Unit 4 Why don't you talk to your parents？单元作文专项训练（学案） 人教版英语八年级下册

第=page11页，共=sectionpages33页第=page11页，共=sectionpages33页Unit4单元作文专项训练人教版英语八年级下册简介：这份文档围绕人教版英语八年级下册Unit4“Whydon'tyoutalktoyourparents”展开作文专项训练，旨在提升学生的写作能力，强化对单元话题相关表达的运用。Unit4聚焦于青少年在成长过程中与父母、朋友等相处时出现的沟通问题，以及如何解决这些问题。本专项训练紧扣单元话题，提供了8个不同情境和要求的写作任务，涵盖演讲稿、电子邮件、征文等多种体裁。从如何成为阳光的人、帮助他人交朋友，到如何做积极的学生、更好的青少年，以及分享健康生活方式等内容，引导学生结合单元所学知识，围绕青少年成长中的自我提升、人际交往等方面进行写作。每个写作任务都给出了详细的要求，如包含要点、适当发挥、语句通顺、运用特定句型等，还提供了例文和写作步骤分析，帮助学生明确写作思路，积累亮点词汇和高分句型，逐步提升写作水平，使学生能够熟练运用英语表达对单元话题的理解和思考。一、书面表达1．现在很多青少年沉溺(indulgein)网络，不爱学习，不爱运动，不与人交际(communicate)，爱吃垃圾食品等等，这些严重影响了他们的身心健康。为此，学校决定本周五下午举办一场主题为“我阳光，我健康”的演讲比赛。你也想参加这场演讲比赛，请根据下图提示以“HowtoBeaSunnyPerson”为题写一篇演讲稿。HowtoBeaSunnyPersonGoodhobbies:listeningtomusic,drawingLessinternet:fewercomputergames,studyMoresports:run,swimHealthyhabits:fruit,vegetables,washhands…Dream:…要求:1.内容必须包括所给要点，并适当发挥一至两点。2.语句通顺，语法正确，书写规范。3.文中不能出现考生的真实姓名、校名和地名。4.词数80词左右。(开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)HowtoBeaSunnyPersonHello,everyone.Iamgladtobeheretogiveyouareportabouthowtobeasunnyperson.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Inaword,ifwetryourbest,wewillbecomebetterandbetter.Ihopeeachofyoucanbeasunnyperson.【答案】例文：HowtoBeaSunnyPerson

Hello,everyone.lamgladtobeheretogiveyouaspeechabouthowtobeasunnyperson.

Firstofall,usingthelnternetproperlyisimportantforustobeasunnyperson.Ifweuselessinternet,wewillplayfewercomputergames.Wecanusethelnternettostudyinsteadofplayinggames.What’smore,itishelpfultodomoresports,suchasrunningandswimming.Wecanrunforhalfanhoureverydaytokeephealthy.Inaddition,itisgoodtodevelopgoodhobbieslikedrawingandlisteningtomusic.Themoreknowledgewelearn,thebrighterfuturewewillhave.Finally,weshouldalsodevelophealthyeatinghabits.Wecanhavemorevegetablesandfruitsandwashourhandsfrequently.

