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读后续写阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的文章。TheFeelGoodShoeboxCatherinesatonherbedwithherchininherhands.“Whyaren'tyougettingreadyforGrandma'sbirthdayparty?”askedMother.“Ican'tbakelikeSylviaorknitlikeAnne,”Catherinegrumbled.“Theymadegoodpresents.AllImadeforherisanuglycard.”“It'salovelycard.Andnoonecanbegoodateverything,”saidMother.ShesatonthebednexttoCatherine.“WhenIwasyourage,IfeltsadwhenIcouldn'tdocertainthings.ButonedayGrandmashowedmetheshoeboxgame,anditmademefeelalotbetter.”Catherinefrowned(皱眉).“Howcanashoeboxmakemefeelbetter?”“You'llsee,”saidMother.Shedisappeareddownthehall,thencamebackcarryingashoebox,apencil,paper,andscissors.CatherinewatchedasMothercutseveralpiecesofpaperintosquares.“Nôw,Iwantyoutowritedownallthethingsyoucando,”saidMother.“Likewhat?”askedCatherine.“Whynotstartwiththingsyou'velearnedinschool?GiveitsomethoughtwhileIiceGrandma'sbirthdaycake.”Catherinesatforawhilewrinkling(起皱纹)andunwrinklinghereyebrows.SlowlyCatherinebegantowriteandwrite.Beforelongshehadwrittenoneverysquareofpaper.Shewassobusythatshedidn'thearMothereintotheroom.“Mygoodness!"saidMother.“Doyouthinkthey'llallfitintheshoebox?”“Ihopeso,”saidCatherine.“ItwasfunthinkingofallthestuffIcando.”“Andthenexttimeyoufeelsadbecauseyoucan'tdosomething,yourfeelgoodshoeboxwillremindyouofhowmuchyoucandojustasminedidwhenIwasalittlegirl,”saidMother,“Nowlet'sfinishgettingdressedforGrandma'sparty.”注意:1.续写词数应为150左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。“Happybirthday!”yelled(欢呼)thechildrenwhentheyarrivedatGrandma’shouse.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ThenCatherinegavehercardtoGrandma.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________“感觉良好鞋盒”故事续写续写分析(两段)第一段:开篇孩子们到达奶奶家时欢呼“生日快乐”,瞬间营造出热闹欢快的生日氛围。接着描述客厅里五彩气球和生日蛋糕的香甜气味,进一步渲染喜庆场景。随后讲述Sylvia和Anne展示各自精心准备的礼物——烘焙饼干和编织围巾,众人纷纷夸赞,与Catherine紧张的状态形成鲜明对比。“Catherinefeltabitnervous,holdingtheshoeboxtightly.Shetookadeepbreath,gatheringhercourage.”细致刻画了Catherine的紧张情绪,她紧紧握住鞋盒,通过深呼吸来鼓起勇气,为下文她送出特别礼物埋下伏笔,也展现出她内心对自己礼物是否被认可的担忧。第二段:“ThenCatherinegavehercardtoGrandma.”承接上文,自然引出Catherine送礼物的情节。她先递上卡片,接着拿出鞋盒,奶奶好奇询问,Catherine详细解释鞋盒的由来以及里面写满自己所能做之事的纸张。“AsGrandmareadeachone,hereyessparkledwithpride.”通过奶奶阅读纸张时眼中闪烁的自豪光芒,生动展现出奶奶对Catherine成长的欣慰与认可。“Oh,Catherine,thisisthemostspecialgiftofall.Itshowsmehowmuchyou'vegrown.”奶奶的话语直接点明这份礼物的独特价值,让Catherine收获自信,也让她深刻领悟到自身独特性和认识自我能力的重要意义,升华了故事主题。故事线Catherine因觉得自己为奶奶准备的生日贺卡不够好,而Sylvia能烘焙、Anne会编织,感到沮丧。母亲见状,向她介绍了“感觉良好鞋盒”游戏,让她写下自己能做的事情。Catherine认真思考并在纸上写下诸多自己能做的事,填满了鞋盒。之后她和家人一起前往奶奶家参加生日派对。到达奶奶家,客厅充满节日氛围,Sylvia和Anne展示礼物并收获夸赞,Catherine则紧张地拿着鞋盒。Catherine先给奶奶卡片,接着送出鞋盒并解释其含义,奶奶阅读后十分自豪,称赞这是最特别的礼物,Catherine因此收获自信,意识到自身独特及认识自我能力的美好。短语arriveat到达befilledwith充满presentsth.展示某物showoff炫耀feelnervous感到紧张holdsth.tightly紧紧握住某物takeadeepbreath深呼吸explainabout解释关于……sparklewithpride闪烁着自豪的光芒feelanewsenseofconfidence感到一种新的自信主旨升华句ThisheartwarmingstoryofCatherineandthefeelgoodshoeboxnotonlyrevealsthepowerofselfdiscoveryandselfacceptancebutalsoservesasapoignantreminderthatouruniqueabilitiesandqualitiesarepreciousgifts,oftenmorevaluablethantraditionalpresents.这个关于Catherine和“感觉良好鞋盒”的温馨故事,不仅揭示了自我发现和自我接纳的力量,还深刻地提醒我们,我们独特的能力和品质是珍贵的礼物,往往比传统礼物更有价值。