Unit3FoodandCulture说明文-高二单元写作深度指导（人教版2019）

Unit3FoodandCulture(说明文）（人教版2019）Writeaboutahealthydiet（说明文）单元话题真题展示考情预测说明文2018年全国卷本单元的写作任务是写一篇关于健康饮食的文章，属于说明文的范畴，旨在通过帮助学生积累有关健康饮食的知识，深化对健康饮食这一主题的理解，并反思自身饮食习惯。Usewhatyouhavelearnttowriteanessayaboutyourowndiet.假如你是李华，你的美国笔友Peter春节打算来中国度假。因为他在中国期间将和一个寄宿家庭一起居住，所以他想知道一些中国的餐桌礼仪，以便能更好地适应中国的生活。请你根据下面的提示，给他写一封邮件，告诉他一些中国的餐桌礼仪。要点提示:1.分享餐桌上的所有食物;2.用筷子吃饭，但不要把筷子插进食物中;3.就餐时，长辈先吃你才可以动手，可以互相交谈，但声音不可太大要求:1.必须使用所给的提示内容，并适当发挥;2.不少于100词(邮件开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数)。说明文是写作中常见的一种文体，用简明的文字来说明事物，不带任何个人感情色彩，不需要生动的细节和背景，纯粹是客观的阐述。写作时应注意以下几个方面：1．写作时抓住事物的特征，即抓住事物的个性特征。2．安排合理的说明顺序，如时间顺序、空间顺序、逻辑顺序等。3．恰当地使用说明方法，如下定义说明、举例说明、分类说明、比较说明、引用说明、比喻说明、数字说明等。4．语言简练、用词准确，具有科学性、客观性、知识性。段落内容句子设计开头开门见山，引出话题Overall,IthinkIhavehealthy/unhealthyeatinghabits.Asfor...thingsthatIamdoingright,...Still,Ishouldimprovemyeatingby...sby...主体进行客观具体事实的描述quotationfiguresparisonexplanationexamples结尾给出自己的观点Tosumup/Insummary/Ingeneral/Inshort.【词汇积累】:积累单元话题词汇;1．bebadforone'shealth 对某人的健康有害2．begoodforone'shealth 对某人的健康有好处3．beoptimisticabout... 对……乐观4．bepessimisticabout... 对……悲观5．buildupone'sbody 强身健体6．formagoodeatinghabit 养成好的饮食习惯7．mentalcondition 精神状态8．relaxoneself 自我放松9．stayhealthy 保持健康10．sufferfrom 遭受11．unhealthyeatinghabits 不健康的饮食习惯12．berichin 富含13．behigh/lowin 含量……高/低14．beonadiet 节食15．breakdown (身体)垮掉16．curesb.of... 治愈某人……【句式积累】:1．常用开头句①Livingahealthylifestyleliesinhavingahealthydiet.Whatisahealthydiet?拥有健康的生活方式在于有健康的饮食习惯。什么是健康饮食呢？②Healthyeatinghabitsareveryimportantforourhealth.Buthowcanweformahealthyeatinghabit?健康的饮食习惯对我们的健康非常重要。但是我们如何才能养成健康的饮食习惯呢？③Iamsorrytohearthatyouhavebeengaining/puttingonweightrecentlyandyouareupsetaboutit.我很抱歉听到你最近体重增加了，而且你对此很不高兴。④Recently,IhaveabigheadachethatIalwaysliketoeatfastfoodsomuch.最近我遇到一件头疼的事，就是我总是喜欢吃如此多的快餐。⑤Doyouhaveahealthydiet?Ahealthydietisactuallyabalancedone.你有健康的饮食习惯吗？健康的饮食实际上是均衡的饮食。⑥Peoplearebeginningtoattachmuchmoreimportancetotheirhealththesedaysthaneverbefore.如今，人们开始比以往更重视他们的健康。2．常用中间句①Don'tskipbreakfast.不要不吃早餐。②Eatmoregrains,fruitsandvegetables.多吃谷物、水果和蔬菜。③We'dbettertakepartinmoreoutdooractivitiesinsteadofsittinginfrontofTVsetsorputersforalongtime,whichisbadforourhealth.我们最好多参加户外活动，而不是在电视或电脑前坐很长时间，这对我们的健康有害。④Abalanceddietandregularexercisecanhelpuskeephealthybothphysicallyandmentally.均衡的饮食和规律的锻炼能帮助我们保持身心健康。⑤Wemustadmitthefactthateatingjunkfoodisharmfultoourhealth.我们必须承认吃垃圾食品有害健康的事实。⑥Iwouldstronglyadviseyoutobinethebalanceddietandexercise.我会强烈建议你把均衡的饮食和锻炼结合起来。⑦Ahealthydietconsistsofeatingavarietyoffoodsrichinvitamins,fibreandmineral.