Inaword,ifwetryourbest,wewillbecomebetterandbetter.Ihopeeachofyoucanbeasunnyperson.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为演讲稿；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；③提示：材料已给出，写作时注意表述清晰，做到无语法和单词拼写错误。[写作步骤]第一步，承接开头，打招呼，引出主题；第二步，具体介绍如何成为一个阳光的人；第三步，收尾并表达美好祝愿。[亮点词汇]①firstofall首先②insteadof代替③inaddition此外[高分句型]①What’smore,itishelpfultodomoresports,suchasrunningandswimming.(it固定句式)②Ifweuselessinternet,wewillplayfewercomputergames.(if引导的条件状语从句)2．假如你是李华，你在校报上看到你们学校新来的Lisa说她很孤独，性格内向，不擅长交朋友，希望能得到帮助。请根据以下提示，给她写一封邮件，介绍一下你的好朋友HanMei，希望她们能成为朋友，并对如何交朋友提出你的看法和建议。要求：1.简单介绍韩梅的情况以及你们是好朋友的原因。2.你对如何交朋友的看法和建议。可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。3.使用至少一个if从句。4.100词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。5.不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息DearLisa,I’mLiHua,welcometoourschool.I’msorrytohearthatyou’refeelinglonely._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【答案】例文DearLisa,I’mLiHua,welcometoourschool.I’msorrytohearthatyou’refeelinglonely.Don’tworry,letmehelpyou.IhaveagoodfriendandhernameisHanMei.Sheismoreoutgoingandfriendly.Sheisalwaysreadytohelpothersandsheoftenhelpstobringoutthebestinme,sosheisagoodfriend.Ifyoucanmakefriendswithher,you’llhavefuntogether.Howtomakefriends?Hereissomeadvice.First,ifyouareshy,youcanasktheteachersforhelp.What’smore,youmustbefriendlytoyourclassmates,trytohelpthemiftheyhaveproblems.Lastbutnotleast,youcanalsojointheschoolclubs.Ifyouareintheclubs,youwillmakesomefriendsbecauseyouhavethesameinterest.Whatdoyouthinkofmyadvice?Hopeyoucanmakegoodfriendsandfeelbettersoon.Yours,LiHua【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一封电子邮件；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”；③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。[写作步骤]第一步，承接开头，简单介绍韩梅的情况以及成为好朋友的原因；第二步，介绍如何交朋友的看法和建议；第三步，书写结尾，提出希望。[亮点词汇]①bereadytodo准备做……②bringout激发，使显现③makefriends交朋友[高分句型]①Sheisalwaysreadytohelpothersandsheoftenhelpstobringoutthebestinme,sosheisagoodfriend.（so连接的因果并列句）②Ifyouareintheclubs,youwillmakesomefriendsbecauseyouhavethesameinterest.（if引导的条件状语从句）3．学校英语报正在开展以“Tobeanactivestudent”为主题的英语征文活动，请你根据以下图表，写一篇英文短文，向校刊投稿。词数80左右。注意事项：1.必须包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥，开头已给出，不计入总词数；2.意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；3.请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名和地点。TobeanactivestudentAsajuniorhighstudent,itisveryimportanttobeactive.Buthowtobeanactivestudent?________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：TobeanactivestudentAsajuniorhighstudent,itisveryimportanttobeactive.Buthowtobeanactivestudent?Firstly,weneedtoeatdifferentkindsoffruitsandvegetablesandplaysportstokeephealthy.Secondly,itisnecessarytobekindtoothers.Wewillmakelotsoffriendsanditcanalsohelpuslivehappily.Thirdly,havinghobbieslikepainting,readingorplayinganinstrumentcanmakeourlifemorewonderful.Fourthly,youshouldhaveanicedreamandworkhardforit.Lastly,wecanhelpothersoften.Stayactiveandenjoyyourtime.Itmustbeniceandunforgettable.

Inaword,let’sworkharderandtrytobeanactivestudentfromtodayon.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇材料作文。②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”。③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏要点。注意行文连贯，逻辑清晰，无拼写和语法错误。[写作步骤]第一步，承接给出的开头，另起一段介绍做一个积极的学生的方法；第二步，详细介绍如何能成为一名积极的学生，从生活、社交、爱好等方面介绍；第三步，写出总结。[亮点词汇]①differentkindsof不同种类的②bekindtoothers对其他人友好③helpuslivehappily帮助我们幸福地生活④fromtodayon从今天开始[高分句型]①Thirdly,havinghobbieslikepainting,readingorplayinganinstrumentcanmakeourlifemorewonderful.(动名词作主语)②Stayactiveandenjoyyourtime.(祈使句)4．作为新时代青少年，我们应当以“爱国爱家，向上向善”为目标不断提升自己。近期，学校英语报以“HowtoBeaBetterTeenager”为主题开展征文活动。请你根据下图提示，写一篇英文短文投稿。词数80词左右。要求：1.必须包含所有提示信息，并适当发挥一至两点，开头已给出，不计入总词数；2.意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；3.请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名和地名。HowtoBeaBetterTeenagerAsamiddleschoolstudent,_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文HowtoBeaBetterTeenagerAsamiddleschoolstudent,beingabetterteenagermeansalottous.Firstofall,it’simportantforustoloveourcountry.WeshouldbequietwhenwewatchthenationalflaggoupandbeproudofChineseculture.Then,weshouldloveourfamily.Helpingwithhouseworkisagoodwaytoshowourloveforourparents.Also,weneedtostudyhardandreadmorebookstoimproveourselvessothatwecanhelptomakeourcountrybetterinthefuture.Weshouldalwaysbekindtoothers.Forexample,wecanhelpoldpeoplecrosstheroad.Lastbutnotleast,wemustdomoreexercisetokeephealthy.It’sthemostimportantthingifwewanttomaketheworldbetter.Inaword,weshouldtryourbesttobeabetterteenager.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；②时态：一般现在时；③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点，并适当添加细节，突出写作重点。[写作步骤]第一步，表明做更好的青少年的意义；第二步，详细列举如何成为更好的青少年；第三步，适当增加细节，总结全文。[亮点词汇]①beproudof...对……感到骄傲②sothat以便，为了③Lastbutnotleast最后但同样重要的一点[高分句型]①Firstofall,it’simportantforustoloveourcountry.(it作形式主语)②WeshouldbequietwhenwewatchthenationalflaggoupandbeproudofChineseculture.(when引导时间状语)③Also,weneedtostudyhardandreadmorebookstoimproveourselvessothatwecanhelptomakeourcountrybetterinthefuture.(sothat引导目的状语)5．假设你是李华，你学校英语俱乐部正在开展“我是健康达人”主题活动。请根据以下图示提示，写一篇题为“Healthylife,Betterfuture.”的演讲稿，参加俱乐部举行的演讲比赛。词数80。注意事项：1．必须包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；2．意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；3．请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名和地点。HealthyLife,BetterFuture.Hello,everyone!I’mLiHua.Today,Iwanttosharemyhealthylifewithallofyou.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________That’sallaboutmyhealthylife!Thankyouforlistening.【答案】例文HealthyLife,BetterFuture.

