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华中师大一附中2023-2024学年度上学期高三期中检测原题呈现Lilywasrenownedforherdesiretoachieveperfectionineverythingsheundertook.Whetheritwasschoolprojects,artassignments,orevenhelpingherparentswithhouseholdchores,Lily’scommitmenttoexcellencewasunwavering.Onesunnysummerday,Lily’sfamilydecidedtospendadayatthebeach.Astheyarrived,Lily’seyeswereimmediatelydrawnbyagroupofchildrenwhoplayfullybuiltandthentoredowntheirsandcastles.Theygiggledandshouted,theirexcitementonfulldisplay.“Howsilly,”shethought,notquitegettingwhytheyenjoyeddoingthat.Lily,beingherself,decidedtobuildaperfectsandcastlethatwouldbecometheenvyofallbeachgoers.Shebegantoplaneverydetailinhermind,fromthebalancedstructuresofthetowerstothedelicatedecorations.Then,shesetaboutpilingsandtomakethetowersandwallsofhersandcastle.Painstakingly,shecraftedeachfeatureofherwork,carefullysmoothedthesurfacesandadjustingeverydetailtohervision.Jake,Lily’syoungerbrother,didn’tseemtooconcernedwithbuildingafantasticsandcastle.Hepickedaspotnearbyandamusedhimselfwiththesand.Hescoopeduphandfulsofsand,letitslipthroughhisfingerslikegrainsoftime,andthenmoldeditintocarelessshapeswiththecarefreeabandonofachild.Jake’shappinesswascontagious.MomandDadjoinedhim,laughingandjokingoverJake’splayfulcreations.Fromtimetotime,theycalledouttoLilyandinvitedhertojointhefun,knowingthatthepursuitofperfectioncouldbeexhausting.Nevertheless,Lilystayedwhereshewas,determinedtocreateanimpressivesandcastle.ShefrownedatJake’sunconventional,abstractart-likesandcastleshapesandpersistedinherefforts.However,theprocessdidn’tgoassmoothlyasshehadanticipated.Thesanddidn’talwaysholditsshape,andthewavesconstantlylappedattheedgesofhercreation.注意：1.续写词数应为150个左右；2.请按照如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Asthedayworeon,Lily’ssandcastlekeptlosingitsform.Withbittersmile,Lilydecidedtojoinherfamily.如何构思该题目讲述了一个叫Lily的女孩，她追求完美，去海滩玩耍时想打造一个完美的沙堡，但在做的过程中遇到挑战，而她的弟弟Jack却在海滩上随意地玩耍，享受快乐。该文章旨在告诉学生有时候追求完美并不是最重要的，享受过程也是同样重要。满分作文Asthedayworeon,Lily’ssandcastlekeptlosingitsform.Thewallofthecastlewasonthebrinkofcollapseasthewindcarriedwavestothebeach.Whensherestoredoneside,theotherswerewashedawaywithouthernoticing.Lilygraduallylosthertemperandfrownedconstantly.Discouragementhadtakenholdofherandherdeterminationyielded.Havingjustcreatedanamusingsandcastleshape,Momliftedhereyelidsandfoundherdaughter’sblurringeyes.ThensheyelledtoLily,“Comeon,honey!Joinusandshowcaseyourcreativity!”Shepointedather“work”andwavedtoLily.Withabittersmile,Lilydecidedtojoinherfamily.Perceivingherdismay,allthefamilymemberscrowdedaroundherandencouragedhertotrytomakeitmorecasual.Collectingheremotions,Lilyscoopeduphandfulsofsandandmadeabaseofthecastle.“Wow,that’scool!”“Hah,whatafunnyshape...”Withlaughterlingering,Lilyrevealedalineofteethandgraduallyimmersedherselfinplayingratherthanshaping.Shethrewthepursuitofperfectionbehindandsampledthesweettasteofpurejoy.Wesometimesbecomesostubbornaboutperfectionthatweignorethepurejoy.Thankfully,wecanrestorethejoyasLilywhenitisn’ttoolate.译文随着时间的流逝，Lily的沙堡逐渐失去了形状。当风将海浪吹向海滩，城堡的墙壁濒临倒塌。当她修复一边时，其他的部分却在不知不觉中被冲走了。Lily渐渐开始发脾气，不停地皱眉头。沮丧占据了她，她的决心屈服了。刚刚做出了一个有趣的沙堡形状，妈妈抬起眼睑，发现了女儿模糊的眼睛。然后她对Lily喊道:“来吧，亲爱的!加入我们，展示你的创造力!”她指着她的“作品”并向Lily挥手。带着苦涩的微笑，Lily决定加入她的家人当中去