高考英语读后续写高分技巧

高考英语读后续写高分技巧技巧一重视构成句子的成分生动形象的句子成分--主语◎用并列连词and或or连接两个或多个主语Touchingorpassingfoodoreatingwithyourlefthandistobeavoided.要避免接触或传递食物,或者用左手吃食物〇用定语来修饰主语Playersonasportsteammayfeeldriventoplayharderinordertohelptheteamwin.球队的参赛者可能会感到他们是在被迫为了帮助球队获胜更努力地参加比赛◎描述人物、地点用带同位语的主语MotherTeresa,winneroftheNobelPeacePrize,dedicatedthemajorityofherlifetohelpingthepoorestofthepoorinIndia,thusgainingherthename“SaintofGutters”诺贝尔和平奖获得者特蕾莎修女一生的大部分时间都致力于帮助印度最贫穷的人，因此获得了“排水沟圣人”的称号。〇用带有宾语和状语的非谓语动词作主语Toplayfootballonthesoftlawninthesunnyspringisagreatexperience.阳光明媚的春天，在柔软的草坪上踢足球是种很好的体验。生动形象的句子成分--谓语〇用并列连词连接两个以上平行的谓语动词Istoppedthecar,orderedallkidsoutandtoldthemtomeetmeupahead.我停下车，命令所有孩子们都出去，告诉他们到前面接我。〇平行的谓语动词可以接各自的宾语Idon'twanttowakeuponedayandhavenothingbutapileofpicturesandnotes.我不希望有一天醒来，只有一堆图片和笔记生动形象的句子成分--宾语Obring,hand,lend,mail,offer,owe,pass,paypost,read,return,send,sell,serve,show,take，teach,tell,throw,book,buy,choose,cookdraw,award,fetch,find,fix,get,make,picksave,sing,spare,prepare等动词可以接双宾语Theteachergavethestudentsasetoftests.老师给学生们做了一系列测试。Ocall,elect,choose,find,make,name,cut,beat,drive,get,lay,leave,paint,pull,push,set,tear,wish,believe,consider,feel,know,observe,prove，see,show，think等动词可以接复合宾语Once,Isawthestreetlampslightinguppeopletryingtohidefromtherain.有一次，我看到街灯照亮了试图躲雨的人们。〇谓语动词可以带有多个宾语Iwasbusyrecordingeveryincident,nameandplaceIcameacross.我正忙着记录每一个事件，名字和我遇到的地方。〇用复杂的结构作宾语Istillrecordideasandquotationsthatstrikemeinbooks,orobservationsthatareparticularlymeaningful.我仍然记录书中使我感兴趣的思想,语录或有特殊意櫨氌屡义的观感。生动形象的句子成分--表语◎作表语的名词可以接定语从句AllIrememberedofthepreviousfewdayswerethedullcharacterizationsIhadsetdowninmydiary.我所记得的前几天的事就是我在日记里的枯煤的描述。◎作表语的形容词可以接宾语从句IwassuremysonwouldlearnEnglishinacoupleofmonths.我确信我的儿子将在两个月内学会英语，〇作表语的名词常接介词短语作定语Theupperfloorisaquietzonewithoverathousandplacesforsilentreading,andplaceswhereyoucansitandworkwithyourowncomputer.楼上是一个安静的区域,有超过一千个无声阅读的地方，也有你可以坐下来独自使用自己的电脑工作的地方。生动形象的句子成分--定语〇用不定式复合结构作定语Thelibraryhaslockersforstudentstostorecourseliterature.图书馆有储物柜供学生存放课程文献:〇用介词短语经作后置定语Icanstillrecalltheexcitementofbeinginvitedtodancewiththemostattractiveboyattheschoolparty.我还记得在学校聚会上被邀请和最有魅力的男孩跳舞时的兴奋。〇用过去分词短语作后置定语It'ssuchahappy-lookinglibrary,paintedyellow,decoratedwithpalm-treestickersandshelteredfromtheFloridasunbyitsownroof.这是一个看起来很快乐的图书馆,涂成黄色,用棕榈树贴纸装饰,屋顶还可以遮挡佛罗里达州的阳光。生动形象的句子成分--状语◎过去分词短语作状语,如:Facedwithpressureofstudy,seniorhighschoolstudentsshouldlearntorelaxthemselvesproperly面对学习压力,高中生应该学会适当放松自己Foundedin1900,itisoneofthemostfamousEnglishnewspapersathomeandabroad.