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ContinuationWriting——ActionChain&ActionScene
Lead-inasceneattheawardpresentationsample1:Attheawardpresentation,Iwasannouncedtobethewinner.Ifeltsurprisedandexcited.sample2:
HearingthenewsthatIwasthewinner,Icouldhardlycontainmyexcitement,huggedmyfriendsandwalkedforwardtothestage.MyfacelitupwithgreatjoyasIacceptedtheaward.Aroundofapplauseandcheersrangthroughthewholeauditorium.actionactionchainsDavidranontheplayground.ranDavidswunghisarms,liftedhislegsandranlikeanarrowontheplayground.swungarmliftedlegransentence1:S+V1,V2andV3actionchainfell
Strugglingtodashtothefinishline,Davidsuddenlytrippedandfellontheground.sentence2:Doing,S+V1andV2Havingdone,S+V1andV2Davidfellontheground.dashtotripfellHavingstruggledtohisfeet,Davidregainedconfidenceandmoveduptothefinishline.helpSeeingDavidfallingoverthefloor,aboydashedtohimandraisedhimup.DescribeanactionchainAboyhelpedDavidup.AboyrushedtoDavid,heldhisarmandhelpedhimup.Davidswunghisarm,liftedhislegandranlikeanarrowontheplayground.Strugglingtodashtothefinishline,Davidsuddenlytrippedandfellontheground.SeeingDavidfallingoverthefloor,aboydashedtohimandraisedhimup.concretelogicalprecise
Wesatdownnexttoeachother,butDavidwouldn'tlookatme.Seeinghisfacefilledwith__________________(焦虑和犹豫不决),Idecidedtotalksomethingwithhim.TurningtoDavid,Ismiled,“David,look,whatawonderfulevent!”“Yeah!”David___________(勉强地笑),loweringhishead.Pattingonhisshoulder,Isaidina_________(柔和的声音),“Iknowyouhaveworkedsohardforthisevent.HowIadmireyourstrongdetermination.
Whynotgiveitatry?”“Iamafraidofbeinglaughed.”murmured
David,with_________________(难过的表情).Igentlystrokedhishair,heldhishandtightly,andcomfortedhim,saying“Goforit!Everyonewillcheerforyou.”
______________________(一阵沉默后),Davidnoddedinagreement,finallydecidingtojoinintherace.innerthoughtactionanxietyandhesitationemotionsmiledweaklysoftvoiceAfteratemporarysilencesadlooksonhisfacedialoguesFillintheblankScene:Ateacherwantedtocomfortadepressedboy.Seeingthe
frustratedboy,Igotclosertohimandpattedhimontheheadslightly,saying
inasoftvoice
"Whynothaveatry,Ibelieveyoucanmakeit!"DescribeanactionscenePolishyourwritingWhenIwasinmiddleschool,mysocialstudiesteacheraskedmetoenterawritingcontest.Isaidnowithoutthinking.Ididnotlovewriting.MyfamilycamefromBrazil,soEnglishwasonlymysecondlanguage.WritingwassodifficultandpainfulformethatmyteacherhadallowedmetopresentmypaperonthesinkingoftheTitanicbyactingoutaplay,whereIplayedalltheparts.Noonelaughedharderthanhedid.So,whydidhesuddenlyforcemetodosomethingatwhichIwassuretofail?Hisreply:"BecauseIloveyourstories.Ifyou’rewillingtoapplyyourself,Ithinkyouhaveagoodshotatthis.”Encouragedbyhiswords,Iagreedtogiveitatry.IchosePaulRevere’shorseasmysubject.PaulReverewasasilversmith(银匠)inBostonwhorodeahorseatnightonApril18,1775toLexingtontowarnpeoplethatBritishsoldierswerecoming.Mystorywouldcomestraightfromthehorse’smouth.Notabrilliantidea,butfunny;andunlikelytobeanyoneelse’schoice.Whatdidthehorsethink,ashespedthroughthenight?Didhegettired?Havedoubts?Didhewanttoquit?Isympathizedimmediately.Igottired.Ihaddoubts.Iwantedtoquit.But,likeRevere’shorse,Ikeptgoing.Iworkedhard.Icheckedmyspelling.Iaskedmyoldersistertocorrectmygrammar.IcheckedoutahalfdozenbooksonPaulReverefromthelibrary.Ievenreadafewofthem.WhenIhandedintheessaytomyteacher,hereadit,laughedoutloud,andsaid,“Great.Now,writeitagain."Iwroteitagain,andagainandagain.WhenIfinallyfinishedit,thethoughtofwinninghadgivenwaytotheenjoymentofwriting.IfIdidn’twin,Iwouldn’tcare.注意:1.续写词数应为150个左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Afewweekslater,whenIalmostforgotthecontest,therecamethenews.Iwenttomyteacher’sofficeaftertheawardpresentation.(2023年新高考读后续写Ⅰ&Ⅱ卷)—teacher'sencouragementIhavedifficultywithwriting.But,myteacherencouragedmetoparticipateinawritingcontest.Itriedandfinishedthestory.Igainedtheenjoymentofwriting.Sortouttheplotofthestory.Maincharacters:myteacherandIplotdesignP1:Afewweekslater,whenIalmostforgotthecontest,therecamethenews.P2:Iwenttomyteacher’sofficeaftertheawardpresentation.①Whatisthenews?②Whatwasmyreactiontothenews?③Whathappenedattheawardpresentation?(action+emotion/innerthought)(action+emotion/innerthought/dialogues)self-eva
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