2025年高考英语应用文第02讲 征文投稿（讲义）解析版

第02讲征文投稿

目录

01考情透视·目标导航·························································································1

02知识导图·思维引航·························································································2

03考点突破·考法探究·························································································2

一征文投稿类写作技巧·······················································································2

知识点1命题规律·························································································2

知识点2写作技巧·························································································2

二征文投稿类经典必背·······················································································3

知识点1好词好句积累·················································································3

知识点2满分模板必背··················································································5

04真题练习·命题洞现

1.真题实战·······························································································5

2.命题演练······························································································12

近三年高考真题征文投稿考点细目表

年份卷别体裁话题内容

浙江1月卷投稿学校生活向校英文报“SportsandHealth”栏目投稿

2024

北京卷投稿学校生活外国好友Jim准备给校报的AsiaToday栏目投稿。

2023全国甲卷投稿历史文化介绍中国历史人物

2023全国乙卷投稿生活学习假期习得新技能

2022全国甲卷征文世界海洋日举办英语征文比赛

2022全国乙卷投稿调查结果英语学习方式的调查

一写作技巧

知识点1命题规律

征文、投稿，区别与书信，一般会给出特定的主题。如庆祝英文栏目创刊十周年，你最敬爱的人等等。不要在开头

和结尾生搬硬套如“I’writingto...”等书信格式。基本上写一篇相关话题的小短文即可，小短文以记叙文或者议论文为主。

文章框架结构“引出话题-要点展开-总结全文”。主次分明，逻辑清晰。主题句要出现关键点，如现状、原因、看法、

影响、意义、措施、建议等。拓展句具体详细，有意识使用逻辑衔接词。

知识点2写作技巧

第一段：开门见山，引出话题。

第二段：介绍主题人或事物细节。

第三段：表达愿望。

二征文投稿类经典必背

知识点1好词好句积累

【必背词语】

1.同意，赞同subscribeto

2.忠实的读者faithfulreaders

3.表达自己的观点voicetheiropinions

4.不遗余力地做某事sparenoeffortstodo...

5.共同努力做某事makejointefforttodo...

6.对...…有害doharmto/beharmfulto...

7.谈到、提到Whenitcomesto...

8.不可否认......Thereisnodenyingthat...

9.随着新学期的临近Withthenewtermapproaching

10.面临考试befacedwithchallengeexams

11.人们普遍认为....Itisuniversallyacknowledgedthat...

12.很明显，明显地Itisobviousthat.../obliviously

13.极为重要；强调...…的重要性...ofgreat/crucial/vitalsignificance/importance;

14.强调…的重要性emphasizetheimportanceof...;highlightthesignificanceof...;attachimportanceto......…

【必背开头段】

1.Anarticleinthenewspapercaughtmyattention.报纸上一篇文章引起了我的注意

2.Whenitcomestoprotectingtheocean,itiswell-knownthatoceanplaysanimportantpartinourlife.

说到保护海洋，众所周知，海洋在我们的生活中扮演着重要的角色。

3.TherearemanypeoplewhoIrespect.Asforme,myfatheristheoneIrespect.ThereasonswhyIrespecthimareas

follows.

近来，随着智能手机和电脑的日益流行，越来越多的学生选择用它们在课外学习英语。

4.Nowadays,withtheimprovementofthestandardofliving,anincreasingnumberofteenagerssufferfromobesity,which

arousessocialconcerns.

如今，随着生活水平的提高，越来越多的青少年患有肥胖症，这引起了社会的关注。

5.InthelongspanoftheChinesehistory,theexistenceoftheoutstandingConfuciusislikeashiningpearl.

在中国漫长的历史上，杰出的孔子的存在就像一颗闪亮的珍珠。

6.Sb.isconsideredtobeoneofthemostinfluentialfiguresinhistoryduetohis/heraccomplishments/achievements/impact].

某人被认为是历史上最具影响力的人物之一，因为他/她的[成就/影响力/贡献]。

7.ThelonghistoryofChinahaswitnessedtheflourishingofpoetryandthebrillianceofmanyexceptionalpoets,among

whomIadmireDuFumost.

中国悠久的历史见证了诗歌的繁荣和许多杰出诗人的才华，其中我最欣赏杜甫。

【必背主题段】

1.Asahighschoolstudent,Inoticedthatmanystudentshadaseriesofhealthproblemsbecauseofirregulardiet.

