高三英语读后续写专项复习Cristian倒地与办公室谈话的故事导学案

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。Inhighschool,IwasastraightAstudent,amemberofmanyschoolclubs,andareceiverofmanyrewards.However,Ihadbeensubjectedtopeerpressure.Wantingtobe“Cool”,Istartedgoingtopartiesanddrinking,drunkbeyondrecognition.Mylifetookaturnfortheworse.However,theexperienceinonesummerprogramtaughtmealesson:neverdosomethingyoubelieveiswrongjusttogaintheapprovalofothers.InJune,Iworkedparttimeatarestaurant.ThedaybeforeIleftfortheprogram,onecoworkerofferedmehisdriver’slicense,tellingmetohavefuninQuebecsincewetwoalmostlookedthesame.I’dseenfriendswalkintoliquor(酒)storeswithfakelicensesandeoutcarryingatwelvepackofbeer,smilingproudly.SoItookthelicense,butIpromisedmyselfthatIwouldn’tuseit.However,Ieasilygotcarriedaway.Onthefirstnightoftheprogram,whilewalkingaround,mynewfriendsandIcameacrossaliquorstore.Kaiaskedifanyonehadafakelicense.Aftereveryoneshookhishead,Iclearedmythroatanddeclared,“Ido.”Witheveryone’sadmirationandKai’stwentydollarsandinstruction,Iboldlyagreedtotakeonthetaskwithoutthinking.Imanagedtobuyacaseofbeer.Theboyscheeredandgavemepatsontheback.“You’retheman,”someonesaidtome.Thepraiseboostedmyselfconfidence.Thelastnighttherewasaparty.Afewofmyfriendsinsistedthatwedrinkbeforethedance.Theyaskedme,the“IDman,”tobuyalcohol.Toearntheiradmiration,Itookthecashandboughtwhattheywanted.Laterthatnight,IwasenjoyingmyselfwhenKaisaidnervously,“Cristianisn’tokay.”Worriedformyfriend,Iwenttoassessthesituation.Clearly,Cristianwasoverlydrunkandalmostunconscious.注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Paragraph1:Suddenly,somethingwentwrong:Cristianfelltotheground.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Thenextday,Iwascalledtotheprogramdirector’soffice.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________文本分析角色：_____________________________视角：第________人称时空线：fromhighschooldailylife______________Quebecsummerprogramtheprogramdirector’soffice请在文章中将可能的线索都找出来。HowdidIgetthefakedriver’slicense?：______________________________________________Howwasmyacademicperformanceinhighschool?：____________________________________________WhatdidIpromisemyselfaboutthefakelicenseinitially?：_______________________WhydidIagreetobuybeerwiththefakelicensethefirstnight?：___________________________________WhydidIbuyalcoholagainonthelastnight?：_______________________Whowasoverlydrunkandalmostunconsciousonthelastnight?：__________________________________________________WhatdidIseefriendsdowithfakelicensesbefore?：___________________HowdidmyfriendsreactwhenIboughtbeerforthemthefirsttime?_______________________________________WhatwasthelessonIlearnedfromthesummerprogramexperience?____________________________________________________情节线：我是优等生却受同伴压力，开始参加派对喝酒→___________________________________→____________________________________→____________________________→（续写）Cristian突然倒地，我采取行动→（续写）我被叫到项目负责人办公室，得到教训情感线：I：proud(ofacademicachievements)→_____________________→__________________→____________________（续写）→______________________（续写）综合以上信息，请用34句话概括文章大意。（中英各一个）中文：_________________________________________________________________英文：_________________________________________________________________8.句式：宾语从句；非谓语；感叹句；同位语；完全倒装句；比喻；夸张___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________9.本文属于人与他人：_______________________________________情节构造第一段提示句：Suddenly,somethingwentwrong:Cristianfelltotheground.衔接句1———对前面的“Cristianfelltotheground”提问“现场其他人的反应是什么？”：Whatwasthereactionofothersonthescene?过渡句推演：衔接1→？←衔接2衔接句2———对“被叫到项目负责人办公室”提问“我此时意识到什么问题？”：WhatproblemdidIrealizeatthismoment?第二段提示句：Thenextday,Iwascalledtotheprogramdirector’soffice.衔接3———对"calledtotheprogramdirector’soffice"提问“项目负责人说了什么？”：Whatdidtheprogramdirectorsay?过渡句推演：衔接3→？←主题主题：_________________________________段落构思第一段：Suddenly,somethingwentwrong:Cristianfelltotheground.