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第27讲友谊感悟篇
目录
知识点1五大万能句型2
知识点2高频金句3
友谊感悟类读后续写是高考英语高频主题,核心情节框架如下:
①友情危机:双方因观念差异、误会或冲突产生隔阂,例如朋友因学业压力疏远另一方。
②矛盾激化:通过具体事件(如考试作弊争议、秘密泄露)加剧矛盾,例如一方发现另一方欺骗行为。
③和解与成长:通过共同经历(如督助对方克服困难)修复关系,最终领悟包容与信任的重要性。
知识点1五大万能句型
万能句式1:初始矛盾,关系破裂
句式:Weusedtoargueabout,andslowly,wedriftedapart.
(替换""可为具体争执点,如grades,opinions,competition等)
例句:Weusedtoargueaboutgrades,andslowly,wedriftedapart.
(我们过去常为成绩争吵,渐渐地,我们疏远了。)
仿写句1:我们曾因对音乐的不同喜好而争执,最终不再交谈。
Weusedtoargueaboutmusictastes,andeventuallystoppedtalkingtoeachother.
仿写句2:他们因为一次小组任务的分工不均而产生矛盾,友谊出现了裂痕。
Theyarguedabout(heunfairdivisionofworkinagrouptask,andiheirfriendshipbegan(ocrack.
仿写句3:她无法忍受他总是迟到,两人之间的误会越来越深。
Shecouldn'tstandhisconstantlateness,andthemisunderstandingbetweenthemgrewdeeper.
万能句式2:被迫合作,初现改观
句式;Beingassignedtotogether,InoticedsomethingIhadneverseenbefore.
(替换""为具体任务,如aproject,ateam,aperformance等)
例句:Beingassignedtothescienceprojecttogether,InoticedsomethingIhadneverseenbefore.
(被分配到同一个科学项目后,我注意到了一些我以前从未注意到的东西。)
仿写句1:被安排一起准备演讲比赛,我才发现他其实非常细心。
Beingassignedtopreparethespeechcontesttogether,Irealizedhewasactuallyverythoughtful.
仿写句2:在共同排练戏剧的过程中,她发现他其实很有创意。
Whilerehearsingtheplaytogether,shediscoveredthathewasactuallyverycreative.
仿写句3:一起打扫教室时,他注意到她总是默默承担最累的活
Whilecleaningtheclassroomtogether,henoticedshealwaysquietlytookonthehardesttasks.
万能句式3:尝试沟通,理解彼此
句式:Igatheredthecouragetoask,andthat'swhenItrulyunderstoodhim.
(替换“””为具体问题,体现主动沟通)
例句:Igatheredthecouragetoaskwhyheseemedsocold,andthat'swhenItrulyunderstoodhim.
(我鼓起勇气问他为什么看起来那么冷漠,就在那时我真正理解了他。)
仿写句1:我终于问他为什么总是拒绝合作,才明白他只是害怕失败。
Ifinallyaskedhimwhyhealwaysrefusedtocooperate,onlytolearnhewasjustafraidoffailure.
仿写句2:她鼓起勇气问他的家庭情况,才意识到他压力有多大。
Shegatheredthecouragetoaskabouthisfamily,andrealizedhowmuchpressurehewasunder.
仿写句3:我主动问他是否对我有意见,结果发现是一场误会。
Ibravelyaskedifhehadsomethingagainstme,onlytofinditwasjustamisunderstanding.
万能句式4:误会再起,信任危机
句式:Arumoraboutspreadquickly,andsuddenly,everythingfellapartagain.
(替换“”为谣言内容,制造冲突高潮)
例句:Arumoraboutmecheatingonthetestspreadquickly,andsuddenly,everythingfellapartagain.
(关于我考试作弊的谣言迅速传播,突然之间,一切再次破裂。)
仿写句1:有人说她在背后说我的坏话,我们的关系瞬间崩塌。
Arumor(hatshehadspokenillofmebehindmybackspread,andourrelationshipbrokedowninstantly.
仿写句2:一条假消息说他举报了我们的秘密计划,大家开始疏远他。
Afalsemessageclaimedhehadreportedoursecretplan,andeveryonebegantoavoidhim.