作为一名高中生，我注意到很多学生都因为饮食不规律而出现了一系列健康问题。

2.Myfavouritesportsisropeskipping,becausenotonlycanIdoitathomeconvenientlybutalsoitcanhelptorefreshme

afterIgettiredfromdoinghomework.

我最喜欢的运动是跳绳，因为跳绳不仅可以方便地在家里做，而且可以帮助我在做完作业累了之后提神。

3.Additionally,ItakedelightinvariousactivitiesinthereadingclubeveryFriday,whereIgetimmersedintheseaof

literature,greatlyimprovingmyliterarycompetence.

此外，我喜欢每周五在阅读俱乐部的各种活动，在那里我沉浸在文学的海洋里，大大提高了我的文学能力。

4.Onlyifwetakeactiontoexercisecanwebehealthierandhealthierinthefuture.

只有当我们采取行动去锻炼时，我们才能在未来变得更健康。

5.Foronething,notonlydoestheoceanoffersusvariousofseafoodtoeat,butalsoitishometomanykindsofanimals.

首先，海洋不仅为我们提供了各种各样的海鲜可以吃，而且它也是多种动物的家园。

6.Notonlydoesplayingbasketballbuildupmybodyandrelievestressfromstudy,butitalsopromotesfriendshipwithothers.

打篮球球不仅增强了我的体质，减轻了学习的压力，而且增进了与他人的友谊。

7.Facedwiththechallengeofbeingdestroyed,missingorevenbeingstolen,traditionalChineserelicsareurgenttobe

protected.

面对被销毁、失踪甚至被盗的挑战，中国传统文物迫切需要得到保护。

【必背结尾段】

1．Iwillgreatlyappreciatearesponsefromyouatyourearliestconvenience.

如果您能尽快回复，我将不胜感激。

2．IdoexpectYouthcanpublishmoreclassicworksandhaveapromisingfuture.

我希望《青年》能出版更多的经典作品，并有一个光明的未来。

3．Iwillgreatlyappreciatearesponsefromyouatyourearliestconvenience.

如果您能尽快回复，我将不胜感激。

4．Wehopethatwithallthesemeasurestaken,eyesightproblemscanbegreatlyreduced.

我们希望这些有效的措施能大大减少视力问题。

5．IsincerelyhopeYouthwillachievegreatersuccessandhaveapromisingfuture.

我衷心希望Youth能取得更大的成就，更受欢迎。

6．IsincerelyhopethatthroughmoreunderstandingofConfuciusandhisConfucianism,wecanmaketheworldfilledwith

morelove,justiceandpeace.

我真诚地希望，通过对孔子及其儒家思想的进一步理解，我们能让世界充满更多的爱、正义与和平。

7．Personally,itishightimethatwesparednoefforttopreservetraditionalculturalrelics.

就我个人而言，我们是时候不遗余力地保护传统文物了。

知识点2满分模板必背

DearEditor,

whenitcomesto___________________(当谈到...时）,itiswidelyacknowledgedthat________________________

（众所周知）.

Foronething,_________________________（主题特色一）.Notonly_________________________but

also_________________________________(具体特点)Foranther,thereisnodoubt

that________________________________(主题特色二)

Idohopethat________________________.(表达期望).Allinall,itishightimethat....(sbdidsth)

一、真题实战（无提示词填空）

1.（2024年浙江卷1月）请你写一篇短文向校英文报“SportsandHealth”栏目投稿，向同学们推荐一项适合课间开展的运

动，内容包括：

1.介绍这项运动；

2.说明推荐理由。

注意：

1.写作词数应为80个左右；

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答：

StandUpandExercise,Everybody!

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【答案】

StandUpandExercise,Everybody!

Everybody!Areyoutiredofsittinginclassallday?Howaboutincorporatingsomephysicalactivityintoyourdailyroutine?

Onegreatoptionisthe“StandUpandStretch”exercise.Thissimpleroutineinvolvesstandingupfromyourdesk,stretchingyour

arms,legsandback,andtakingafewdeepbreaths.It’saquickandeasywaytogetyourbloodflowingandre-energizeyourbody

andmind.Thisexerciseisrecommendedforseveralreasons.

First,ithelpstocombatthenegativeeffectsofprolongedsitting,suchasbackpainandstiffness.Second,itcanimproveyour

focusandconcentration,makingiteasiertostayengagedinclass.Lastly,itpromotesahealthyandactivelifestyle,whichis

essentialforoverallwell-being.

