如何在写作中运用长难句课件-高三英语上学期一轮复习专项

如何在写作中运用长难句Sheisabeauty

(name)QiWei,

wearsapurple

hairband,withdelicatemake-up,

(make)heracelebrityaroundtheworld

sheraisesan

(adore)daughter,Lucky,

fatherissohandsomeandgentle

hehasbecomeahit.namedwhomakingandadorablewhosethatTask1ObserveWhatmakesasentencecomplicatedintermsofcomponents（成分）？定语状语补语同位语各类从句make-up基本句型S+LV+PS+V+O动词分类S+ViS+Vt+O宾语种类S+Vt+IO+DOS+Vt+O+OC双宾复合宾语

句子扩展的五大核心技巧（1）添加形容词或副词功能：使名词或动词更具体、生动The

girl

unwrapped

her

gift

box.The

innocent

girl

unwrapped

her

delicate

gift

box

excitedly。（2）使用介词短语功能：补充时间、地点、方式等细节The

girl

unwrapped

her

gift

box.Without

any

hesitation,

the

girl

unwrapped

her

gift

box

with

great

care。（3）运用非谓语动词功能：表示伴随动作、原因或状态The

girl

unwrapped

her

gift

box.Screaming

with

excitement,

the

girl

unwrapped

her

gift

box。（4）使用with复合结构/独立主格功能：描述动作发生时的伴随状态The

girl

unwrapped

her

gift

box.With

her

heart

beating

wildly,

the

girl

unwrapped

her

gift

box。5）巧用从句功能：增加逻辑关系或背景信息The

girl

unwrapped

her

gift

box.The

girl

unwrapped

her

gift

box

which

she

had

been

looking

forward

to。The

girl

unwrapped

her

gift

box.With

her

heart

beating

wildly,

the

innocent

girl,

held

by

her

mom

and

screaming

with

excitement,

unwrapped

her

delicate

gift

box

which

she

had

been

looking

forward

to

without

any

hesitation.

核心技巧：形容词/副词、介词短语、非谓语动词、with结构/独立主格、从句。The

children

swam

in

the

river.逐步扩展：1.

加时间状语：At

a

beautiful

dusk,

the

children

swam

in

the

river.2.

加定语：Led

by

the

local

people,

the

children

swam

in

the

river.3.加同位语…,

a

terrifying

place

where

nobody

dared

to

approach.4.

整合长句：At

a

beautiful

dusk,

the

children,

led

by

the

local

people,

swam

in

the

Devil

River,

a

terrifying

place

where

nobody

dared

to

approach。He

saved

the

little

girl.1.

加时间状语从句：After

he

ran

into

the

room,

he

saved

the

little

girl.2.

非谓语动词替换从句：Running

into

the

room,

he

saved

the

little

girl.3.

加过渡词：To

our

surprise,

...4.

加工具（介词短语）：with

the

help

of

a

firefighter,

...5.

加情绪：...,

feeling

nervous.To

our

surprise,

he,

with

the

help

of

a

firefighter,

saved

the

little

girl,

feeling

nervous.

The

twins

carried

the

breakfast

upstairs.1.

加情感（形容词）：Overjoyed

and

thrilled,

the

twins

carried...2.

加道具：...

prepared

the

breakfast

tray,

adding

a

card

they

had

made,

...3.

加时间状语：In

no

time,

...4.

加目的/方向：...

and

then

headed

for

their

parents'

bedroom.In

no

time,

overjoyed

and

thrilled,

the

twins

prepared

the

breakfast

tray,

adding

a

card

they

had

made,

and

then

headed

for

their

parents'

bedroom.

We

climbed

onto

the

helicopter.1.

加情绪（形容词）：Thrilled

yet

relieved,

we

climbed...2.

加具体动作：...

clutched

the

rope

and

climbed

onto

the

helicopter.3.

加结果：...

and

eventually

landed

safe

and

sound.Thrilled

yet

relieved,

we

clutched

the

rope

and

eventually

landed

on

the

helicopter

safe

and

sound.

The

boy

rushed

to

the

lake.1.

加连贯动作：The

boy

rushed

to

the

lake,

took

off

his

clothes

and

jumped

into

the

water.2.

非谓语动词整合动作：Having

taken

off

his

clothes,

the

boy

rushed

to

the

lake

and

jumped

into

the

water.

Having

taken

off

his

clothes,

the

boy

rushed

to

the

lake

and

jumped

into

the

water.

He

found

his

way

into

the

forest.1.

加非谓语动词（方式）：Carrying

the

best

sword,

he

found

his

way...2.

加时间/结果状语：...

and

brought

the

princess

back.3.

加情绪：...,

exhausted

but

excited.Carrying

the

best

sword,

he

eventually

found

his

way

into

the

dense

forest

and

brought

the

princess

back,

exhausted

but

excited.

She

walked

into

the

room.1.

加副词和地点：She

walked

slowly

into

the

dimly

lit

room

at

the

end

of

the

long

corridor.2.

加with复合结构：...,

with

a

soft

sigh

escaping

her

lips.3.

加状语从句：...

as

she

took

in

the

quiet

atmosphere.She

walked

slowly

into

the

dimly

lit

room

at

the

end

of

the

long

corridor,

with

a

soft

sigh

escaping

her

lips

as

she

took

in

the

quiet

atmosphere.

The

cat

sat

on

the

mat.1.

加副词和形容词：The

cat

sat

lazily

on

the

soft

mat.2.

加介词短语：...

by

the

warm

fireplace.3.

加独立成分描述：...,

its

tail

flicking

gently

from

side

to

side.The

cat

sat

lazily

on

the

soft

mat

by

the

warm

fireplace,

its

tail

flicking

gently

from

side

to

side.

She

is

a

teacher.1.

加定语从句：She

is

a

teacher

who

has

been

wo