仿写句3;有人误以为我故意不邀请他参加聚会,他整整一周没理我。
SomeonemistakenlythoughtIhadintentionallylefthimoutoftheparty,andheignoredmeforaweek.
万能句式5:坦诚和解,友谊升华
句式:Afterourheart-to-hearttalk,Irealizedtruefriendshipisn'tabout—it'sabout.
(强调成长与主题升华,替换后半部分体现核心价值)
例句:Afterourheart-to-hearttalk,Irealizedtniefriendshipisn'taboutwinning—it,saboutunderstanding.
(经过那次促膝长谈后,我意识到真正的友谊不在于输赢,而在于理解。)
仿写句1:那次深谈后,我明白真正的友谊不在于从不争吵,而在于愿意和解"
Afterourdeepconversation,Irealizedtruefriendshipisn'taboutneverarguing—it,saboutbeingwillingtomakeup.
仿写句2:我们和好后才懂得,真正的友情不在于完美无缺,而在于彼此包容。
Afterwemadepeace,weunderstoodthattruefriendshipisn'taboutbeingperfect—it'saboutacceptingeachother.
仿写句3:从那以后,我们学会了:友谊不是没有误会,而是愿意再次信任。
Fromthenon,welearned:friendshipisn'taboutavoidingmisunderstandings—it'saboutchoosingtotrustagain.
知识点2高频金句
场景一:初始矛盾与冲突
这个场景是故事的起点,主要描述两位朋友之间因为性格、竞争或误解而产生矛盾,关系出现裂痕。情感上可能包
含愤怒、失望和回避。
l.Theyoftenarguedoversmallthingsinclass,whichmadebothofthemupset.
他们经常在课堂上为小事争吵,这让两人都很不开心。
解析:argueoversmallthings表示“为小事争吵”,upset表示“心烦的”。
2.Shecouldn'tstandhisarrogantattitudeandalwaysavoidedworkingwithhim.
她无法忍受他傲慢的态度,总是避免和他一起工作。
解析:can,tstand表示“无法忍受",avoiddoingsth表示“避免做某事
3.Hethoughtshewasselfishandneverconsideredothers'feelings.
他认为她很自私,从不考虑别人的感受。
解析:considerone'sfeelings表示“考虑某人的感受
他无意中听到她反及练习演讲,意识到她的投入并不比他少。
解析:overhear表示“无意中听到",dedication表示“奉献、投入”。
场景三:尝试沟通与理解
在初步改观后,•方或双方鼓起勇气尝试沟通,可能是询问原因或分享自己的感受。通过交流,他们发现了共同的
兴趣或理解了对方行为背后的原因,隔阂逐渐消融。
11.Shegatheredhercourageandaskedhimwhyhealwaysseemedsoserious.
她鼓起勇气问他为什么总是看起来那么严肃。
解析:gatherone'scourage表示“鼓起勇气
12.Heexplainedthathewasundergreatpressurefromhisparents,whichmadeherfeelsympathetic.
他解释说他承受着来自父母的巨大压力,这让她感到同情。
解析:undergreatpressure表示“承受巨大压力”。
13.Theyfoundtheybothlovedthesamebandandstartedtalkingexcitedly.
他们发现他们都喜欢同一个乐队,并开始兴奋地交谈起来。
解析:excitedly表示“兴奋地”。
14.Heapologizedforhispastbehavior,sayinghewasjusttoostressedaboutgrades.
他为过去的行为道歉,说他只是太在意成绩了。
解析:apologizefor表示“为…道歉”。
15.Shesharedherownworries,andtheyfoundcommongroundintheirstruggles.
她分享了自己的烦恼,他们在各自的困境中找到了共同点。
解析:findcommonground表示“找到共司点
场景四:外部干扰或矛盾再起
当关系刚刚好转时,一个外部事件(如谣言、新的竞争或第三方挑拨)或一个未彻底解决的内部问题再次引发信任
危机,使友谊面临严峻考验。
16.Someonespreadarumorthathehadspokenbadlyaboutherbehindherback.
有人传言他在背后说了她的坏话。
解析:spreadarumor表示“散布谣言",behindone'sback表示“在背后
17.Shefeltbetrayedandrefusedtotalktohimfordays.
