2021-2025年高考英语试题分类汇编：应用文写作（新高考全国）解析版

“五年真题(202L2025)

4<19成用女写作(新钵标)

五年考情-探规律

考点五年考情(2021-2025)命题趋势

2025全国一卷-告知信；1.最近五年新课标卷应用文写作以书信类为

2025全国二卷一咨询信；主。

考点1书信体2025八省联考卷一推荐信；

2.浙江1月卷应用文写作倾向于非书信体。

2024新课标I&II卷一告知信；

(5年7考)

2023新课标I&II卷一建议信；3.应用文写作渗透“德智体美劳”理念，尤

2022新课标I&II卷一邀请信；其是体育健身、美育教育、劳动意识。

2021新课标I&II卷一投稿信。

4.写作字数应为80个左右，实际需要120

2025浙江1月卷—演讲稿；

2024浙江1月卷一短文投稿；词左右。

考点2非书信体

2024九省联考卷一活动通知；5.重视材料审题能力、核心素养主题把握能

(5年6考)2023浙江1月卷一活动报道；

力以及综合运用高级词汇和复杂句式表达

2023四省联考卷一音乐评论；

能力。

2020新课标卷一活动报道。

分考点-精准练

考点01书信体(邀请信、建议信、告知信……)

[2025全国一卷--告知信】

假定你是李华，你班的英语报要增设一个栏目。外教Jenny提出“Funatmyschool"和"GuesswhoIam

两个选项供大家选择。请给Jenny写一封邮件，内容包括：

(1)你的选择；

(2)说明理由。

注意：

(1)写作词数应为80个左右；

(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

DearJenny,

IreallyliketheideaofaddinganewcolumntoourEnglishnewspaper.

Yours,

LiHua

【答案】

DearJenny,

IreallyliketheideaofaddinganewcolumntoourEnglishnewspaper.I'mwritingtoexpressthatmy

predilectiongoesto“GuesswhoIam”,whichcapitalizesonanobjectclausetosignalitspotentialcontents.

Thecolumnwillserveasacatalystforcloserbondsbetweenstudents.Redoublingeffortstoboost

academicperformance,wepaylittleheedtootherclassmates9personalities,hobbies,strengths,andeven

aspirations.Suchaninvitingcolumn,adoptinga^descriptionandguess”approach,mustexposeeveryoneto

others9characteristics,thusstrengtheningmutualunderstanding.Moreimportantly,morefriendshipswillbe

forged,sincethecolumnenablesustobefriendsomeoneonthesamewavelength.

Thiseye-catchingcolumn,I'mfirmlyconvinced,won'tfailtograntthewholeclassaharmonious

atmosphere.

Yours,

LiHua

【解析】

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生就外教Jenny提出的校英文报增设一个栏目，在“Funatmy

school”和“GuesswhoIam”两个选项中给出自己的推荐，并说明理由。

【详解】1.词汇积累

表达：express—convey

禾！）用：capitalizeon一use

担当：serveas—actas

注意：payheedto一takenoticeof

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：Suchaninvitingcolumn,adoptinga^descriptionandguess”approach,mustexposeeveryonetoothers'

characteristics,thusstrengtheningmutualunderstanding.

拓展句：Suchaninvitingcolumn,whichadoptsa^descriptionandguess”approach,mustexposeeveryoneto

others9characteristics,thusstrengtheningmutualunderstanding.

【点睛】【高分句型l]Fmwritingtoexpressthatmypredilectiongoesto"GuesswhoIam”,whichcapitalizes

onanobjectclausetosignalitspotentialcontents.（运用了that引导的宾语从句,which引导的定语从句）

【高分句型2]Moreimportantly,morefriendshipswillbeforged,sincethecolumnenablesustobefriend

someoneonthesamewavelength.(运用了since引导的状语从句)

【2025全国二卷一咨询信】

假定你是校英文报编辑李华，外教Chris上个月答应写一篇介绍加拿大体育运动的文章。请给Chris写

一封邮件，内容包括：

(1)询问进展；

(2)提醒交稿时间。

注意：

(1)写作词数应为80个左右；

(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

DearChris

Bestwishes,

LiHua

【答案】Onepossibleversion:

DearChris,

HopethisemailHndsyouwell!Lastmonth,youkindlyagreedtowriteanarticleaboutsportsinCanada,

andwe'realllookingforwardtoreadingit.