So,nexttimeyoufeelabitsluggishduringclass,remembertostandupandstretch!It’sasmallchangethatcanmakeabig

differenceinyourday.

【解析】

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一篇短文向校英文报“SportsandHealth”栏目投稿，向同学们推荐一项适

合课间开展的运动。

【详解】1.词汇积累

厌倦：betiredof→befedupwith

首先：first→aboveall

减轻：combat→relieve

提高：improve→enhance

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：Thissimpleroutineinvolvesstandingupfromyourdesk,stretchingyourarms,legsandback,andtakingafewdeep

breaths.

拓展句：Thisisasimpleroutinethatinvolvesstandingupfromyourdesk,stretchingyourarms,legsandback,andtakingafew

deepbreaths.

【点睛】[高分句型1]Lastly,itpromotesahealthyandactivelifestyle,whichisessentialforoverallwell-being.(运用了which

引导的非限制性定语从句)

[高分句型2]Thissimpleroutineinvolvesstandingupfromyourdesk,stretchingyourarms,legsandback,andtakingafewdeep

breaths.(运用了动名词作宾语)

[高分句型2]It’sasmallchangethatcanmakeabigdifferenceinyourday.(运用了that引导的定语从句)

2.（2024年北京卷）假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的外国好友Jim准备给其校报的AsiaToday栏目投稿。得知今

年新中国成立75周年，他打算重点介绍中国的发展成就，发来邮件询问你的建议。请你用英文给他回复，内容包括：

(1)建议投稿内容；

(2)就以上建议简要说明理由。

注意：(1)词数100左右；

(2)开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

DearJim,

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Yours,

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【答案】

DearJim,

It’sgreattohearyou’replanningtowriteaboutChina’sachievementsontheoccasionofthe75thanniversaryofthefounding

ofthiscountry.Hereareafewsuggestionsforyourarticle.

Tobeginwith,talkaboutChina’seconomicgrowthandtechnologicaladvancements,whicharethehighlightsinthepastfew

decades.Then,projectsliketheBeltandRoadInitiativemakeagoodtopictodiscussbecauseitshowcasesChina’sdetermination

tobuildasharedfuturewiththeworld.Inaddition,youcanalsomentionChina’sroleinhelpingsolvingglobalissuessuchasthe

globalwarming,offeringamorecomprehensiveview.

Lookingforwardtoreadingyourarticle!

Yours,

LiHua

【解析】

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文写。外国好友Jim准备给其校报的AsiaToday栏目投稿。得知今年新中国成立75周年，

他打算重点介绍中国的发展成就，要求考生给他回复邮件，就此给予他建议。

【详解】1.词汇积累

很好的：great→wonderful

成就：achievement→accomplishment

建议：suggestion→advice

此外：Inaddition→what’smore

2.句式拓展

句式变换

原句：It’sgreattohearyou’replanningtowriteaboutChina’sachievementsontheoccasionofthe75thanniversaryofthe

foundingofthiscountry.

拓展句：It’sgreattohearwhatyou’replanningtowriteaboutisChina’sachievementsontheoccasionofthe75thanniversaryof

thefoundingofthiscountry.

【点睛】【高分句型1】Tobeginwith,talkaboutChina’seconomicgrowthandtechnologicaladvancements,whicharethe

highlightsinthepastfewdecades.（运用了which引导的非限定性定语从句）

【高分句型2】Then,projectsliketheBeltandRoadInitiativemakeagoodtopictodiscussbecauseitshowcasesChina’s

determinationtobuildasharedfuturewiththeworld.（运用了because引导的原因状语从句）

3.（2023年全国甲卷）

你们学校正举办主题为“用英文讲中国故事”的征文活动。请你以一位中国历史人物为题写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：

1.人物简介及事迹；

2.意义或启示。

注意：

1.词数100左右；

2.题目已为你写好。

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【答案】

Confuciusisawell-knownfigureinChinesehistory.Histeachingsemphasizedtheimportanceofmoralvalues,respectfor

elders,andsocialharmony.Confuciustraveledthroughoutthecountry,impartinghiswisdomtocountlessdisciplesandleavinga

profoundimpactonChinesesociety.

ThesignificanceofConfuciuscannotbeoverstated.HisteachingsshapedthemoralandethicalfoundationofChineseculture,

fosteringrespectforauthority,harmoniousrelationships,andthepursuitofknowledge.Eventoday,hisideascontinuetoguide

individualsandcommunitiesinChinaandbeyond.

