Unit3第5课时Developingideas写作专题

Unit3

Makeithappen!第5课时Developingideas[写作专题]写作进阶提能答案总结写作进阶提能Curiosity

Makes

Me

BraveLastyear,mycuriosityhelpedmeovercomemyfearandachievesomethingIneverthoughtIcoulddo.Oneday,myschoolannouncedaspeechcompetition.IwasveryinterestedbutalsoscaredbecauseIhadneverspokeninfrontofalargeaudience.Mycuriosityabouthowitwouldfeeltogiveaspeechpushedmetosignup.Ipracticedeveryday,eventhoughIwasnervous.Onthedayofthecompetition,Itookadeepbreathandstartedspeaking.Tomysurprise,Iwonthirdprize!Thisexperiencetaughtmethatcuriositycanmakeusbraveandhelpusreachourgoals.主题语境:人与社会——科学技术与工程(人类发明与创新)写作题目:以“好奇心可以驱使人勇敢,朝着某些目标前进”为主题,写一篇记叙文,描述自己发明一个小作品的过程。要点提示:

1.是什么激发了你的好奇心?

2.你遇到了哪些困难?如何克服的?

3.最终你发明了什么?它有什么作用?

4.这次经历让你学到了什么?词数要求:80~100。书写要求:书写工整、语法正确、逻辑清晰。写作进阶提能____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

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1.辨模式(Patterns)——辨识特征列纲建模审题三辨1.辨人称:以第一人称为主2.辨时态:以一般过去时为主3.辨核心:介绍发明的经过。列纲建模

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2.明实例(Examples)——润色成篇典例示范Curiosity

Drives

Me

to

Create

Curiositydrivespeopletoexploreandachieve.①Lastyear,Iinventedanautomaticplantwateringsystemafternoticingmyclassmatesoftenforgottowaterourclassroomplants.Iresearched,designed,andexperimentedwithmaterials,facinginitialfailures.Mycuriositykeptmegoing②,andwithmyscienceteacher’sguidance,Ilearnedaboutwaterflowandsensors.Afterweeksofeffort,Icreatedadeviceusingawaterbottle,tube,andsensorthatworkedperfectly.Myclassmateswereamazed,andIfeltproud.Thisexperiencetaughtmethatcuriosityfuelscourage,determination,andthebeliefthatanythingispossiblewithhardwork.③范文点评:①开篇简洁有力,直接点明主题②突出好奇心的驱动力,语言简练③总结深刻,句式工整,传递积极的价值观Step

3.会实践(Practice)——迁移创新实战演练假如你是张娜,请你以CuriosityMakesMeBrave为题目写一篇英语短文。要点提示:

1.我因对演讲体验的好奇,克服了恐惧,报名参加了学校的演讲比赛。

2.尽管紧张,我每天坚持练习,为比赛做了充分准备。

3.比赛当天,我勇敢表现并获得了三等奖,深刻体会到好奇心能让人变得勇敢,并帮助实现目标。写作要求:

1.须包含以上要点提示,可以适当发挥,不必逐字翻译。

2.词数100左右;

3.书写工整、认真,无语法错误。Curiosity

Makes

Me

Brave____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】Curiosity

Makes

Me

Brave

Lastyear,mycuriosityhelpedmeovercomemyfearandachievesomethingIneverthoughtIcoulddo.

Oneday,myschoolannouncedaspeechcompetition.IwasveryinterestedbutalsoscaredbecauseIhadneverspokeninfrontofalargeaudience.Mycuriosityabouthowitwouldfeeltogiveaspeechpushedmetosignup.Ipracticedeveryday,eventhoughIwasnervous.Onthedayofthecompetition,I