Unit1PeopleofAchievementReadingforWriting课件-高中英语人教版选择性

UnitPeopleofAchievement1—ReadingforWriting课前小测(haveatest):

1.doctorate2.numerous3.flee

4.infer5.relativity6.patent

7.device8.draft9.professor

10.genius11.moustache

12.小说家13.温柔的，文静的14.酷爱，激情

15.政治家16.创建17.偶然碰到

18.掌权19.担职，任职20.非凡的

21.聪颖的Teachingobjectives:Bytheendofthisperiod,youwillbeableto…1.learnAlbertEinstein’slifeandhisachievements;2.figureouttheorganizationandlanguagefeaturesofthetext；3.identifyhowtointroduceaboutsomeonetheyadmire；4.writeanintroductionaboutsomeonetheyadmire.LeadinWatch

&TalkAlbertEinstein,perhapsthegreatestscientistinmodernphysics,isoftenconsideredoneofthesmartestmenwhoeverlived.Hemadenumerouscontributionstotheworld,beingthegeneraltheoryofrelativityandthefamousformula.Einsteinwasnotonlyagenius,hewasacourageousandkindfigure,lovedbymanypeople.ThisgentlegeniuswasborninGermanyonMarch14,1879.Whatwordswouldyouusetodescribehim?greatestbrilliantextraordinarygeniushardworkingcommittedremarkable—forthegenre&mainidea3.ThetextmainlytalksaboutAlbertEinstein’s

and.lifestory1.What’sthegenre(体裁)ofthetext?A.ExpositionB.BiographyC.ArgumentationD.Practicalwriting

achievementstointroduceAlbertEinstein❆Taskoftoday:learntowriteatexttointroducesomeone

youadmirebylearningfromthistext.Before-reading2.Whatwillbeincludedinbiography?1.graduation2.education3.personalexperience4.achievement5.evaluation6.hobby√√√√√√

1.FindmainideaofeachparagraphPara.1 A.HisearlylifeandeducationPara.2 B.Einstein’sdeathPara.3 C.ThegreatnessofAlbertEinsteinPara.4 D.HisworkexperienceandachievementsPara.5 E.Hismid-lifecrisisPara.6 F.HisappearanceandpersonalityWhile-readingBorninGermany18791896195519331895failedtoenteruniversityentereduniversity190019051922graduated

tookajobasaclerkintheSwisspatentoffice1902earnedadoctorateinphysicsandpublishedfourextraordinaryphysicspapers1909enteredresearchfull-timeatauniversitywasawardedtheNobelPrizeforPhysicsfledGermanypassedawayabiographydevelopedintimeorderWhile-reading2.Completethetimelinee7d195523061f1c0092ce48a5fc95870a0687ac45bc8b2caB227BFDC40F9DB2B7A559DE97B8BDC6E716585DDCE188C7BF488BAA08C98985C74A3E1B5E305210FABE6A8AE2A6A8AB67019A6860E9B7AF5FCD1C93861F4105C09D7A5055988F1D88CD5974E708A34BBADB3B978437FE2EB4A61CE8F5D852B174F046418A634CC037792D418F515A3032734C4DCF4BC12B5ExtraordinaryachievementscommentsBriefintroductiontoAlbertEinsteinandhisachievements3.Readpara1andfindoutwhatthewriterintroducedaboutEinstein’slife?BirthEducationbackgroundWorkingexperienceappreciationThewholelifeofAlbertEinstein(successandobstaclesinlife)4.Readpara2-5andfindoutwhatthewriterintroducedaboutEinstein’slife?Let’sreviewthestructureofashortbiography!Structurepara1para2para3Introduction(identity,

greatcontributionsandpersonalqualities)Body(importantlifeexperiences)Ending(judgementandappreciation)Identifytherhetoricaldevices(修辞手法)inthefollowingsentences.Followingthis,hegraduallybecamefamousthroughouttheworld____________________.Einstein,whowasJewish,found_____________

___________________closedtohim.Einstein________________.asthenewIsaacNewtonthedoorsofhadpassedawayacademicinstitutionsHehadathickmoustacheandlongwhitehair,whichsometimes

stoodonendasthoughhehadjustreceivedanelectricshock.Howcanwemakeitimpressivetoyourreaders?RhetoricalDeviceAnalogy(类比)Metaphor

(暗喻)Simile(明喻)+Personification(拟人)Euphemism[ˈjuːfəmɪzəm](委婉语）Sentences出生于：___________________热爱...：_______________在……方面有天赋：_______________从某大学毕业：__________beborninhave/showapassionforbetalentedin...graduatefrom1.Introduction：WordsandPhrasesforwritingidentity,

greatcontributions,graduation/job2.Body(importantlifeexperiences)担任，任职：____________把…奉献给…：___________________起关键性作用：_______________坚定的毅力和决心___________________在…获得巨大的成功：___________________下定决心做某事：_____________________devoteoneselfto.../commitoneselftodoplayacrucialroleinstrongwillanddeterminationachievegreatsuccessin...takeupapositionasmakeupone’smindtodo/bedeterminedtodosth3.Ending(judgementandappreciation)为赢得好名声：_______________

