2025年写作专题第三部分第二讲读后续写的技法指导-【勤径学升】高考英语一轮总复习晨背与写作（人教版）

2025年写作专题第三部分第二讲读后续写的技法指导-【勤径学升】高考英语一轮总复习晨背与写作（人教版）

一、书面表达(★★★★)1.阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。WhenDr.Hendersonwasassigning(指定)projectmatesforhispsychologyclass,IsecretlyhopedhewouldpairmewithmybestfriendoratleastaclassmateIcouldhavesomefunwith.Aboveall,Ihopedhewouldn’tassignmetoworkwiththefiercelycompetitiveandextremelyseriousfellowwhoalwaysworedarkclothesandapparentlyhadapersonalitytomatch.Asfate(命运)wouldhaveit,Dr.HendersonverydeliberatelymatchedeveryoneinclassandannouncedthatIwouldbeworkingwiththeonepersoninclassIwantedtoavoid.Iwentuptomynewteammateandintroducedmyself.HelookedatmeasthoughIweren’tthere.IfelthetreatedmeasthoughIwouldholdhimbackandprobablymakehimfailtogetanAinthecourse.Hewasn’tmeanorabusive.Hejustgavemetheimpressionthathecoulddowhateverprojectwedreamedupbetterifhediditalone.Needlesstosay,Ididn’tlookforwardtoanentireteamofbeingbrushedoff,butItriedtomakethebestofitanddidn’tsayanythingforfearthatIwouldmakethingsworse.Theprojectrequiredeachteamtodevelopahypothesis(假说),setupanexperimenttotestthehypothesis,dothestatisticalanalysisandpresentthefindings.Whatevergradetheteamreceivedwouldbesharedbybothstudents.WhenmyteammateandImettodiscussourproject,Iwasuneasy.Herewasthischallengingstudentwhohadareputationforsingle-mindednessandgoodgrades—theexactoppositeofme.Iactuallywantedtodroptheclassatonepoint,butstoppedshortbecauseIdidn’twanttogivehimthesatisfactionofmychickeningout.Idecidedtosticktoitnomatterwhat.Afterlongdiscussions,wesomehowagreedtodoastudyonthepsychologicalwell-beingofteenagers.Iwasn’tsurewhatitmeantexactly,butatleastwehadatopic.Para.1Westartedtomeetregularlytodrawupourplans.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Para.2ThenonedayIgotwordthathewasadmittedtothehospitalforaseriousdisease.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________(★★★★)2.阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。WhenIwasinmiddleschool,mysocialstudiesteacheraskedmetoenterawritingcontest.Isaidnowithoutthinking.Ididnotlovewriting.MyfamilycamefromBrazil,soEnglishwasonlymysecondlanguage.WritingwassodifficultandpainfulformethatmyteacherhadallowedmetopresentmypaperonthesinkingoftheTitanicbyactingoutaplay,whereIplayedalltheparts.Noonelaughedharderthanhedid.So,whydidhesuddenlyforcemetodosomethingatwhichIwassuretofail?Hisreply:“BecauseIloveyourstories.Ifyou’rewillingtoapplyyourself,Ithinkyouhaveagoodshotatthis.”Encouragedbyhiswords,Iagreedtogiveitatry.IchosePaulRevere’shorseasmysubject.PaulReverewasasilversmith(银匠)inBostonwhorodeahorseatnightonApril18,1775toLexingtontowarnpeoplethatBritishsoldierswerecoming.Mystorywouldcomestraightfromthehorse’smouth.Notabrilliantidea,butfunny;andunlikelytobeanyoneelse’schoice.Whatdidthehorsethink,ashespedthroughthenight?Didhegettired?Havedoubts?Didhewanttoquit?Isympathizedimmediately.Igottired.Ihaddoubts.Iwantedtoquit.But,likeRevere’shorse,Ikeptgoing.Iworkedhard.Icheckedmyspelling.Iaskedmyoldersistertocorrectmygrammar.IcheckedoutahalfdozenbooksonPaulReverefromthelibrary.Ievenreadafewofthem.WhenIhandedintheessaytomyteacher,hereadit,laughedoutloud,andsaid,“Great.Now,writeitagain.”Iwroteitagain,andagainandagain.WhenIfinallyfinishedit,thethoughtofwinninghadgivenwaytotheenjoymentofwriting.IfIdidn’twin,Iwouldn’tcare.注意:1.续写词数应为150个左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Afewweekslater,whenIalmostforgotthecontest,therecamethenews.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Iwenttomyteacher’sofficeaftertheawardpresentation.