健康饮食包括吃各种各样的富含维生素、纤维和矿物质的食物。⑧Inmyopinion,weshouldtrytodevelophealthyeatinghabitstobuildupastrongbody.在我看来，我们应当努力养成健康的饮食习惯以增强体质。3．常用结束句①Ihopeyou'llfindthesesuggestionshelpful.我希望你会发现这些建议有帮助。②Onlyinthiswaycanyouhaveahealthydietinthefuture.只有这样，在未来你才能养成健康的饮食习惯。③Allinall,weshouldeathealthyfoodtokeepourselvesenergetic.总之，我们应该吃健康的食物来保持精力充沛。④Couldyougivemesomesuggestionsandahealthyrecipeforme?你能给我一些建议和一份健康饮食食谱吗？⑤Asthesayinggoes,youarewhatyoueat.Inordertokeepfit,pleasehaveahealthydiet.正如俗话所说，人如其食。为了保持健康，请养成健康的饮食习惯。【万能写作模板】给出写作模板,便于识记。WhatIhaveknownaboutisthat

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__________________(提出建议).1．假定你是李华，请用你学到的知识写一篇关于你自己饮食的文章。注意:词数80左右;_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【导语】本篇书面表达属于开放性作文。要求考生用学到的知识写一篇关于你自己饮食的文章。【详解】1.词汇积累对……有害：doharmto→beharmfulto各种各样的：avarietyof→various简言之：putsimply→inshort充满：befullof→befilledwith2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Ihopetofollowabalanceddiettobuildupastrongbody.拓展句：IhopetofollowabalanceddietsothatIcanbuildupastrongbody.【点睛】[高分句型1]ThefruitsandvegetablesthatIeatarefullofvitaminsandminerals.(运用了that引导定语从句)[高分句型2]IcouldpreparesomehealthydishesinadvancethatIcaneatwhenI’mtoobusy.(运用了when引导时间状语从句)[审题]1.确定体裁：本文为一篇说明文。2.确定时态：一般现在时为主。3.确定人称：第一人称。[谋篇]第一段：我的饮食是否健康。第二段：我的不良饮食习惯以及如何改正坏习惯。第三段：总结我的观点。[核心词汇]汉译英2．健康的饮食习惯3．富含维生素和矿物质4．挑食5．对健康有害6．强身健体【答案】2．healthyeatinghabits3．(be)fullof/richinvitaminsandminerals4．beparticularaboutfood5．doharmtohealth6．buildupastrongbody【解析】2．“饮食习惯”表达为eatinghabits，“健康的”表达为healthy，因此“健康的饮食习惯”表达为healthyeatinghabits。故填healthyeatinghabits。3．“富含”表达为(be)fullof/richin，“维生素和矿物质”表达为vitaminsandminerals，因此“富含维生素和矿物质”表达为(be)fullof/richinvitaminsandminerals。故填(be)fullof/richinvitaminsandminerals。4．“对……挑剔”表达为beparticularabout，“食物”表达为food，因此“挑食”表达为beparticularaboutfood。故填beparticularaboutfood。5．“对……有害”表达为doharmto，“健康”表达为health，故“对健康有害”表达为doharmtohealth。故填doharmtohealth。6．“强身健体”是固定短语，表达为buildupastrongbody。故填buildupastrongbody。[连词成句]7．简言之，我的大部分饮食都含有对我身体有益的食物。（汉译英）【答案】Putsimply,mostofmydietcontainsfoodthatisgoodformybody.【详解】考查时态，固定短语和定语从句。简言之可以用固定短语putsimply，修饰后面的句子作状语，我的大部分饮食是主语译为“mostofmydiet”，含有为谓语译为“contain”，句子描述一般事实，用一般现在时，主语mostofmydiet，谓语用第三人称单数，食物为宾语译为“food”，对我身体有益的为定语可以用that连接的定语从句，对……有益处为固定短语begoodfor，我的身体译为“mybody”，故翻译为Putsimply,mostofmydietcontainsfoodthatisgoodformybody.8．我吃水果和蔬菜，它们富含维生素和矿物质。（汉译英）【答案】Ieatfruitsandvegetablesandtheyarefullofvitaminsandminerals.【详解】考查固定搭配、名词和时态。分析句子结构，本句应为and连接的并列句，这里陈述的是事实，应用一般现在时。