她感到被背叛,好几天拒绝和他说话。
解析:feelbetrayed表示“感到被背叛
18.11efelthelplessanddidn'tknowhowtoprovehisinnocence.
他感到无助,不知道如何证明自己的清白。
解析:proveone'sinnocence表示“证明某人的清白”。
19.Anewclasselectionputtheminopposingcamps,reignitingtheiroldrivalry.
一次新的班级选举使他们处于对立的阵营,重新点燃了他们的IH日竞争。
解析:reignite表示“重新点燃",rivalry表示“竞争、对抗”。
2O.Seeinghimlaughingwithotherfriends,shemistakenlythoughthewasmockingher.
看到他和别的朋友大笑,她误以为他在嘲笑自己。
解析:mistakenlythought表示“误以为",mock表示“嘲笑
场景五:坦诚沟通与和解
在经过痛苦的冷战或思考后,一方或双方意识到友谊的珍贵,选择勇敢地直面问题。他们通过真诚的对•话、道歉或
解释,彻底消除了误会,重建了信任。
21.Hewroteheraletter,sincerelyapologizingforthemisunderstanding.
他给她写了一封信,为误会真诚道歉。
解析:sincerelyapologize表示"真诚道歉
22.Shefinallydecidedtogivehimachancetoexplainfacetoface.
她最终决定给他一个面对面解释的机会。
解析:facetoface表示“面对面”。
23.Tearswelledupinhereyesassherealizedshehadmisjudgedhim.
当她意识到臼己错怪了他时,眼泪涌上了眼眶。
解析:tearswelledup表示"眼泪涌出”,misjudge表示'‘错怪
24.',Ivalueourfriendshipmorethanwinning,*'hesaid,hisvoicefilledwithemotion.
“比起嬴,我更珍惜我们的友谊。”他说道,声音充满了感情。
解析:value表示“珍惜”,比treasure更常用。
25.Theyhadalongheart-to-hearttalk,clearingupallthemisunderstandings.
他们进行了一次漫长的真心交谈,消除了所有误会。
解析:heart-to-hearttalk表示“真心交谈/促膝长谈",clearup表示“消除
场景六:友谊巩固与成长
风波过后,两人的友谊变得更加牢固和成熟。他们学会了理解、信任和包容,并在未来的日子里相互支持,共同成
长。这是故事的圆满结局和主题升华。
26.Fromthatdayon,theysupportedeachotherinbothstudiesandlife.
从那天起,他们在学习和生活中互相支持。
解析:supporteachother表示“互相支持
27.Shelearnedthattruefriendshiprequiresunderstandingandtrust.
她明白了真正的友谊需要理解和信任。
解析:require表示“需要”,比need更正式。
28.Theypromisedtoalwaysbehonestandstandbyeachother.
他们承诺永远诚实并彼此支持。
解析:standbyeacholher表示“彼此支持
29.Theirfriendship,testedbydifficulties,becamestrongerandmoreprecious.
他们的友谊历经困难考验,变得更加牢固和珍贵。
解析:testedbydifficulUes是过去分词短语作后置定语,表示“被困难考验过的二
3O.Hebecamemoreopen-minded,andshebecamemoretolerant,bothgrowingintobetterindividuals.
他变得更开朗,她变得更宽容,两人都成长为更好的自己。
解析:open-minded表示“开朗的、思想开放的",tolerant表示“宽容的
高考真题演练
2022年1月浙江卷(傲娇学霸与迷糊学渣)
WhenDr.Hendersonwasassigning(J旨定)projectmatesforhispsychologyclass,Isecretlyhopedthathewouldpairmewith
mybestfriendoratleastaclassmateIcouldhavesomefunwith.Aboveall,Ihopedhewouldiftassignmetoworkwiththe
fiercelycompetitiveandextremelyseriousfellowwhoalwaysworedarkclothesandapparentlyhadapersonalitytomatch.As
fate(命运)wouldhaveit,Dr.HendersonverydeliberatelymatchedeveryoneinclassandannouncedthatIwouldbeworking
withtheonepersoninclassIwantedtoavoid.
