高三英语读后续写专项复习-浓烟中的生命逆行导学案

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。Atfirst,Surrelldidn’tseetheblacksmokeorflamesshootingfromthewindowsofhisneighbors’home.HeandhiswifewerejusthavingadinnerintheirownhouseinAllentown,Pennsylvania,whentheyheardsomeonescreaming:“Thehouseisonfire!”Hewenttoinvestigate.That’swhenhesawtwowomenandagirlcrazilyatalossontheirporch(走廊).Itwashisneighbour’shouse.“Thebaby’sinsidethere!”oneofthewomencried.Thoughthefiredepartmenthadbeencalled,Surrell,then64,instinctively(本能地)raninside.“Thebaby”was8yearoldTiaraRoberts,whoalwayscalledhimUncleSurrell.Shewasthewoman’sgranddaughterandaplaymateofSurrell’sthreeyoungestkids,8,10,and12.TheothertwoontheporchwereTiara’sauntandcousin.Enteringtheburninghousewaslikerunninginto“abucketofblackpaint”.ThethicksmokecausedSurrelltowalkblindlyaround,burnedhiseyes,andmadeitimpossibleforhimtobreathe.Hefelthisthroatandlungsburned,andeveryblinkstung(蛰)hiseyes.Theconditionswouldhavebeenverydangerousforanyone,butforSurrell,whohaschronicobstructivepulmonarydisease(慢性阻塞性肺病)andwasinhospitaljusthalfayearago,theywereliferisking.Afterafewminutesinthesmokefilledhousesearchingbutinvain,heranoutsidetocatchhisbreath.“WhereisTiara?”heaskeddesperately.“Thesecondfloor,”herauntshoutedback.Surrellknewhecouldn’tholdhisbreathforlong.Soheutteredalittleprayer:“Well,God,thisisit.Yougottohelpme,becauseI’mnotingoutwithoutthatlittlegirl.”注意：1.续写词数应为

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左右；2.请按如下格式作答。Takingadeepbreath,hewentinasecondtime.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Surrellwokeupinthehospitalacoupleofdayslater._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________文本分析角色：______________________________________________________________视角：第______人称时空线：fromSurrell’shome(havingdinnerwithhiswife)___________________________(hearingthefirescream)theneighbor’sburninghouse(firstsearchforTiara)请在文章中将可能的线索都找出来。WhatwasSurrelldoingwhenheheardthescream?：___________________________________________________________________________WhydidSurrellrunintotheburninghouseinstinctively?：___________________________________________________________________________WhathealthproblemdidSurrellhave?：___________________________________________________________________________WherewasTiarawhenthehousewasonfire?：___________________________________________________________________________Whatwasthesituationlikeinsidetheburninghouse?：___________________________________________________________________________WhatwasSurrell’srelationshipwithTiara?：___________________________________________________________________________WhywasthefiremoredangerousforSurrellthanothers?：___________________________________________________________________________WhatdidSurrellprayforbeforegoinginthesecondtime?：___________________________________________________________________________情节线：Surrell和妻子在家吃晚餐时，听到邻居家传来“房子着火了”的尖叫。