高度评价__________________做出巨大贡献：________________________被认为是…：________________作为……而闻名：__________________被尊称为________________________树立好榜样：_________________

值得我们崇拜和尊重：_________________________________earnagoodreputationmakegreatcontributionstobeacknowledgedas.../beconsideredasbeknown/famousasbehonoredassetagoodexamplefor...deserveouradmirationandrespectthinkhighlyof（开头句）Amongthem,thepersonIadmiremostisZhongNanshan,whohasbecomeahouseholdnameforhiscontributionstodefeatingvirus.(定语从句:整体概述成就)中间段（描述成就贡献）GraduatingfromPekingUniversityin1993,heworkedasateacherinWuhanUniversity.BorninShanghai,onSeptember12th,1980,YaoMingisoneofthebestbasketballplayersinChina.Withstrongwillandgreatdetermination,heachievedthegreatsuccessin...（结尾评价总结句）Withoutadoubt,(人物)hasleftalastingimpressiononmeandmyoutlookonlife.Hisdedicationtoworkisadmirable,whichtrulyinspiresmetobecomearespectedmanlikehiminthefuture.Inspiredbyherexample,Iamdeterminedto....（你的行动、目标）inthefuture佳句示例课文例句仿写练习作为当代中国最伟大的人物之一，袁隆平被人们称为“杂交水稻之父”。YuanLongping,whoisoneofthegreatestfiguresinmodernChina,iswidelyconsideredasthe“fatherofhybridrice”.通过提高水稻产量，他为解决世界饥饿问题作出了巨大贡献。Hemadehugecontributionstotheproblemofworldhungerbypromotingriceproduction.袁隆平不仅仅是一位杰出的科学家，他还爱好广泛，例如喜欢听音乐和游泳。Yuanwasnotonlyanoutstandingscientist;hewasalsoapersonwhohadawiderangeofhobbies,likelisteningtomusicandswimming.ThepersonIadmiremostis

(人）.

出生于1930年北京，袁隆平是最伟大的科学家之一（定语从句）,showedapassionfor

(研究水稻）.After

(毕业于）SouthwestAgriculturalCollege,

____(他花费大量时间进行农业教学与研究).Despitemanydifficulties,he

（他设法克服它们）.

（凭借坚强的意志和坚定的决心取得了巨大的成就)breedinghybridrice,whichmadehim_____________(成功的.）.Having

（为...树立好榜样）us,

他是一个值得我们完全钦佩和尊敬的优秀人物（定语从句.CompletethephrasesandsentencesYuanLongpingBornin

Beijingin1930,YuanLongping，whoisoneofthegreatestscientistsresearchingricegraduatingfromhespentmostofhistimeindoingagriculturalteachingandresearchmanagedtoovercomethem

Withstrongwillandgreatdetermination,heachievedthegreatsuccessinsuccessfulseta

greatexamplefor

heisanexcellentpersonwhofullydeservesouradmirationand

respectModelessay----基础版ThepersonIadmiremostisYuanLongping.BorninBeijingin1930,YuanLongping,whoisoneofthegreatestscientists,showedapassionforresearchingrice.AftergraduatingfromSouthwestAgriculturalCollege,hespentmostofhistimeonagriculturalteachingandresearch.Despitemanydifficulties,hemanagedtoovercomethem.Withstrongwillandgreatdetermination,heachievedthegreatsuccessinbreedinghybridrice,whichimprovedthericeproductionandhelpedridtheworldofhunger.Soheisknownasthefatherofhybridrice.Havingsetagreatexampleforus,heisanexcellentpersonwhofullydeservesouradmirationandrespect.Writingtime出生：1930年9月7日，北京爱好：听音乐、游泳毕业院校：西南农学院(SouthwestAgricultureCollege)工作经历及成就：1.大学毕业后，袁隆平去往湖南从事农业教学和研究工作，并在1975年成功培育出了杂交水稻。2.提高水稻产量，消除世界饥饿3.被誉为“杂交水稻之父”“FatherofHybridRice”4.2019年被授予“共和国勋章”theMedaloftheRepublic2021年5月22日，在湖南长沙逝世;TheManWhoFedtheWorldYuanLongping,whoisoneofthegreatestfiguresinmodernChina,iswidelyknownasthe“fatherofhybridrice”.Hemadehugecontributionstotheproblemofworldhugerbypromotingriceproduction.Yuanisnotonlyanoutstandingscientist,heisalsoapersonwhohasawiderangeofhobbies,likelisteningtomusicandswimmingindailylife.

IntroductionIdentityContributionsPersonalqualitiesModelessay------进阶版ThisgreatscientistwasborninBeijingon7September1930.AftergraduatingfromCollege,hedevotedhimselftoagriculturaleducationandresearchallalong.Owingtoyear