Iwentuptomynewteammateandintroducedmyself.HelookedatmeasthoughIweren'tthere.Ifelthetreatedmeas
though1wouldholdhimbackandprobablymakehimfailtogetanAinthecourse.Hewasn'tmeanorabusive;hejustgaveme
theimpressionthathecoulddowhateverprojectwedreamedupbetterifhediditalone.
Needlesstosay,Ididn'tlookforwardtoanentiretermofbeingbrushedofGbutItriedtomakethebestofitanddidn'tsay
anythingforfearthatIwouldmakethingsworse.
Theprojectrequiredeachteamtodevelopahypothesis(假说),setupanexperimenttotestthehypothesis,dothestatistical
analysisandpresentthefindings.Whatevergradetheteamreceivedwouldbesharedbybothstudents.
WhenmyteammateandImettodiscussourproject,1wasuneasy.Herewasthischallengingstudentwhohadareputation
forsingle-mindednessandgoodgrades—theexactoppositeofme.Iactuallywantedtodroptheclassatonepoint,butstopped
shortbecauseIdidn'twanttogivehimthesatisfactionofmychickeningout.Idecidedtosticktoitnomatterwhat.
Afterlongdiscussionswesomehowagreedtodoastudyonthepsychologicalwell-beingofteenagers.Iwasn'tsurewhatit
meantexactly,butatleastwchadatopic.
注意:
1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右;
2.至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语;
3.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;
4.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
Paragraph1:Westartedtomeetregularlytodrawupourplans.
Paragraph2:Oneday/gotwordthathewasadmittedtohospitalforaseriousdisease.
参考范文1
Westartedtomeetregularlytodrawupourplans.Atfirst,itseemedthathedominatedourdiscussionforhewasfamiliar
withthetopic,butIwastheopposite(与原文衔接自然).However,asdayspassed,Igraduallygotinvolvedbecausehestartedto
encouragemetoexplainmyviews!Icouldfeelhisicyshellgraduallymeltingaway(背诵的但是用的很自然)andeventuallyI
coulddiscusswithhimlookingstraightinhiseyes.Wefinishedthehypothesisandexperimentprocedure,ingreatharmony
actually.Thingscameoutthathewasserious,indeed,butheseemedicybecausehewaslonely.Wcpartedthedaybeforeanalysis
discussionwithconfidencefbrourproject.ButwhenIreturnedthenextmorning,hewasnowheretobefound.Thefactstruckme
feelingdesperate.Hedidn'tcomeeitherinthefollowingdays.
Oneday/gotwordthathewasadmittedtohospitalforaseriousdisease.ItwasthedaybeforedeadlineandIdrownedmyself
doinganalysisandpreparingforthepresentation.Hearingtheword,Idashedtothehospitalandfoundhim,mydearteammate,
lyingonthebed,facepale.Hiseyessparkledashesawme.BesidehimImanagedtofinishthelasttaskswithhisguidance—his
fingerspointingatcertainfigures.ThennextdayIwentforthepresentationinclass.
参考范文2
Westartedtomeetregularlytodrawupourplans.Seriousasmyteammatewas,wegraduallygrewingoodtunewitheach
other.Hehadawaywithtechnicalthingsandapproachedeverydetailwithaclearpurpose.AndIsparednoefforttodomybit,
collectingdataandrecordingresultscarefully,soastomakeupformyacademicdisadvantage.Ifullydiscussedmyideasand
sharedmyinsightswithhim,whowasonceindifferentbutlaterlistenedtomewithcloseattention.Weweremakingsteady
progresswithourproject.
OnedayIgotwordthathewasadmittedtohospitalforaseriousdisease.ThemomentIsawhimlyinghelplesslyinbed,I
decidedIhadtoactaloneanddomybest.IassuredhimIwouldnotlethimdownandheshouldconcentrateonrecovering.I
pouredmoretimeandenergyintothatprojectthaneverbefore,andfinallypresentedourfindingsto(heclass,whichsurprisingly
earnedus2nexcellentgrade!WhenItoldhimaboutoursharedsuccess,hesmiled.Ithadtodowithtrustandthejoyofsharinga
commonprize.
模拟演练
1.阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
lbme,theworld'sgreatestsatisfactionisreachingdownandliftingsomeoneup.Ibelieveinhelpingothersintimesof
need.Ifweallhelpothers,wecanmakeagreatimpactinsociety.Byjoininghands,wecanreunitetheworld.