I'mwritingtopolitelyinquireabouttheprogressofthearticle.Wouldyoumindlettingmeknowhowit's

going?Also,couldIremindyouthatthedeadlineforsubmissionisthisFriday,June14th?Yourinsightsinto

Canadiansportswillsurelyenrichourreaders9understandingofglobalsportsculture,whichwillbeof

benefittous.

Thankyouagainforyoursupport!

Bestwishes,

LiHua

【解析】

【导语】本篇书面表达是一篇应用文。要求考生给外教Chris写一封邮件，询问他上个月答应写一篇介绍

加拿大体育运动的文章的进展，并提醒交稿时间。

【详解】L词汇积累：

询问：inquire一ask

理解：understanding-^comprehension

此外：also—besides

肯定地：surely—certainly

2.句式拓展：

简单句变复合句

原句：Fmwritingtopolitelyinquireabouttheprogressofthearticle.

拓展句：Asyouknow,I'mwritingtopolitelyinquireabouttheprogressofthearticle.

【点睛】【高分句型1】Wouldyoumindlettingmeknowhowifsgoing?(运用了how引导的宾语从句)

【高分句型2】YourinsightsintoCanadiansportswillsurelyenrichourreaders9understandingofglobal

sportsculture,whichwillbeofbenefittous.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)

【2025八省联考卷T隹荐信】

假定你是李华，你的留学生朋友Beth想学打乒乓球，发邮件向你求教。请给她回封邮件，内容包括：

(1)表示支持；

(2)推荐教练。

注意：

(1)写作词数应为80个左右；

(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

DearBeth,

Gladtoknowthatyouwanttolearntoplaytabletennis.

Yours,

LiHua

【答案】

DearBeth,

Gladtoknowthatyouwanttolearntoplaytabletennis.Ifsafunandexcitingsport!Ihighlysupport

yourdecision,asitwillnotonlyimproveyourskillsbutalsohelpyoumakenewfriends.

IrecommendyoutakelessonsfromCoachZhang.Heisanexperiencedcoachwhohastrainedmany

playersatdifferentlevels.Hisclassesareengagingandtailoredtoeachstudent'sneeds.Youcanfindhimat

thelocalsportscenter.

Letmeknowifyouneedmoreinformation.Enjoyyourtraining!

Yours,

LiHua

【解析】

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生对于你的留学生朋友Beth想学打乒乓球，发邮件向你求教这

一情况，给她回封邮件。

【详解】1.词汇积累

强烈地：highly^strongly

提高，增强：improveenhance

引人入胜的：engaging—attractive

有趣的：fun一interesting

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：Hisclassesareengagingandtailoredtoeachstudenfsneeds.

拓展句：Hisclassesareengaging,whicharetailoredtoeachstudenfsneeds.

【点睛】【高分句型1】Heisanexperiencedcoachwhohastrainedmanyplayersatdifferentlevels.(运用了

who引导的定语从句)

【高分句型2]Ihighlysupportyourdecision,asitwillnotonlyimproveyourskillsbutalsohelpyoumake

newfriends.(运用了as引导的原因状语从句以及notonly...butalso…的固定句型)

[2024新课标I&II卷--告知信】

假定你是李华，上周五你们班在公园上了一堂美术课。请你给英国朋友Chris写一封邮件分享这次经历，

内容包括：

(1)你完成的作品；

(2)你的感想。

注意：

(1)写作词数应为80个左右；

(2)请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。

DearChris,

I'mwritingtosharewithyouanartclassIhadinaparklastFriday.

