Unit4-Lesson4-写作指导如何描述一个地方

Writing-Tointroduceaplace

GOAL

Attheendofthislesson,youwillbeableto

writeapassagetointroduceaplace.Doyouliketravelling?Ifyouhaveachance,wherewouldyouliketogo?Lead-inorthecountrysidethecityLead-inthenaturalsceneryortheplaceofintereststayathomegoabroadLead-inWhatisagoodEnglishpassage?BeforewritingBeforewritingCompletethedescriptionwiththeselinkingwordsfromthetext.

Aucklandisamoderncity.Itisaniceplacetoliveandithasgoodweather,_______.Thecityhaslotsofgoodbeachesforwatersports___________lotsofgoodplacestofish.Itis________knownas“thecityofsails”becauseofalltheboatsthere.alsoaswellastooTip1:Trytouselinkingwords.Beforewriting

HongKong

WelcometoHongKong

Hongkong,likeabrilliantpearl,liesonthenortheasterncoastlineofchina.Itcoversanareaof1104km²andhasapopulationofover6.99million.Becauseitswarmclimate________beautifulscenery,moreandmorepeoplewhoaremoreandmoreinterestedinHongKongcometolive,workorvisitit.Thereare

manyfamousplacesofinterest,suchastheOceanParkandDisneyland.ThefilmindustryisdevelopingrapidlyinHongKong,

.Itplaysanimportantroleinthedevelopmentoftheeconomy.aswellasalsotooBeforewritingFillintheblankswiththelinkingwords.

Hongkong,likeabrilliantpearl,liesonthenortheasterncoastlineofchina.Itcoversanareaof1104squarekilometersandhasapopulationofover6.99million.Hongkong,likeabrilliantpearl,liesonthenortheasterncoastlineofchina,c

anareaof1104squarekilometers

wapopulationofover6.99million.Tip2:Trytousecomplexsentences.overingithBeforewritingBeforewritingBecauseofitswarmclimateaswellasbeautifulscenery,moreandmorepeoplewho’remoreandmoreinterestedinHongKongcometolive,workorvisitit.Becauseofitswarmclimateaswellasbeautifulscenery,ita

ag_______numberofpeoplewhoareiinterestedinHongKong.Tip3:Trytousedifferentpatterns.ttracts

ncreasinglyrowingBeforewritingThefilmindustryisdevelopingrapidlyinHongKong,too.Itplaysanimportantroleinthegrowthoftheeconomy.Thefilmindustry,

isdevelopingrapidlyinHongKong,calottothegrowthoftheeconomy.Tip4:Trytouseadvancedexpressions

whichontributesWritingQuanzhouLocation:inthesoutheastofFujianProvinceArea:11015K㎡Population:

over7million_________inthesouthestofFujianProvince,Quanzhou________________11015K㎡__________________1.3billion.coversanareaLyingLocatedwithapopulationofWritingWriting泉州是重要的经济(economy)中心，以鞋子著称，其约占世界总产量(thetotalworldproduction)的20%。Quanzhouis_________________________economy,and

shoes,______

about20%ofthetotalworldproduction.animportantcentreforisfamousforwhichmakeupWriting泉州是一座历史文化名城(ahistoricalandculturalcity)，已有一千多年的历史，是古代丝绸之路(ancient“MaritimesSilkRoad”)的的起点.

ahistoricalandculturalcity,thehistoryofQuanzhou

1000yearsago,

thestartoftheancient“MaritimesSilkRoad”.Asaswellasgoesback

WritingOldStoneSaint

QingyuanMountainKaiyuanTempleLuoyangBridgeTherearemanyplacesofinterests,suchas…Famoussightsincludes…

Writing假设你是李华，你的美国笔友Nick将于下个月来泉州旅游，来信请你介绍有关泉州的旅游景点情况。请根据下表所提供的要点，写一封回信，并表示盼望他的到来。参考词汇：totalproduction总产量ancient“MaritimeSilkRoad”古代“丝绸之路”ahistoricalandculturalcity历史文化名城QingyuanMountain清源山OldStoneSaint老君岩KaiyuanTemple开元寺LuoyangBridge洛阳桥位置

位于福建东南沿海，在台湾的西岸面积

11015平方公里，人口超过700万人地位是重要的经济中心，以鞋子著称，其约占世界总产量的20%。历史一座历史文化名城，已有一千多年的历史，是古代丝绸之路的的起点名胜有许多著名的风景名胜：清源山；老君岩，开元寺，洛阳桥等。气候温暖湿润，雨量充沛，年平均温度20摄氏度WritingQuestions

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