Hello,everyone!I’mLiHua.Today,Iwanttosharemyhealthylifewithallofyou.

IalwaysgotobedearlyandgetupearlytomakesureIhaveenoughsleep.Andbeforegoingtobed,Iusuallyreadforawhile.Ithelpsmewithmystudies.Iusuallyexercisethreetimesaweek.Iloveplayingbasketballandswimming.Onweekends,Ioftentakepartincommunityservice.Ivolunteeratanursinghomenearmyhouse.Ichatwitholdpeople.Wesingsongsandplaygamestogether.

Let’sdevelopgoodhabitsandenjoyahealthylifetogether!

That’sallaboutmyhealthylife!Thankyouforlistening.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示，并适当添加细节，注意字母大小写以及标点符号。[写作步骤]第一步，开篇点题，引出话题；第二步，根据提示，介绍自己的健康生活方式；第三步，号召大家一起养成良好的习惯，享受健康的生活并书写结语。[亮点词汇]①gotobed去睡觉②makesure确保③onweekends在周末④takepartin参加[高分句型]IalwaysgotobedearlyandgetupearlytomakesureIhaveenoughsleep.(宾语从句)6．亲爱的同学们，进入新的一年，我们都期许成为更好的自己。学校英语专栏以“Makingmyselfbetter”为题面向学生进行征文。请你根据写作要求，用英语写一篇短文，向专栏投稿。写作要求：1）介绍你将怎样变得更好（可以从生活习惯、性格爱好、知识学习、保护自然、恰当使用网络几方面说明）；注意：至少2至3方面2）阐述你的理由；3）文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称；4）词数100左右。MakingmyselfbetterEverydayisvaluableandshouldbemadegooduseoftomakemyselfbetter.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文MakingmyselfbetterEverydayisvaluableandshouldbemadegooduseoftomakemyselfbetter.Firstly,goodlivinghabitsareimportanttome.Therefore,I’llsleepandgetupearly.Secondly,I’mgoingtoeatmorevegetablesandlessmeat,becauseeatinghealthilymattersalot.What’smore,Ialsoplantodevelopahabitofreadingdifferentkindsofbooksbecausereadingcanmakemeknowwhat’sgoingonaroundtheworld.Ithelpsopenmymind,too.ThemorebooksIread,themoreknowledgeIwillget.Lastbutnotleast,Iwillavoidplayinggamesonlinebecauseitisawasteoftimeanddoesharmtomyeyes.I’msurethatI’llmeetabettermeinthenewyear.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；②时态：时态为“一般将来时”；③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏，可适当添加细节，并突出写作要点。[写作步骤]第一步，点明自己新的一年会变更好；第二步，从不同的方面具体阐述怎样成为更好的自己，并说明理由；第三步，展望未来，给自己树立信心。[亮点词汇]①areimportantto对……很重要②developahabitof...养成……的习惯③avoidplayinggames避免玩游戏④awasteoftime浪费时间[高分句型]①I’mgoingtoeatmorevegetablesandlessmeat.(一般将来时)②ThemorebooksIread,themoreknowledgeIwillget.(the比较级...，the比较级...)②I’msurethatI’llmeetabettermeinthenewyear.(that引导宾语从句)7．青少年是国家和民族的希望，是建设社会主义现代化的未来栋梁。拥有一个快乐、有价值的人生，对青少年和整个民族都具有重要意义。请根据以下要点和要求，从中学生的角度，以“Howtoliveahappylife”为题写一篇短文。1.要点：(1)Havehealthylivinghabits;(2)Haveagoodhobby;(3)Haveawonderfuldream.2.要求：（1）文章须包含以上所有要点，可作适当发挥；（2）文中不得出现真实姓名和校名；（3）词数100左右。Howtoliveahappylife___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文HowtoliveahappylifeToliveahappylife,havinghealthylivinghabitsisimportant.Weshouldgetenoughsleep,eatbalancedmeals,andexerciseregularly.Thesehabitskeepourbodiesstrongandmindssharp.What’smore,havingagoodhobbycanbringjoyandrelaxationintoourlives.Whetherit’splayingamusicalinstrument,painting,orplayingsports,hobbiesofferanescapefromdailystressandimproveourmood.Finally,havingawonderfuldreamgivesuspurpose.Dreamsinspireustoworkhardandachievegreatthings.Inaword,combinehealthyhabits,enjoyablehobbies,andmeaningfuldreamstoliveatrulyhappylife.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；③提示：要求以“Howtoliveahappylife”为题，根据提示内容进行写作，