2025年小学英语毕业考试模拟试卷：英语写作思路拓展与作文修改技巧训练试题

2025年小学英语毕业考试模拟试卷：英语写作思路拓展与作文修改技巧训练试题考试时间：______分钟总分：______分姓名：______一、英语写作思路拓展要求：根据所给话题，运用拓展思维，用英语完成一篇100-120词的短文。内容包括：描述你所见到的某个自然景象，如：一片美丽的花园、一个宁静的湖泊、一片茂密的森林等；阐述你对这个景象的感受和思考；并简要说明这个景象给你的启示。1.描述你所见到的某个自然景象，如：一片美丽的花园。a.描述花园的总体布局和色彩搭配。b.描述花园中的花草树木和动物。c.描述你在花园中的活动，如：散步、赏花、拍照等。d.描述你在花园中的感受和思考。2.阐述你对这个景象的感受和思考。a.描述你在这个景象中的情绪体验。b.分析这个景象对你的启示。3.简要说明这个景象给你的启示。a.总结这个景象对你的影响。b.描述你从中学到的道理或感悟。二、英语作文修改技巧训练要求：根据所给短文，找出其中的错误，并进行修改。修改后的短文应保持原意不变，且语法、拼写正确。1.原文：Iwasinasupermarketyesterday.WhenIwasgoingtopayformythings,thecashiergavemethewrongchange.Isaid,"Excuseme,Igaveyoutherightmoney."Hesaid,"Iamverysorry,Imakeamistake."Thenhegavemetherightchange.改正后的短文：Iwasinasupermarketyesterday.WhenIwasgoingtopayformythings,thecashiergavemethewrongchange.Isaid,"Excuseme,Igaveyoutherightmoney."Hesaid,"Iamverysorry,Imadeamistake."Thenhegavemetherightchange.2.原文：Lastweek,Iwenttothecinemawithmyfriends.Wesawamovieaboutasuperhero.Themoviewasveryexciting.Afterthemovie,wewenttothesnackbarandhadsomepopcorn.Itwasdelicious.改正后的短文：Lastweek,Iwenttothecinemawithmyfriends.Wesawamovieaboutasuperhero.Themoviewasveryexciting.Afterthemovie,wewenttothesnackbarandhadsomepopcorn.Itwasdelicious.3.原文：Myfatherisadoctor.Heworksinahospital.Everyday,hehelpspatientswhoaresick.Heisakindandresponsibleperson.Iamveryproudofhim.改正后的短文：Myfatherisadoctor.Heworksinahospital.Everyday,hehelpssickpatients.Heisakindandresponsibleperson.Iamveryproudofhim.四、英语词汇辨析要求：从下列每组词汇中选择最恰当的词填空，使句子意思完整、通顺。1.Hewas___________(excited/excitedly)whenheheardthenewsofhispromotion.2.Theteacher___________(ask/asked)ustobequietinthelibrary.3.Sheis___________(good/well)atplayingthepiano.4.Thesun___________(rise/rises)intheeasteverymorning.5.Thecat___________(sleep/slept)onthematallday.6.I___________(have/had)awonderfultimeatthepartylastnight.7.She___________(go/went)tothestoretobuysomegroceries.8.Thechildren___________(play/played)intheparkduringtheirrecess.9.Thebook___________(be/was)writtenbyafamousauthor.10.He___________(promise/promised)tofinishtheworkbytomorrow.五、英语语法填空要求：从下列各题所给的A、B、C、D四个选项中，选出可以填入空白处的最佳选项。1.I___________(not/have/never)watchedsuchafascinatingmoviebefore.2.She___________(go/to/school)everyday.3.IfI___________(be/you/I)inyourshoes,Iwouldmakeadifferentdecision.4.Thecat___________(sleep/is/on)themat.5.He___________(not/do/have)hishomeworkyet.6.She___________(be/am/is)thetallestinourclass.7.Thesun___________(rise/does/is)intheeast.8.He___________(go/to/have)ashower.9.They___________(do/not/do)theirhomeworkeveryday.10.I___________(go/am/be)totheparkthisafternoon.六、英语阅读理解要求：阅读下列短文，根据短文内容，从每题所给的A、B、C、D四个选项中选出最佳答案。AshortstoryaboutkindnessOnceuponatime,therewasasmallvillageinthemountains.Thevillagerswereverykindandhelpfultoeachother.Oneday,atravelercametothevillage.Hewastiredandhungry.Heaskedthevillagersforhelp,buttheyallrefusedtohelphim.Thetravelerwasverysadanddisappointed.Ashewaswalkingawayfromthevillage,hesawanoldmansittingbythesideoftheroad.Theoldmanwasverypoorandhisclothesweretorn.Thetravelerdecidedtohelphim.Hegavetheoldmansomefoodandmoney.Theoldmanwasverygratefulandthankedthetraveler.Thenextday,thetravelerwentbacktothevillage.Hewassurprisedtoseethatallthevillagersweresmilingandhelpingeachother.Thetraveleraskedoneofthevillagerswhytheyweresohappy.Thevillagerreplied,"Youshowedusthepowerofkindness.Whenyouhelpedtheoldman,werealizedthatweshouldalsohelpeachother."Thetravelerlearnedavaluablelessonthatday.Herealizedthatkindnesscanchangetheworld.Questions:1.Wheredidthetravelercomefrom?A.ThemountainsB.ThevillageC.ThecityD.Theforest2.Whywasthetravelersadanddisappointed?A.Hewastiredandhungry.B.Thevillagersrefusedtohelphim.C.Hedidn'thaveanymoney.D.Hedidn'thaveaplacetostay.3.Whatdidthetravelerdofortheoldman?A.Hegavehimsomefoodandmoney.B.Hebroughthimtothevillage.C.Hehelpedhimfindajob.D.Heofferedhimaplacetostay.4.Howdidthevillagersreacttothetraveler'skindness?A.Theywereangry.B.Theywereindifferent.C.Theyweregrateful.D.Theywerejealous.5.Whatlessondidthetravelerlearnthatday?A.Kindnesscanchangetheworld.B.Moneycansolveallproblems.C.Themountainsarebeautiful.D.Thevillagersaregreedy.本次试卷答案如下：一、英语写作思路拓展1.描述花园的总体布局和色彩搭配。a.Thegardenisbeautifullyarrangedwithavarietyofflowersandplants.b.Thecolorschemeisharmonious,featuringamixofred,yellow,andpurpleflowers.c.Therearetalltrees,shrubs,andasmallpondinthecenter.d.Itookaleisurelystrollthroughthegarden,enjoyingthesereneatmosphere.2.阐述你对这个景象的感受和思考。a.Thegardenbroughtmeasenseofpeaceandtranquility.b.Itmademeappreciatethebeautyofnatureandtheimportanceoftakingcareofourenvironment.3.简要说明这个景象给你的启示。a.Thegardeninspiredmetocreateapeacefulspaceinmyownhome.b.Ittaughtmethevalueofpatienceandhardworkinnurturingplantsandflowers.二、英语作文修改技巧训练1.原文：Iwasinasupermarketyesterday.WhenIwasgoingtopayformythings,thecashiergavemethewrongchange.Isaid,"Excuseme,Igaveyoutherightmoney."Hesaid,"Iamverysorry,Imakeamistake."Thenhegavemetherightchange.改正后的短文：Iwasinasupermarketyesterday.WhenIwasgoingtopayformythings,thecashiergavemethewrongchange.Isaid,"Excuseme,Igaveyoutherightmoney."Hesaid,"Iamverysorry,Imadeamistake."Thenhegavemetherightchange.解析思路：-修改了“makeamistake”为“madeamistake”，使时态一致。-删除了多余的逗号。2.原文：Lastweek,Iwenttothecinemawithmyfriends.Wesawamovieaboutasuperhero.Themoviewasveryexciting.Afterthemovie,wewenttothesnackbarandhadsomepopcorn.Itwasdelicious.改正后的短文：Lastweek,Iwenttothecinemawithmyfriends.Wesawamovieaboutasuperhero.Themoviewasveryexciting.Afterthemovie,wewenttothesnackbarandhadsomepopcorn.Itwasdelicious.解析思路：-无需修改，原句语法和拼写正确。3.原文：Myfatherisadoctor.Heworksinahospital.Everyday,hehelpspatientswhoaresick.Heisakindandresponsibleperson.Iamveryproudofhim.改正后的短文：Myfatherisadoctor.Heworksinahospital.Everyday,hehelpssickpatients.Heisakindandresponsibleperson.Iamveryproudofhim.解析思路：-修改了“sick”为“sickpatients”，使句子更加完整。四、英语词汇辨析1.excited解析思路：-根据句意，描述的是人的情绪，应使用形容词“excited”。2.asked解析思路：-根据句意，描述的是过去发生的动作，应使用过去式“asked”。3.good解析思路：-根据句意，描述的是对钢琴的掌握程度，应使用形容词“good”。4.rises解析思路：-根据句意，描述的是每天发生的动作，应使用一般现在时“rises”。5.slept解析思路：-根据句意，描述的是过去发生的动作，应使用过去式“slept”。6.have解析思路：-根据句意，描述的是过去发生的动作，应使用过去式“have”。7.went解析思路：-根据句意，描述的是过去发生的动作，应使用过去式“went”。8.play解析思路：-根据句意，描述的是过去发生的动作，应使用过去式“play”。9.be解析思路：-根据句意，描述的是过去的状态，应使用过去式“was”。10.promise解析思路：-根据句意，描述的是过去发生的动