它创立于1900年,是国内外最著名的英文报纸○现在分词短语作状语，如:Livinginanenvironmentfulloffiercecompetition.we,agenerationborninthe9Os,arefacedwithmoredifficulties,problemsandcompetition.生活在一个充满激烈竞争的环境中，我们出生于90年代的这代人，面临着更多的困难、问题和竞争。Peopletendtoeatinexpensiverestaurantsandorderunusualfood,believingthatwithmoremoneyintheirpockets,itisabsolutelyreasonabletoeatwhatevertheylike.人们倾向于在昂贵的餐馆吃饭，点不寻常的食物,认为口袋里有更多的钱,想吃什么就吃什么是绝对合理的。◎不定式短语作状语,如:lostopsuchuncivilizedphenomenafromhappeningagain,Ithinkmorestrictrulesshouldbemadeandcarriedout.为了防止这种不文明现象再次发生,我认为应该制定和执行更严格的规则。技巧二重视使用高级词汇用文雅的词汇替换一般词汇◎besupposedto替换shouldTheapplicantsshouldbeanoutgoingperson.Theapplicantsaresupposedtobeanoutgoingperson.申请者需要是一个外向的人。©contributeto替换behelpful/usefulMyskillincommunicationandteamworkarehelpfultomyapplicationforthejob.Myskillincommunicationandteamworkcontributetomyapplicationforthejob.我的沟通和团队合作能力有助于我申请这份工作。◎themajorityof替换mostMostofthestudentspreferwatchingTVathometogoingtothecinema.ThemajorityofthestudentspreferwatchingTYathometogoingtothecinema.大多数学生喜欢在家看电视而不是去电影院◎apartfrom替换and,also或exceptOurclubconsistsofpaidstaffandasmallteamofunpaidvolunteers.Apartfrompaidstaff,ourclubconsistsofasmallteamofunpaidvolunteers.除了带薪员工外,我们的俱乐部还包括一小队无薪志愿者。增色的高级词汇--巧用评注、总括、衔接类副词或短语恰当运用诸如meanwhile,furthermore,fortunately,generally,besides,personally,worsestill,inaddition,inaword,onthecontrary,asisknowntoall,totellyouthetruth,what'smore等评注、总括、衔接类副词或短语,平时注意积累。如:〇恰当运用meanwhileToachievethegoal,we'llcallontheschooltocommunicatewitheachotherinpolitewords.Weshouldalsobehaveourselvesandobeyschoolrules.Toachievethegoal,we'llcallontheschool!tocommunicatewitheachotherimpolitewords.Meanwhile,weshouldbehaveourselvesandobeyschoolrules.为了实现这一目标,我们将呼吁学校用礼貌的语言相互交流。同时,我们应该遵守校规。〇怡当运用besides和thereforeWiththedevelopmentofeconomy,peoplecanaffordtogoabroad,Morepeoplearebecominginterestedinforeigncultures,Theyareeagertovisitothercountrieswiththeirowneyes.Withthedevelopmentofeconomy,peoplecanaffordtogoabroad.Besides,morepeoplearebecominginterestedinforeigncultures.Therefore,theyareeagertovisitthemwiththeirowneyes.随着经济的发展,人们有能力出国。此外,越来越多的人对外国文化感兴趣。因此,他们渴望亲眼见识他们。◎恰当运用asaresult和worsestillSotheybecomelazyanddevelopbadstudyinghabits.Thismaykilltheircreativethinking.>Asaresult,theybecomelazyanddevelopbadstudyinghabits.Worsestill,itmaykilltheircreativethinking.