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读后续写阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。Amritahadalwaysbeenacitygirl,lovingthebusycitylife.Oneday,however,asuddenchangeofhearthadoccurredandadeepseateddesireforchangeledherbacktoherhometown.Withallherthingsinjustthreebags,shereachedheroldfamilyhomethatstoodamidstaquietcoconutgrove.Feelingtiredofherofficejob,Amritawantedtofindsomethingmoremeaningful.Shedecidedtotryfarming,somethingherfamilyusedtodowhenhergrandfatherwasalive.Butwithnoonetoguideher,Amritafounditveryhard.Herrelativesnearbyrefusedtohelpherthinkingshewasjustfollowingatrend.Sheboughtafewfarmtools,determinedtomakeitwork,butasmonthspassed,shelostthewilltocontinueandpletelybrokedown.Oneday,asAmritastoodbyhergatethinkingabouthernextmoveandregrettingleavingherjob,shecouldn’tbelievehereyeswhenshesawherfriendsingwithbagsintheirhands.“Surprise,Amrita!”saidPriya,pullinghersuitcaseandabagfilledwithpaintbrushes(画笔)andpaintcans(油漆桶).“Wethoughtthisplaceneedssomecolour,”addedSamarwithasmile.Amrita’seyesfilledwithtearsastheyallhuggedhertogether.Allofthemendedupcryingasthedepthofherstruggleswashedoverthem.Thatevening,herfriendspresentedherwithanewplan.“Youknow,thisplacehassomuchpotential,”saidTina,lookingaroundtheoldhouse.“Whatifwefixitupandturnitintoalovelycosyhomefortravellerstostayin?”“Exactly!”agreedAnika.“Wecanallworktogetherandmakeithappen!”Amritahesitated,worriedaboutthemoney.Priyaquicklysaid,“Don’tworry,Amrita.We’vegotthemoney.We’reheretosupportyou.”“Butpleaseknowthatwewillbestayinginyourhomestay(民宿)aswepleaseandenjoyingthefreemealstoo,”addedTinaandtheyalllaughed.注意:(1)续写词数应为150左右;(2)请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。Overthenextfewweeks,thehousewasverybusy.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Afewdaysaftertheyleft,Amrita’sphonerangforthefirsttime.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________阿姆丽塔民宿故事续写续写分析(两段)第一段:此段以“Overthenextfewweeks,thehousewasverybusy.”开篇,直接点明故事发展的新场景——房屋改造阶段。随后详细描述了Priya、Samar、Anika和Amrita各自的分工。“Priya,withherartisticeye,usedthepaintbrushestocreatebeautifulmuralsonthewalls,infusingtheplacewithwarmth.”通过对Priya绘画行为的描写,展现其独特贡献,为房屋增添艺术氛围。“SamarandAnikatookchargeoffixingtheleakyroofandmendingthecreakyfloors.”体现出Samar和Anika在房屋修缮方面的实际工作,解决基础设施问题。“Amrita,inspiredbytheirenthusiasm,busiedherselfwithcleaningandarrangingtherooms.”表明Amrita受朋友鼓舞,积极参与其中,负责内部整理。“Everydaywasfilledwithhardwork,laughter,andthesoundofhammersandpaintbrushes.”这句话整体描绘出改造过程的忙碌、充实与欢乐氛围。“Slowlybutsurely,theoldhousetransformedintoacharmingabode.Theoncedilapidatedbuildingnowboastedafreshcoatofpaint,cozybedrooms,andawelinglivingarea.”清晰地展现出房屋从破旧到焕然一新的转变结果,为后续民宿运营做了充分铺垫,推动故事朝着积极方向发展。第二段:“Afewdaysaftertheyleft,Amrita’sphonerangforthefirsttime.”开启新情节,制造悬念。“Shepickeditupnervously,herheartpounding.”通过对Amrita紧张心理的描写,体现她对的期待与不安。“Hello,isthisAmrita’shomestay?”“Yes,itis!”的对话简洁明了,直接切入民宿业务场景。“Thecallerwasatravellerlookingforaplacetostay.Amritafeltarushofexcitement.”明确来电目的,展现Amrita的兴奋情绪,这是她努力与朋友帮助的初步成果体现。“Sheprovidedallthenecessaryinformation,herhandsshakingwithanticipation.”进一步刻画Amrita的激动状态。“Afterhangingup,shecouldn’thelpbutsmile.Herfriends’ideawasstartingtoetolife.”表达出Amrita对朋友提议得以实现的欣慰。“Withhopeinherheart,shebegantopreparetheroomsfortheupingguest,knowingthatthiswasjustthebeginningofhernewandmeaningfuljourney.”最后强调Amrita对未来的期待,点明这是她新旅程的起点,升华了故事主题,突出努力与友情带来的积极改变。故事线城市女孩Amrita厌倦办公室工作,怀着对改变的渴望回到家乡,决定尝试家族曾从事的农业,但因缺乏指导且遭亲戚拒绝,数月后失去信心,陷入困境。当Amrita站在门口思考下一步时,朋友Priya、Samar、Tina和Anika带着行李到来,提议将旧房子改造成民宿,他们带来资金并鼓励Amrita,Amrita虽犹豫但被说服。接下来几周,朋友们分工合作改造房屋,Priya绘制壁画,Samar和Anika修缮屋顶与地板,Amrita负责清洁与整理房间,房屋逐渐变得温馨舒适。