前一分句中，主语“我”可表示为I，“吃”可表示为eat，“水果”可表示为fruits，“蔬菜”可表示为vegetables；后一分句中，主语“它们”可表示为they，“富含”可表示为befullof，be动词用are，“维生素”可表示为vitamins，“矿物质”可表示为minerals。故本句可翻译为：Ieatfruitsandvegetablesandtheyarefullofvitaminsandminerals.9．我经常太忙而忘记吃饭。（汉译英）【答案】Iamsometimestoobusyandforgettoeat.【详解】考查固定句型和短语。句子陈述经常性发生的动作，应用一般现在时；表示“太……以至于不能做某事”表达为too+adj.+todo，不定式作结果状语，“忙的”用busy表达，“忘记做某事”为forgettodosth.，不定式作宾语。结合其他汉语提示，故翻译为Iamsometimestoobusyandforgettoeat.10．我可以提前准备一些健康的食物。（汉译英）【答案】Icouldpreparesomehealthyfood/dishesinadvance.【详解】考查情态动词和固定短语。我是主语，译为“I”，可以用情态动词could，准备是谓语动词译为“prepare”，接在情态动词后，用动词原形，一些健康的食物是宾语，译为“somehealthyfood/dishes”，提前用固定短语“inadvance”，在句中作状语，故翻译为Icouldpreparesomehealthyfood/dishesinadvance.11．当我太忙的时候我可以吃一些健康食物。（汉译英）【答案】Icaneatsomehealthyfood/disheswhenI’mtoobusy.【详解】考查时间状语从句。当我太忙的时候翻译成when引导的时间状语从句，时态为一般现在时，翻译为“whenI’mtoobusy.”，主句主语为I，可以吃为“caneat”，一些健康食物为“somehealthyfood/dishes”，作宾语。故翻译为：Icaneatsomehealthyfood/disheswhenI’mtoobusy.12．我应该避免在电视前吃饭。（汉译英）【答案】IshouldavoideatinginfrontoftheTV.【详解】考查动名词。我是主语，译为“I”，应该是情态动词should，避免做某事为avoiddoing，接在情态动词后，应用原形，在电视前吃饭，译为“eatinfrontoftheTV”，接在avoid后，应用动名词作宾语，故翻译为IshouldavoideatinginfrontoftheTV.13．在电视前面太容易吃太多。（汉译英）【答案】ItistooeasytoeattoomuchinfrontoftheTV.【详解】考查固定句型和短语。表示“太容易做某事”句型为Itistooeasytodosth.，it作形式主语；表示“吃太多”短语为eattoomuch；表示“在电视前面”短语为infrontoftheTV。为一般现在时。故翻译为ItistooeasytoeattoomuchinfrontoftheTV.14．做出正确的关于饮食的决定是我的责任。（汉译英）【答案】It’suptometomaketherightdecisionsaboutmydiet.【详解】考查固定句型和短语。表示“……是某人的责任”句型为It’suptosb.todosth.；表示“做出正确的关于饮食的决定”翻译为maketherightdecisionsaboutmydiet，为一般现在时。故翻译为It’suptometomaketherightdecisionsaboutmydiet.[句式升级]15．Ieatfruitsandvegetablesandtheyarefullofvitaminsandminerals.（改写成定语从句）【答案】ThefruitsandvegetablesthatIeatarefullofvitaminsandminerals.【详解】考查定语从句。句意：我吃的水果和蔬菜富含维生素和矿物质。此处改为定语从句修饰先行词fruitsandvegetables，在从句作宾语，指物，应用that，故改为ThefruitsandvegetablesthatIeatarefullofvitaminsandminerals.16．Iamsometimestoobusyandforgettoeat.（用“find＋宾语＋宾补”结构改写）【答案】Isometimesfindmyselftoobusyandforgettoeat.【详解】考查句子结构。句意：我有时太忙而忘记吃饭。根据改写要求，该句可转换为“find＋宾语＋宾补”结构的固定句型，原句为一般现在时，改写句应用一般现在时，主语I，谓语find，宾语用反身代词“我自己”myself，宾语补足语用形容词busy“忙的”，前面加程度副词too“太”，后面保持不变。故改写为：Isometimesfindmyselftoobusyandforgettoeat.17．合成主从复合句。Icouldpreparesomehealthyfood/dishesinadvance.Icaneatsomehealthyfood/disheswhenI’mtoobusy.【答案】IcouldpreparesomehealthydishesinadvancethatIcaneatwhenI’mtoobusy.【详解】考查定语从句。句意：我可以提前准备一些健康的菜肴，当我太忙的时候可以吃。分析可知，句中重复的部分是somehealthydishes，可以用作先行词，第二句子作定语从句修饰先行词，指事物，可以用that来指代，并且在从句中充当宾语成分，故合并为IcouldpreparesomehealthydishesinadvancethatIcaneatwhenI’mtoobusy.18．