结果,他们变得懒惰,养成了不良的学习习惯更糟糕的是,这可能会扼杀他们的创造性思维◎恰当运用inconclusionBeingself-disciplinednotonlyhelpsusimproveourselves,butcontributestobuildingupaharmoniousandcivilizedsociety.Inconclusion,beingself-disciplinednotonlyhelpsusimproveourselves,butcontributestobuildingupaharmoniousandcivilizedsociety.总之,自律不仅有助于我们提高自己,而且有助于建立一个和谐文明的社会。◎恰当运用tobeginwith,what'smore和withoutdoubtAfterenteringcollege,Iintendtosetnewgoalsinmystudiesuntillsucceed.ItisnecessaryformetolearntoliveindependentlyandIshoulddolaundryandcleanupallbymyself.Tobeginwith,afterenteringcollege,IintendtosetnewgoalsinmystudiesuntilIsucceed,What'smore,itisnecessaryformetolearntoliveindependently.WithoutdoubtIshoulddolaundryandclean-upallbymyself.首先,进入大学后,我打算在学业上设定新的目标,直到成功。更重要的是,我有必要学会独立生活。毫无疑问,我应该自己洗衣服和打扫卫生。增色的高级词汇--巧用评注、总括、衔接类副词或短语过渡词语将语义有机联系起来,是衔接前后语甸之间的纽带,使语义自然而然的由上文转人下文。过渡词语恰当用在两个内容的接驳处,起到承上启下的衔接作用。表示举例(forexample，forinstance,suchas...，take...forexample等),如:Takemyselfforexample,BecauseIambusyinstudyingonweekdays,Ihavelittletimetolookaftermyparents,whichmakesmeguilty.以我自己为例。因为我平日忙于学习,几乎没有时间照顾父母,这让我感到内疚。Whatyoureceivemaybemuchdifferentfromwhatisinyourmind,forinstance,strangecolor,wrongsizeorbadquality.你收到的东西可能与你想象中的东西有很大不同,例如,奇怪的颜色、错误的尺寸或糟糕的质量表示比较(besimilarto,similarly,incontrast,comparedwith/to等),如:Luckily,shewasnotbadlyinjuredandwesenthertothenearesthospital.Comparedwiththeescapeddriver,IamproudofwhatIdid.幸运的是,她伤势不重,我们把她送到了最近的医院。与逃跑的司机相比,我为自己的作法感到骄傲。Thenwhyshouldwehaveregretsforwhathappenedinthepast?Similarly,weshouldnotattachtoomuchimportancetothefuture.那么我们为什么要为过去发生的事情感到遗憾呢?同样,我们也不应过分重视未来。i表示目的(forthisreason,forthispurpose,sothat,inorderto,soasto等),如:具林Mostimportantly,Ifoundeverychancetospeakbravelysoastobuildupmyconfidence.最重要的是,我努力寻找每一个勇敢发言的机会,以建立我的信心。Wemustattachgreatimportancetoprotectingtheenvironmentsothatwe'llhaveabetterhometowninthefuture.我们必须高度重视保护环境,以便将来有一个更好的家乡。表示罗列增加(Firstly,secondly，thirdly,ontheonehand...ontheotherhand,what'smore,inaddition等),如:On(the)onehand,it'sanoccasionforpeopletoknowaboutthewesternculture;ontheotherhand,it'salsoanenjoyablechanceforfriendstogettogethertopromotetheirfriendship.一方面,这是人们了解西方文化的机会;另一方面,这也是朋友们聚在一起增进友谊的好机会表示时间顺序(afterwards,immediately，atthatmoment,meanwhile,not...until等),如:Onthemorning,we'llfirstshowyouaroundourcampus.Afterwards,youwillbeledintotheauditorium,whereagroupofChinesestudentswillmeetyou.早上,我们将首先带你参观我们的校园。之后,你将被带进礼堂,一群中国学生将在那里与你见面。表示解释说明(inthiscase,moreover,furthermore,infact,actually等),如:He,inhisbook,HaiguoTuzhi,introducedmoderntechnologiesandideastoChina.Thatopenedoureyestotheworld.Infact,heinspiresmetomajorinEnglishincollegeandtobeabridgebetweenChinaandtheworld.