朋友离开几天后,Amrita接到第一个旅客预订,她兴奋地提供信息,随后满怀希望地为即将到来的客人准备房间,开启新的有意义的旅程。短语rollupone'ssleeves卷起袖子(准备大干一场)takechargeof负责leakyroof漏水的屋顶creakyfloors嘎吱作响的地板beinspiredby受……鼓舞busyoneselfwith忙于transforminto转变成afreshcoatofpaint一层新油漆pickup拿起arushofexcitement一阵兴奋etolife实现,变得生动preparefor为……做准备主旨升华句ThisheartwarmingnarrativeofAmritaandherfriendsnotonlyshowcasesthepoweroffriendshipinturningdreamsintorealitybutalsoservesasapoignantreminderthatinthefaceofsetbacks,thesupportoflovedonescanbethecatalystforanewandfulfillingjourney.这个关于Amrita和她朋友们的温馨故事,不仅展示了友谊将梦想变为现实的力量,还深刻地提醒我们,在面对挫折时,亲人的支持可以成为开启新的充实旅程的催化剂。ThroughAmrita'sjourneyfromadiscouragedcitygirlturnedfarmertoanexcitedhomestayowner,wearevividlyshownthetransformativenatureofdeterminationandthebeautyofcollectiveeffort.Theirstoryimpartsthevaluablelessonthatwiththerightmindsetandthehelpoffriends,anydreamiswithinreach.通过Amrita从一个气馁的从城市回归农村尝试务农的女孩到一个兴奋的民宿老板的历程,我们生动地看到了决心的变革力量以及集体努力的美好。他们的故事传达了一个宝贵的教训,即拥有正确的心态和朋友的帮助,任何梦想都触手可及。ThestoryofAmrita'shomestayisnotmerelyataleofabusinessstartup;itisaprofoundexplorationofthehumanspirit'scapacitytoovereselfdoubt,toembracechange,andtobuildanewlifewiththesupportofthosewhobelieveinyou.Amrita民宿的故事不仅仅是一个创业故事,它是对人类精神克服自我怀疑、拥抱变化以及在相信你的人的支持下建立新生活的能力的深刻探索。Inaworldoftenfilledwithindividualismandthefearoffailure,Amritaandherfriends'endeavorstandsasapowerfulstatement,illuminatingthepathtowardsamorecollaborativeandhopefulexistence.Itremindsusthatourdreamsarenotsolitarypursuitsbutcanbeachievedthroughthebondsoffriendshipandsharedvision.在一个常常充满个人主义和对失败恐惧的世界里,Amrita和她朋友们的努力是一个有力的声明,照亮了通往更具合作性和充满希望的生活的道路。它提醒我们,我们的梦想不是孤独的追求,而是可以通过友谊的纽带和共同的愿景来实现。FromtheinitialdespairofAmrita'sfailedfarmingattempttothejoyousanticipationofherfirsthomestayguest,thestoryencapsulatestheessenceofresilience,themagicoffriendship,andtheunwaveringbeliefthateventhemostchallengingcircumstancescanbetransformedintoopportunitiesforgrowthandhappiness.从Amrita务农失败的最初绝望到她对第一个民宿客人到来的欢乐期待,这个故事体现了坚韧的本质、友谊的魔力,以及坚定的信念,即即使是最具挑战性的情况也可以转化为成长和幸福的机会。写作示范示范一Overthenextfewweeks,thehousewasahiveofactivity.Priya,withherflairfordesign,paintedbeautifullandscapesonthewalls,makingtheroomsfeellikeapeacefulretreat.Samar,beinghandy,fixedtheoldfurniture,givingitanewleaseonlife.AnikaandAmritaworkedtogethertosewcolorfulcurtainsandmakethebedslookinviting.Eachdaywasfilledwiththechatteroffriendsandthesoundsofrenovation.Bytheendofthetransformation,thehousehadbeeahaven,withauniquecharmthatblendedmodernfortwithrusticsimplicity.Afewdaysaftertheyleft,Amrita’sphonerangforthefirsttime.Herhandstrembledassheanswered.“Hello,Iheardaboutyourlovelyhomestay.Doyouhavearoomavailablefortheweekend?”afriendlyvoiceasked.Amrita'sheartsoared.“Yes,wedo!I'llsendyouallthedetailsrightaway,”shereplied,hervoicebrimmingwithexcitement.Afterhangingup,shetwirledaroundtheroom,filledwithanewsenseofpurpose.Sheknewthatthiswasjustthestartofherwonderfulnewadventure.示范二Overthenextfewweeks,thehousewasbustlingwithenergy.Priyacreatedintricatepatternsonthewallsusingdifferentcoloredpaints,addingatouchofelegance.SamarandAnikainstallednewlightingfixtures,makingtheroomsbrightandcheerful.Amritadecoratedthelivingareawithfamilyheirlooms,givingtheplaceapersonaltouch.Amidstthesawing,painting,andlaughing,theoldhousewasgraduallytransformedintoawarmandinvitingspace.Theoncedullroomsnowsparkledwithlife.Afewdaysaftertheyleft,Amrita’sphonerangforthefirsttime.Herheartracedasshepickedup.“Hi,I'mplanningatripandyourhomestaylooksamazing.CanIbookaroom?”thecallerinquired.Amrita'sfacelitup.“Absolutely!Letmetellyouallaboutit,”shesaid,herwordsflowingwithenthusiasm.Afterthecall,shecouldn'twaittogeteverythingready.Shefeltadeepsenseofg
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