专题01紧急救援-高中英语读后续写微情境片段写作

写作指导专题01紧急救援写作指导识识1.动作描写（短促有力，多用连动/分词结构）•核心句型：towards...gup/leaptforward,grabbedsth.anddashedtowards...doing...h.clutchedinhand,Sb.dashedover,kneltdownandsetaboutdoing......cingagainsttime,Sb.pulled...withallone’sstrength.•仿写：Lily___________,_________thefirstaidkitand________________theboylyingmotionlessonthesidewalk.Witharope__________________,Tom_____________,_____________and_________tyingtheropearoundhiswaist.③Racingagainsttime,thefirefighter_______openthetwistedcardoor______________________.答案：①Lilysprangup,grabbedthefirstaidkitanddashedtowardstheboylyingmotionlessonthesidewalk.②Witharopeclutchedinhand,Tomdashedover,kneltdownandsetabouttyingtheropearoundhiswaist.③Racingagainsttime,thefirefighterpulledopenthetwistedcardoorwithallhisstrength.•翻译：towards...rangup/leaptforward,grabbedsth.anddashedtowards...（某人猛地站起/冲上前，抓起某物，朝……冲去）1.中文翻译：听到孩子的尖叫声，玛丽猛地站起身，抓起外套，朝公园冲去。英文：____________________________________________________________________________2.中文翻译：警报响起时，保安冲上前，抓起衣服，朝紧急出口跑去。英文：____________________________________________________________________________3.中文翻译：看到着火的房子，汤姆猛地站起来，抓起灭火器，朝大楼冲去。英文：____________________________________________________________________________doing...sth.clutchedinhand,Sb.dashedover,kneltdownandsetaboutdoing...（手里紧攥着某物，某人冲过去，跪倒在地，开始做……）4.中文翻译：露西手里紧攥着急救包，冲过去跪倒在地，开始为徒步旅行者处理伤口。英文：____________________________________________________________________________5.中文翻译：杰克手里紧攥着绳子，冲过去跪倒在地，开始把它系在树干上。英文：____________________________________________________________________________6.中文翻译：苏珊手里紧攥着毯子，冲过去跪倒在地，开始给孩子盖上。英文：____________________________________________________________________________...Racingagainsttime,Sb.pulled...withallone’sstrength.（争分夺秒，某人用尽全身力气拉……）7.中文翻译：争分夺秒，救援人员用尽全身力气把被困矿工从洞穴里拉了出来。英文：____________________________________________________________________________8.中文翻译：争分夺秒，莉莉用尽全身力气把溺水的小狗从冰冷的河里拉了上来。英文：____________________________________________________________________________9.中文翻译：争分夺秒，消防员们用尽全身力气把受伤的司机从变形的汽车里拉了出来。英文：____________________________________________________________________________答案：1.Hearingthechild’sscream,Marysprangup,grabbedhercoatanddashedtowardsthepark.2.Whenthealarmrang,thesecurityguardleaptforward,grabbedhisclothesanddashedtowardstheemergencyexit.3.Spottingtheburninghouse,Tomsprangup,grabbedafireextinguisheranddashedtowardsthebuilding.4.Withafirstaidkitclutchedinhand,Lucydashedover,kneltdownandsetaboutdealingwiththehiker’swound.5.Withtheropeclutchedinhand,Jackdashedover,kneltdownandsetabouttyingittothetreetrunk.6.Withablanketclutchedinhand,Susandashedover,kneltdownandsetaboutcoveringthechild.7.Racingagainsttime,therescuerspulledthetrappedmineroutofthecavewithalltheirstrength.8.Racingagainsttime,Lilypulledthedrowningdogoutoftheicyriverwithallherstrength.9.Racingagainsttime,thefirefighterspulledtheinjureddriveroutofthetwistedcarwithalltheirstrength.2.心理描写（聚焦紧张、担忧、坚定，用介词短语/从句补充）•核心句型：as...’seyeswidenedwithhorror/alarmas...②Sb.foughtbacktheurgetopanic,focusingallattentionon...③AsurgeofreliefwashedoverSb.when...