Youneverknowhowbiganimpactyouaremakinginsomeone'slife.At1am,onSaturday,August25,2017,Hurricane
HarveymadelandfallinHouston,Texas.Beforethis,myfamilywaspreparingfbrflooding,packingfood,firstaidkits,and
planningfortheworst.Whiletakingourcatsandrabbitsupstairs,myfriendTomcalledandexplainedtheirdilemma(窘境).
Theirareawasissuedamandatoryevacuation(强制疏散)andtheyhadtoleave.
Withnoplacetostay,theywereonthewaytoourhouse.Allsevenofthem,5kids,includinganewborncamein.
Togetherwepreparedtheirroomsandletthemsettlein.
Afterdinner,weturnedonthenewsandsawHarveycoiningin.Thatnightnoneofuscouldsleep,listeningtothewind
blowingandrainthunderingdown.Thefouryear-oldtoldme,carryingthecat,“Saira,thekittyisscared.Canyoumakethe
rainstop,please?”Withaforcedsmie,Ihelpedhertobedandletthecatsleepwithher.Whenwesteppedoutthenext
morning,wesawthenearbylakecompletelyfullofwater,whichwasanamazingyetscarysight.TomwentaIttlcfurther
downandcamebackwetandexplainedthattherewasnowaytheycouldreturnhome.Theyendedupstayingthatdayand
plannedonleavingthenextmorning.
Thenextmorning,thenewsreportedhowjammed(堵塞的)andfloodedtheroadswereinhiscommunity.With(ears
andworriedfaces,theystayedforaweek.Evenmycatseemedtounderstandtheterriblesituation.Finally,whentheroads
werecleared,weallwenttosendthemback.Ontheway,Isawthedamagethatthehurricanedid.
注意:1.续写词数应为150左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Afterreachingtheirhouse,Irealizedtheycouldn'tliveinit,
Inthenextweek,wehelpedthemtofixthehouseup.
【参考范文】
Afterreachingtheirhouse,Irealizedtheycouldn'tliveinit.Icouldseehowhighthewaterhadcome.Theircarpets,
sofasandchairswereallruined.Thehousesmelledlikerottenfood.Theyalsorealizedthattheycouldnotstayintheterrible
condilions.It'smostlikelythattheywereembarrassedtostayinmyhouseagain.Theypackedaweek'sworthofclothes,and
preparedtostayinacheaphotelforafewdays.Wcallinsistedthattheystayinourhouseforanotherweek.
bithenextweek,wehelpedthemtofixthehouseup.Ourfamilyalsotriedourbesttohelpthemtocleanuptheirhouse.
Theythrewawaytheunusablefurnitureandthecarpet.Itriedtoexplaintothemhoweverythingwouldbefine,butIhad
neverseensuchworriedfaces.Theyfinallyreturnedhome.Overthenext2months,theyandIrepairedtheirhouseandit
lookedbetterthanbefore.IwassogladIhelpedthem.
【写作指导】本文以人物为线索展开,讲述了在飓风Harvey的侵袭下,作者的朋友Tom向其寻求帮助,希望能
够在作者家中借助一晚。经历了一夜的强烈的飓风之后,洪水淹没了社区的街道,朋友的家中也是一片狼藉,最后
在作者一家的帮助下恢复了原貌。通过此事让作者懂得的是:在别人需要帮助的时候去帮助别人。如果每个人都互
相帮助,携起手来可以让世界重新团结起来。
1.段落续写:
①由第一段首句内容“在到达朋友的房子之后,我意识到他们无法住进去。”可知,第一段可描写的是飓风之后
屋内的一片狼藉,并口至少要一段时间房屋才能修理完毕,所以朋友还需要再次打包行李住进作者的家。
②由第二段首句内容“在接下来的星期,我们帮助他们修理房屋。”可知,第二段可描写作者一家人帮助朋友修
理房屋,同时要安慰朋友,让他们明白:面对灾难,如果每个人都互相帮助,携起手来,一切都会好的0
2.续写线索:飓风来临——朋友求助——答应请求——送朋友回家——看到房屋惨状——选择继续帮助——修
理房屋——感悟
3.词汇激活
行为类
①.打扫房间:cleanup/sweepaway/tidytheroom
②.扔垃圾:throwawaytherubbish/getridoftherubbish
③.回家:gobackhome/rcturnhome
情绪类
①.尴尬:feelembarrassed/feelagreatsenseofawkwardness
②.感谢:showinghisapprcciation/showhisgratitude/bcgrateful
【典型句式】
[句式1].Weallinsistedthattheystayinourhouseforanotherweek.(由insist引导的虚拟语气)
[句式2].Itriedtoexplaintothemhoweverythingwouldbefine,butIhadneverseensuchworriedfaces.(由how弓舟
的宾语从句)
2.阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成•篇完整的短文。
Ilovedschool,andIreallydid.ButsinceMaycamein,ithadbecomeanunconifoitableplace.Maywasthetallestkid
inourfifthgradeclass.However,herheightwasn'taproblem-herattitudewas.Nopartofthestudentpopulationwasbeyond
thereachofMay'sthreats.
