2026届新高考英语冲刺复习 读后续写-动作描写

2026届新高考英语冲刺复习

读后续写——动作描写Bytheendoftheclass,wewillbeableto1.Reviewandsummarizesomeusefulskillstomakethedescriptionofactionsmorevividandexpressive；2.Applytheskillstopolishourownwriting；3.Learntocooperatewitheachotherandjoininclassactivitiestoimproveourselves.LearningObjectives

AnalysisofTestPapers年份试卷版本情节侧重点2024.06新高考II参加会议与路遇暖心出租车司机侧重心理描写和动作描写2023.06新高考II在老师鼓励下参加作文比赛侧重心理描写和动作描写2023.01浙江高考我意外救下蜂鸟侧重动作描写

Howcanwedescribeactionsvividly?ActionchainsinContinuationWritingShowthereaderseverything,tellthemnothing.向读者展示一切，什么都不告诉他们。

--ErnestHemingwayHowcanyoumakeyourcontinuationwritingmorevivid?actionchains动作链openthedoorputtheelephantinthefridgeclosethedoor

将结果性的动作，分解成更细致的连贯性的微动作，使动作结果过程化。Tip1:动作三连结构（A,BandC结构）

Pre-action（先前动作）Trans-action(过渡动作)Post-action(后续动作)tookofftheclothes

Theboysrushedtothelake,+Describe：男孩们跳入湖中嬉戏。

jump

=+冲向湖边脱掉衣服跳入湖中

andjumpedintothewater.V1V2V3构建动作链

Tip1:→三连动V1,V2andV3拆解动作尖叫奔跑跳入井中++screamedranawayjumpedintothewell

Themanscreamed,ranawayandjumpedintothewell.

Tip1:三连动（V1,V2andV3）学生出教室。拆解:站起来抓起书包冲出教室Thestudentstoodup,seizedhisschoolbagsandrushedoutoftheclassroomlikeanarrow.eg.1巩固练习eg.3eg.2歌手开始演唱。Thesingerglancedattheaudience,tookadeepbreathandbegantosing.拆解：瞥一眼观众深吸一口气开始演唱他跑去拥抱好朋友。Hegrinnedfromeartoear,dashedtohisfriend,andhuggedhimtightly.笑得合不拢嘴拆解：冲到好友跟前紧紧地抱住他哪吒跳下来。Nezhajumpedoffthewall.

heardNezha

______mom'swords,_______and_______

offthewall.

smiledjumped动作链：非谓语动词：

_______mom'swords,Nezhasmiledandjumpedoffthewall.

HearingTip:V1andV2,doing/doing,V1andV2合并动作Tip:Done,

V1andV2David挣扎着站起来,继续跑,没有表现出任何放弃的迹象（2022续写真题）。David___________________and_______________,__________nosignsofgivingup.struggledtohisfeetcontinuedrunningshowing巩固练习：合并动作Davidstruggled…,continued…,andshowed…delightedly,excitedly...angrily,anxiously...sadly,heart-brokenly,...surprisedly,...quickly,bravely....EmotionMovementTip3:润色动作（修饰语）1)加副词Themanletoutascream_________,ranaway_________

andjumpedintothewell_________.

这位男子紧张地尖叫，赶紧跑开，勇敢地跳入井中。Practicenervouslyquicklybravely

Hearingmom'swords,Nezhasmiled___________andjumpedoffthewall_______________.

Hearingmom'swords,Nezhasmiledandjumpedoffthewall.

happily添加副词：quicklysurpriseNezhalookedathismomsadness

2)加介词短语angerfearinhighspiritsin

Hearingmom'swords,Nezhasmiledcheerfullyandjumpedoffthewallbriskly.

添加介词短语：

Hearing

mom'swords,Nezhasmiled

cheerfullyandjumpedoffthewallbriskly____________________________________.inhighspiritsCompletetheconversations

1.smile/grin/beamfromeartoear眉开眼笑；笑得合不拢嘴2.laughone’sheadoff大笑不止；狂笑不已3.beallsmiles=beveryhappy/friendly一脸笑意；喜滋滋的4.laughingstock笑柄；笑料5.crackasmile

露出笑脸Groupwork1.(2021年浙江卷)爸爸冲了进来，静静地站着，然后突然大笑起来。

2.(2022新高考读后续写)看到这个失意的男孩，我感到心碎，决定改变现状。

3.(2023)老师走上前，拍了拍我的肩膀，温柔地说:“有志者，事竟成。”

Assignment:情景写作：OnMother'sDay,thetwinswantedtopreparebreakfastfortheirmother,buttheymesseditup.Atthattime,thefathercamein...

Paragraph1:Asthetwinslookedaroundthemindisappointment,theirfatherappeared.

（2021年新高考全国I卷）父亲了解情况后,没有发火父亲和他们一起做早餐在父亲的助攻下,早餐顺利做好了了解情况后,蹲下来,给拥抱/拍肩膀,说…Havinglearnedtheirplan,hekneltdown,pattedthemontheirshoulder/gavethemabighugandcomforted,“Timeisonourside.Let’sdoittogether”.清洗了锅,重新煮上了粥,并且烤上了面包Theycleanedupthemess,cookedtheporridgeand

toastedthebreadonceagain.有了经验和父亲的帮助,早餐做好了,散发出宜人的香味.Armed/equippedwiththeexperienceoffailureandanextrahelpinghand,thebreakfastwasready,givingoffpleasantsmell.Asthetwinslookedaroundthemindisappointment,theirfatherappeared.Hiseyebrowsnarrowedandhishandsrestedonhiships.Judgingfromhisexpression,itwasevidentthathewasabouttoexplodedafterseeingthemess.Totheirrelief,havinglearnedtheirplan,hekneltdown,pattedthemontheirshoulderandsaid,“Timeisonourside.Let’sdoittogether”.Withouttheslightesthesitation,theycleanedupthemess,cookedtheporridgeandtoastedthebread