他在《海国图志》一书中向中国介绍了现代技术和思想。这打开了我们对世界的眼界。事实上,他激励我在大学主修英语,成为中国与世界之间的桥梁。表示概括归纳(inaword,inconclusion，inbrief,onthewhole,asweallknow,ashasbeenstated等),如:Inaword,smileisakindoflanguagebelongingtoeveryone.总之,微笑是属于每个人的一种语言。Onthewhole,itisagoodthingtostudyabroad.However,onemustnotlosesightofthedisadvantages.总的来说,出国留学是一件好事。然而,我们不能忽视有些缺点。升华的句式结构--变换句子的语态、语序◎变换语态，如:Wewillappreciateyourimpressionofourschoolastheclosingoftheinterview.Yourimpressionofourschoolwillbeappreciatedastheclosingoftheinterview.面试结束后,我们将感谢您对我们学校的印象。Thegovernmentshouldtakemeasurestostopthewaterpollution.Measuresshouldbetakenbythegovernmenttostopthewaterpollution.政府应采取措施制止水污染。Weshouldmakegooduseoftimetolearnourlessonswell.Timeshouldbemadegooduseoftolearnourlessonswell.应该好好利用时间学好我们的课程。Weshouldpayenoughattentiontoimprovingourpronunciation.Enoughattentionshouldbepaidbyustoimprovingourpronunciation.我们应该加以足够注意去改善我们的发音。◎转换语序,如:Helittlerealizeshowimportantthismeetingis.Littledoesherealizehowimportantthismeetingis.他几乎没有意识到这次会议有多么重要。Wehadnosoonerreachedtheairportthantheplanetookoff.Nosoonerhadwereachedtheairportthantheplanetookoff.我们一到达机场,飞机就起飞了。Whenhereturnedhomeherealizedwhathadhappened.>Onlywhenhereturnedhomedidherealizewhathadhappened.他回家后才意识到发生了什么事。Ifounditdifficulttoworkouttheproblem,soIdecidedtoaskTomforadvice.SodifficultdidIfindittoworkouttheproblemthatIdecidedtoaskTomforadvice.我发现解决这个问题太难了，所以决定向汤姆请教。Ayoungmansatbythewindowwithamagazineinhishand.Bythewindowsatayoungmanwithamagazineinhishand.窗边坐着一个年轻人,手里拿着一本杂志。升华的句式结构---前置状语、表语等句子成分◎把句子中的表语前置,以状语的形式开头,如:Iwassadandannoyed,buttrieditocalm(myselfdownandhadatalkwithhimlater.Thoughsadandannoyed,triedtocalmmyselfdownandlaterhadatalkwithhim.尽管伤心和烦恼,我还是努力让自己平静下来，后来和他谈了谈。sOurapartmentislarge,fully-equippedsandlocatedinabeautifulandquietneighborhood.Soourapartmentmeetsalltheirneeds.Locatedinabeautifulandquietneighborhood,ourlargefully-equippedapartmentmeetsalltheirneeds.我们的大型设备齐全的公寓位于一个美丽而安静的社区,满足了他们的所有需求。Itisbeneficialandimportanttodevelopapositiveattitudetowardslife,Moreimportantly,itisbeneficialtodevelopapositiveattitudetowardslife.更重要的是,养成积极的生活态度是有益的。Thoughsomepeoplemayseemweak,theyareactuallystronginmind.Weakthoughsomepeoplemayseem,theyareactuallystronginmind.虽然有些人看起来很软弱,但实际上他们内心很强大。〇把句子中的部分主语前置,以状语的形式开头如口:MyclassmatesandIwilldowhatwecantomakeyourstayinChinaenjoyable.Togetherwithmyclassmates,willdowhatIcantomakeyourstayinChinaenjoyable.