2026版创新设计高考总复习英语(外研版)课件-第三讲　续写有方法-如何写

第三讲

续写有方法——如何写读后续写一、三步模板二、真题例析【典例】阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。(2024·新课标Ⅰ卷)ImetGunteronacold,wetandunforgettableeveninginSeptember.IhadplannedtoflytoViennaandtakeabustoPragueforaconference.Duetoabigstorm,myflighthadbeendelayedbyanhourandahalf.ItoucheddowninViennajust30minutesbeforethedepartureofthelastbustoPrague.ThemomentIgotofftheplane,Iranlikecrazythroughtheairportbuildingandjumpedintothefirsttaxiontherankwithoutasecondthought.ThatwaswhenImetGunter.ItoldhimwhereIwasgoing,buthesaidhehadn’theardofthebusstation.Ithoughtmypronunciationwastheproblem,soIexplainedagainmoreslowly,buthestilllookedconfused.WhenIwasabouttogiveup,Gunterfishedouthislittlephoneandrangupafriend.Afteraheateddiscussionthatlastedforwhatseemedlikeacentury,Gunterputhisphonedownandstartedthecar.Finally,withjusttwominutestosparewerolledintothebusstation.Thankfully,therewasalongqueue(队列)stillwaitingtoboardthebus.Gunterparkedthetaxibehindthebus,turnedaround,andlookedatmewithabigsmileonhisface.“Wemadeit,”hesaid.JustthenIrealisedthatIhadzerocashinmywallet.IflashedhimanapologeticsmileasIpulledoutmyPortuguesebankcard.Hetrieditseveraltimes,butthecardmachinejustdidnotplayalong.AfeelingofhelplessnesswashedovermeasIsawthebusqueuethinningout.Atthismoment,Gunterpointedtowardsthewaitinghallofthebusstation.There,attheentrance,wasacashmachine.Ijumpedoutofthecar,madeamadrunforthemachine,andpoppedmycardin,onlytoreadthemessage:“Outoforder.Sorry.”注意:续写词数应为150个左右。第一步:读文,获取故事要素和故事情节1.故事要素(5W1H)A

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news.坏消息是什么?我当时的心情怎么样?Gunter为我做了什么?我许的诺言又是什么?→创构第一段故事框架:作者给出解决办法(留下冈特的电话,承诺会还钱给对方)→冈特同意→作者登上公共汽车。本段创编发散构思如下:(1)What/howdidIsayaboutthebadnews?(2)HowdidGunterreacttomywords?(3)HowdidIfeel?(4)WhatsolutiondidIoffer?(5)WhatdidGunterdo?第二段首句:Four

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promised.见面后我说了些什么?Gunter的反应是什么?我按照诺言又做了什么?Gunter的反应又是什么?最后我的感想是什么?→创构第二段故事框架:两人见面→作者向对方表示感激→作者付费给冈特→两人成为朋友→作者的感慨。本段创编构思如下:(1)WhatdidIsay?(2)WhatwasGunter’sresponse?(3)Whathappenedafterwemet?(4)HowdidGunterreacttotheextramoney?(5)HowdidIfeelafterallthis?3.写好三个衔接句(1)第一段首句后的衔接句:Feelingashamedandembarrassed,Istaredatthecard,thenlookedintohiseyesandsaidwithdifficulty,“Sorry,itdoesn’twork.”/“Sorry,Ican’ttakecashout,”Isaidembarrassedly,withmyfaceburning.(2)第一段尾句(要和第二段首句衔接):Atthesametime,IpromisedfirmlythatIwouldcallhimandpaidhimbackassoonaspossible./“MayIhaveyourphonenumber?IwillcallyouandreturnthemoneyIoweyou.IpromiseIwillkeepmywordoryoukeepmywatch!”Iadded./Gatheringthecourage,IfirmlymadeapromisethatIwouldcontacthimtopaythefareandoffertheextratip.(3)第二段首句后的衔接句:ThemomentGunterpickedupthephone,Icouldn’twaittointroducemyself./Heagreedtomeetmeinavoiceshowinghissurpriseandjoy./Hepickedmeupatthebusstationwherehehaddroppedmeofffourdaysbefore.4.写好一个升华句:ItwasatthattimethatIrealizedhowasmallactofkindnesscouldmakesuchabigdifference!/Untilnow,thephotostillservesasareminderthatitisastranger’skindnessandtrustthatmakethatcoldandwetnightmoreunforgettable./Ifeltblessedtohavesuchawarm-heartedfriendlikeGunter.第三步:成文,丰富续写内容,统一语言风格佳作展示IranbacktoGunterandtoldhimthebadnews.“Sorry,Ican’ttakecashout,”Isaidembarrassedly,withmyfaceburning.Hearingmywords,Gunterrepliedwiththefamiliarsmileonhisface,“That’sOK,justgoahead,youcanpaymeatyourconvenience.”SosurprisedandmovedwasIthatIcouldn’tsayawordout.Asthebusqueuebecameshorter,Gunterpointedtowarditandsaidtome,“Itisyourturn.”Realizingitwastimetoleave,Itookoutmynotebook,askedGunter’snumberandwroteitdownhurriedly.Atthesametime,IpromisedfirmlythatIwouldcallhimandpaidhimbackassoonaspossible.

Fourdayslater,whenIwasbackinVienna,IcalledGunteraspromised.ThemomentGunterpickedupthephone,Icouldn’twaittointroducemyself.GunterseemedtoknowIwasgoingtocall,andhesaidsoftly,“Iknow.”Wemadeanappointmenttomeetatthedepartureplace.Aswemetthefollowingday,Ihuggedhimtightlyasifwewerelong-time-no-seeoldfriends,andIexpressedmygreatgratitudetohim.Ipaidhimbackandofferedanextra$10tip;however,herefusedthetip,onlyacceptingthetaxifare,saying,“Itisnotabigdeal.”Suddenly,awarmcurrentwashedoverme.ItwasatthattimethatIrealizedhowasmallactofkindnesscouldmakesuchabigdifference!

佳作点评1.本篇续写范文故事情节合理,时态、语态无误,内容与所给材料的语言风格和特色一致,同时Atthesametime;Suddenly等衔接词语使续写的故事逻辑清晰,层次分明。2.作者使用了很多高级词汇(如embarrassedly;atyourconvenie