Confucius’slifeoffersvaluablelessons.Hestressedtheself-cultivation,respectforelders,andthepursuitofknowledge,

whichservesasaguidinglightinourfast-pacedandinterconnectedworld.Histeachingsremindusoftheimportanceofintegrity,

compassion,andsocialresponsibility.

【解析】

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生为学校正举办的主题为“用英文讲中国故事”的征文活动写一篇短文投稿。

【详解】1.词汇积累

著名的：well-known→famous

人物：figure→person

强调：emphasize→stress

基础：foundation→basis

4.（2023年全国乙卷）

请以向学校英文报投稿的方式，用英语描述学习一项新技能的经历，及从中获得的体验和感受。

注意：1.词数100左右；

2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

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【答案】

WhenIwasinmyprimaryschool,Ihadanopportunitytoattendamusicalcontestheldinmyschool.Thatwasthefirsttime

Iwatchedalivemusicalperformance.Thefantasticplayerstouchedmedeeply.

Iaskedmyparentsallowingmetotakeupapianolessonforbeginner.Inthebeginning,itwasquitedifficulttoreadthe

notesonthestave.However,itdidnotdemoralizeme.Ispentmostofmyleisurehourstopracticepiano.Althoughmyfingers

werepainfulafterfewhourspractice,IfeltsatisfiedifIcouldplayamusicpiececompletely.

EventhoughIwillnotpursueasmylifecareer,Iwillstillcontinuelearningandplayingpianoasmyhobby.Itissimply

becausemusicisthebestmedicationformysoul.

【解析】

【导语】本篇书面表达属于记叙文，请以向学校英文报投稿的方式，用英语描述学习一项新技能的经历，及从中获得的

体验和感受。

【详解】1.词汇积累

机会：opportunity→chance

使沮丧：demoralize→discourage

满意的：satisfied→content

空闲的：leisure→spare

2.句式拓展

合并简单句

原句：Thefantasticplayerstouchedmedeeply.Iaskedmyparentsallowingmetotakeupapianolessonforbeginner.

拓展句：Thefantasticplayerstouchedmedeeply,soIaskedmyparentsallowingmetotakeupapianolessonforbeginner.

点睛

【高分句型1】WhenIwasinmyprimaryschool,Ihadanopportunitytoattendamusicalcontestheldinmyschool.(运用了

when引导的时间状语从句)

【高分句型2】Althoughmyfingerswerepainfulafterfewhourspractice,IfeltsatisfiedifIcouldplayamusicpiececompletely.

(运用了although引导的让步状语从句和if引导的条件状语从句)

5.（2022年全国乙卷）

学校英文报正在开展以LearningEnglishBeyondtheClassroom为题的讨论。请使用图表中的调查结果写一篇短文投稿，内

容包括：

1.学习活动状况描述；

2.简单评论；

3.你的建议。

注意：

1.词数100左右；

2.短文的题目和首句已为你写好。

【答案】LearningEnglishBeyondtheClassroom

Nowadays,withthegrowingpopularityofsmartphonesandcomputers,anincreasingnumberofstudentsarechoosingto

learnEnglishbeyondtheclassroominvariousways.

ItcaneasilybeseenthatthepercentageofstudentswhochooselisteningtoEnglishsongsandwatchingEnglishmoviesis

respectively65%and50%.However,thosechoosingreadingEnglishbooksandvisitingEnglishlearningwebsitesonlyaccount

for18%and12%.

AsfarasI’mconcerned,itisadisturbingtrend.Forstudents,whatbenefitsmosttotheirstudyisreadingEnglishbooks.

Becauseoftheirlackofself-discipline,they’remoreeasilyaddictedtochattingonlineorplayinggames.It’surgentforstudents

themselvestoimprovetheirself-discipline,andit’salsourgentforparentsandteacherstostrengthentheguidance.

【导语】本篇书面表达属于议论文，要求考生使用图表中的调查结果写一篇短文投稿，对学生的英语学习活动状况进行

描述并作简单的评论，提出建议。

【详解】1.词汇积累

缺乏：lack→shortage

加强：strengthen→enhance

各种各样的：various→allkindsof

就我而言：asfarasI’mconcerned→frommyperspective

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：However,thosechoosingreadingEnglishbooksandvisitingEnglishlearningwebsitesonlyaccountfor18%and12%.

拓展句：However,thosewhochoosereadingEnglishbooksandvisitingEnglishlearningwebsitesonlyaccountfor18%and12%.

