子结构混乱，不知所云。原文示例:Taskallocationisabroadareaofhigh-performancecomputingresearchproblems修改后:Taskallocationisanissuewhichisstudiedinhigh-performancecomputingbroadly.分析:句首大写。名词所有格。原文示例:thetraditionalfieldofdistributedalgorithmscannotbeapplieddirectlyaswirelesssensornetworknodecapacityandcapabilityislimited.修改后:Thetraditionalfieldofdistributedalgorithmscannotbeapplieddirectlyaswirelesssensornetworknode’scapacityandcapabilityislimited.分析:冠词用法粗心。句子不完整，缺少谓语。原文示例:WSNcanbeseenasaMASifasensorisregardasaagent.However,wirelesssensornetworkswithhighdynamics修改后:WSNcanbeseenasaMASifasensorisregardasanagent.However,wirelesssensornetworkshavehighdynamics分析:近义词的区分。原文示例:WSNissimilarwithMASdueto??thatSensorscanhandleproblemindepentelyandWSNisadistributedsystemwithaself-organizingfeature修改后:WSNissimilarwithMASbecauseSensorscanhandleproblemindepentelyandWSNisadistributedsystemwithaself-organizingfeature.分析:连词的恰当使用。助动词的使用，句子结构混乱。原文示例:AndtheintroductionofauctiontotheWSNisnotaverygoodtakingintoaccountthedynamicsofthenetworkenviromentanditsresourcesconstrained(restricted?)feature.修改后:InadditiontheintroductionofauctiontotheWSNdoesnottakeintoaccountthedynamicsofthenetworkenvironmentanditslimitedresources.分析:被动语态；主谓一致；介词使用原文示例:Thestudyisbuildonclustering-basedWSNframework.Asensorwantfind修改后:Thestudyisbuiltonclustering-basedWSNframework.Asensorwantstofind分析:动词选择；从句用法（要有动词）；主谓一致原文示例:Thesensorbroadcastthetaskallocationinformationtosensorswhichinthesamecluster,thenchoosethemostsuitableonebyaautomaticnegotiation.修改后:Thesensorsendsthetaskallocationinformationtosensorswhichareinthesamecluster,thenchoosesthemostsuitableonebyaautomaticnegotiation.分析:词性混淆；被动用法原文示例:Thewholeprocessofannounce,negotiate,andsettleonisaccomplishbyourimpovedauctionscheme修改后:Thewholeprocessofannouncement,negotiatiation,andsettlementisaccomplishedbyourimprovedauctionscheme分析:并列句，缺少连词。原文示例:istoolow,itstotalutilityis修改后:istoolow,anditstotalutilityis分析:分词做状语；句子太长时的句式变通；从句中主谓一致原文示例:Thesensorwilllaunchanauctiontofindasuccessorwhenit??cannotcontinuetocarryoutitsfunctionsforsomereason(toleaveortomeettheenergyfloorthreshold).ItwillsentNoticetosensorsthatinthesamecluster.修改后:Thesensor,notcontinuingtocarryoutitsfunctionsforsomereason(toleaveortomeettheenergyfloorthreshold),willlaunchanauctiontofindasuccessor.ItwillsendNoticetosensorsthatareinthesamecluster. 分析:分词状语从句原文示例:WiththeDL(150s)remainsunchanged,修改后:WiththeDL(150s)remainingunchanged分析:oneof到底要不要定冠词？上个批注里把a改为了the原文示例:AuctionisoneofthetypicalmethodsfortaskallocationinMAS修改后:AuctionisoneoftypicalmethodsfortaskallocationinMAS分析:对于缩写名词第一次出现全称后以后都用缩写原文示例:修改后:分析:词性混淆原文示例:withnewpoliciesbeingaddedintotraditiontraditionalauctionschemetraditional修改后:分析:定语倒置混乱原文示例:Thetraditionalfieldofdistributedalgorithmsdisalgoftrafiecannotbeapplieddirectlydisalgoftrafie修改后:distributedalgorithmsoftraditionalfield分析:句式调整原文示例:wirelesssensornetworkshave(has?)WSNhasthefeaturesofhighdynamics,l