合成复合句，状语从句用as引导。IshouldavoideatinginfrontoftheTV.ItistooeasytoeattoomuchinfrontoftheTV.【答案】IshouldalsoavoideatinginfrontoftheTV,asitistooeasytoeattoomuchthatway.【详解】考查原因状语从句。句意：我应该避免在电视机前吃饭，因为那样太容易吃太多了。分析可知，第二句是第一句的原因，可以用as引导的原因状语从句，两句中都有infrontoftheTV，在句中表示方式，所以第二句中可以用thatway代替，故合并为IshouldalsoavoideatinginfrontoftheTV,asitistooeasytoeattoomuchthatway.[连句成篇]用适当的过渡词语，把以上词汇和句式，再加上联想内容，组成一篇80词左右的英语短文。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】参考范文Overall,IthinkIhavehealthyeatinghabits.Iameatingavarietyofhealthyandnutritiousfoodonthelist,suchasfish,eggs,fruit,andsalad.Putsimply,mostofmydietcontainsfoodthatisgoodformybody.ThefruitsandvegetablesthatIeatarefullofvitaminsandminerals.However,Idohavesomebadeatinghabits.Isometimesfindmyselftoobusyandforgettoeat.Iamalsoparticularaboutfood,andstilleatordrinktoomuch.Allthesebadhabitswilldoharmtomyhealth.IcouldpreparesomehealthydishesinadvancethatIcaneatwhenI’mtoobusy.IshouldalsoavoideatinginfrontoftheTV,asitistooeasytoeattoomuchthatway.Afterreadingthearticle,Inowbetterunderstandhowtoeatmorehealthilyandimprovemyfoodchoices.Ihopetofollowabalanceddiettobuildupastrongbody.Itisuptometomaketherightdecisionsaboutmydiet,andIhavedecidedtobehealthierandhappier!书面表达1．假定你是李华。你的澳大利亚朋友John写信告诉你，他将参加他所在城市举行的“我所了解的中国美食”的演讲比赛，请求你为他推荐一种中国美食。请你给他回信，要点包括：1.收信时的感想；2.推荐并介绍中国美食；3.预祝对方取得好成绩。注意：1.词数80左右；2:可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】DearJohn,I’msoproudthatyourcityisgoingtoholdsuchaspeechpetitiontopromoteAustralians’awarenessofChineseculture.Chinahasmanydeliciousfood,butI’dliketoremendmyfavoritefoodsStewedPorkBallinBrownSaucetoyou,whichIoftencookathomeoreatinrestaurants.Thisdishisposedoffourbrownmeatballs,representingblessingoflife,longevityandhappiness,soitisoftenservedasthelastdishinwedding,birthdayandotherfeasts.Ifyouneedmoreinformationaboutthedish,justfeelfreetoaskme.Wishyousuccessinthepetition!Yours,sincerelyLiHua【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给澳大利亚朋友John写信，为他推荐一种中国美食。【详解】1.词汇积累比赛：petition→contest举行：hold→host美味的：delicious→tasty组成：beposedof→consistof2.句式拓展同义句转换原句：Ifyouneedmoreinformationaboutthedish,justfeelfreetoaskme.拓展句：Whenyouneedmoreinformationaboutthedish,justfeelfreetoaskme.【点睛】[高分句型1]I’msoproudthatyourcityisgoingtoholdsuchaspeechpetitiontopromoteAustralians’awarenessofChineseculture.(运用了that引导的结果状语从句)[高分句型2]Ifyouneedmoreinformationaboutthedish,justfeelfreetoaskme.(运用了if引导条件状语从句)2．假如你是李华，你的美国朋友David上个月在扬州旅游期间品尝了扬州绿杨春茶，对中国茶文化表现出了非常浓厚的兴趣。回国后他发来邮件，希望你介绍中国茶文化，请你写一份邮件，内容主要包括：1.中国茶文化历史悠久、茶叶种类丰富；2.