ManystudentsthoughtthatMaywasallbarkandnobite.ButIwasn'tsosure.Ihadmanagedtokeepawayfromher.
ButallthatchangedwhenIshowedupforschoolonemorningwithanewhairstyle.Apparently,bywearingmyhairina
Frenchbraid(辫),Ihadmanagedtochangemyfate.
Itallstartedwhenmybestfriend,Jaime,saidmyhairlookednice.InoticedMay'scoldglareanditmademe
uncomfortable-hutIremainedfocusedonmymathworksheet.ThencameMay'sfrighteningwordsasshepassedmeinthe
cafeteria:"Nicebraid.Somebodymightcutitoff.”
Iwasscared,especiallywhenMaymovedherfingerslikeapairofscissors.Mystomachdroppedtomyknees,andI
immediatelycameupwithaplan,whichincludedhidingoutinthebathroomattheendoftheschooldaysoastoavoid
runningintoMayonthewalkhome.
1toldthecrisis(危机)tomymotherthenextmorning.Shesaidtome,“Shetriestomakeothersscared,that'sall.Don't
beafraidofher.Ifshecanseethatyou'renotafraid,shewillstop.I'llbetshe'slikeeverybodyelse-shejustwantstofitin
andmakefriends.Perhapsshejustdoesn'tknowhow.^^
Ithoughtovermymother'swords.Theywerereasonable.Maywasn'tsogreatatmakingfriends.Maybe-just
maybe-underallthattoughnesswasaregularfifthgraderwhosimplywantedtobeliked.DidIhavewhatitwouldtaketo
befriendMay?Iwasn'tsure,butIwantedtofindout.
注意:
1.续写词数应为150左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Afterlunch,IinvitedMay(ocometomyhouseafterschool.
MayandIbecameprettygoodfriends.
【参考范文】
Afterlunch,IinvitedMaytocometomyhouseafterschool.IaskedhertowalkhomeandwatchTVtogether.Iwas
verynervousthoughIthoughtunderthewatchfuleyeofmyparents,littlecouldgowrong.Still,IwasproudthatIhadgiven
theinvitation.Then,somethingunbelievablehappened.Maysmiled.Andthenshesaidyes.Idon'trememberwhatwe
watchedontelevision,orwhatmymotherpreparedforourafter-schoolsnack.ButIdoknowthatIwentfromregrettingthe
dayIworeaFrenchbraidtoschooltorealizingthatithadbecomethestarterforanewfriendship.
MayandIbecameprettygoodfriends.Afterspendingcountlessafternoonsatinyhouse,Iquicklyrealizedthat,yes,
underthetallgirPsstrongappearancewasasoftfifthgraderwhowantednothingmorethantobeaccepted.Tvesincelearned
thattheoldsaying“youcan'tjudgeabookbyitscover“iscertainlytrue,andthatsomeonewholooksdiflerentonthe
outsidecanreallybejustlikeyou.