Yours,

LiHua

【答案】

DearChris,

FmwritingtosharewithyouanartclassIhadinaparklastFriday.

Weweretaskedtodraworpaintsomethingthatimpressedusmost.Inspiredbythefantasticscenery,I

decidedtocreateawatercolorpaintingofthesmallbridgeoverthepark'spond,surroundedbyblooming

flowers.

Theentireexperiencewasincrediblyrefreshing.Beingsurroundedbynaturenotonlysparkedmy

creativitybutalsoofferedamuch-neededbreakfromtheusualhustleandbustleofschoollife.Ifeltadeep

senseofpeaceasIpainted.

Inaword,Itwasnotjustanartclass;itwasamomentofconnectionwithnaturethatItrulycherished.

Yours,

LiHua

【解析】

【导语】本篇是应用文写作。要求考生给Chris写一封信，分享在公园上美术课的经历。

【详解】L词汇积累

决定：decide一determine

整个的：entire-whole

提供：offer一provide

总之：inaword—inshort

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：Inspiredbythefantasticscenery,Idecidedtocreateawatercolorpaintingofthesmallbridgeoverthe

park'spond,surroundedbybloomingflowers.

拓展句：BecauseIwasinspiredbythefantasticscenery,Idecidedtocreateawatercolorpaintingofthesmall

bridgeoverthepark'spond,whichwassurroundedbybloomingflowers.

【点睛】[高分句型l]Weweretaskedtodraworpaintsomethingthatimpressedusmost,（that引导的定语从

句）

[高分句型2]IfeltadeepsenseofpeaceasIpainted.（as引导的时间状语从句）

[2023新课标I&II卷一建议信】

假定你是李华，外教Ryan准备将学生随机分为两人一组，让大家课后练习口语，你认为这样分组存在

问题。请你给外教写一封邮件，内容包括；

1.说明问题；

2.提出建议

注意：

1.写作词数应为80个左右：

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

DearRyan,

I'mLiHuafromClass3.

Yourssincerely,

LiHua

【答案】

DearRyan,

FmLiHuafromClass3.1thinkifsnotagoodideatorandomlypairupstudentsforthespokenEnglish

trainingafterclass.Thereasonsareasfollows.

Tobeginwith,randomlypairingupstudentsmayleadtounbalancedlanguageabilitieswithinthegroups.

Thiscanhindertheprogressofstudentsasthemoreadvancedonemaydominatetheconversation,leaving

littleroomfortheotherstudentstoimprove.Besides,studentsmayfeeluncomfortableorlessmotivatedif

pairedwithsomeonewhotheydon'tgetalongwithorhavedifficultycommunicatingwith.

Mysuggestionistogroupstudentsbasedontheirlanguageabilitiesortoletstudentschoosetheirown

partners.Thisway,everyonecanfeelmorecomfortablepracticingandimprovingtheirspokenEnglish

together.

Thankyouforconsideringmysuggestion.

Yourssincerely,

LiHua

【解析】

【导语】本篇是应用文写作，要求考生给外教写一封邮件，告诉他将学生随机分为两人一组，让大家课后

练习口语，你认为这样分组存在问题。

【详解】1.词汇积累

首先：tobeginwith—firstofall

提高：improve—progress

建议：suggestion一advice

选择：choose—select

2句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：Mysuggestionistogroupstudentsbasedontheirlanguageabilitiesortoletstudentschoosetheirown

partners.

拓展句：Mysuggestionisthatwearesupposedtogroupstudentsbasedontheirlanguageabilitiesortolet

studentschoosetheirownpartners.