→①__________________→②__________________→③__________________；英文：____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________第二段：Thenextday,Iwascalledtotheprogramdirector’soffice.→④__________________→⑤__________________→⑥__________________。英文：____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________参考答案文本分析1．角色：“我”（成绩优异但受同伴压力的高中生）、同事（给“我”假驾照的人）、新朋友们（如Kai、Cristian）、项目负责人2．视角：第___一___人称3．时空线：fromhighschooldailylife___parttimejobatarestaurant___Quebecsummerprogramtheprogramdirector’soffice4.请在文章中将可能的线索都找出来。HowdidIgetthefakedriver’slicense?：Acoworkerattherestaurantofferedittomebecausewelookedalmostthesame,hopingIcouldhavefuninQuebec.Howwasmyacademicperformanceinhighschool?：IwasastraightAstudent,amemberofmanyschoolclubs,andareceiverofmanyrewards.WhatdidIpromisemyselfaboutthefakelicenseinitially?：IpromisedmyselfthatIwouldn’tuseit.WhydidIagreetobuybeerwiththefakelicensethefirstnight?：BecauseIwantedtogainmynewfriends’admirationandboostmyselfconfidence.WhydidIbuyalcoholagainonthelastnight?：Toearnmyfriends’continuedadmirationasthe"IDman".Whowasoverlydrunkandalmostunconsciousonthelastnight?：Cristian.WhatdidIseefriendsdowithfakelicensesbefore?：Isawfriendswalkintoliquorstoreswithfakelicensesandeoutcarryingatwelvepackofbeer,smilingproudly.HowdidmyfriendsreactwhenIboughtbeerforthemthefirsttime?Theycheered,gavemepatsonthebackandpraisedme,saying"You’retheman".WhatwasthelessonIlearnedfromthesummerprogramexperience?Neverdosomethingyoubelieveiswrongjusttogaintheapprovalofothers.5．情节线：我是优等生却受同伴压力，开始参加派对喝酒→___我在餐厅兼职时，同事给了我假驾照，我承诺不用但没做到___→___夏令营第一晚，我用假驾照帮朋友买啤酒获赞赏___→___最后一晚派对，我再次买酒，Cristian喝到几乎失去意识___→（续写）Cristian突然倒地，我采取行动→（续写）我被叫到项目负责人办公室，得到教训6．情感线：I：proud(ofacademicachievements)→___anxious(facingpeerpressure)___→___hesitant(whengettingthefakelicense)___→___excited(whengainingadmiration)___（续写）→___panicked(whenCristianfelldown)→___regretful(whenfacingthedirector)___（续写）7.综合以上信息，请用34句话概括文章大意。（中英各一个）中文：我是一名成绩优异的高中生，却受同伴压力开始参与不良活动。餐厅兼职时同事给了我假驾照，夏令营期间，为获得新朋友赞赏，我两次用假驾照买酒。最后一晚派对上，朋友Cristian喝到几乎失去意识，随后我被叫到项目负责人办公室，这次经历让我明白不能为获他人认可做错误的事。英文：IwasanexcellenthighschoolstudentwithstraightA's,butIsuccumbedtopeerpressureandstartedparticipatinginbadactivities.Acoworkerattherestaurantgavemeafakedriver'slicense.Duringthesummerprogram,Iusedthefakelicensetwicetobuyalcoholfornewfriendstogaintheiradmiration.Onthelastnightoftheparty,myfriendCristiangotextremelydrunkandalmostunconscious.Later,Iwascalledtotheprogramdirector'soffice,andthisexperiencetaughtmenevertodowrongthingsforothers'approval.8.句式：宾语从句；非谓语；感叹句；同位语；完全倒装句；比喻；夸张宾语从句：IpromisedmyselfthatIwouldn’tuseit.非谓语：Wantingtobe“Cool”,Istartedgoingtopartiesanddrinking.感叹句：You’retheman!同位语：MynewfriendsandIcameacrossaliquorstore,aplacewherewecouldbuydrinkswithfakeIDs.比喻：Thepraiseboostedmyselfconfidencelikeashotofenergy.夸张：Istartedgoingtopartiesanddrinking,drunkbeyondrecognition.9.本文属于人与他人：“我”与同伴之间因同伴压力产生的互动，以及由此引发的自我反思的故事情节构造第一段衔接句1答案：朋友们瞬间慌作一团，Kai脸色发白，声音发颤地喊着Cristian的名字，有人手足无措地站在原地，还有人急得来回踱步，没人敢轻易上前移动Cristian。过渡句（我会采取什么急救措施？）答案：我立刻冲过去蹲在Cristian身边，先轻轻拍打他的肩膀呼喊他，确认他还有微弱意识后，让身边人赶紧去找夏令营的医护人员，同时保持他平躺，解开他领口的扣子帮助呼吸，一直轻声安抚他直到医护人员赶来。衔接句2答案：我意识到是自己用假驾照买酒，才导致Cristian喝到昏迷倒地，自己为了迎合朋友、追求“认可”的错误行为，不仅违反规则，还差点酿成严重后果，这份责任和愧疚让我无比后悔。第二段衔接3答案：项目负责人先是严肃地告知我，Cristian经过救治已无大碍，但仍需观察；接着指出我使用假驾照购买酒精的行为严重违反夏令营规定，既漠视自身和他人安全，也违背了诚信原则；最后询问我这么做的原因，希望我能深刻反思。过渡句（我从中得到什么启示？）答案：我明白不能为了融入群体、获得他人赞赏，就放弃自己的原则，去做明知错误的事；真正的认可不是靠迎合得来的，坚守底线、对自己和他人负责，才是更重要的品质。主题：不能为了获得他人认可而做自己认为错误的事，要坚守自我原则段落构思第一段：Suddenly,somethingwentwrong:Cristianfelltotheground.→①___朋友们瞬间慌乱，Kai吓得声音发颤，我也手足无措但立刻反应过来拨打急救电话___→②___我蹲在Cristian身边，轻声呼唤他并查看他的呼吸，内心满是愧疚和恐慌___→③___急救人员很快赶到将Cristian送医，我整夜难眠，意识到自己的错误酿成了危险___；英文：Suddenly,somethingwentwrong:Cristianfelltotheground.Myfriendspanickedinstantly—Kai'svoicetrembledwithfear,andIwasals