和我的同学们一起,我将尽我所能让你们在中国过得愉快。升华的句式结构--巧用同位语、插入语◎使用同位语(多用于人物、地点介绍),如:Mr.ShaoisourEnglishteacher.Heis1.75meterstallandweighs75kilograms.HewasborninHebeiProvinceinOctober,1981.Mr.Shao,ourEnglishteacher,is1.75meterswiththeweightof75kilograms,whowasborninHebeiProvinceinOctober,1981.邵先生,我们的英语老师,身高1.75米,体重75公斤,1981年10月出生于河北省。Guilinisafamousinternationaltouristcity.Itiswell-knownforitsbeautifulscenery.Guilin,afamousinternationaltouristcity,iswell-knownforitsbeautifulscenery.桂林是著名的国际旅游城市，以其美丽的风景而闻名。◎使用插人语,如:Jackisagoodteacher.Heteacheswellatschool.Jackisagoodteacher;thatistosay,heteacheswellatschool.杰克是个好老师,也就是说,他在学校教得很好。Ienjoystayingwithyoungstudents,whoarealwaysenergeticandhavenewideas.Personally,lenjoystayingwithyoungstudents,whoarealwaysenergeticandhavenewideas.Asforme,lenjoystayingwithyoungstudents,whoarealwaysenergeticandhavenewideas.就我个人而言,我喜欢和年轻的学生呆在一起，他们总是精力充沛,有新的想法。升华的句式结构--转换成复合句转换成状语从句.如:Theworldisbecomingaglobalvillage,Englishisgettingmoreandmoreimportant.AstheworldisbecomingaglobalvillageEnglishisgettingmoreandmoreimportant.随着世界成为一个地球村,英语变得越来越重Themostimportantthingtosuccessliesindoingeverysimplethingwell.Whenitcomestothekeytosuccess,themostimportantthingliesindoingeverysimplethingwell.到成功的关键,最重要的是做好每一件简单的事情。转换成定语从句,如:Thehostfamilyismadeupofthreepeople.Theirflatisonlytwohundredmetersawayfromtheschool.Youwillbestudyinginthatschool.Thehostfamily,whoseflatisonlytwohundredmetersawayfromtheschoolwhereyouwillbestudying,ismadeupofthreepeople.寄宿家庭由三个人组成,他们的公寓距离你将就读的学校只有200米。Somepeoplecouldbericherthanus.Themediahavereportedthat.->Ashasbeenreportedinthemedia,somepeoplecouldbericherthanus.正如媒体报道的那样,有些人可能比我们更富有。使用名词性从句,如:Iamwritingtotellyouabouthowstudentsfromdifferentgradesspendweekendswiththeirfamily.我写信告诉你不同年级的学生如何与家人共度周末。Initially,whatI'mconcernedaboutliesinwhetherthemajorwillbesuitableforme.最初,我关心的是这个专业是否适合我。Butthemostimportantthingisthatthenumberofprivatecarsshouldbeputundercontrol.但最重要的是,应该控制私家车的数量升华的句式结构--巧用独立主格结构独立主格结构,如:Whenthetestwasfinished,webeganourholiday.Thetestfinished,webeganourholiday.考试结束了,我们开始了假期。Ifweatherpermits,wewillgoonanoutingtothebeachtomorrow.Weatherpermitting,wewillgoonanoutingtothebeachtomorrow.如果天气允许,我们明天将去海滩郊游。Asthemeetingwentover,everyonetriedtogohomecarlier.Themeetinggoneover,everyonetriedtogohomeearlier.会议结束了,大家都想早点回家。Becausetherewasnothingelsetodo,wewenthome.Therebeingnothingelsetodo,wewenthome.没有别的事可做,我们回家了。