【点睛】[高分句型1]

Thiscanhindertheprogressofstudentsasthemoreadvancedonemaydominatetheconversation,leaving

littleroomfortheotherstudentstoimprove.（运用了现在分词作状语）

[高分句型2]

Besides,Studentsmayfeeluncomfortableorlessmotivatedifpairedwithsomeonewhotheydon'tgetalong

withorhavedifficultycommunicatingwith.（运用了省略句和who引导定语从句）

[2022新课标I&II卷一邀请信】

假定你是校广播站英语节目"TalkandTalk”的负责人李华，请给外教Caroline写邮件邀请她做一次访谈。

内容包括：

1.节目介绍；

2.访谈的时间和话题。

注意：

1.写作词数应为80左右；

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

DearCaroline,

____________________________________________________Yourssincerely,

LiHua

DearCaroline,

ThisismyfirsttimethatIhaveinvitedyoutoattendourprogram—TalkandTalk.Itistenyearssince

TalkandTalkwasestablished.Thisisanamazingprogramwhereyoucanshareyourideaswithstudents.

Now,whenhavingtroubleinlearningEnglishwell,plentyofstudentsurgetoknowhowtodealwithit.

Asourdistinguishedforeignlanguageteacher,youraidcanhelpusalot.IfyouareavailableonthisSunday,I

togetherwiththewholeTalkandTalkstaffamwaitingforyourcoming.

I'dappreciateitifyoutakemyinvitationintoconsideration.

Yours,

LiHua

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，假定你是校广播站“TalkandTalk”的负责人李华，请给外教Caroline

写邮件邀请她做一次访谈。

【详解】1.词汇积累

建立：establish^setup

了不起的：amazing—fabulous

帮助：aid一assistance

许多：plentyof-alotof

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：Asourdistinguishedforeignlanguageteacher,youraidcanhelpusalot.

拓展句：Youareourdistinguishedforeignlanguageteacher,whoseaidcanhelpusalot.

【点睛】[高分句型l]Thisisanamazingprogramwhereyoucanshareyourideaswithstudents.（运用了where

引导的限制性定语从句）

[高分句型2]Now,whenhavingtroubleinlearningEnglishwell,plentyofstudentsurgetoknowhowtodeal

withit.（运用了状语从句的省略）

[2021新课标I&II卷一投稿信】

你校英文报比演〃正在庆祝创刊十周年。请你写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：

1.读报的经历；

2.喜爱的栏目；

3.期望和祝福。

注意：

1.写作词数应为80左右；

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

YouthandMe

第一节这是一篇针对报纸创刊10周年投稿的文章。通过审题，我们可以确定，本文主要以第一人称进行

展开和叙述。文章可以用三段式的结构。第一段简明表示对报刊创办10周年的祝贺。第二段是文章的主体，

主要阐述阅读报纸的经历和喜爱的栏目。第三段表达对报纸的期望和祝福。

DearEditor-in-Chief,

Congratulationsonthe10thanniversaryofYouth.

IhavebeenadevotedreadersinceIsubscribedtothenewspaper.Obsessedwithit,Ireadeachissue

fromcovertocover.Itboastsavarietyofcolumns,ofwhichChinesecultureismyfavorite.Theseriesof

contentsnotonlyintroducesabundantculturalknowledgebutalsovaluestheinheritanceofbrilliantculture

andstrengthensourculturalconfidence.

AsafanofYouth.Irecommendthatitwillbebetterifitcarriessomearticlesaboutthelifeofforeign

teensandIhopethatitwillbecomeevenmorepopular.

Sincerelyyours,

LiHua

Deareditor,

MynameisLiHua,asenior3student.Iamwritingtooffermysincerestcongratulationson

the10thanniversaryceremonyofYOUTH.

Sinceitwasfounded,YOUTHhasbeenpopularwithmanystudentsincludingme,aregularreaderof

YOUTH.Thepaper^broadcontentandrichknowledgehavenotonlywidenedmyhorizonsbutalsogiven

memuchenjoyment.Iamfondofallitscolumns,butwhatimpressedmemostisculture,whereIcanread

humorousstories,poems,fictionsandsoontoimprovemyoralEnglish.

PleaseacceptmysincerecongratulationsagainandIbestwishthatYOUTHcouldachievegreater

successandgainmorepopularity.