茶在中国人生活中的重要性；3.希望世界上有更多的人品尝中国茶，了解中国文化。注意：1.词数80左右；2.可适当发挥想象，增加细节，以使行文连贯。DearDavid,_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】DearDavid,IamverygladtolearnthatyouareveryfondofChinesetea.IampleasedtointroducesomethingaboutChineseteaculturetoyou.Chineseteahasaverylonghistory,andithasbeenverypopularsinceancienttimes.Asanimportantpartofourcountry’sculturalheritage,Chineseteahasvariouskindsandflavors,suchasgreentea,blackteaandwhitetea,ofwhichPu’erandLongjingarethemostfamous,andtherearemanyteahousesinwhichpeoplegettogethertogetrelaxed.IhopemoreandmorefriendsallovertheworldlikeChineseteaandlearnaboutChineseculture.Yours,LiHua【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给美国朋友David写一份邮件，向他介绍中国茶文化。其内容包括：茶的历史、茶在人们生活中的作用和希望更多人了解茶。【详解】1.词汇积累高兴的：glad→delighted喜欢：befondof→bekeenon重要的：important→significant各种各样的：various→varietiesof2.句式拓展同义句转换原句：Chineseteahasaverylonghistory,andithasbeenverypopularsinceancienttimes.（并列句）拓展句：Chineseteahasaverylonghistory,whichhasbeenverypopularsinceancienttimes.（非限制性定语从句）【点睛】[高分句型1]IamverygladtolearnthatyouareveryfondofChinesetea.(运用了that引导的宾语从句)[高分句型2]Asanimportantpartofourcountry’sculturalheritage,Chineseteahasvariouskindsandflavors,suchasgreentea,blackteaandwhitetea,ofwhichPu’erandLongjingarethemostfamous,andtherearemanyteahousesinwhichpeoplegettogethertogetrelaxed.(运用了“介词+which”引导的非限制性定语从句和限制性定语从句)3．假如你是一家餐馆的经理，请你用英语向来自国外的游客介绍一下中国的传统美食——水饺。内容包括以下几个方面：1.中国传统美食之一，几乎人人喜爱。2.形状像古代的金锭，是财富的象征。3.制作水饺需要全家参与，代表着团圆。注意：1.词数80词左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。参考词汇：金锭goldingot________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】参考范文MyfavoritefoodisatraditionalfoodlovedverymuchbyChinesepeople—dumplings.Ifirsttriedthemmorethantenyearsago.SmallchildasIwasatthattime,Iatealmostabigbowlofdumplingsbecausetheyweresodelicious.TheshapeofadumplingissimilartothatofanancientChinesegoldingot,sodumplingssymbolizewealth.Makingdumplingsisreallyteamwork,soallthefamilymembersoftenworktogether,duringwhichtheysharetheirlifestorieswitheachother.Inthisway,makingdumplingsisalsoasymbolofunion.Nowmoreandmoreforeignersarefondofthetasteofdumplings.【导语】本篇书面表达属于说明文。假如你是一家餐馆的经理，请你用英语向来自国外的游客介绍一下中国的传统美食——水饺。【详解】1.词汇积累传统的：traditional→conventional喜欢：befondof→like美味的：delicious→tasty财富：wealth→fortune2.句式拓展合并简单句原句：MyfavoritefoodisatraditionalfoodlovedverymuchbyChinesepeople—dumplings.Ifirsttriedthemmorethantenyearsago.拓展句：MyfavoritefoodisatraditionalfoodlovedverymuchbyChinesepeople—dumplings,whichIfirsttriedmorethantenyearsago.