•仿写：①Maria’seyes____________________asthechildslippedoffthebalcony.②Jack__________________________,________________________stoppingthebleedingwithcleanbandages.③_______________________________therescuerswhentheyheardthetrappedgirl’sweakcryforhelp.答案：①Maria’seyeswidenedwithhorrorasthechildslippedoffthebalcony.②Jackfoughtbacktheurgetopanic,focusingallattentiononstoppingthebleedingwithcleanbandages.③Asurgeofreliefwashedovertherescuerswhentheyheardthetrappedgirl’sweakcryforhelp.•翻译：句型①Sb.’seyeswidenedwithhorror/alarmas...：当看到……，某人惊恐/惊慌地睁大双眼。1.中文翻译：当看到他脚下的地面开始塌陷，徒步旅行者惊恐地睁大双眼。英文：____________________________________________________________________________2.中文翻译：当看到一个孩子在水中剧烈挣扎，救生员惊慌地睁大双眼。英文：____________________________________________________________________________3.中文翻译：当看到火焰突然冲破了紧闭的房门，消防员惊恐地睁大双眼。英文：____________________________________________________________________________句型②Sb.foughtbacktheurgetopanic,focusingallattentionon...：某人克制住恐慌的冲动，将全部注意力集中在……上4.中文翻译：医生克制住恐慌的冲动，将全部注意力集中在止住伤者的严重出血上。英文：____________________________________________________________________________5.中文翻译：救援人员克制住恐慌的冲动，将全部注意力集中在引导迷路的登山者安全走下湿滑的悬崖上。英文：____________________________________________________________________________6.中文翻译：志愿者克制住恐慌的冲动，将全部注意力集中在对失去意识的伤者实施心肺复苏术上。英文：____________________________________________________________________________句型③AsurgeofreliefwashedoverSb.when...：当……时，某人心中涌起一阵释然。7.中文翻译：当救援人员最终将被困矿工救出时，心中涌起一阵释然。英文：____________________________________________________________________________8.中文翻译：当救护车及时赶到救治她的婴儿时，这位母亲心中涌起一阵释然。英文：____________________________________________________________________________9.中文翻译：当女孩被安全抬上直升机时，他心中涌起一阵释然。英文：____________________________________________________________________________答案：1.Thehiker’seyeswidenedwithhorrorasthegroundbeneathhimbegantocollapse.2.Thelifeguard’seyeswidenedwithalarmasshespottedachildstrugglingviolentlyinthewater.3.Thefirefighter’seyeswidenedwithhorrorasflamessuddenlyburstthroughthecloseddoor.4.Thedoctorfoughtbacktheurgetopanic,focusingallattentiononstoppingthevictim’sseverebleeding.5.Therescuerfoughtbacktheurgetopanic,focusingallattentiononguidingthelostclimberdowntheslipperycliffsafely.6.Thevolunteerfoughtbacktheurgetopanic,focusingallattentiononperformingCPRontheunconsciousvictim.7.Asurgeofreliefwashedovertherescuerswhentheyfinallyrescuedthetrappedminer.8.Asurgeofreliefwashedoverthemotherwhentheambulancearrivedjustintimetotreatherbaby.9.Asurgeofreliefwashedoverthehimwhenthegirlwasliftedontothehelicoptersafely.1.火中救人莉莉猛地站起身，抓起灭火器冲向着火的卧室。她紧握着灭火器，快步冲过去跪下，开始扑灭床边的火焰。争分夺秒间，她用尽全力拖拽着失去意识的男孩。看到天花板开始开裂，她惊恐地瞪大了眼睛，但强压下恐慌的冲动，全神贯注地将他拖向安全地带。当两人最终逃出燃烧的建筑物时，一阵如释重负的感觉涌上她的心头。答案：Lilysprangup,grabbedthefireextinguisheranddashedtowardstheburningbedroom.Withtheextinguisherclutchedinhand,shedashedover,kneltdownandsetaboutputtingouttheflamesnearthebed.Racingagainsttime,shepulledtheunconsciousboywithallherstrength.Hereyeswidenedwithhorrorastheceilingstartedtocrack,butshefoughtbacktheurgetopanic,focusingallattentionondragginghimtosafety.Asurgeofreliefwashedoverherwhentheyfinallyescapedtheburningbuilding.2.