Yours,

LiHua

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生向学校英文报的“法表达自己的经历，并送上自己的祝福。

【详解】1.词汇积累

建立：found—establish

沮丧的：depressed—upset

此外：besides-what'smore

得至!I：receive一obtain

2.句式拓展

同义句改写

原句：Thesestoriescanrelievemystressandbroadenmyhorizon.

拓展句：Notonlycanthesestoriesrelievemystress,butalsotheycanbroadenmyhorizon.

【点睛】[高分句型1]Whenfeelingdepressed,Ioftenchoosetoenjoythenovelpartwhichincludesalotof

imaginativestories.（运用了状语从句的省略和which引导的定语从句）

[高分句型2]RefusedasIwas,Istillreceivedsomegreatencouragement,whichgivesmeconfidencetobea

writer.（运用了as引导的让步状语从句和which引导的非限制性定语从句）

考点02非书信体（发言稿、书面通知、短文投稿……）

【2025浙江1月卷一演讲稿】

你将参加英语课上的“一分钟演讲”活动。请你针对部分同学在校园内用手机拍摄短视频的现象写一

篇演讲稿，内容包括：

（1）陈述看法；

（2）提出建议。

注意：

（1）写作词数应为80个左右；

（2）请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。

Myviewsonfilmingshortvideosoncampus

Onepossibleversion:

Myviewsonfilmingshortvideosoncampus

Goodmorning,everyone!I'verecentlynoticedagrowingtrendofstudentsfilmingshortvideoson

campuswiththeirmobilephones.

WhileIappreciatetheenthusiasmforsharingcreativecontent,wemustalsoconsiderthepotential

drawbacks.Filmingcandisruptthelearningenvironmentbyinterruptingclassesorstudysessions,making

itdifficultforotherstoconcentrate.Additionally,noteveryoneiscomfortablebeingrecorded.Capturing

someonewithouttheirpermissioncanleadtodiscomfortorconflict.

Tocreateamoreharmoniousatmosphere,I'dliketoofferseveralpracticaltips.First,respectourshared

studytimebyavoidingfilminginquietareasorduringclass.Second,alwaysaskpermissionfromanyone

featuredinyourvideos.Lastly,followtheschoolrulesregardingfilmingoncampus.

Thankyouforconsideringmysuggestions!

【2024浙江1月卷一短文投稿】

请你写一篇短文向校英文报“SportsandHealth”栏目投稿，向同学们推荐一项适合课间开展的运动，内容

包括：

1.介绍这项运动；

2.说明推荐理由。

注意：

1.写作词数应为80个左右；

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答：

StandUpandExercise,Everybody!

【答案】

StandUpandExercise,Everybody!

Everybody!Areyoutiredofsittinginclassallday?Howaboutincorporatingsomephysicalactivity

intoyourdailyroutine?Onegreatoptionisthe“StandUpandStretch”exercise.Thissimpleroutine

involvesstandingupfromyourdesk,stretchingyourarms,legsandback,andtakingafewdeepbreaths.Ifs

aquickandeasywaytogetyourbloodflowingandre-energizeyourbodyandmind.Thisexerciseis

recommendedforseveralreasons.

First,ithelpstocombatthenegativeeffectsofprolongedsitting,suchasbackpainandstiffness.Second,

itcanimproveyourfocusandconcentration,makingiteasiertostayengagedinclass.Lastly,itpromotesa

healthyandactivelifestyle,whichisessentialforoverallwell-being.

So,nexttimeyoufeelabitsluggishduringclass,remembertostandupandstretch!It'sasmallchange

thatcanmakeabigdifferenceinyourday.

【解析】

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一篇短文向校英文报“SportsandHealth”栏目投稿，向同

学们推荐一项适合课间开展的运动。

【详解】1.词汇积累

厌倦：betiredof-^befedupwith

首先：仃rst—aboveall

减轻：combat一relieve

提高：improve一enhance

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：Thissimpleroutineinvolvesstandingupfromyourdesk,stretchingyourarms,legsandback,and

takingafewdeepbreaths.