→___________________________________________________________________________→尽管消防部门已被呼叫，64岁且患有慢性阻塞性肺病的Surrell仍本能冲进火场，但浓烟让他盲目搜寻无果，只能先跑出来透气。→________________________________→（续写）深吸一口气后，他第二次冲进火场。→（续写）几天后，Surrell在医院醒来。情感线：Surrell：calm→________________________→____________________→（续写）→（续写）Tiara的阿姨：desperate→______________________→（续写）→（续写）Tiara：frightened→→（续写）→（续写）Surrell的妻子：worried→___________________→（续写）→（续写）综合以上信息，请用34句话概括文章大意。（中英各一个）中文：______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________英文：______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________8.句式：宾语从句；非谓语；感叹句；同位语；完全倒装句；比喻；夸张_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________9.本文属于人与自我、人与自然、人与家庭：情节构造第一段提示句：Takingadeepbreath,hewentinasecondtime.衔接句1———对前面的"secondsearch"提问“Surrell第二次冲进火场后，如何克服浓烟和身体不适寻找Tiara？”：HowdidSurrelloverethethicksmokeandphysicaldisforttofindTiaraafterrushinginthesecondtime?过渡句推演：衔接1→？←衔接2衔接句2———对"rescuingTiara"提问“他最终找到Tiara了吗？救援过程是否顺利？”：DidhefinallyfindTiaraandwastherescueprocesssmooth?第二段提示句：Surrellwokeupinthehospitalacoupleofdayslater.衔接3———对"wakingup"提问“Surrell醒来后得知了什么消息？他人对他的行为有何反应？”：WhatnewsdidSurrelllearnafterwakingupandhowdidothersreacttohisbehavior?过渡句推演：衔接3→？←主题主题：_________________________________段落构思第一段：Takingadeepbreath,hewentinasecondtime.→①__________________→②__________________→③__________________；英文：_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________第二段：Surrellwokeupinthehospitalacoupleofdayslater.→④__________________→⑤__________________→⑥__________________。英文：_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________参考答案文本分析角色：Surrell（64岁老人，患有慢性阻塞性肺病，热心勇敢）、TiaraRoberts（8岁女孩，Surrell的邻居，常称他为叔叔）、Tiara的阿姨、Tiara的表妹、Surrell的妻子视角：第三人称时空线：fromSurrell’shome(havingdinnerwithhiswife)theneighbor’sporch(hearingthefirescream)theneighbor’sburninghouse(firstsearchforTiara)请在文章中将可能的线索都找出来。WhatwasSurrelldoingwhenheheardthescream?：Hewashavingdinnerwithhiswifeintheirownhouse.WhydidSurrellrunintotheburninghouseinstinctively?：Becauseheheardsomeonescreamthatthehousewasonfire,andlearnedthat8yearoldTiara,whocalledhimUncleSurrellandwashiskids’playmate,wasstillinside.WhathealthproblemdidSurrellhave?：Hehadchronicobstructivepulmonarydisease.WherewasTiarawhenthehousewasonfire?：Shewasonthesecondflooroftheburninghouse.Whatwasthesituationlikeinsidetheburninghouse?：Itwasfilledwiththickblacksmokeandflames,makingitimpossibletoseeorbreathe,andverydangerous.WhatwasSurrell’srelationshipwithTiara?：TiarawasSurrell’sneighbor’sgranddaughter,calledhimUncleSurrell,andwasaplaymateofhisthreeyoungestkids.WhywasthefiremoredangerousforSurrellthanothers?：Becausehehadchronicobstructivepulmonarydiseaseandhadbeeninhospitaljusthalfayearago.WhatdidSurrellprayforbeforegoinginthesecondtime?：HeprayedforGod’shelp,determinednottoeoutwithoutrescuingTiara.