【点睛】[高分句型1]SmallchildasIwasatthattime,Iatealmostabigbowlofdumplingsbecausetheyweresodelicious.(运用了because引导原因状语从句)[高分句型2]Makingdumplingsisreallyteamwork,soallthefamilymembersoftenworktogether,duringwhichtheysharetheirlifestorieswitheachother.(运用了“介词+which”结构非限制性定语从句)4．假定你是李华，你校将举办以“中英传统美食”为主题的交流会。请写封邮件将此事告知你的英国朋友Peter,内容包括：1.时间和地点;2.交流会内容;3.要求：提前准备素材。注意：1.写作词数应为80左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。DearPeter,____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【答案】DearPeter,IammorethandelightedtotellyouthatanexchangemeetingwiththethemeoftraditionalfoodinChinaandBritainwillbeheldinourschoolsoon.SoIamwritingtotellyousomethingaboutit.Asplanned,themeetingwillbeheldintheschoollecturehallfrom2:00to4:00intheafternoonnextSunday.Youcanshareyourowncountry’straditionalfoodthatimpressesyoumost.It’sworthmentioningthatyoushouldmakesomepreparationsinadvance,suchasrelatedmaterial.Ifirmlybelieveyowwillhaveagoodtime.Yours.LiHua【导语】你校将举办以“中英传统美食”为主题的交流会。请写封邮件将此事告知你的英国朋友Peter，内容包括：1.时间和地点；2.交流会内容；3.要求：提前准备素材。【详解】1.词汇积累高兴的：delighted→pleased告诉：tell→inform计划：plan→schedule提前：inadvance→aheadofschedule2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Asplanned,themeetingwillbeheldintheschoollecturehallfrom2:00to4:00intheafternoonnextSunday.拓展句：Asisplanned,themeetingwillbeheldintheschoollecturehallfrom2:00to4:00intheafternoonnextSunday.【点睛】【高分句型1】Youcanshareyourowncountry’straditionalfoodthatimpressesyoumost.(运用了that引导的定语从句)【高分句型2】It’sworthmentioningthatyoushouldmakesomepreparationsinadvance,suchasrelatedmaterial.(运用了that引导的主语从句)5．假如你是省实验中学学生会主席李健，为响应近期我校“注重培养学生健康生活习惯”的号召，用下面给出的要点提示，给全校同学写一封倡议书。1.注意合理饮食：多吃新鲜蔬菜和水果，不要吃太多垃圾食品。2.适当参加体育锻炼；非必要不出门；戴口罩；不去人多的地方。3.注意休息，保证充足睡眠。注意：1.字数100字左右2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数3.可适当增加细节以使行文连贯Dearfellowstudents,Ourschoolisaimingtocallonusstudentstoliveahealthylife_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Inshort,let’stakeactiontoimproveourhealth.LiJian【答案】Dearfellowstudents,

Ourschoolisaimingtocallonusstudentstoliveahealthylife.Ithinkweshouldtakemeasurestoimprovethepresentsituationofourhealth.Asweallknow,weteenagersgrowveryfast,soweneedplentyofnutritiousfoods,suchasfish,beans,freshfruitsandvegetables,allofwhichcanprotectusagainstdiseases.Weshouldnottakeintoomuchjunkfoodortoomanysweets.Additionally,physicalexerciseisneededinsteadofstudyingallthetime.What’smore,havingenoughsleepisofgreatbenefit.Therefore,Isincerelysuggestthatweshouldhaveatleasteighthoursofsleepeverydayandgetridofthehabitofstayinguptoolate.Onlyinthiswaycanwekeepfit.