拓展句：Thisisasimpleroutinethatinvolvesstandingupfromyourdesk,stretchingyourarms,legsand

back,andtakingafewdeepbreaths.

【点睛】[高分句型1]Lastly,itpromotesahealthyandactivelifestyle,whichisessentialforoverall

well-being.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)

[高分句型2]Thissimpleroutineinvolvesstandingupfromyourdesk,stretchingyourarms,legsandback,

andtakingafewdeepbreaths.(运用了动名词作宾语)

[高分句型2]Ifsasmallchangethatcanmakeabigdifferenceinyourday.(运用了that引导的定语从句)

【2024九省联考卷一活动通知】

你校英文报计划举办主题为“携手行动，节约粮食”的作文比赛。请你写一则活动通知，内容包括：

(1)介绍活动目的；

(2)说明参赛要求。

注意：

(1)写作词数应为80个左右；

(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

WelcometoJointheEnglishWritingCompetition

【答案】

WelcometoJointheEnglishWritingCompetition

OurschoolEnglishnewspaperisexcitedtoannouncetheupcomingwritingcompetition,themed“Hand

inHand,SavetheFood99.Thecompetitionaimstoraiseawarenessabouttheimportanceofsavingfood.

Allstudentsareencouragedtoparticipate.Entriesshouldconsistofanoriginalpieceofwriting,focusing

onthethemeoffoodwasteandshowinghowwecancontributetoitsreduction.Pleasesubmityourentriesto

theEnglishDepartmentmailboxbythedeadlineofJune1st.

Welookforwardtoyourparticipationandcreativesubmissions.

【解析】

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生为校英文报计划举办主题为“携手行动，节约粮食”的作文比

赛写一则活动通知。

【详解】1.词汇积累

比赛：competition一contest

集中：focuson一concentrateon

鼓励：encourage一hearten

主题：theme—topic

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：OurschoolEnglishnewspaperisexcitedtoannouncetheupcomingwritingcompetition,themed

"HandinHand,SavetheFood”.

拓展句：OurschoolEnglishnewspaperisexcitedtoannouncetheupcomingwritingcompetition,whose

themeis"HandinHand,SavetheFood”.

【点睛】[高分句型1]Thecompetitionaimstoraiseawarenessabouttheimportanceofsavingfood.（运用了

动名词作宾语）

[高分句型2]Entriesshouldconsistofanoriginalpieceofwriting,focusingonthethemeoffoodwasteand

showinghowwecancontributetoitsreduction.（运用了how引导宾语从句）

[2023浙江1月卷一活动报道】

上周末你参加了校学生会组织的“认识我们身边的植物”活动。请为校英文报写篇报道，内容包括:

1.活动的过程；

2.收获与感想。

注意:

1.写作词数应为80左右；

2.请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。

GettingtoKnowthePlantsAroundUs

【答案】

GettingtoKnowthePlantsAroundUS

Lastweekend,Iparticipatedina“GettingtoKnowthePlantsAroundUs”activityorganisedbyour

Students9Union.

Theactivitybeganwithalecturebyalocalbotanist,whotaughtusaboutthedifferentcharacteristics

andusesofvariousplantspecies.Wethenwentonanaturalwalktoobserveandcollectsamplesofdifferent

plants.Throughouttheevent,Iwasstruckbytheincrediblevarietyofplantsthatexistinourworldand

learnedaboutplantsthatareusedformedicalpurposes,aswellasthosethatprovidefoodandshelterfor

animals.Ialsogainedagreaterappreciationfortherolethatplantsplayinmaintainingthebalanceofour

ecosystem.

Overall,itwasavaluableandenrichingexperience.

【解析】

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生为校英文报写篇报道，介绍上周末校学生会组织的“认识我们

身边的植物”活动。

【详解】1.词汇积累

参与：participatein一attend

开始：begin一start

观察，调查：observe—>survey

震惊：strike一astonish/surprise

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：Lastweekend,Iparticipatedina“GettingtoKnowthePlantsAroundUs”activityorganisedbyour

Students9Union.

