Unit5-单元主题写作点睛

Unit5单元主题写作点睛旅行类信件写作任务假如你是李华，你的美国朋友Mike来信询问你寒假期间与父母去北京旅游的见闻。请你用英语写一封回信。要点如下：1.北京历史悠久且充满现代气息，当地人友好；2参观了名胜古迹，品尝了当地小吃；3外国人很多，是一座国际化城市；4你的感想。注意1词数80左右；2可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯DearMike，________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua谋篇布局“五定”审题定体裁应用文定人称以第一人称和第三人称为主定时态以一般过去时和一般现在时为主定要点定结构第一段：引入话题——寒假期间与父母去北京旅游；第二段：主体段落—在北京的见闻（介绍北京和参观的景定结构点）及感受；第三段：结尾——期盼对方来访并表达祝愿。参考范文DearMike, I’mgladtohearfromyou.Asyouknow①,duringthewintervacation,myparentsandImadeashorttriptoourcapital—Beijing. Itisamoderncitywithalonghistory.Peopletherearefriendly.Wevisitedmanyplacesofinterestsuchas②theGreatWallandtheBirdsNestWetrieddifferentkindsoflocalfood,too.IsawmanyforeignersworkinginortravellingaroundBeijing③,whichisbecominganinternationalcity④.Itattractspeoplefromallovertheworld.Ienjoyedmytripverymuch.Inaddition⑤,Iamhappytoseemycountrygettingstrongerandmoredeveloped.Lookingforwardto⑥yourcomingtoChina.BestwishesYoursLihua学以致用假设你是王明，寒假即将来临，你打算和家人去上海玩。请你给你的好友李华写一封e-mlil，分享你的出行计划。要点:1.1月21日下午2点左右从醴陵坐高铁去上海，到上海后入住预订酒店，休息一晚。2.第二天到上海迪士尼乐园游玩，体验各种游乐设施，购买纪念品。3.第三天上午参观上海科技馆，下午登东方明珠，欣赏上海全景。4.1月24日乘坐高铁返回。注意1.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯2词数80左右，开头、结尾不计入总词数。参考词汇：high-speedrail（高铁），book（预订）Disneyland（迪士尼乐园），recreationfacilities（游乐设施），souvenir（纪念品），ShanghaiScienceandTechnologyMuseum（上海科技馆），theorientalpearltower（东方明珠）DearLihua,_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Howabouttheplanforyourwinterholiday?Iamlookingforwardyourreply.Yours,WangMing参考范文DearLiHua,Howiseverythinggoing?Asthewinterholidayiscoming,Iwillhaveafour-daytriptoShanghaiwithmyfamilyWewillbeleavingLilingforShanghaibyhigh-speedrailataround2:00p.m.onJan.21st.UponarrivinginShanghai,wewillcheckinatthehotelforagoodrestfirst,whichisbookedonlineinadvanceOnthesecondday,wearegoingtotheDisneylandtoexperienceallkindsofrecreationfacilities,andbuysomesouvenirsatthesametime.Onthethirdday,wewillbevisitingShanghaiScienceandTechnologyMuseuminthemoming.Besides,wewillbeclimbingtheOrientalPearlTowerintheafternoon,fromwhichwewillbeenjoyingthewholeviewofShanghai.OnJan.24th