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________二、完成句子(★★)3.Theletterfromhisparentsmadehimhomesick.(升级黑体词)→Theletterfromhisparents______________.(★★★)4.Weshouldtrytoimproveourselvesthroughlearningandprepareforthefuture.(升级黑体词)→Weshould______________toimproveourselvesthroughlearningand____________forthefuture.(★★)5.Itwasluckthatthedoorwasfirmenoughtostopthefrighteningwolf.(升级黑体词)→______________,thedoorwasfirmenoughtostopthefrighteningwolf.(★★)6.Inmyopinion,Iwanttotalkfranklyandsincerelywithmychildaboutit.(升级黑体词)→______________,Iwanttotalkwithmychildaboutit,franklyandsincerely.(★★)7.Theboyledtheway,soIhadnodifficultyinfindingtheoldman’shouse.(升级黑体词)→________________________,Ihadnodifficultyinfindingtheoldman’shouse.(★★★)8.知道在短时间内没有人会来帮忙，她拍了一张附近路标的照片并把它发布到网上。（分词短语作状语）_______________________,shetookaphotoofthenearbyroadsignandposteditonline.(★★)9.他又激动又感动，顺着声音出去求助。（形容词短语作状语）____________,hefollowedthesoundandwentoutforhelp.(★★★)10.男孩冲到那位老人的家，满脸是汗。（独立主格）Theboyrushedtotheoldman’shouse,______________________.(★★★)11.正是通过投入和汗水，我才能彻底改变自己。（强调句）______________________Icanchangemyselfinsideandout.(★★★)12.当他在废墟中营救幸存者时，他几乎不在乎自己的安全。(倒装句)Whilehewasrescuingsurvivorsintheruins,_______________________.(★★★)13.要不是这次经历，她就不会意识到她应该花更多的时间和家人在一起。（虚拟语气）Butforthisexperience,she________________________.(★★★)14.Jennywasnervouswhenshewalkedtotheplatform.(静态写成动态)→__________________________________________________________________________________________(★★)15.Shefeltshywhensherealizedshewasbeingwatched.(静态写成动态)→__________________________________________________________________________________________(★★★)16.Theoldmanwashappywhenhisgrandsonsmiledathim.(静态写成动态)→__________________________________________________________________________________________(★★★)17.Seeingthemeatinthemaster’shand,thelittledogwasextremelyexcited.(静态写成动态)→__________________________________________________________________________________________(★★★)18.Hewasdisappointedwhenheheardthenewsthathefailedtowinaprize.(静态写成动态)→__________________________________________________________________________________________(★★★)19.Theboylaterwentuptohisteacherandsaidsorry.(添加状语)→__________________________________________________________________________________________(★★★)20.Suddenly,thewomanstoodupandenteredthehouse.(添加状语)→__________________________________________________________________________________________(★★★)21.Theboyturnedtothestrangeman.(添加状语)→__________________________________________________________________________________________(★★★)22.Hestoodleaningagainstthewall.(添加状语)→__________________________________________________________________________________________(★★★)23.Jackshookmyhandstightly.(添加状语)→__________________________________________________________________________________________(★★★)24.Jennycaughtthebutterfly.(细化动作描写)→__________________________________________________________________________________________(★★★)25.Theyoungmothergatheredhersonintoherarms.(细化动作描写)→__________________________________________________________________________________________(★★★)26.Theboysjumpedintothewater.(细化动作描写)→__________________________________________________________________________________________(★★★)27.Thesingerbegantosing.(细化动作描写)→__________________________________________________________________________________________(★★★)28.Tonyrushedoutofthelivingroom.(细化动作描写)→__________________________________________________________________________________________(★★★)29.Myheartwasbroken.