拓展句：Lastweekend,Iparticipatedina"GettingtoKnowthePlantsAroundUs"activityorganisedby

ourStudents9Union,whichbenefitedmealot.

【点睛】【高分句型l】Theactivitybeganwithalecturebyalocalbotanist,whotaughtusaboutthedifferent

characteristicsandusesofvariousplantspecies.（运用了who引导的非限制性定语从句）

【高分句型2】Throughouttheevent,Iwasstruckbytheincrediblevarietyofplantsthatexistinourworld

andlearnedaboutplantsthatareusedformedicalpurposes,aswellasthosethatprovidefoodandshelter

foranimals.（运用了一般过去时的被动语态和定语从句）

【2023安徽省、云南省、吉林省、黑龙江省四省联考卷一音乐评论】

你刚观看了你校与英国一所友好学校联合在线上举办的音乐会。请在线上留言板上写一则评论，内容

包括：

1.音乐会特点；

2.观看感受；

3.意见建议。

注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Thisonlineconcertisabsolutelyfantastic.

【满分作文一】

Thisonlineconcertisabsolutelyfantastic.

Theperformersfromthetwoschoolshavedonetheirbestinentertainingtheaudiencewithonesongafter

another.Theirperformancesareundoubtedlyofhishquality,whichmakestheconcertalmostnodifferentfroma

liveone.IenjoyedeverysecondoftheconcertandwasuaHicularlvattractedwhentheboysandgirlsfromBritain

startedtosingthetraditionalChinesesong“LiangZhu”.Theyperformedthesonginawaythattouchedmyheartand

gavemeafeelingofconnection.

IhopetherewillbemoreODDortunitiesinthefutureforusChinesestudentsandourinternationalfriendstolearn

aboutandfromeachother.

【满分作文二】

Thisonlineconcertisabsolutelvfantastic.

ThejointperformanceorganizedbyourschoolandafriendlyschoolintheUKshowcasedavarietyof

musicalstylesfromdifferentcultures.Asanaudiencemember,Iwasdeeplyimpressedbythetalentedmusicians

andsingerswhoperformedflawlessly.Theconcertcreated〃senseofunityandcoimectionamongtheviewers,

despitethedistancebetweenus.However,Ithinkitwouldhavebeenbetterifthereweresubtitlesortranslations

forthelyricsofthesongstomakeitmoreaccessibleforinternationalviewers.

Overall,itwasamazingevent,andIlookforwardtomoresuchcollaborationsinthefuture.

【满分作文三】

Thisonlineconcertisabsolutelyfantastic.

所」top-qualitysoundandvideo“oduction,itcreatedanimmersiveandunforgettableviewingexperience.

WhatkeptmeutterlysMlboundwerethesheerbrillianceoftheperformersandseamlesstransitionbetweeneach

song.Itisnothardtoseethateachmusicpiecewascarefullyselectedandeachperformancewasfilledwith

extraordinary/rema及〃4euassionandDrofessionalism.Theonlydrawbackisthatinformationaboutthe

performersandtheirbackgrounds,particularlyforthosewhoarenotfamiliarto/Qaudience,isnotprovided

enough.

Itwouldbebettertoknowmoreabouttheirexperiencesandhowtheyhonedtheirmusicalskillstoreachthis

levelofexcellence、enhancingtheaudience'saDDreciationoftheirartistry.

【解析】

【导语】本篇书面表达属于开放作文。要求考生就学校与英国一所友好学校联合在线上举办的音乐会，在

线上留言板上写一则评论。

【详解】1.词汇积累

确定无疑地：undoubtedly-withoutdoubt

尤其地：particularly^especially

感动：touch一move

希望：hope一expect

2.句式拓展

同义句

原句：Theirperformancesareundoubtedlyofhighquality,whichmakestheconcertalmostnodifferent

fromaliveone.

拓展句：Thereisnodoubtthattheirperformancesar