【点睛】【高分句型1】ItcaneasilybeseenthatthepercentageofstudentswhochooselisteningtoEnglishsongsandwatching

Englishmoviesisrespectively65%and50%.(运用了it作形式主语，that引导主语从句以及who引导的定语从句)

【高分句型2】Forstudents,whatbenefitsmosttotheirstudyisreadingEnglishbooks.(运用了what引导的主语从句)

6.（2022年全国乙卷）

你校将以六月八日世界海洋日为主题，举办英语征文比赛，请你写一篇短文投稿。

内容包括：

1.海洋的重要性；

2.保护海洋的倡议。

注意：1.词数100左右；

2.短文的题目和首句已为你写好。

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【答案】

Whenitcomestoocean,itspollutionisbecomingmoreandmoreserious.WorldOceanDay,fallingonJune8th,isaimedat

raisingawarenessofoceanconservation.

Oceanplaysakeyroleinourworld.Notonlydoesoceanofferussufficientfood,butalsoitmaintainsthebalanceofnature.

Thus,itisimperativetoprotectocean.Firstofall,whatwecandoistoplaceimportanceonourdailyactions.Forexample,

garbagecan’tbethrownintoocean.What’smore,wecanalsohandoutleafletstocallonmorepeopletoprotecttheocean.The

morepeopleareinvolved,thebettertheoceanenvironmentis.

Allinall,itishightimethatwedevotedourselvestoprotectingocean.Toprotectoceanistoprotectourselves.

【导语】本文是一篇应用文，就世界海洋日为主题向英文征文比赛投稿，阐述海洋的重要性并提出一些建议。

【详解】1.词汇积累

越来越：moreandmore→increasingly

重视：placeimportanceon→attachimportanceto

重要的：key→significant

此外：what’smore→furthermore

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：WorldOceanDay,fallingonJune8th,isaimedatraisingawarenessofoceanconservation.

拓展句：WorldOceanDay,whichfallsonJune8th,isaimedatraisingawarenessofoceanconservation.

【点睛】[高分句型1]Notonlydoesoceanofferussufficientfood,butalsoitmaintainsthebalanceofnature.(运用了部分倒装结

构)

[高分句型2]Whenitcomestoocean,itspollutionisbecomingmoreandmoreserious.(使用了固定句型)

[高分句型3]Firstofall,whatwecandoistoplaceimportanceonourdailyactions.(使用了主语从句)

二、命题演练

1．（24-25高三上·广东广州·开学考试）

假定你是李华，你校计划在暑假期间重修图书馆，校英文报举办主题为“Smallchangesmakeanideallibrary”的征文活动，

向同学们征求意见，请你写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：

（1）提出建议；

（2）说明理由。

注意：

（1）写作词数应为80个左右；

（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Smallchangesmakeanideallibrary

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Smallchangesmakeanideallibrary

Asastudent,Iamexcitedabouttheupcomingrenovationofourlibrary.Amongthemanypossiblechanges,Iparticularly

hopefortwoimprovements.

Firstly,Ienvisionacozierreadingareawithsoftlightingandcomfortableseating.Thiswillcreatearelaxingatmosphere,

encouragingstudentstoimmersethemselvesinbooksforlongerperiods.Secondly,Ibelievetheadditionofmoreelectricaloutlets

andUSBchargingstationsiscrucial.Withmoderndevicesbecomingindispensableforlearning,havingeasyaccesstocharging

facilitieswillbeagreatconvenience.

Thesesmallyetsignificantchangeswillundoubtedlycontributetomakingourlibraryanidealplaceforlearningand

exploration.

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一篇短文，向校英文报投稿，参加校英文报举办的主题为“Smallchanges

makeanideallibrary”的征文活动。

【详解】1.词汇积累

兴奋：excited→thrilled

特别：particularly→inparticular

重要：crucial→vital

不可缺少的：indispensable→obbligato

2.句式拓展

合并简单句

原句：Firstly,Ienvisionacozierreadingareawithsoftlightingandcomfortableseating.Thiswillcreatearelaxingatmosphere,

encouragingstudentstoimmersethemselvesinbooksforlongerperiods.

拓展句：Firstly,Ienvisionacozierreadingareawithsoftlightingandcomfortableseating,whichwillcreatearelaxing

atmosphere,encouragingstudentstoimmersethemselvesinbooksforlongerperiods.