水中救人马克猛地站起身，抓起绳子冲向河流。他紧握着绳子，快步冲过去跪下，开始把绳子系在一棵树上。争分夺秒间，河水裹挟着两人向下游冲去，他用尽全力拖拽着溺水的少年。看到男孩的挣扎越来越微弱，马克惊恐地瞪大了眼睛，但他强压下恐慌的冲动，全神贯注地将他拉向岸边。当男孩在地面上喘过气来时，一阵如释重负的感觉涌上马克的心头。答案：Marksprangup,grabbedtheropeanddashedtowardstheriver.Withtheropeclutchedinhand,hedashedover,kneltdownandsetabouttyingittoatree.Racingagainsttime,hepulledthedrowningteenagerwithallhisstrengthasthecurrentdraggedthemdownstream.Hiseyeswidenedwithalarmastheboy’sstrugglesgrewweaker,buthefoughtbacktheurgetopanic,focusingallattentiononpullinghimtothebank.AsurgeofreliefwashedoverMarkwhentheboygaspedforairontheground.3.车祸救人马克猛地站起身，从车里抓起急救包，冲向车辆。他紧握着急救包，快步冲过去跪下，开始检查受伤的司机。争分夺秒间，他用尽全力拖拽着被困的女子，引擎处已冒出缕缕青烟。看到一丝火苗闪烁，他惊恐地瞪大了眼睛，但强压下恐慌的冲动，全神贯注地解开她的安全带。当他成功将司机拖到路边时，一阵如释重负的感觉涌上他的心头。答案：Marksprangup,grabbedthefirstaidkitfromhiscaranddashedtowardsthevehicle.Withthekitclutchedinhand,hedashedover,kneltdownandsetaboutcheckingtheinjureddriver.Racingagainsttime,hepulledthetrappedwomanwithallhisstrengthassmokeemergedfromtheengine.Hiseyeswidenedwithalarmasasmallflameflickered,buthefoughtbacktheurgetopanic,focusingallattentiononfreeingherseatbelt.Asurgeofreliefwashedoverhimwhenhesucceededindraggingthedrivertotheroadside.4.地震救人当地面剧烈摇晃时，马克猛地站起身，抓起手电筒冲向着倒塌的教室。他紧握着电筒，快步冲过去跪下，开始清理破碎的桌椅。争分夺秒间，他用尽全力拖拽着瑟瑟发抖的学生。又一次余震袭来，他惊恐地瞪大了眼睛，但强压下恐慌的冲动，全神贯注地将她拖向安全的区域。当两人安然无恙时，一阵如释重负的感觉涌上他的心头。答案：Whenthegroundshookviolently,Marksprangup,grabbedtheflashlightanddashedtowardsthecollapsedclassroom.Withthelightclutchedinhand,hedashedover,kneltdownandsetaboutclearingthebrokendesks.Racingagainsttime,hepulledthetremblingstudentwithallhisstrength.Hiseyeswidenedwithalarmasanotheraftershockhit,buthefoughtbacktheurgetopanic,focusingallattentionondragginghertothesafearea.Asurgeofreliefwashedoverhimwhentheyweresafe.5.突发疾病艾丽斯猛地站起身，抓起急救包冲向老人。她紧握着急救包，快步跑过去跪下，开始实施心肺复苏术。争分夺秒间，她用尽全力按压老人的胸膛。看到老人短暂停止呼吸，她惊恐地瞪大了眼睛，但强压下恐慌的冲动，全神贯注地投入救援。当老人咳嗽一声并恢复意识时，一阵如释重负的感觉涌上她的心头。答案：Alicesprangup,grabbedthefirstaidbaganddashedtowardstheelderlyman.Withthebagclutchedinhand,shedashedover,kneltdownandsetaboutperformingCPR.Racingagainsttime,shepressedhischestwithallherstrength.Hereyeswidenedwithalarmashestoppedbreathingbriefly,butshefoughtbacktheurgetopanic,focusingallattentionontherescue.Asurgeofreliefwashedoverherwhenthemancoughedandregainedconsciousness.6.迷路救援卢卡斯猛地站起身，抓起手电筒冲进森林。他紧握着电筒，快步跑过去跪下，开始呼喊那个迷路女孩的名字。争分夺秒间，他用尽全力拨开灌木丛。随着夜色渐浓，他惊恐地瞪大了眼睛，但强压下恐慌的冲动，全神贯注地跟着脚印前行。当他发现那个瑟瑟发抖的孩子在树后时，一阵如释重负的感觉涌上心头。答案：Lucassprangup,grabbedtheflashlightanddashedtowardstheforest.Withthelightclutchedinhand,hedashedover,kneltdownandsetaboutcallingthelostgirl’sname.Racingagainsttime,hepulledasidebusheswithallhisstrength.Hiseyeswidenedwithalarmasdarknessclosedin,buthefoughtbacktheurgetopanic,focusingallattentiononfollowingthefootprints.Asurgeofreliefwashedoverhimwhenhespottedtheshiveringchildbehindatree.7.虎口脱险杰克猛地站起身，抓起棍子冲向小径。他紧握着棍子，快步冲过去跪下，开始用棍子抵住熊的爪子。争分夺秒间，他用尽全力拖拽被困的朋友。看到熊愤怒地咆哮，他惊恐地瞪大了眼睛，但强压下恐慌的冲动，全神贯注地将朋友拖向安全地带。当两人最终逃掉时，一阵如释重负的感觉涌上他的心头。答案：Jakesp