【写作指导】本文以人物为线索展开,讲述了作者喜欢学校,但是在May充满威胁的态度〈开始觉得学校是让
人不舒服的地方,一天,作者梳了麻花辫,May威胁说要把她辫子剪下来,作者感到害怕,于是告诉了母亲,母亲
叫作者不要害怕她,她只是想被人喜欢,作者因此想知道自己能否和May交朋友。
1.段落续写:
①由第一段首句内容“午饭后,我邀请梅放学后到我家来。”可知,第一段可描写May接受作者的邀请,并开始
和作者交朋友。
②由第二段首句内容“May和我成了很好的朋友。”可知,第二段可描写作者对May的新的看法和感悟。
2.续写线索:询问——同意——开始友谊——新的看法——感悟
3.词汇激活
行为类
①叫人做某事:asksb.todo/tellsb.todo
②同意:sayyes/agree
③意识到:realize(hat/bcaware(hat
情绪类
①紧张:bencrvous/bctense
②骄傲:beproudihai/takepridein
【典型句式】
[句式i]Afterspendingcountlessafternoonsatmyhouse,Iquicklyrealizedthat,yes,underthetallgirl'sstrong
appearancewasasoftfifthgraderwhowantednothingmore(han(obeaccepted.(由that引导的宾语从句和who弓|导的定
语从句)
[句式2]I'vesincelearnedthattheoldsaying“youcan'tjudgeabookbyitscover”iscertainlytrue,andthatsomeone
wholooksdifferentontheoutsidecanreallybejustlikeyou.(Etjthat引导的宾语从句和who引导的定语从句)
3.阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Overtheyears,I'vebeenguiltyofhurriedlyshuttingthefrontcoortomanystrangerswhentheycametomyhome
knockingwiththeintentionofsellingthings.Ihateditwhentheytriedtheirbesttopersuademetobuythethingsthey
promoted.Butearlierthisyear,aroundEastertime,adearfriendofmine,Linda,hadanexperiencethatchangedmymind
andattitudetowardsthesetowardsthese“intruders”.
Lastwinter,Lindawentthroughaverymessydivorceandwasverydepressed.SoshequitherjobandleftLosAngeles,
wheresheencounteredherex-husbandincollege.ShellewtoBostonontheeastcoastofUS.Later,shesettledinanew
neighborhoodinEastBoston.However,shortlyafterwards,thecompanywheresheworkedwentbankrupt(破产).Suffering
aseriesofbitterblows,shefellill,aseverecaseofflu.Shehadtostayathomeforthewholeweek,feelingextremelybad
andhopeless.
Earlyonemorning,therewastheterribleknockonherfrontdoor.Peeringoutthewindow,shesawayounglady
holdingleafletsandaTVsetmodel.SheknewofalargeTVsetestablishmentnearbyandassumedamessagewasaboutto
begentlydelivered.4iThisisthelastthingIneedtoday,Mshemutteredtoherselfandhesitantlyopenedthedoor.
Coughing,shepokedherheadcutandimpatientlyinformedthemshewasn'ttheslightestbitinterestedinanyTV
whatsoever.Furthermore,sheadded,shewasfeelingquiteunwellandabruptlyshutthedoor.Theladiespolitelyturnedand
leftinsilence.
Paragraph1:
Afewhourslater,anotherknock.
Paragraph2:
Lindawassurprisedbythislovelyaction.
【参考范文】
Afewhourslater,anotherknock.Shewalkedimpatientlytothedoor,openeditandlookedout.Shewasannoyedand
angrywiththesamepeoplewhoweretryingtosellheraTVset.Beforetheycouldspeak,shemadeitclearonceagainthat
shedidn'twantwhattheywereselling.Buttohersurprise,insteadoftheleafletstheyhadbeenselling,theyheldseveral
boxesofmedicineandhandedthemtoLinda.
Lindawassurprisedbythislovelyaction.Justthen,theyoungladysmiledandtoldherthatshehadjustseenLinda's
coughandthoughtsheneededsomemedicineurgently,soshewentbackandboughtsomefbrher.Lindareceived(he
medicinewithembarrassment.Shethenexpressedhersincerethanksandapologizedforherpreviousactions.Sincethen,my
attitudetowardthosewhosellproductshaschangedalot.