情节线：Surrell和妻子在家吃晚餐时，听到邻居家传来“房子着火了”的尖叫。→他发现邻居家的两位女性和一个女孩在门廊惊慌失措，得知8岁的Tiara还在屋内。→尽管消防部门已被呼叫，64岁且患有慢性阻塞性肺病的Surrell仍本能冲进火场，但浓烟让他盲目搜寻无果，只能先跑出来透气。→得知Tiara在二楼后，他祈祷上帝帮助，决心不救出女孩绝不出来。→（续写）深吸一口气后，他第二次冲进火场。→（续写）几天后，Surrell在医院醒来。情感线：Surrell：calm→anxious→determined→struggling（续写）→relieved（续写）Tiara的阿姨：desperate→worried→grateful（续写）→thankful（续写）Tiara：frightened→hopeful（续写）→thankful（续写）Surrell的妻子：worried→anxious→relieved（续写）→proud（续写）综合以上信息，请用34句话概括文章大意。（中英各一个）中文：Surrell和妻子在家吃晚餐时，听到邻居家着火的尖叫，得知8岁的邻居女孩Tiara被困屋内。64岁的他虽患有慢性阻塞性肺病，仍本能冲进浓烟滚滚的火场搜寻，第一次搜寻无果后，他祈祷上帝帮助，决心再次冲入火场救出Tiara。英文：Surrellwashavingdinnerwithhiswifeathomewhenheheardscreamsthathisneighbor’shousewasonfire.Helearnedthat8yearoldneighborgirlTiarawastrappedinside.Though64yearsoldandsufferingfromchronicobstructivepulmonarydisease,heinstinctivelyrushedintothesmokefilledhousetosearchforher.Afterfailingthefirsttime,heprayedforGod’shelpanddecidedtorushinagaintorescueTiara.句式：宾语从句；非谓语；感叹句；同位语；完全倒装句；比喻；夸张宾语从句：Surrell’swifeworriedthathewouldbeindangerifhewentintotheburninghouseagain./Tiara’saunttoldSurrellthatthelittlegirlwasonthesecondfloor.非谓语：Havingsearchedtheburninghouseforafewminutesinvain,Surrellranoutsidetocatchhisbreath./Takingadeepbreath,hesummonedupallhisstrengthtorushintothefireagain.感叹句：WhatadangeroussituationSurrellwasinwhenhesearchedforTiarainthethicksmoke!同位语：TiaraRoberts,an8yearoldgirlwhocalledSurrellUncleSurrell,wastrappedonthesecondfloor.完全倒装句：Insidetheburninghousewasthickblacksmokethatmadeitimpossibletosee.比喻：Enteringtheburninghousewaslikerunningintoabucketofblackpaint,withnolighttoguidetheway.夸张：ThesmokewassothickthatitfeltlikeaheavyblanketcoveringSurrell’smouthandnose,suffocatinghim.9.本文属于人与自我、人与自然、人与家庭：危难中的勇气与善意，用坚守与担当守护生命情节构造第一段提示句：Takingadeepbreath,hewentinasecondtime.衔接句1———对前面的"secondsearch"提问“Surrell第二次冲进火场后，如何克服浓烟和身体不适寻找Tiara？”：HowdidSurrelloverethethicksmokeandphysicaldisforttofindTiaraafterrushinginthesecondtime?Surrellheldhisbreathasmuchaspossible,feelinghiswayuptheburningstairswithhishandsagainstthewall.Theheatburnedhisskin,andhislungsachedseverelyduetohisillness,buthekeptmovingforward,callingTiara’snamesoftly.过渡句推演：衔接1→？←衔接2衔接句2———对"rescuingTiara"提问“他最终找到Tiara了吗？救援过程是否顺利？”：DidhefinallyfindTiaraandwastherescueprocesssmooth?Soon,heheardafaintcryfromabedroom.Hebrokethroughthedoor,foundTiarahuddledinthecorner,andpickedherup.Justasherushedoutofthehouse,abeamcollapsedbehindthem—theyhadnarrowlyescapeddanger.第二段提示句：Surrellwokeupinthehospitalacoupleofdayslater.衔接3———对"wakingup"提问“Surrell醒来后得知了什么消息？他人对他的行为有何反应？”：WhatnewsdidSurrelllearnafterwakingupandhowdidothersreacttohisbehavior?HiswifeandTiara’sfamilywerebyhisbedside.HewastoldthatTiarawassafeandsound,justalittlefrightened.Tiarathrewherselfintohisarms,calling“UncleSurrell”gratefully,andherfamilythankedhimrepeatedlyforsavingherlife.过渡句推演：衔接3→？←主题主题：勇气不分年龄，善意不惧危难，平凡人的挺身而出能创造生命奇迹段落构思第一段：Takingadeepbreath,hewenti