Becauseherglasseswerebroken,shecouldn'tseethewordsontheblackboard.Herglassesbroken,shecouldn'tseethewordsontheblackboard.她的眼镜坏了,她看不清黑板上的字。升华的句式结构--巧用with复合结构with复合结构可以充当状语，表示方式，伴随,原因,结果,也可以作定语。with复合结构可以与相应的从句互换,写作时可灵活运用。Asthepaceofmodernlifebecomesfasterandfaster,timeisquiteprecious.Withthepaceofmodernlifebecomingfasterandfaster,timeisquiteprecious.随着现代生活的节奏越来越快,时间非常宝贵。BecausemanyofChineseidiomsarewidelyusedinourdailylife,agoodknowledgeofthemcontributestobetterunderstandingbothspokenChineseandwrittenChinese.WithmanyofChineseidiomswidelyusedinourdailylife,agoodknowledgeofthemcontributestobetterunderstandingbothspokenChineseandwrittenChinese.随着许多中国成语在我们的日常生活中广泛使用,对它们的良好了解有助于更好地理解汉语口语和书面语。Aterribleaccidenthappenedyesterday，inwhichninepeoplewerekilledandalmosteightyinjured.Aterribleaccidenthappenedyesterday,withninepeoplekilledandalmosteightyinjured.昨天发生了一起可怕的事故,9人死亡，近80人受伤。技巧三闪亮的特殊句式通过点缀强调句、倒装句、省略句、祈使句、感叹句、反问句、谚语等来使写作语句更美,增加得分亮点。点缀强调句,如:ItwaswiththeirhelpandsupportthatIeventuallyovercamemyshynessandbuiltupconfidence.正是在他们的帮助和支持下,我终于克服了害羞,建立了信心。Asformyseniorhighschoollife,Idohaveanunforgettableexperience.至于我的高中生活,我确实有一段难忘的经历。点缀倒装句，如:Onlybyusingourtimemoreefficientlycanwebecomeabetterlearner.只有更有效地利用时间,我们才能成为更好的学习者。Nowasateacher,notonlydoesshehaverichteachingexperiencetoinstructallherstudentsbutalsoshehaspublishedmanybooks.现在作为一名教师,她不仅有丰富的教学经验来指导所有的学生,而且还出版了许多书。点缀省略句,如:Whilecycling,don'tforgetthetrafficlights.骑自行车时,不要忘记红绿灯。TheylearnFrenchandweEnglish.他们学法语,我们学英语。Someonehasusedmymobilephone,butIdon'tknowwho.有人用过我的手机,但我不知道是谁。Afterlonghoursofwork,Mothershouldtakearestbutshewon't.长时间工作后,妈妈应该休息,但她不会。Asoundmustbeheard,acolourseen,aflavourtasted.必须听到声音,看到颜色,品尝味道。点缀感叹句,如:HowhappyIamtolearnthatyourfamilywillbemyhostfamily!得知你家将成为我的寄宿家庭,我真高兴!Whatapleasantsurprisetogetyouremailtoday!今天收到你的电子邮件真是一个惊喜!Howtimeflies!Wewilltakethecollegeentranceexaminationin30days.时间过得真快!我们将在30天后参加高考。点缀反问句，如:Personally,itisofgreatbenefittojoininthecampaignandformagoodhabitofclearingtheenvironment.Anditisessentialtostartwithourselvesandstartfromnow.Don'tyouthinkSo?就个人而言,加人这场运动并养成清理环境的良好习惯是非常有益的。必须从我们自己开始，从现在开始。你不这么认为吗?点缀谚语,如:Asacoinhastwosides,themobilephones,whileprovidingconvenience,causetroubletoo.正如硬币有两面一样,手机在提供便利的同时也会带来麻烦。Astheoldsayinggoes,“Yourfuturedependsonmanythings,butmostlyonyou.”正如老话所说,“你的未来取决于很多事情,但主要取决于你。”