七年级下册 Unit 5作文指导（教师版）

七年级下册Unit5"HereandNow"写作课学案（教师版）一、写作指导（一）写作话题主题：描述你或他人正在进行的活动（如家庭、学校、公园等场景）。时态要求：现在进行时（am/is/are+V-ing）。常用句型：•Iam.../He/Sheis.../We/Theyare...•Look!...isV-ing...•Rightnow,...areV-ing...（二）写作素材1.家庭场景•活动：做饭、看电视、打扫、玩游戏等。•例句：It'sSundayevening.Mymotheriscookingdinnerinthekitchen.Myfatheriswatchingthenewsonthesofa.Iamdoingmyhomework,andmylittlesisterisplayingwithhertoys.2.学校场景•活动：上课、运动、午餐时间等。•例句：It's10a.m.WearehavinganEnglishclass.Theteacheriswritingontheblackboard.Somestudentsaretakingnotes,andothersareaskingquestions.3.户外场景（公园/操场）•活动：散步、运动、野餐等。•例句：Thesunisshining.Manypeoplearejogginginthepark.Agroupofchildrenareflyingkites,andtwooldmenareplayingchessunderatree.（三）写作模板开头：交代时间、地点、天气等背景。中间：分句描述不同人物/群体的活动（用现在进行时）。结尾：总结感受或场景氛围。例文：ABusyAfternooninOurSchoolIt's4:30p.m.,andourschoolisfullofenergy!Ontheplayground,somestudentsareplayingfootball.Othersarerunningaroundthetrack.Inthelibrary,afewquietkidsarereadingbooks.Themusicroomisnoisybecausethebandispracticinganewsong.Everyoneisenjoyingtheirtimehere!（四）易错点：1.漏掉be动词：❌Sheplayingbasketball.✅Sheisplayingbasketball.2.动词未加-ing：❌Theyareplaygames.✅Theyareplayinggames.3.混淆现在进行时和一般现在时：❌HeusuallyiswatchingTV.（一般现在时表习惯）✅HeiswatchingTVnow.二、综合训练（一）基础翻译练习（单句）将以下句子翻译成英语，注意现在进行时的结构（am/is/are+V-ing）。1.我妈妈正在厨房做饭。→Mymotheriscookinginthekitchen.2.看！那些男孩在操场上踢足球。→Look!Thoseboysareplayingfootballontheplayground.3.现在是晚上7点，我爸爸在看电视。→It’s7p.m.now.MyfatheriswatchingTV.4.不要吵，我的妹妹正在写作业。→Don’tmakenoise.Mysisterisdoingherhomework.5.公园里，一些老人在下棋，孩子们在放风筝。→Inthepark,someoldmenareplayingchess,andthechildrenareflyingkites.（二）进阶翻译练习（复合句）翻译时需注意时间状语、地点状语和并列动作。1.现在是周末，我和朋友们在商场购物，我的弟弟在家打游戏。→It’stheweekend.MyfriendsandIareshoppingatthemall,andmybrotherisplayinggamesathome.2.教室里，老师正在黑板上写字，学生们在记笔记。→Intheclassroom,theteacheriswritingontheblackboard,andthestudentsaretakingnotes.3.天气很好，许多人在海滩上晒太阳，还有一些人在游泳。→Theweatherisnice.Manypeoplearesunbathingonthebeach,andsomeareswimming.4.午餐时间到了，同学们在食堂排队，有的在聊天，有的在看手机。→It’slunchtime.Thestudentsareliningupinthecanteen.Somearechatting,andothersarelookingattheirphones.（三）纠错与解析：以下翻译有错误，请改正并说明原因。1.❌Sheislistentomusicnow.✅Sheislisteningtomusicnow.→动词listen必须加-ing（规则：去e加ing）。2.❌Theyareplaybasketballafterschool.✅Theyareplayingbasketballafterschool.→现在进行时需用playing（直接加-ing）。3.❌Look!Thebirdsinginthetree.✅Look!Thebirdissinginginthetree.→缺少be动词，且sing需变singing。（四）场景速写翻译（小段落）：根据中文提示，用现在进行时写一段话（50词左右）。场景：周末的动物园，游客们正在观看动物，有的拍照，有的喂食。参考范文：It’sSundaymorning.Manyvisitorsareatthezoo.Somearetakingphotosofthelions,andothersarefeedingthemonkeys.Thechildrenarelaughinghappily.Everyoneishavingagreattime!（五）作文题目（三选一）1.《ABusyMorninginMyHome》（描述家人早晨的活动）2.《WhatAreWeDoingintheClassroom?》（描写课堂上同学们正在做的事情）3.《AHappyAfternooninthePark》（描述公园里人们的活动）要求：•使用现在进行时（am/is/are+V-ing）•包含时间、地点、天气等背景信息•至少5-8个句子，60-80词左右范文1：《ABusyMorninginMyHome》(描述家人早晨的活动)Itis7:30a.m.onasunnyMondaymorning.Myfamilyisverybusy.Mymotheriscookingbreakfastinthekitchen.Myfatherisreadingthenewspaperanddrinkingcoffee.Mylittlebrotherisbrushinghisteethinthebathroom.IampackingmyschoolbagbecauseIdon’twanttobelate.Everyoneisinahurry,butwearehappy!亮点分析：•时间、天气背景清晰（7:30a.m.,sunnyMonday）•使用iscooking/isreading/isbrushing/ampacking等现在进行时•结尾表达感受（happy）范文2：《WhatAreWeDoingintheClassroom?》(描写课堂上同学们的活动)It’s9:00a.m.,andwearehavinganEnglishclass.Ourteacher,Ms.Li,iswritingnewwordsontheblackboard.Somestudentsaretakingnotescarefully.Twoboysarewhispering,buttheteacherasksthemtostop.Iamlisteningtotheteacherandtryingtounderstandeverything.LearningEnglishisfun!亮点分析：•课堂场景生动（whispering,takingnotes）•使用iswriting/aretaking/arewhispering/amlistening等现在进行时•结尾表达观点（LearningEnglishisfun!）范文3：《AHappyAfternooninthePark》(描述公园里人们的活动)It’sawarmSundayafternoon,andtheparkisfullofpeople.Somechildrenarerunningandlaughing.Afewoldmenareplayingchessunderabigtree.Ayoungcoupleistakingphotosneartheflowers.MyfriendsandIaresittingonthegrassandeatingicecream.Everyoneisenjoyingthesunshine!亮点分析：•天气、地点明确（warmSundayafternoon,park）•使用arerunning/arep