【点睛】[高分句型1]Thiswillcreatearelaxingatmosphere,encouragingstudentstoimmersethemselvesinbooksforlonger

periods.(运用了现在分词短语作状语)

[高分句型2]Withmoderndevicesbecomingindispensableforlearning,havingeasyaccesstochargingfacilitieswillbeagreat

convenience.(运用了现在分词becoming作宾语补足语，动名词having作主语)

2．（24-25高三上·江苏南通·阶段练习）

你校英文报Echo正在庆祝创刊十周年。请你写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：

1.读报的经历；2.喜爱的栏目；3.期望和祝福。

注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；

2.请按如下格式写字答题卡的相应位置作答。

EchoandMe

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【答案】EchoandMe

Ithasbeen10yearssinceEchowasfounded.Inmymemory,itisEchothataccompaniesmethroughmywholehighschool.

Whenfeelingdepressed,Ioftenchoosetoenjoythenovelpartwhichincludesalotofimaginativestories.Thesestoriescan

relievemystressandbroadenmyhorizon.Besides,IevensubmittedmyownfictiontoEcho.RefusedasIwas,Istillreceived

somegreatencouragement,whichgivesmeconfidencetobeawriter.

IdoexpectEchocanpublishmoreclassicworksandhaveapromisingfuture.

【导语】本篇书面表达属于投稿，要求考生写一篇短文向学校英文报Echo投稿，内容包括：1.读报的经历；2.喜爱的

栏目；3.期望和祝福。

【详解】1.词汇积累

沮丧的：depressed→downcast

减轻：relieve→ease

压力：stress→pressure

另外：besides→moreover

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：Thesestoriescanrelievemystressandbroadenmyhorizon.

拓展句：Thesestories,whichcanrelievemystressandbroadenmyhorizon,arevaluabletome.

【点睛】[高分句型1]Inmymemory,itisEchothataccompaniesmethroughmywholehighschool.(运用了强调句)

[高分句型2]Whenfeelingdepressed,Ioftenchoosetoenjoythenovelpartwhichincludesalotofimaginativestories.(运用了

when引导的时间状语从句，省略和which引导的限制性定语从句)

3．（23-24高三下·重庆黔江·阶段练习）

假定你是李华，你校英文报Communication正在组织是否应该进行考试成绩排名并公布的讨论，请你写一篇短文投稿，

内容包括：

1.你赞成与否：

2.简述你的理由。

注意：

1.写作词数应为80左右；

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

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Shouldstudentsberankedaccordingtotheirexamgradesandshouldtherankingbepublished?Recentlythequestionis

underheateddiscussion.Personally,Iarguethattheycanberankedbuttherankingshouldnotbeannouncedpublicly.Theranking

cantellmemyexactpositioninmyclassoreveninmyschoolsothatIcanknowhowacademicallygoodIam.Therankingcan

alsoencouragemetoworkhardertocatchmyclassmatesaheadofme.However,Idon’tliketherankingtobemadeknownto

others.Thatwillpushmetoohard.Anywaymyscoresarejustmyprivacy.

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。题目要求学生以李华的身份，写一篇短文投稿，参与校英文报组织的是否应进行考

试成绩排名并公布的讨论，需涵盖个人观点和理由两方面的内容。

【详解】1.词汇积累

激烈的：heated→fierce,furious

主张：argue→contend,maintain

公布：announce→declare,giveout

激励某人做某事：encouragesb.todo→inspiresb.todo,motivatesb.todo

2.句式拓展

合并简单句

原句：However,Idon’tliketherankingtobemadeknowntoothers.Thatwillpushmetoohard.

拓展句：However,Idon’tliketherankingtobemadeknowntoothersbecausethatwillpushmetoohard.

【点睛】[高分句型1]Personally,Iarguethattheycanberankedbuttherankingshouldnotbeannouncedpublicly.(运用了that

引导宾语从句)

[高分句型2]TherankingcantellmemyexactpositioninmyclassoreveninmyschoolsothatIcanknowhowacademically

goodIam.(运用了sothat引导目的状语从句、how引导宾语从句)

4．（24-25高三上·湖北武汉·阶段练习）

假定你是李华,你校英文报举办了以“AnUnforgettableArtLesson”为主题的征文活动。请你写一篇英文短文投稿，分享你

参加的某次艺术课程，内容包括：

1.课程内容:2.你的感想

注意：

(1)写作词数应为80个左右：

(2)请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。

AnUnforgettableArtLesson

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【答案】AnUnforgettableArtLesson

I’mLiHua.I’dliketoshareanunforgettableartlessonIthathadatschool.

Inthatartlesson,ourteach