出彩的语段构架--丰富句式搭配TheSeasonILikeBestiSpring,thesymbolofbeautyandhope,istheseasonIlikebest.Iamfondofspringbecauseittreatsmepoeticsceneryofnature.Bloomingflowersaddvividcolorstomysight.Also,thesymphonyoallkindsofinsectsandbirdsbringsaestheticharmonytome.What'smore,thegentlerainmakesspringafantasyworld.Andit'sbecausespringarouseseveryone'shopethatI'mkeenonspringmost.Look!Thefrozeniceismelting.Listen!Alllivingcreaturesarewakingup.Springpicturesaworldwherecoldanddeatharefadingawaywhilewarmthandlifearecomingback.Thus,everyoneisboundfilledwithhopeandlove.Ilovespring,whichcan'tbetooadmirableandcherished.春天是美丽和希望的象征,是我最喜欢的季节我喜欢春天,因为它给我带来了诗意的自然景色。盛开的花朵为我的视野增添了鲜艳的色彩。此外,各种昆虫和鸟类的交响也带来了美感更重要的是,温柔的雨使春天成为一个梦幻的世界。因为春天唤起了每个人的希望,所以我最喜欢春天。看!冰冻的冰正在融化。听!所有的生物都在苏醒。春天描绘了一个世界,寒冷和死亡正在消退,而温暖和生命正在回归。因此,每个人都必然充满希望和爱。我爱春天，这是一个令人敬佩和珍惜的春天。出彩的语段构架--语意无缝衔接转折关系(but，yet，however,while),如:Thereisnodoubtthatthispracticedoesgoodtotheenvironment.However,wecan'tdenythefactthatitalsobringsinconveniencetothecustomersandthereforesomecustomersdon'twelcomesuchapractice.毫无疑问,这种做法对环境有益。然而,我们不能否认,这也给客户带来了不便,因此一些客户不欢迎这种做法。Inaddition,wearequick-mindedandcreativeandwecanworkefficiently.Yet,westillneedtolearnmorefromthoseexperienced.此外,我们思维敏捷,富有创造力,能够高效地工作。然而,我们仍然需要向经验丰富的人多学习。递进关系(besides，moreover,inadditionfurthermore等),如:Inconclusion,breakfastisthenecessarymealforyoutoprovidethe30%ofenergyinawholeday.Moreover,itmakesanoffertodevelopthecreativethinking.总之,早餐是你提供全天30%能量所必需的一餐。此外,它还提供了发展创造性思维的机会Theythinkhomeworkhelpsthemreviewwhathasbeentaughtinclass.Besides,bydoingdailyhomework,theycanbetterunderstandandmemorizetheirlessons.Furthermore,theirskillsinmanagingtimecanalsobeimproved.他们认为家庭作业有助于他们复习课堂上所教的内容。此外,通过做家庭作业,他们可以更好地理解和记忆他们的课程。并且,他们管理时间的技能也可以提高。选择关系(or，either...or...等),如:Ihopethatyoueitherreturnmymoneyordeliveranewsetofbookstome.我希望你要么退还我的钱,要么给我送一套新书。Withsuchapenfriend,IthinkIcansharewithherourtravelingexperiences,takingcarofpets,orwhateverwehaveincommon.有了这样一位笔友,我想我可以和她分享我们的旅行经历,照顾宠物,或者我们的共同点。因果关系(becauseof，owingto,duetothanksto;so,therefore,thus,asaresult等),如:Somepeoplerefusetohelptheoldbecausetheydon'tthinktheycangivetheoldcorrectmedicalcare'duetoalackofprofessional!skills.有些人拒绝帮助老人,因为他们认为由于缺乏专业技能,他们无法为老人提供正确的医疗服务。Therefore,it'sveryimportantforustoformhealthyeatinghabits.因此,养成健康的饮食习惯对我们来说非常重要,比较关系(onthecontrary,bycomparison,comparedto等),如:Onlywhenwearestrongandhealthycanwehaveenoughenergytolearnourlessonsef-ficiently.Onthecontrary,ifwespendallofourtimeonsubjectstudy,wewillbecomeweakforlackofexercise,whichwillhaveabadeffectonourstudyinreturn.只有当我们强壮和健康时,我们才有足够的精力有效地学习我们的课程。