Inshort,let’stakeactiontoimproveourhealth.

LiJian【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生为响应近期学校“注重培养学生健康生活习惯”的号召给全校同学写一封倡议书。【详解】1.词汇积累采取措施：takemeasures→takesteps/takeaction此外：additionally/What’smore→inaddition/furthermore/besides/moreover有很大的好处：beverybeneficial→beofgreatbenefit保持健康：keepfit→keephealthy/keepingoodhealth/stayhealthy2.句式拓展合并句子原句：Ourschoolisaimingtocallonusstudentstoliveahealthylife.Ithinkweshouldtakemeasurestoimprovethepresentsituationofourhealth.拓展句：Toliveahealthylife,ourschoolisaimingtocallonusstudentstotakemeasurestoimprovethepresentsituationofourhealth.【点睛】[高分句型1]Asweallknow,weteenagersgrowveryfast,soweneedplentyofnutritiousfoods,suchasfish,beans,freshfruitsandvegetables,allofwhichcanprotectusagainstdiseases.(运用了as和which引导的非限制性定语从句)[高分句型2]Onlyinthiswaycanwekeepfit.(运用了部分倒装句式)

1．假如你是李华，你的美国笔友Peter春节打算来中国度假。因为他在中国期间将和一个寄宿家庭一起居住，所以他想知道一些中国的餐桌礼仪，以便能更好地适应中国的生活。请你根据下面的提示，给他写一封邮件，告诉他一些中国的餐桌礼仪。要点提示:1.分享餐桌上的所有食物;2.用筷子吃饭，但不要把筷子插进食物中;3.就餐时，长辈先吃你才可以动手，可以互相交谈，但声音不可太大要求:1.必须使用所给的提示内容，并适当发挥;2.不少于100词(邮件开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数)。DearPeter,I’mgladthatyou’lltakeatriptoChinaandlivewithaChinesehostfamilyduringtheSpringFestival.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________YoursLiHua【答案】DearPeter,I’gladthatyouwilltakeatriptoChinaandlivewithaChinesehostfamilyduringtheSpringFestival.NowletmeintroducesomeChinesetablemannerstoyou.Firstly,you’resupposedtoshareallthefoodonthetable,showingappreciationforthehospitalityofthehostandhostess.Secondly,youwillhavetoeatwithchopsticksinsteadofknivesandforks,whichseemsdifficultforyou,butthehostwillteachyouhowtousethem.Whatisworthmentioningisthatyoushouldn’tstickyourchopsticksintoyourfoodbecauseit’simpolite.Besides,you’reallowedtotalkwithotherswhileeatingsolongasyoudon’tspeaktooloudly.Mostimportantly,youcan’tstarteatinguntiltheeldersareseatedandpickuptheirchopsticks.Inshort,doingasthelocalsdoisagoodstrategynotonlytomakeyourselfathomebutalsotoavoidtrouble.Ihopethesecanbehelpfultoyou.Yours,LiHua【导语】本书面表达属于应用文写作。要求考生写封邮件告知即将来中国过春节的美国笔友一些中国的餐桌礼仪。【详解】1.词汇积累感谢：appreciation→gratitude困难的：difficult→tough此外：besides→what’smore总之：inshort→inbrief2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：NowletmeintroducesomeChinesetable