Unit 5 单元话题写作专练（解析版）

第一节应用文假如你是红星中学高三（1）班学生李华。你的英国笔友Jim对中国的数字化生活很感兴趣，来信询问相关情况。请你给他回邮件，

内容包括：

(1)介绍你身边的数字化生活；

(2)阐述你的看法；

(3)询问对方情况。

注意：

(1)词数不少于80；

(2)开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

DearJim,

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​​​​​​​Yours，LiHua【答案】DearJim,

Gladtoknowyou'reinterestedinthedigitallifeofChinese,I'dliketotellyousomethingaboutitaroundme.

①Totellyouthetruth,Ican'thelpfeelingamazedatthegreatchangesthatdigitallifehasbroughttous.

Withasmartphoneinhand,Icandoalmostanything.Justnameafewonthelist-learningonline,gettingmedicalserviceontheInternetandshoppingwithaclick.IcaneventravelacrossChinawithouttakingcash!

②Asastudent,Isurelyenjoylivinginsuchadigitalworld,whichgivesmeeasyaccesstoabundantresources,newsandlearningmaterialsalike.IfonlyIwish,itoffersthechancetobettermyself,physicallyormentally.However,thedigitallifealsohasitsdownsides.ManyelderlyChinesefeelleftbehind,includingmygrandparents.SoIoftentrytohelpthemkeepup.

Howaboutthedigitallifeinyourcountry?Lookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,

LiHua【解析】【思路点拨】

本文是一篇应用文，话题是介绍中国的数字化生活，写作时应该以第二人称为主，第一人称为辅。时态上用一般将来时和一般现在时。注意词汇的选择和句式的准确使用，可以适当增加一些衔接词，以便行文连贯。

【亮点词汇】

①beinterestedin对感兴趣

②can'thelpdoingsth.忍不住做某事

③trytodosth.试图做某事

④keepup跟上（时代）

【高分句型】

①Totellyouthetruth,Ican'thelpfeelingamazedatthegreatchangesthatdigitallifehasbroughttous.（不定式作目的状语；that引导的限定性定语从句）

②Asastudent,Isurelyenjoylivinginsuchadigitalworld,whichgivesmeeasyaccesstoabundantresources,newsandlearningmaterialsalike.

（which引导的非限定性定语从句）

【结构布局】

引言：说明写信的目的

中心：介绍介绍你身边的数字化生活；阐述你的看法；询问对方情况

结尾：询问笔友国家的数字化生活，期待回复

【拓展词汇】

①lookforwardto/expect期待

②offersth.tosb./supplysb.

with

sth.提供某物给某人

【拓展句型】

①MobilepaymentisthemostpopularinChina,whichhasmadepeople'sdailylifemoreandmoreconvenient.（移动支付在中国是最受欢迎的，它使人们的日常生活越来越方便。）

②Itgivesmeeasyaccesstoabundantresources,newsandlearningmaterialsalike.（它让我很容易获得丰富的资源，新闻和学习资料等。）

第二节读后续写阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。OnaSundaymorning,Tonywokeuptoaquiethouse.UsuallyMomwasawakemakingbreakfastandcleaningthekitchen,butnottoday.Atthesoundofhismomcoughing,Tonyknockedonherbedroomdoorandaskedwithgreatconcern,"Mom,areyouOK?""Honey,"Momsaidweakly."Ihaveaterriblecold.Youcanhavecereal(燕麦)forbreakfastandwatchcartoons.I'mgoingtostayinbed."

Tonypouredsomecerealintoabowlandatethepiecesdry.Mommustfeelverybadifshewasstayinginbedallday.HowcouldTonyhelp?First,hewipedupthecrumbsofcerealheleftonthekitchencounter.Healsoputawaythecerealboxneatly,sothekitchenlookedjustasitdidwhenhewokeup.Butwhatelsecouldhedo?Tonythought.Sundaywasthedaywhenmomdidlaundry.Tonylovedtowatchtheclothesspinninginthemachine.Thatshouldbefun!Herantohisroomtogetthelaundrybasket,insidewhichtherewashismother'sfavoritewhitedress,amongotherclothesandapairofredsocks.

Tonyopenedthedoortothewasherandputtheclothesinside.HehadwatchedMomdolaundrylotsoftimes,soheknewwheretofindthewashingpowderandhowtopouritintothemachine.Finally,heclosedthedoorandpressedthebigbuttonthatsaid"START".Tonylookedthroughtheroundglasswindow.Waterwaspouringin,andthemachinewasstartingtospin,makinghisclothingtumblearound.Thatwaseasy!

Tonywatchedcartoonsuntilheheardthewashingmachinebeep.Thatmeantthewashingwasdone.Tonyopenedthedoortotakeoutthedampclothes.Hetookoutafewatatimeandmovedthemintothedryer.Everythingseemedclean,andTonyfeltproud.Thenhepulledoutapinkdress.

注意：

1.续写词数应为150左右；

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Paragraph1:

Butasfarashecouldremember,therewasnopinkdressinthelaundrybasket.

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Paragraph2:

Tonynervouslyknockedathismom'sbedroomdooragain,withthepinkdressinherarms.

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_____________________________________________________________【答案】

Butasfarashecouldremember,therewasnopinkdressinthelaundrybasket.

"Wherediditcomefrom?"Tonywondered.Realizingtherewassomethingwrong,Tonystoodfrozen,hisheartsinking.Justatthatmoment,hecaughtsightoftheredsocks,anditsuddenlyoccurredtohimthattheymustbetoblameforit.Tonywasinsuchapanicthatheeventhoughtofhidingthedressfromhismom."Thatisn'tapositiveapproachtotheproblem,"heremindedhimself.Finally,hedecidedtotellhismomeverything.

Tonynervouslyknockedathismom'sbedroomdooragain,withthepinkdressinherarms.Afterwhatseemedlikeages,hecametothebedside,loweringhishead.Hewasreadytogetagoodscoldingforhiswrongdoing."Sorrymom,Ishouldn'thaveruinedyourfavoritedress."Tonyapologized.Realizingwhatwasgoingon,momsmiledunderstandinglyatTony."Nevermind,dear.Iknowyoumeanttohavehelped."Thenmomheldthedressupbeforeherandsaidinanapprovingtone,"Ithinkitlooksnice."AtthisTonybecamerelieved,makingasilentvowtobemorecarefulinhelpinghismomoutnexttime.【解析】一、文意梳理

【原文大意】

本文讲述了一个周六的早上，Tony发现妈妈生病了，决定帮妈妈分担家务，却在洗衣服时不小心把衣服混色了的故事。

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