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写作讲解：季节主题描述及活动一、作文题目假设你是李华，你的加拿大笔友Mike即将来深圳交换学习三个月，他想提前了解深圳的四季以及最适合体验本地生活的季节。请根据以下信息要点给Mike回一封邮件。信息要点：简单介绍深圳的四季特点；推荐来深圳的最佳季节，并简要说明理由（如天气舒适、适合户外活动、传统节日等）；设计三天的行程框架（每天包含1个景点或活动，需体现深圳特色）；给出一个旅行小贴士（如穿衣建议、交通方式等）。要求：覆盖所有的信息要点，不能缺漏；词数80词左右，开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数；可适当发挥，但要注意语言通顺、流畅、准确。参考词汇：主题公园（themepark）；乳鸽（roastpigeon）；公共交通（publictransportation）；轻便衣服（lightclothes）二、重点词汇表达词汇音标中文含义season/ˈsiːzn/季节subtropical/ˌsʌbˈtrɒpɪkl/亚热带的climate/ˈklaɪmɪt/气候fortable/ˈkʌmfərtəbl/舒适的outdoor/ˈaʊtdɔːr/户外的activity/ækˈtɪvəti/活动schedule/ˈʃedjuːl/行程attraction/əˈtrækʃn/景点local/ˈloʊkl/本地的remend/ˌrekəˈmend/推荐transportation/ˌtrænspɔːrˈteɪʃn/交通exchange/ɪksˈtʃeɪndʒ/交换pleasant/ˈpleznt/宜人的humid/ˈhjuːmɪd/潮湿的三、短语表达subtropicalclimate亚热带气候fourseasons四季bestseason最佳季节outdooractivities户外活动threedayplan三天行程localfood本地美食publictransportation公共交通lightclothes轻便衣服短语填空请用上面的短语补全句子，每空填1个短语：Shenzhenhasa____________withdistinctseasonalfeatures.LetmetellyouaboutShenzhen’s____________first.Autumnisthe____________tovisitShenzhen.Thecoolweatherisperfectfor____________.I’veprepareda____________foryourstay.Don’tmissthedelicious____________likeroastpigeon.It’sconvenienttotake____________inShenzhen.You’dbetterwear____________sincetheweatherisstillwarm.短语填空参考答案subtropicalclimatefourseasonsbestseasonoutdooractivitiesthreedayplanlocalfoodpublictransportationlightclothes四、写作句型及仿写原句：Shenzhenhasasubtropicalclimate.Springiswarmandrainy,summerishotandhumid,autumniscoolandpleasant,andwinterismild....a......hasa...climate.Springis...,summeris...,autumnis...,andwinteris...仿写句中文：广州是亚热带气候。春天温暖多雨，夏天炎热潮湿，秋天凉爽宜人，冬天温和。仿写句英文：Guangzhouhasasubtropicalclimate.Springiswarmandrainy,summerishotandhumid,autumniscoolandpleasant,andwinterismild.原句：Iremendautumnbecausetheweatherisfortable,perfectforoutdooractivitiesandtraditionalfestivals.仿写结构：Iremend...because...,perfectfor...and...仿写句中文：我推荐春天去杭州，因为天气宜人，很适合赏花和户外野餐。仿写句英文：IremendspringtovisitHangzhoubecausetheweatherispleasant,perfectforenjoyingflowersandoutdoorpicnics.原句：Forathreedayplan:Day1,visitWindowoftheWorldthemepark;Day2,trylocalfoodlikeroastpigeon;Day3,exploreShenzhenBayPark.仿写结构：Fora...plan:Day1,...;Day2,...;Day3,...仿写句中文：三天行程安排：第一天，参观故宫；第二天，品尝北京烤鸭；第三天，游览颐和园。仿写句英文：Forathreedayplan:Day1,visittheForbiddenCity;Day2,trylocalfoodlikeBeijingRoastDuck;Day3,exploretheSummerPalace.原句：Remembertowearlightclothesandusepublictransportationforconvenience.仿写结构：Rememberto...and...forconvenience.仿写句中文：记得带雨伞并乘地铁出行，这样更方便。仿写句英文：Remembertotakeanumbrellaandtakethesubwayforconvenience.原句：I’msureyouwillhaveagreattimehere.仿写结构：I’msureyouwill...here.仿写句中文：我确信你会在成都玩得很开心。仿写句英文：I’msureyouwillhaveawonderfultimeinChengdu.五、写作思路及结构开头（邮件承接）主体1（四季特点）主体2（最佳季节）主体3（三天行程）主体4（旅行小贴士）结尾六、整篇文章示例DearMike,I’msohappytohearyou’lletoShenzhenforanexchange!I’dliketotellyouaboutthecity’sseasonsandsometraveltipstoexperiencelocallife.Shenzhenhasasubtropicalclimate.Springiswarmandrainy,summerishotandhumid,autumniscoolandpleasant,andwinterismild.Iremendautumnbecausetheweatherisfortable,perfectforoutdooractivitiesandtraditionalfestivals.Forathreedayplan:Day1,visitWindowoftheWorldthemepark;Day2,trylocalfoodlikeroastpigeon;Day3,exploreShenzhenBayPark.Remembertowearlightclothesandusepublictransportationforconvenience.WeletoShenzhen!I’msureyouwillhaveagreattimehere.Yours,LiHua七、写作练习假设你是李华，你的美国笔友Lisa即将来上海交换学习两个月，她想了解上海的四季及最佳体验季节。请根据以下要点回邮件：介绍上海的四季特点（亚热带气候：春暖湿、夏炎热、秋凉爽、冬湿冷）；推荐最佳季节（秋季）及理由（天气舒适、适合逛外滩、有中秋等节日）；设计三天行程（Day1：逛外滩；Day2：尝生煎包等本地美食；Day3：游上海迪士尼乐园）；旅行小贴士（穿轻便外套、乘地铁出行）。要求：词数80词左右，开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数。参考词汇：theBund（外滩）；panfriedbuns（生煎包）；ShanghaiDisneyland（上海迪士尼乐园）；subway（地铁）参考范文DearLisa,I’mexcitedtoknowyou’reingtoShanghaiforanexchange!Letmesharethecity’sseasonsandtraveltipswithyou.Shanghaihasasubtropicalclimate.Springiswarmandwet,summerishot,autumniscool,andwinteriswetandcold.Iremendautumn—it’sfortable,perfectforvisitingtheBundandcelebratingfestivalslikeMidAutumnFestival.