相反,如果我们把所有的时间都花在学科学习上,我们会因为缺乏锻炼而变得虚弱,这反过来会对我们的学习产生不良影响。Comparedwiththeescapeddriver,IamproudofwhatIdid.与逃跑的司机相比,我为自己的行为感到骄傲。列举事例(forexample,suchas，take...forexample等),如:Besidesstudies,wehaveavarietyofassociations.suchasthedramaclub,themusicclubandthereadingbarandsoon.除了学习,我们还有各种各样的社团,如戏剧俱乐部、音乐俱乐部和阅读吧等等。However,somepeoplebehaveverybadlyinforeigncountries.Forexample,theydroplittereverywhere,aswellasspitfreelyinpublic,whichnotonlyshowsbadpersonalqualities,butalsodoesgreatharmtotheimageofthecountry.然而,有些人在国外表现得很糟糕。例如,他们随地乱扔垃圾,以及在公共场所随意吐痰,这不仅显示了不良的个人品质，而且对国家的形象也有很大的危害。出彩的语段构架--段落多方位架构叙述法(按时空排列顺序构架段落),如:Inthemorningyouwillbeshownaroundourschoolandlistentoanintroductionoftheschoolhistoryinthelecturehall.Afterlunch,there’llbeafootballmatchbetweenBritishandChinesestudentsontheplayground.Studentsfrombothofourschoolsarewelcometojo1nin.Intheevening,we’llhaveapartybytheschoollake.早上,你将被带着参观我们学校,并在报告厅听取学校历史的介绍。午饭后,英国和中国学生将在操场上进行足球比赛。欢迎我们两所学校的学生加人。晚上,我们将在学校湖边举行-个聚会。Whenyoucomeoutofyourhotel,gostraightalongtheroadandturnrightonthefirstcorner.Youwillseeahospitalonyourleft.Thenwalkalongtheroadtowardsnorth,andyoucanfindarestaurant.OntheoppositeisjustCuihuPark,Youareexpectedtoarriveatthemaingatebefore9o'clock.I'msureyoucanfinduseasily.当你从酒店出来时,沿着路一直走,在第一个拐角处右转。你会在左边看到一家医院。然后沿着路向北走,你可以找到一家餐馆。对面就是翠湖公园。你预计在9点钟之前到达正门。我相信你很容易找到我们。列举法(分条列举构架段落),如:Inmyopinion,Internetvotinghasbeguntoshowitsnegativeimpactsonpeopleandsociety.Firstly,peoplemayfeelforcedwhenaskedtodothingsthattheydon'twantto.Secondly,votingofthiskinddoesnotdependonthestrongpointsofthecompetitors,butratheronhowmanysocial-networkingresourcestheyhave.Thirdly,thevotersor"eventhecompetitorsinmanycasesarepossiblytakenadvantageofbytheorganizersforcommercialpurposes.在我看来,互联网投票已经开始对人们和社会产生负面影响。首先，当被要求做他们不想做的事情时,人们可能会感到被迫。其次,这种投票并不取决于竞争对手的优势,而是取决于他们拥有多少社交网络资源。第三,在许多情况下,选民甚至竞争对手可能被组织者利用,用于商业目的。It'snotsurprisingforthemtodoso,Foronething,withthepaceofmodernlifebecomingfasterandfaster,timeisquiteprecious.Intheireyes,itisunnecessarytotaketimetocook.Foranotherthing,homecookingfoodissimplerinkindandlessdelicious,especiallyforthosewhoareparticularaboutfood.他们这样做并不奇怪。首先,随着现代生活的节奏越来越快,时间非常宝贵。在他们看来,没有必要花时间做饭。另一方面,家庭烹饪的食物种类更简单,也不那么美味,尤其是对于那些对食物很讲究的人来说。举例法(通过列举例子构架段落),如:Actually,wecanfindsomeimpoliteandimproperbehaviorwhenwetravelathome.Forexample,sometravelersdroplitteranywhereatscenicspots,smokeinthewoodedmountainsortakephotoswhentheyarenotsupposedto.事实上,当我们在国内旅行时,我们会发现一些不礼貌和不恰当的行为。例如,一