【写作指导】本文以人物为线索展开,讲述了作者对多年来,当许多陌生人来到作者家想要推销东西时,作者
总是匆忙地关上前门。作者讨厌他们尽力说服自己买他们推销的东西。但今年早些时候,大约在复活节的时候,作
者的•个好朋友琳达的一次经历改变了其对这些“入侵者”的看法和态度。
1.段落续写:
①由第一段首句内容“几个小时后,又有人敲门。”可知,第一段可描写琳达再一次打开门看到之前推销产品人
员后,发生的令她惊讶的事。
②由第二段首句内容“琳达被这个可爱的举动感到惊讶。”可知,第二段可描写琳达被这个可爱的举动打动之后,
内心的心理变化。
2.续写线索:再次开门——不耐烦的表现——看到药物——接收药物——表达感谢——作者的感悟
3.词汇激活
行为类
①递送:handsthto/deliversth(o
②.被...感到吃惊:besurprisedby/beamazedby
③•返回:goback/comeback
情绪类
①.感谢:expresshersincerethanks/showherappreciation/showhergratitude
②.生气的:annoyed/upset/mad
【典型句式】
[句式1].Shewasannoyedandangrywiththesamepeoplewhov/eretryingtosellheraTVsei.(运用了关系代词who
引导的定语从句)
[句式2].Beforetheycouldspeak,shemadeitclearonceagainthatshedidn'twantwhattheywereselling.(运用了it作
形式宾语,山at引导从句作真正的宾语)
4.阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
KeepinginTouch
Thereisonethingbetterthanmakinganewfriendandthatiskeepinganoldone.
一ElmerG.Lelerman
Twoyearsagomyfamilymoved.Thedaythatweleft,mybestfriendandIcriedtogetherinmyemptybedroomfbr
hours.Nowordscoulddescribehowsadandhomesick1wasduringtlicfive—hourcarridetomynewhousc.Lifcwasso
unbearablethatitseemedtobetheendoftheworld.Whenwefinallyreachedournewhouse,Irushedtothephonetotellmy
bestfriendmyaddressandphonenumber.Wetalkedforalittlewhile,butIhadtohangupbecausethelong-distancecall
wasexpensive.
Onthefirstdayofschool,Icalledhertotellherhowitwent.Then,onHalloweenIsentheraletterwithapictureofmy
newfriendsandmeenclosed.Dayslater,shewrotemealetter.Itwasn'tevenaletter-justabunchofpiecesofpapersaying,
“Bestfriendsfbrever.”
WhenIfinallygotherc-mailaddress,Ic—mailedherthelongestletterIhadeverwritten.Ineverreceivedanc-mail
back,andbythe(hirde-mailletterwithnoresponse,mymessagesgrewshorterandshorter.Witheachpassingday,Igot
angrierandangrier.Atlast.Ineverreceivedareplyfromhe匚
MomsaidthatIcouldcallmyotherfriends,andthatIdidn'tneedtoalwayscallher.Giveuponmybestfriend?Giveup
onthepersonIhadknownallmylife?ThepersonIhadgonefromdiaperstoBarbiestonailpolishwith,andwhohadbeen
inthesameclasswithmefromthefirstthroughthefifthgrade?Myfirstanswerwasautomatically“Noway!”Butafterfive
moree—mailmessages,threephonecallsandtwomoreletters,Istartedtoconsiderwhatmymomhadsaid.Everynight
aboutaweek,Istayedupinbedthinking,^ShouldIgiveup?ShouldIkeeptrying?”
注意:续写词数应为150左右。
ThewayIlookedatit,asmybestfriend,shewouldshareanythingwithme.
Withtwoyearsofdisappointmentanddepression,Ieventuallygotaphonecallfromher.
【参考范文】
Paragraph1:
Theway/lookedatit,asmybestfriend,shewouldshareanything<viihme.Simplethingswoulddelightrneifshetakesa
minutetowriteafewwordsonapieceofpaperortextmeashortmessageintheemail,ortype“hello“onthephone.Tome,
keepingintouchisabsolutelyanimportantpariofmaintainingfriendship.Toher,however,shedidn'tcare,anditdidn't
seem:obother.
Paragraph2:
Withtwoyearsofdisappointmentanddepression,/eventuallygotaphonecallfromher.Ithappenedsounexpectedlyto
methatIevenfeltontop
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