ThroughCatherine'sjourneyfromselfdoubttoconfidence,weareshownthetransformativenatureofrecognizingone'sownworth.Herstoryteachesusthatinaworldfilledwithparisons,embracingourindividualityandcelebratingourcapabilitiescanleadtotruehappinessandfulfillment.通过Catherine从自我怀疑到自信的历程,我们看到了认识自我价值的变革性。她的故事告诉我们,在一个充满比较的世界里,拥抱我们的个性,赞美我们的能力,能够带来真正的幸福和满足。Thestoryofthefeelgoodshoeboxisnotmerelyataleofabirthdaygift;itisaprofoundexplorationofthehumanspirit'scapacitytofindstrengthandjoyinselfawareness.Itencouragesustolookwithinourselves,discoverourhiddentalents,andsharethemwiththeworld.“感觉良好鞋盒”的故事不仅仅是一个关于生日礼物的故事,它是对人类精神在自我认知中寻找力量和快乐的能力的深刻探索。它鼓励我们审视自己,发现我们隐藏的才能,并与世界分享。Inasocietythatoftenvaluesmaterialachievementsandspecificskills,Catherine'sexperiencewiththefeelgoodshoeboxstandsasabeaconofhope,inspiringustoappreciatethebeautyofouruniqueselvesandthecountlessthingswearecapableof,regardlessofhowunconventionaltheymayseem.在一个常常重视物质成就和特定技能的社会中,Catherine与“感觉良好鞋盒”的经历如同一盏希望之灯,激励我们欣赏独特自我的美好,以及我们所能做的无数事情,无论它们看起来多么不寻常。FromCatherine'sinitialdisappointmenttoherfinalrealizationofselfworth,thestoryencapsulatestheessenceofpersonalgrowth,thepoweroffamilysupport,andtheunwaveringbeliefthateachofushassomethingspecialtooffer,waitingtobediscoveredandcelebrated.从Catherine最初的失望到她最终实现自我价值,这个故事体现了个人成长的本质、家庭支持的力量,以及坚定的信念,即我们每个人都有特别之处,等待被发现和赞美。写作示范示范一“Happybirthday!”yelledthechildrenastheyrushedintoGrandma’shouse.Theroomwasablazewithcolorfuldecorations,andthedeliciousaromaofthecakewaftedthroughtheair.Sylvia'scookieswerearrangedneatlyonaplate,lookinglikelittleworksofart.Anne'sscarfwasadmiredbyeveryoneforitsintricateknitting.Catherine,clutchingtheshoebox,feltaknotinherstomach.Shewatchedasothersshowedtheirgifts,herheartpounding.ThenCatherinegavehercardtoGrandma.“Andthisisaspecialgift,”shesaid,handingovertheshoebox.Grandmaopeneditwithcuriosity.Catherineexplainedthegameandthelistofherabilities.AsGrandmaread,shesmiledwidely.“Catherine,thisisamazing.Itshowsyourgrowthanduniqueness.I'msoproud.”Catherine'sfacelitup.Sherealizedthatherselfawarenesswasawonderfulpresent,notjustforGrandmabutforherselftoo.Thisexperiencetaughthertovalueherindividuality.示范二“Happybirthday!”thechildrenshoutedinunisonwhentheyarrivedatGrandma’s.Thelivingroomwasawonderlandofballoonsandstreamers.Sylviaproudlypresentedherperfectlybakedcookies,andAnneflauntedhersoftknittedscarf.Catherinestoodabitaside,herhandsfirmlyontheshoebox.Thepraisefortheothergiftsmadeherevenmorenervous.ThenCatherinegavehercardtoGrandma.“Grandma,Ihavesomethingdifferent,”shesaid,offeringtheshoebox.Grandmalookedintrigued.Catherinetoldheraboutthefeelgoodshoeboxandthethingsshecoulddo.Grandma'seyeswelledupwithprideassheread.“Thisisthebestgift,Catherine.Itshowshowfaryou'vee.”Catherinebeamed,filledwithanewsenseofselfconfidence.Sheunderstoodthatbeingtruetoherselfandknowingherabilitieswasthemostpreciousgiftofall,alessonshewouldcherishforever.【答案】“Happybirthday!”yelled(欢呼)thechildrenwhentheyarrivedatGrandma’shouse.“webroughtyoucookies.Wemadethembymyself.”saidSylvia.“wonderful”saidGrandm.Meanwhile,Annequietlytookoutthescarfsheknittedforgrandma.Whengrandmasawit,herfaceshowedappreciationandsaidproudly,"mybab
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