(夸张)→__________________________________________________________________________________________(★★★)30.Jennywalkedintothedoorhappily.（比喻）→__________________________________________________________________________________________(★★)31.Thebuswentslowly.（比喻）→__________________________________________________________________________________________(★★★)32.Theclassroomwasveryquiet.（夸张）→__________________________________________________________________________________________(★★★)33.Inthenight,wewatchedthestarsinthesky.(拟人)→__________________________________________________________________________________________三、书面表达(★★★)34.阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。ItwasTamika’sturntotellherclasswhereshewentthissummer.Shestoodupproudly.“ThissummerIwenttoBradley,”Tamikaannounced.“Theyhaveabigmarketthere.MymomboughtapaintingandIgotsecond-handinlineskates.Wehadagreattimethere.”“That’snotatrip,”Jeremywhisperedloudlytohispartner.“It’sonlyhalfanhourfromhere.MydadandIoftengotoBradleytobuytoolsforhisrepairshop.”“Jeremy,nointerrupting,”saidMissSnowdent,theirteacher.“AndBradleyhasafinemarket.I’mgladthatTamikacantellusaboutit.Goahead,Tamika.”MissSnowdensmiledwarmlyather,encouraginghertocontinue.ButTamikadidn’tfeelproudofherfamily’striptoBradleyanymoreandshejustfeltembarrassed.Tamikadroppedherheadandsaidinalowvoicethatshewasfinished,andthenhurriedbacktoherdesk.Shehopedthattheotherkidsdidn’tnoticeherfaceturningred.TamikalistenedasPetertalkedabouthiscruisetoJamaical.SheheardaboutMary’stripacrosstheAtlantictoIreland.SheheardaboutJohn’shorsebackridethroughtheGrandCanyon.Itseemedasifeveryonebutherhadtakenabigtripoverthesummer.“Inevergettogoanywhere.”Tamikathoughttoherself.Asenseofsadnesscloudedherthewholeday.Afterschoolthingsgotworse.OneofthewheelsonTamika’sskatescameloose.Nowshecouldn’tevenskate.Sittingonthesidewalk,Tamikatriedtofixherwheelbutdidnotknowhow.ThenMissSnowdenhappenedtopassby.Shewalkedupwithasmileonherface,asking.“Youlookunhappy,Tamika.Whyareyousittinghere?”Tamikaloweredherhead,tearsbuildingupinsidehereyes.“Wanttotalkaboutit?”MissSnowdenaskedkindly.Tamikanodded,tryingtoavoidMissSnowden’seyes!Bendingdown,MissSnowdensaidinawhisper:“Youknow,Tamika,actuallywedon’talwayshavetotravelfartolearnanything.”TamikalookedupwithwateringeyesandwonderedwhatMissSnowdenmeant.注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；2.请按如下格式在相应位置作答。Rightatthismoment,Jeremywaswalkingbyandsawthem.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________“Yes.Icanfixit,”Jeremysaidwithconfidence.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________(★★★)35.阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。WhenIwasfifteen,Ilivedwithmyfamilyinasmalltown.Myfather’sprofessionwassuchthatthewholefamilyhadtoshiftfrequentlyfromoneplacetoanother.Mymotherwasahousewifeandmysisterwasanartist.Duetomyfather’stransfer(调动)afterevery3-4years,myschoollifewasterrible.Ihadtostartanewlifeinnewschoolsandmakenewfriends.Becauseofthis,Ialwaysfeltlonely.OneFridayafternoon,IwentwithmyfriendRockytohishome.Assoonasthedooropened,apetdogjumpedonRockyandstartedlickinghisface.IaskedRocky,“Whyisyourpetdoingthis?”Rockyreplied,“Mydoggylovesmesomuch.Thisisthewayheshowshislove.Animalscan’tspeak,buttheytoohavefeelings.”Hisreplywassotouchingthatitmademethinkaboutkeepingapetdog.Aftergoingbackhome,Isharedthewholeincidentwithmymotherandsisterandexpressedmydesire.Mymothersaid,“It’suptoyou,butifyoukeepadog,itwillbeentirelyyourresponsibilitytolookafterit.”Mysisterthoughtitwonderfultohaveapetdoginthehouse,andshesupportedme.Nowtherealtaskformewas